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This book was based on into the forest by Antony Brown I wrote this book then a was 11 years old and I was in the humming birds class year 6 and it was a good book I love it.
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One night I was woken by a terrible sound, the lighting crept up on my bedroom window. The illuminating glow spread across the deep, dark forest. this was dads room. I wish he would come back the solider reminds me of him. one day he will come back‌
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The next morning all was still “Mum Were Dad?” I questioned her. She sated quiet “Mum is there something you are not telling me?" I wanted to dig deeper. Mum stood up walked to the window, and the empty chair just sitting there. when will he come home?
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The next morning, Mum asked me to take some of Grandmas favourite chocolate swirls to her. Grandma’s are great are they. They always like to tell fantastic stories and bake lovely cakes but there are only two ways to get to Grandmas house, Mum tells me to go the long way round but I think differently‌..
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After a short while I saw a weird boy. “DO you want to buy my beautiful cow?” he said sorry I said I need to get this to my grandmas house. Because she is poorly. So I walked on and as I walked on I thought to my self that boy was a bit grossly it was like all the trees were watching me when I trued around he had vanished. …..
As I went further into the forest I saw a girl with golden hair." Hello little boy that is a sweet little basket I would LOVE one like that also that cake looks lovely She said “Sorry but this is not for you it is for my poorly grandma.” I walked on but she reminded me of someone but I couldn't think of it but when trued around, she was gone….. 6
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I walked on further into the unknown.
After a short while it started to get colder I saw a boy and a girl by a fire. “Have you seen our mum or dad? the boy asked. “ No why have you lost them?” “They where cutting wood in the forest somewhere.” “so what are your names” “ am Hansel and this is Gretel” nice matting you well bye I need to tack this to my poorly grandma. As I walk on I could hear the sound of the girl crying but what could I do? 8
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It started to get cold all of a sudden I saw a little red coat but where did it come from but when I put it felt like someone was watching me with there little beady eyes But as usual I walk on not noticing What was behind me‌‌
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Finally there was grandmas house I ran as fast as I knocked on the door but I heard a strange voice coming from inside “hello who is it “ The strange voice said “its my grandma mum toll you a cake.” nervously I slowly ed my to bring open the door and then…….
“ok that is enough for today we will read some more when you come again to my house. 12
“come on grandma can’t you just read the last bit. “no come on your mum is in the car “ok bye grandma.”