I am Melisa and my full name is Melisa Duran Hurtado. I am 16 years old. I was born in MĂŠxico and __________ live in
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Tarrassa. I am go to Mont Perdut School. I am speaking Catalan and Spanish and English. People say that _____ _______ very friendly. I live with my family in a house in Terrassa. Physically speaking, I am a bit fat. I am 1.56 m tall. I have got brown eyes and my hair is brown. My hair
is smooth and long, but before have a fringe.
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I usually wear sweatshirts, I don't to use jacket. I wear tight jeans and _______ pair _______ comfortable shoes. I like earrings big. I always use a fragrance: Psicodelic Pacha or Play Boy lovely, I love the smell. I don’t like _______ school, but is have to go there.
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One of the things that make special is me big patience. I do in me free time is
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to relax and going out with my friends.
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My favorite free time activity is: nail art, make figurine, draw… I love read manga, look and reading anime (Many are in Japanese, but they have the translation in Spanish written). I love draw, my second favorite free time activity is be with my father.
People say that I am funny. Also_ I’m very optimistic. I like being with my friends, I pass a good time. Every Saturday I am going to sleep with my friend _______ _ who is crazy.
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I love the cocktails, _______ see _______ as they prepare and decorate and drink _______. Speaking about my defects,
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when I get nervous I bite my tongue. It is difficult to me to do the things for which they bore me, my big patience is good
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but it can be bad when have to go make something.
Comentario [B9]: I don’t understand this sentence, TRY AGAIN!