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Reading literature is one of life’s greatest pleasures. Appreciating it, writing about it and discussing it are all enhanced by sharpening your skills. This coursebook inspires a love of literature in English and builds greater confidence in analysing and writing about texts. Part 1 introduces you to the basics of poetry, prose and drama through a wide variety of international texts. In Part 2, you will hone your skills by analysing sample student responses and tackling essay questions, passage analysis tasks and unseen texts. The final part encourages you to learn independently with advice about improving your essay technique and avoiding common errors.

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COURSEBOOK Elizabeth Whittome

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• Provides flexible, in-depth guidance on how to analyse poetry, prose and drama which can be applied to any text • Includes writers from around the world, including Arthur Miller, Katherine Mansfield, Dilip Chitre, Virginia Woolf, Tsitsi Dangarembga and many more • Includes detailed analysis of sample answers, strategies for improving key skills and a dedicated section on ‘Essay writing skills and techniques’ to help you learn independently • Helps you to develop a ‘toolkit’ for studying literature so you can approach any unseen text with confidence

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Literature in English

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Literature in English for Cambridge International AS & A Level COURSEBOOK Elizabeth Whittome

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Contents Introduction iv v Assessment overview and key concepts How to use this book viii Part 1: AS Level

Section 1: Poetry 1 2 Unit 1: Introduction to poetry 3 9 Unit 2: The language of poetry Unit 3: Poetic structures and themes 18 Unit 4: Working with rhythms, sounds and movement 26 Unit 5: Poetry unseens 44 Unit 6: Timed poetry essays, critical and 53 passage type Section 2: Prose 1 65 Unit 7: Studying a novel or short story 66 Unit 8: Prose – opening paragraphs 76 Unit 9: The novel – structure 83 Unit 10: Characterisation 90 Unit 11: Prose unseens 98 Unit 12: T imed prose essays, critical and 106 passage type Section 3: Drama 1 120 Unit 13: Studying a play 121 127 Unit 14: Studying the themes of a play Unit 15: Studying play structures 133 Unit 16: Characters in drama 144 Unit 17: The language of drama 153 Unit 18: Drama unseens 164 Unit 19: Timed drama essays, critical and passage type 176

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Section 4: Poetry 2 189 Unit 20: Poetry – critical essays 190 Unit 21: Poetry – passage questions 208 Unit 22: Poetry – close analysis and comparison 226 Section 5: Prose 2 252 Unit 23: Prose – critical essays 253 Unit 24: Prose – passage questions 263 Unit 25: Prose – close analysis and comparison 275 Section 6: Drama 2 298 Unit 26: Drama – critical essays 299 308 Unit 27: Drama – passage questions Unit 28: Drama – close analysis 325 Part 3: Essay skills, techniques and problem solving – for AS and A Level

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Introduction 345 346 Unit 29: Writing a good critical essay Unit 30: Tackling a passage question 350 Unit 31: Unseens and close analysis 353 355 Unit 32: Unseen comparisons Unit 33: Writing longer essays/coursework 356 Unit 34: Using critics 358 Unit 35: C ommand words and typical essay terminology 362 Unit 36: Troubleshooting 366 Glossary 379 Acknowledgements 384 Index 387

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Introduction This is the second edition of your coursebook, packed with new material and features designed specially to help you to succeed in your study of literature in English at more advanced levels. The emphasis in this book is on skills; the development of your capabilities as a literary critic and commentator. In addition to many varied exercises in reading, analysis, writing and discussion, there are features in every unit here which encourage self-assessment and progress. In this respect, the book is a significant improvement on the first edition. Any advanced student, no matter what your particular syllabus, will find the tools here to help them to success in handling any text confidently. The book is primarily designed for the Cambridge International AS & A Level syllabuses, but is equally applicable to others. However, do check your own specification for its particular requirements. Any good syllabus will certainly contain the basic elements of poetry, prose and drama, including Shakespeare, however. What this book does not do is clear. It does not refer to the set texts on the syllabus in a particular year. Set texts come and go on a regular basis and your coursebook would soon be out of date if all the examples in the book were from a particular year’s set texts. You will discover that the range of activities can be transferred to any text you are studying, so that you benefit from all the examples given, developing your skills and confidence progressively. iv

