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Written​ ​by:​ ​Ashley​ ​Martin Began​ ​on​ ​September​ ​8th,​ ​2017 Finished​ ​on​ ​__________​​ ​____​,​ ​2017 This​ ​story​ ​was​ ​originally​ ​written​ ​as​ ​a​ ​Creative​ ​Writing project​ ​for​ ​the​ ​college​ ​course,​ ​ENGL​ ​202.​ ​It​ ​began​ ​to​ ​spark​ ​up more​ ​and​ ​more​ ​ideas​ ​until​ ​I​ ​finally​ ​decided​ ​that​ ​I​ ​just​ ​had​ ​to finish​ ​the​ ​story​ ​and​ ​turn​ ​it​ ​into​ ​a​ ​book.​ ​Finish​ ​paragraph. Read​ ​more​ ​of​ ​Ashley’s​ ​writing​ ​at: boundtoflyhigher.weebly.com


Table​ ​of​ ​Contents

Chapter​ ​One​ ​-​ ​Derek

Chapter​ ​One​ ​-​ ​Derek

2

Chapter​ ​Two​ ​-​ ​Margaret

5

Chapter​ ​Three​ ​-​ ​Zane

7

Chapter​ ​Four​ ​-​ ​Derek

9

find myself laying on the cold, damp ground. I looked around

Chapter​ ​Five​ ​-​ ​The​ ​Police

9

for​ ​my​ ​glasses,​ ​but​ ​they​ ​were​ ​nowhere​ ​to​ ​be​ ​found.

Chapter​ ​Six​ ​-​ ​Margaret

10

Chapter​ ​Seven​ ​-​ ​Derek

11

“Derek” exclaimed Margaret. I opened my eyes only to

“Derek!” yelled Margaret even louder than the last time, “Where are you?!” I heard the worry in her voice, I’m sure​ ​I​ ​would​ ​have​ ​heard​ ​it​ ​even​ ​if​ ​I​ ​was​ ​a​ ​mile​ ​away. “Don’t get your panties in a twist, I’m right here next to the shed, just a little bit away from wherever you’re yelling from”​ ​I​ ​shouted​ ​back​ ​to​ ​her. Margaret slowly walked over and handed me my stupidly thick glasses. Without my glasses, I was about as blind as a bat. I brushed my shaggy brown hair out of my face and put my glasses on. As I did, my vision cleared up and the trees became more vivid. I looked at Margaret and she looked even


more gorgeous than I last remembered with her long blonde

“Can we leave? This place gives me the creeps, you

hair and eyes as bright as a sunset at dusk, yet blue like the

know I hate cemeteries. Did you black out again?” Margaret

Indian ocean. Her skin was as soft as a fluffy bunny on a spring

curiously​ ​asked​ ​with​ ​a​ ​touch​ ​of​ ​nervousness​ ​in​ ​her​ ​voice.

day​ ​and​ ​she​ ​smelled​ ​like​ ​roses​ ​freshly​ ​picked​ ​from​ ​a​ ​garden.

“Yeah we can leave sweetie, I’m sorry I didn’t mean to

I’m not exactly sure how I got here or what caused me

worry you or anything like that. I didn’t black out, just passed

to black out, but I couldn’t let Margaret know that. She worries

out from not getting enough sleep and I guess I slept walked all

all the time and I don’t want her worrying even more about me.

the way over here.” That was the first lie I ever told her, but

The last time that I had blacked out, Margaret passed out as

things were getting worse and I couldn’t let her know that it

soon​ ​as​ ​she​ ​had​ ​found​ ​me.

was​ ​happening​ ​again.

This wasn’t the first time I had blacked out, and I’m sure that it won’t be the last time, but there was no sense in

She knew though, you could tell she knew by the way her​ ​soul​ ​seemed​ ​to​ ​sink​ ​with​ ​her​ ​entire​ ​body.

scaring Margaret again. I scrambled up to my feet and looked

“Okay…” she whispered, “I’m not going to pass out

around to see the headstones. This is the third time this week

again though… You didn’t need to lie to me about it, I just

that I’ve blacked out and ended up at the cemetery. The

wanted to know if you were okay or if we needed to call an

blackouts had just started 2 weeks ago and it was quickly

ambulance or something Derek.” I looked away from her

becoming​ ​a​ ​more​ ​frequent​ ​occurrence.


shamefully, and what I saw behind me didn’t make the situation​ ​any​ ​better. There was an injured leg partially sticking out from

“Wow, alright let’s go back home before anything else happens and let you get some better rest” Margaret said while still​ ​laughing​ ​at​ ​me.

