Atlas and Alice - Issue 18

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Atlas and Alice, Issue 18

Denise Tolan

Sell You, Sell Me The Commercial: The commercial ran in the early eighties, in the evenings when sitcoms came on. So many sitcoms came on. The shot began with a black screen, then quickly opened to a wide shot of fireworks over a lake; the concept seemingly a meta-firework itself. As if the audience themselves narrowed the lens of a telescope, a group of people came into focus. They were sitting around a picnic table while children ran about stabbing sparklers furiously at the night. The camera zoomed in closer until it rested on a young woman. Her eyes were luminous, bright, alive. She lit a sparkler of her own, waved the fiery stick in the air, eventually drew a gauzy heart around a young man’s handsome face. When the camera caught his unguarded eyes, they were wet with love for the young woman. She was lovely, people said. Not thin enough to be a movie star, but certainly cute enough to carry a commercial. He became an instant star. Puppy dog eyes, the magazines cried. Lela, the young woman, knew even then they were drinking it in too quickly. At her young age it was still difficult to believe in commercial nights and mid-summer breezes that sweetly blew firework smoke away from lakeside tables. People often stopped her in the street, but never asked about what the commercial was selling. Those eyes, they always said. His eyes. Are they all that? How did it feel to have all that? The Commercial Aftermath:

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Contributor Notes

6min
pages 83-88

Call for Submissions

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page 82

Shalya Powell ƒ The Other Shore

20min
pages 70-79

Hailey Spencer † What to Write in Your Journal to Move on

1min
pages 80-81

Jade Driscoll † To My Psychiatrist: A Non-Exhaustive List of My Recurring Nightmares

1min
pages 68-69

Yaz Lancaster † Canto

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page 67

Eric Roller † Late Night Semantics

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pages 65-66

Yvonne Amey † Ricky Parks & the Coal Minors

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page 62

Megan Driscoll ƒ Modes of Reproduction

16min
pages 49-55

Sugar Maple Tree Holds Its Snow Kim Magowan ƒ The Best Defense Is a Good Offense (So They Say)

2min
pages 59-61

Jessica June Rowe ƒ Underage

1min
pages 42-43

Despy Boutris ≈ Two Friends Confront Mortality

1min
page 48

Mandira Pattnaik ƒ When It Freezes, You Realize the

1min
page 58

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page 41

Bronwen Griffiths ƒ The Sky Between Us

1min
page 40

Rachel Laverdiere ≈ For the Love of (Dis)Order

7min
pages 34-38

AT THE SKY Carl Boon † The Other America

1min
pages 28-29

Karly Jacklin † IN WHICH WE DON’T HUNT DOVES BUT INSTEAD AIM OUR SHOTGUNS

1min
pages 26-27

Marvin Shackelford ƒ A Tragic Misstep in Evolution

1min
page 33

Lori Brack ≈ The Ground, Remembering

2min
pages 30-32

Bobo Kamel † The Message on the Tissue

1min
page 25

Derek Fisher ƒ Rash

7min
pages 20-23

Denise Tolan ƒ Sell You, Sell Me

13min
pages 12-19

Jane Snyder ƒ Little Red Schoolhouse

11min
pages 6-11
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