Additionally, there are many new examples of student writing in this coursebook, which have been annotated with comments (written by the author). These exemplars guide and encourage you to good writing as well as giving you an idea of how not to write an essay. The popular final section of the book, on essay skills, techniques and problem-solving has been enhanced in this second edition, with further examples. The ability to read and analyse closely material which has not been pre-prepared is a core skill of the subject at advanced level. Your coursebook emphasises this core skill of unseen, now one of the compulsory examination elements at AS level in the new Cambridge International AS & A Level Literature in English syllabus and often a feature in other specifications. (Students looking to further develop their skills with responding to unseen passages would find units 22, 25 and 28 particularly useful.) These exercises also offer some elements of wider reading. The works cited in the coursebook as a whole come from the widest range of different national backgrounds from across the world, all writing in English. You won’t necessarily find these on any particular year’s set text list. They also span some 650 years and include Chaucer, Milton, the Metaphysicals, novels of the Indian subcontinent, Restoration drama and contemporary poetry, for example. These, and others, are all introduced by means of close analysis of poems or short passages, with further reading suggested after each. I hope you enjoy the ‘new look’ edition. I’ve certainly enjoyed putting it together! Elizabeth Whittome

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Unit 5: Poetry ‘unseens’ – Timed Essays

Assessment overview and key concepts Assessment overview The assessment for the revised Cambridge syllabus is very clear and straightforward. You do two papers for the AS Level (Papers 1 and 2) and two more for the A Level (Papers 3 and 4); each paper lasts two hours. All papers are compulsory: there are no optional papers. AS Level

A Level

Paper 1: Drama and poetry

Paper 3: Shakespeare and drama

Paper 2: Prose and unseen

Paper 4: Pre-/Post-1900 poetry & prose

You have a choice of questions with each set text: either a critical essay or a passage-based question, and you’ll need to spend an hour on each one. Altogether, then, you’ll be studying three set texts for the AS Level and four for the A Level, so seven set texts in all for the full A Level, as well as preparation for the unseen question in AS Level Paper 2, which is a new element. Each question carries equal marks. The unseen question will allow you to choose between two passages printed on the exam paper: a poem/piece of prose, or poem/drama or prose/drama. There will be different combinations each time, so you will need to practise unseens in all three forms. The set and unseen texts will all be written in English originally, but they come from different periods and cultures. This book gives you practice in all aspects of analysis of poetry, prose and drama, with special chapters on the approach to unseens and examples of assessed student work. The poetry, prose and drama examples given in this book are designed to extend your reading and illustrate the basic principles of study of the subject at this level. They are not guides to your set texts, but a means of exploring the subject in detail and developing your skills of close reading, analysis and communication.

Assessment objectives The assessment objectives show clearly the different but interconnected abilities needed for writing a literature essay at this level. AO1

The ability to respond with understanding to literary texts in a variety of forms, from different cultures; with an appreciation of relevant contexts that illuminate readings of the texts.

AO2

The ability to analyse ways in which writers’ choices of form, structure and language shape meanings and effects.

AO3

The ability to produce informed, independent opinions and interpretations of literary texts.

AO4

The ability to communicate a relevant, structured and supported response appropriate to literary study.

AO5

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Key concepts The key concepts of any subject are the essential underpinning ideas that characterise it. Knowing what they are helps students to appreciate the subject and to work productively within it. Each unit in this book shows which key concepts are incorporated. The key concepts are focused on three areas: the subject of Literature, the craft of the writer and the reading and writing of the student. First of all, literature is an imaginative art form with written texts in distinctive forms such as poetry, prose and drama, and there are different conventions for these forms which have been established over hundreds of years. There is also a wide variety of genres, such as comedy, tragedy or satire. Students need to know about these forms and how they communicate their interpretations. Specifically, you should remember:

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The context in which literature is written and received is an important part of the background to a text.

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In detail, the language, style and structure of a text do not just inform the meaning – they are intrinsic to it. A writer makes language choices and these have effects on the reader.

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The student reads and reacts, analyses and interprets the language choices made by writers to communicate their concerns. Students should take note, particularly at A level, of what other readers and critics think.

When an essay is written, it is a response to a particular question which is framed to focus on the skills of the writer. It must be relevant to the question, structured and supported with reference to the text. Appropriate terminology should be used. The student should be aware of the effects of a work on the readers and the audience (in the case of drama).