behind the old wood shed with a puddle of blood profusely

I look for her soft hand and intertwined my fingers with

pouring out from this mysterious leg. I quickly turned back

hers. We weren’t dating, but we agreed that it was nice to just

toward​ ​Margaret​ ​and​ ​started​ ​pushing​ ​her​ ​towards​ ​the​ ​exit.

hold someone’s hand. I’ve been in love with her since 7th

“I know, I’m sorry. Let’s get out of here now this place

grade, but I didn’t want to risk losing her as a friend. With all

gives me the creeps too I hate cemeteries. How did you find me

that’s been going on lately, I definitely did not want to put any

anyways, where you following me?” I stopped pushing her and

more​ ​stress​ ​on​ ​her​ ​than​ ​she​ ​already​ ​has.

looked​ ​at​ ​her​ ​skeptically.

My house is only eight blocks away from the Beech

“No! I didn’t follow you Derek, gosh I’m not a stalker.”

Grove cemetery so walking home only took about fifteen

She looked away from me when she spoke, that’s how I knew

minutes. Margaret is staying the night tonight to make sure that

that​ ​I​ ​wasn’t​ ​the​ ​only​ ​one​ ​lying​ ​today.

I​ ​don’t​ ​blackout​ ​and​ ​walk​ ​back​ ​to​ ​the​ ​cemetery.

“Alright, well let’s get out of here, it’s getting late and

As soon as we got home, I plopped on the couch while

I’m starving” I said that at the same time that my stomach gave

she put in a movie. Ugh. She chose a romantic comedy, I hate

out​ ​a​ ​loud​ ​growl​ ​and​ ​Margaret​ ​laughed​ ​at​ ​me.


those, but for her I’ll tolerate it. As the movie went on, the storyline​ ​began​ ​to​ ​blur​ ​and​ ​so​ ​did​ ​my​ ​vision.​ ​Maybe​ ​if​ ​I​ ​just….

Chapter​ ​Two​ ​-​ ​Margaret Derek looked so cute and peaceful when he was sleeping. He snored like a damn chainsaw though, oh my gosh! I got up and pulled the fuzzy blanket off of the old loveseat and laid it on top of him and kissed his cheek. As I was walking away the temperature dropped by a few degrees and the air began​ ​to​ ​stiffen. I’ve known Derek since we were in 7th grade math class together. We became friends right away, but I didn’t take a real interest in him until 10th grade. It wasn’t like anything changed, just my view of him. He suddenly seemed different and more attractive. That’s also when he began to start growing his hair out to be swishy, I loved the way it fell into his face and​ ​he​ ​effortlessly​ ​moved​ ​out​ ​of​ ​the​ ​way.


I walked around the corner to Derek’s bedroom where

Zane had been stalking me for eight months and now

the thermostat is and turned up the heat. As winter began to

he’s trying to ruin my life in the afterlife. Not only that but he’s

creep up, the power began to randomly give out, leaving the

ruining Derek’s life now too! I didn't want it to come to this,

house to feel as cold as a dead body. Only Zane and I would

but Zane deserved it. I sat down on the edge of Derek’s Queen

know that though. About 2 weeks ago is when Zane started

size bed, the dork has Star Wars bedsheets on. I made a mental

making his… Well, let’s just say they’re his interesting

sidenote to buy him some nicer bedsheets. Speaking of mental

appearances. That was around the same time that the man

sidenotes, I have to watch out for Zane, he knows too much

behind​ ​the​ ​shed​ ​was​ ​murdered.

about the whole situation and he’s going to ruin Derek. Derek

Derek thought that he had prevented me from seeing the leg stick out from behind the shed, but I already knew. It

thinks I’m the one who needs protecting, but it’s actually him that​ ​does.

was impossible for me to not know. Poor Derek had no idea

I looked around Derek’s room, and saw all the pictures

who that man was or what had happened to him. I didn’t mean

of us together throughout the years. I yawned so big that it hurt

for Derek to get involved, but he made it impossible for him to

my jaw. Today has been so long, I might as well try to sleep

not be. If he wouldn’t have snuck up on me that night, none of

now. Surely one appearance of Zane took enough energy for it

this​ ​would​ ​have​ ​happened.

not to happen again until tomorrow. I pulled back his R2D2 blanket and snuggled up beneath it, resting my head on his


C3PO pillow. It smells just like him, I can’t wait until I live

Chapter​ ​Three​ ​-​ ​Zane

with him and can sleep here every night. Thank God he doesn’t know​ ​that​ ​I...

