5-7-5: The Isthmus Haiku Contest 2015

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NOVEMBER 26–DECEMBER 2, 2015

VOL. 40 NO. 47

MADISON, WISCONSIN

Haiku for the peeps The Mad poets delivered! Our contest results

TODD HUBLER


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n September we put out a call to Isthmus readers to submit haiku about Madison. We suggested a few categories and subjects — including Gov. Scott Walker and local celebrities — that we thought would stoke the creative fires of local poets. We received about 240 submissions, not a bad haul at all. To guard against any bias, we assigned each haiku an ID number, omitting the author’s name from the judging process. A crack team of four Isthmoids pored over the submissions, first to make sure each had the correct number of syllables (haiku must follow the 5-7-5 syllable format),

The Isthmus Haiku Contest and then with a more critical eye. We picked the ones we felt were the most creative, witty and reflective of the Madison we know and love. Brenden Carpenter takes home the top prize for his haiku about one of Madison’s favorite eccentrics, Thong Cape Scooter Man. Robert Sundling and Jude Toche tie for second place with their respective haiku about one

of Madison’s least favorite persons (at least based on your haiku submissions), Scott Walker. Here they are, along with some of the others that caught our fancy. ➡


W I N N I N G HA I KU:

Thong Cape Scooter Man Not the hero we need, but the one we deserve — B R E N D E N CA R P E N T E R

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PHILIP ASHBY ILLUSTRATIONS

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Local celebrities An engine hums and then I see him putter by — Thong Cape Scooter Man — Alais Fortier-Meyer

Thong Cape Scooter Man Proudly riding through the wind Embracing freedom — Joe Vande Slunt

Marques Bovre still singing from lonesome county Take care of my soul — Jeffrey Johannes

Charlie Shortino You are a ray of sunshine on my cloudy day

Lost in Wisconsin, few see my true soul. Only cheese understands me — Andy Howard

We like our cheese curds Almost as much as we like Denouncing Walker — Hillary Mitchell Warden

Favre’s last Packer pass a four-letter word frozen on everyone’s lips — Jeffrey Johannes

Wisconsin treasure large block of aged sharp cheddar always in my fridge

— Alais Fortier-Meyer

Robin Vos looks like an angry butternut squash that just needs a hug — Treena Lahey

Scott Walker Right eye gazes right Look, a state worker to blame Left eye does not move — Caitlin Tefft

Governor Walker spends his Kohl’s cash better than the state’s tax money — Alais Fortier-Meyer

He was a fighter But now leaves the arena Intimidated

— Liz Pelton

Winter morning treat frosting welcome as the sun kringle yumminess — Michelle McKiernan

On a morning walk The day after the big game Don’t step in vomit — Mike Rausch

From above, red ants Streaming to their grassy church. Touchdown: Camp Randall — Molly Wesling

Typing from a bar, Yes, I’ll have another one. I’m not doing sh*t — Natasha Florian

— Ellen Schneider

Eating humble pie In his Capitol office Walker returns home

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Wisconsin passions

Paul Soglin

Slicing through Wingra A canoe slips silently Emitting no smoke

Rebellious in youth Time advances, mustache grays... Now curmudgeonly

— Darren Bush

Wisconsin is where when life hands us lemons, we pour a beer, instead — Deb Tetzlaff

Brandy Old Fashioned Two Walleye Filets, Coleslaw Supper Club Friday — Eric Selje

— Timothy Schwartz

When you have such an Affable mustache you can Police bench sleepers — Andrew Kachel


SECOND PL AC E H A IKU (T IE) :

When things get too hard In college or a campaign God tells me: “Drop out” — RO B E RT S U N D L I N G

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Critters Japanese beetles marching through in brash armor garden Samurai — Mary Batterman

Cud chewing bovines Roam pastures of lushest green Dairy nirvana — Gail Pergande

Large, lumbering fowl Stop traffic on Monona Gobble, waddle, walk

Local landmarks Green roof, white bay doors; coxswains’ calls echoing out — under morning dark — Emily Setton

Before “Madison” Taychopera meant four lakes Effigies remain — Susan Padberg

paradox of death Jackson Oak’s lifeless limbs still draw us to her dance — Joan Halpin

Sweet Lake Mendota sunset. What more could one need? A friend with a boat — Molly Wesling

Sitting in my car Westbound Beltline super slow Late for work again — Linda Ladwig

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— Charles Mortell

Lilacs in the spring, Mosquitoes in the summer; Gotta love the Arb — Darren Bush

Cows on the Concourse Spinach spills its crinkly green Madison in spring!

— Rachel Glaza

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Cherokee, Tenney, Union Terrace, Picnic Point. Lakefront tour du jour

A swollen cattail Mendota swallows the sun frogs sing till morning — Pamela Dempsey

State Street is awesome! It should be a promenade No cars. Just people — Becca Jurek

— Darwin Tichenor

Bristling with stone warts, The Dick Outside Camp Randall Confuses us all — David Fisher

The Farmers’ Market Fresh fruit, hot spicy cheese bread Ouch! That was my heel — Jordan Martin

Bike to work happy No cars on the path, I smile Say hi to turkeys — Tara Tschillard

Mixing shade and sun Ice cream, beer, and duck droppings The Union Terrace! — Will Clifton

It’s not just a bar All roads lead to the Plaza Quick, grab us that booth! — Gina Chirichella


S ECO N D P L AC E H A I KU ( T I E ) :

God called me to lead And then lead by not leading He’s Taoist as hell — J UDE TO C H E

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