Pathways Although specifically designed for the Cambridge International AS & A Level, the activities in this book are all suitable for other Advanced students. The book contains a great deal of advice on undertaking passage-based questions which combine the skills of close reading with wider reference to the text. Part 1 begins with the basics of the subject and is very suitable for revision or for those who have not taken an earlier qualification such as O Level or GCSE or IGCSE in Literature, moving on to Part 2’s more Advanced studies later. However, you should look closely at the specific requirements of your own syllabus, because there will be slight differences.

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Relevant background and basics

Good for less experienced students and revision

I am an adult on an Access to HE course or just interested

I am a teacher Good for less experienced students and revision

Relevant background and basics

Units 1–6 provide Units 7–11 some of the core provide some of teaching required the core teaching required

Relevant I am an AS/A Level student on background and another syllabus basics

I am a Cambridge Pre-U student

Units 7–11 provide foundation teaching and revision

Good for less experienced students and revision

Relevant background and basics

Units 12–17 provide some of the core teaching required

Units 12–17 provide foundation teaching and revision

Units 1–6 provide foundation teaching and revision

I am a Cambridge A Level student

AS Level Drama Units 12–17 provide core teaching

AS Level Prose

Units 1–6 provide Units 7–11 I am a core teaching provide core Cambridge AS Level student teaching

AS Level Poetry

A Level Prose Of future interest

Units 21–23 provide core teaching

Units 21–23 provide some of the core teaching required All useful activities All useful activities

Many useful activities including passage questions and unseens

A Level Poetry Of future interest

Units 18–20 provide core teaching

Units 18–20 provide some of the core teaching required All useful activities All useful activities

Many useful activities including passage questions and unseens

Useful advice

Useful advice for all

Essay skills and techniques

Many useful Useful advice – activities whole unit on including passage Troubleshooting questions and unseens

All useful activities

Units 24–26

Units 24–26 provide core teaching

Of future interest

A Level Drama

Assessment overview and key concepts

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How to use this book This book contains a number of features to help you in your study. Learning objectives appear at the start of each unit to outline what you will have covered and understood by the end.

Before you start activities are designed to activate the prior knowledge you need for each unit.

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Key concepts summarise the key concepts relevant to each unit with explanatory reminders for understanding different texts featuring throughout the book.

Self-assessment checklist features at the end of each unit make sure you are fully confident of the work of the unit before you move on.

Activities accompany the exercises, some for you to complete on your own as self-study, others to share with a friend or classmate. They include reading, writing and discussion, as well as watching films and video clips.

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Reflection boxes encourage active thinking about what you are studying.

Further reading suggestions in each unit give advice on developing your range of understanding.

Sample response boxes are annotated responses to essay questions where you can analyse the response, make improvements or compare with your own work.

Student response boxes are actual student responses to essay questions, with marker comments (written by the author) to help you to appreciate good practice in the subject and to improve your own work.

Comment boxes provide additional feedback and guidance.

Key terms are important terms in the topic you are learning. They are highlighted in black bold and defined where they first appear in the book.

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Part 1 AS Level

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Section 1 Poetry 1

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Unit 1 Introduction to poetry Learning objectives In this unit you will: ■ ■ ■ ■

enjoy reviewing the basics of poetry reflect on poems you already know and what you think about them consider any difficulties you may have experienced in discussing or writing about them remind yourself of the importance of words, their meaning and sound.

KEY CONCEPTS

Language, form, structure, genres, context, style, interpretation.

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Remember that you are the reader and your personal response is vital! Get ready to read, concentrate and enjoy yourself. This is Unit 1 and it’s always reassuring to go back to basics.

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Have your pens and notebook (whether paper or electronic) at your side. Some activities demand your undivided attention, but some can be enjoyed with a friend. If you are working alone, best to switch your phone to silent. You can share afterwards!

Responding to poetry and writing about it This section of the book will help you to express your thoughts and feelings about poetry. The units on this topic are designed to help you to enjoy poetry to the full and to feel more secure about expressing your responses, formulating your own interpretations and supporting your ideas with examples. When you come to a poem you have never seen before (such as an examined unseen exercise), you will feel confident and alert, able to use everything you’ve learnt. All your reading experience will help you. Poetry can stretch words to their limit to record unique, direct impressions of experience. A word can achieve its full potential when a skilled poet combines it with other carefully selected words. The elements of a word – its meaning, associations, context, history, sound, even its shape and length – all combine with other words to produce the distinctive qualities of a poem. No wonder that many writers see poetry as the ultimate achievement of any language, the utterance that can never really be translated without losing some of its magic. Read any poem aloud to savour its sounds and rhythms; critical appreciation will follow with practice. All syllabuses focus on a very important Assessment Objective that reminds us that every writer chooses forms, structures and words to shape meanings. Both the writer selecting the words and the reader absorbing their effects are important in this process. You are the reader, whose close listening and reading, personal experience and enjoyment are most significant for your appreciation. You may find that you observe and give emphasis in a different way from your classmate. Providing that both of you can express your feelings, identify the evidence from the poem you are discussing and argue your case, then neither of you is wrong, necessarily. Both of you are literary critics.