I opened my eyes and quickly assessed the situation. There was no Margaret in sight. That is a good sign. That bitch really​ ​messed​ ​up​ ​this​ ​time,​ ​good​ ​thing​ ​I​ ​love​ ​her. “Derek is that you?” yelled Margaret from the other room. Shit​ ​I​ ​have​ ​to​ ​think​ ​quick… “Yeah sweetie, who else would it be, it’s just us here isn’t​ ​it?”​ ​I​ ​said​ ​back. Margaret shuffled into the room, dragging Derek’s blanket​ ​into​ ​the​ ​room.​ ​She​ ​looked​ ​at​ ​me​ ​with​ ​concern. “Yeah, just us. Do you remember what happened?” she asked.


“Not really… Everything is still a little foggy. I know you had turned on some chick flick before I passed out

“Oh whoops I’m sorry sweetie, I completely spaced out.”​ ​I​ ​said​ ​while​ ​waving​ ​my​ ​hands​ ​for​ ​her​ ​to​ ​come​ ​over.

though.”​ ​I​ ​said​ ​and​ ​then​ ​let​ ​out​ ​a​ ​nervous​ ​laughter.

“It’s okay, I just don’t want you to end up blacking out

Margaret is obsessed with romantic comedies. I know a

again. I really wish that would just completely stop.” she

lot about her. I know she hates the smell of roses, but loves to

replied with worry in her voice. “Oh no Derek! You’re late for

wear clothing with roses on them as a joke towards irony. Her

work!”​ ​she​ ​yelled​ ​and​ ​she​ ​began​ ​pushing​ ​me​ ​to​ ​get​ ​up.

full name is Margaret ​Elaine Osborne​. Her parents are ​Steve and ​Emma Osborne​. She has 3 siblings, ​Alison​, ​Zach​, and

“Okay, okay already mooommmm” I said in a sarcastic tone. I​ ​got​ ​up​ ​and​ ​looked​ ​for​ ​the​ ​keys​ ​to​ ​Derek’s​ ​car.

Alex​. Margaret is 22 years, 3 months, 2 weeks, 4 days, and 2 hours old. In the morning she gets ready by order of socks,

“Looking for these?” Margaret asked with questioning eyes.​ ​“They’re​ ​right​ ​where​ ​you​ ​always​ ​leave​ ​them…”

panties, pants, bra, shirt. She always says good morning to her

“Yes! Thank you, I’m just a little hazy still I’m sorry.” I

parents and always forgets to lock the door when she leaves,

say as I quickly grab the keys and head out the door to Derek’s

well at least she use to until 3 months and 4 days, and 2 hours

new​ ​1966​ ​Impala​.

ago.

I drove over to the Beech Grove Cemetery to try and “Derek!!”​ ​Margaret​ ​yelled.

figure out the whole dead body thing. As I parked the car, I


noticed that there were two graves workers ​milling ​around the

Chapter​ ​Five​ ​-​ ​The​ ​Police

shed​ ​that​ ​I​ ​needed​ ​to​ ​get​ ​to.

(describe​ ​phone​ ​ringing​ ​and​ ​answering​ ​the​ ​phone)

Chapter​ ​Four​ ​-​ ​Derek I​ ​snapped​ ​awake​ ​as​ ​some​ ​giant​ ​doberman​ ​barking inches​ ​from​ ​my​ ​face.​ ​Luckily​ ​he​ ​was​ ​attached​ ​to​ ​a​ ​leash​ ​or​ ​I’m pretty​ ​sure​ ​I’d​ ​be​ ​dead​ ​right​ ​now…

“911.​ ​What​ ​is​ ​your​ ​emergency?” “Hello,​ ​I​ ​would​ ​like​ ​to​ ​report​ ​a​ ​murder.​ ​More​ ​details.​” “Ma’am,​ ​can​ ​you​ ​describe​ ​the​ ​culprit?” “Yes, he was about 5 feet and 10 inches, he had very shaggy brown hair, dark brown eyes. His name is Derek Wright​.” “Thank you ma’am, can you tell me now, what is your name?” “My name is Margaret ​Osborne​, but I need this to be an anonymous​ ​report​ ​please.”


“That’s fine Mrs. ​Osborne​, can you please provide me with the phone number you are calling from in case we have any​ ​further​ ​questions?” “It’s just miss, and yes, my number is five seven five, two​ ​three​ ​six,​ ​seven​ ​eight,​ ​two​ ​three.”

Chapter​ ​Six​ ​-​ ​Margaret Click. I hung up the phone. I hated doing that, but it had to be done. I couldn’t just let Derek ​be roaming around with a person controlling his actions and him not know what he was doing​. Zane was coming out more and more often and if he took​ ​over,​ ​I​ ​would​ ​completely​ ​lose​ ​Derek.


Chapter​ ​Seven​ ​-​ ​Derek


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