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ACTIVITY 1.1

Reflection: Consider why you came to this conclusion.

Discuss with your group, or teacher if possible, what qualities you think a poem should have in order to be defined as a poem and make a list. If you are working on your own, think particularly of short fragments and any texts you’ve come across before which didn’t seem very ‘poetic’ (perhaps rhymes in birthday cards). Consider whether song lyrics can be called poems, since they need the music to complete their effect.

What makes a poem? Here’s a table for you, which shows where various points are discussed in the following poetry units. You may have come up with some of these points in your discussion about the qualities that define poems. Possible qualities of a poem

Where these are discussed

A: Reading a poem out loud can be very exciting/thrilling/funny/ sad even if you don’t understand all of it completely.

B: It is usually ‘about’ something – a theme; but it doesn’t have to tell a story.

Later in Unit 1

C: The writer is expressing her/his thoughts on a particular subject, so it can be full of humour or emotion such as anger or sadness.

Later in Unit 1

D: The meaning can sometimes be difficult at first reading because: Unit 2 •

the words aren’t in the usual order

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some of them even seem to be missing

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they appear to be new words not in the dictionary, or don’t have their usual meaning

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the language is concentrated or ambiguous.

E: The language can have lots of figures of speech (such as metaphor and personification) and be very descriptive.

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F: Sometimes words or phrases or ideas are repeated.

Unit 2

G: It is written in lines and the sentences don’t reach the end of the page.

Unit 3

H: There is a pattern to the way it is laid out (e.g. in verses, stanzas or groups of lines).

Unit 3

I : Sometimes it is very rhythmical and there are rhymes or other sound effects such as alliteration.

Unit 4

Of all the points in the list, it’s probably D, with its range of challenges for readers, that worries students the most, especially when they have never studied poetry before or are looking at a poem for the first time. Try not to be too worried about what you see as difficulties of interpretation. Some students spend too much time trying to chase the ‘meaning’ of a poem and forget about the real words that are the poem. It’s important to remember that the poet has made choices to create particular effects, and considering these in detail – their sounds, their rhythm, their combination together – often clarifies meaning where it has seemed tricky.

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Unit 5 gives you hints and tips for tackling an unseen poem, helping you to interpret and to write about a poem you’ve never seen before. You will have more confidence in your work. There are examples of students’ essays on an unseen poem, with the marker’s comments showing what is good and what could be improved, which you’ll find helpful. Then, in Unit 6 you focus on writing essays on set texts for an exam, with two different examples of questions. Throughout the units you will have Study and Revision tips. The examples used are from past Literature texts on Cambridge syllabuses, as well as others that are especially memorable or appropriate to illustrate particular points. This book uses texts from writers across the world writing in English.

ACTIVITY 1.2

Look again at the table of qualities that could characterise a poem. How many of them can be seen in the following short poetic text? The apparition of these faces in the crowd; Petals on a wet, black bough.

SAMPLE RESPONSE

Ezra Pound In a Station of the Metro (1913)

At first there do not seem to be enough qualities to make this into a poem as such. It has only two lines, which are not of the same length; there is no distinctive rhythm or rhyme and there is not even a verb to give action to the situation and point to a theme. (Some students think this is too fragmentary to be classed as a poem and you may have some sympathy with that view.) But it is a very descriptive fragment and it uses two different images – one in each line – to capture the poet’s experience of seeing people in a crowded station. (The Metro is the Paris underground system. If you do not have an underground train system where you live, imagine crowds pouring off a train.) The poem’s title is important because it places the poet’s observation and allows the reader to conjure up similar experiences. The first image is that the faces are an apparition, a word that means ‘appearance’, but also ‘ghost’, suggesting that they do not look like living beings and perhaps are pale and sad. The second image develops the idea by the metaphor of their faces being like petals on a wet black bough: perhaps the poet is suggesting spring when the trees have blooms, but no leaves and the weather is still rainy; the petals are white or pale pink and delicate, easily blown away. Both images suggest helplessness and transience: there is nothing substantial or robust in the description at all. So although the poet has only offered us images, they are suggestive ones, haunting even, and the experience of seeing people as vulnerable in the hurly-burly of modern urban life has been communicated in two lines and two evocative images.

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Reflection: Did the poem’s images have this effect on you? Look at some crowds emerging from a station or underground train. Do they look cheerful and lively?

The poem is a good example of Imagism. Ezra Pound was one of a group of poets called Imagists. Here is another example of a short poem with vivid images by Singaporean poet Ong Teong Hean. Tai-chi was originally a training for Chinese martial arts but is now considered a very valuable exercise regime. There are some effective rhymes and half-rhymes at the ends of the lines, features that you will discuss in Unit 4.

the man of tai-chi with such sequestered ease

KEY TERM

creates a clean calligraphy

Imagists: a group of early 20th-century poets who believed that experience was most effectively communicated through images of the senses. This approach is an important element in appreciating what a poet is expressing by considering how it is expressed. Sense images do not have to be metaphors. The senses are sight, hearing, touch, taste and smell; to these we can add the ‘sense’ of energy or movement, which could be termed the kinetic sense.

of graceful peace;

Reflection: If possible, with your partner or in a group, discuss in more detail how each theme develops as the poems progress.

a centre of concentration to pump his heart and arteries with measured arm-motion and steps of gnarled artistry. Ong Teong Hean The Tai-chi Man (2010)

What are poems usually about? Poets can express thoughts and feelings about anything, so poems can have as their subject matter anything in the world you can think of, such as the Underground or exercising in the morning! There are great poems created about apparently trivial objects like a lock of hair, insects such as a flea or mosquito, or growing things such as thistles or mushrooms. Major life dramas such as love, treachery and war do of course also feature. What the poet does with the subject matter, and how these ideas are developed, is the poem’s theme, or it can be expressed as ‘the poet’s concerns’. These ideas are not separate from the words they are expressed in: the words are the poem. Your exam syllabus for AS Level does not set longer narrative poems for study, so all the examples used in this part of the book will be of shorter lyric poems with distinct themes; you will find that length is not necessarily a criterion for excellence. Poems used in an unseen exam question will also be of this kind.

ACTIVITY 1.3

Write down the names of five poems you have studied and, in one or two sentences, say what they are about.

Themes in poetry It is often easier to summarise the theme of a poem than it is to analyse the poet’s methods and the effects of the language used. This poem is about the waste and futility of war, you might say, or the sadness of death, or the passage of time, or how relationships can be difficult, or how some people in power can make others suffer dreadfully. Original material © Cambridge University Press 2019

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Perhaps the poet gives a different example in each stanza and then concludes by emphasising his point, or uses a little anecdote that illustrates the issue. Or possibly the poet chooses images which are suggestive of a thought but don’t express the thought directly, but we still grasp the gist of the argument. You’ll look more closely at this in Unit 3. ACTIVITY 1.4

Before you read the next poem, Egrets (1962) by Australian poet Judith Wright, see if you can find a picture of these graceful white birds, perhaps on the internet. Then, in one sentence, say what you think the poem is about. When you have answered, consider what other elements in the poem could affect the expression of this theme and your appreciation of it.

KEY TERM

Stanza: an Italian word that means ‘room’, a place to stop. Poetic stanzas can be irregular as well as regular (see Unit 3, Verse and stanza).

Once as I travelled through a quiet evening, I saw a pool, jet-black and mirror-still. Beyond, the slender paperbarks* stood crowding; each on its own white image looked its fill, and nothing moved but thirty egrets wading – thirty egrets in a quiet evening. Once in a lifetime, lovely past believing, your lucky eyes may light on such a pool. As though for many years I had been waiting, I watched in silence, till my heart was full of clear dark water, and white trees unmoving,

and, whiter yet, those thirty egrets wading. (*A paperbark is an Australian tree with white bark which resembles strips of paper) Judith Wright, Egrets (1962)

SAMPLE RESPONSE The poet speaks of the beauty of some birds she sees at a pool as she is walking one evening and how she is affected by this memorable experience.

What is missing from this response? This answer interprets the theme of the poem quite successfully, but to focus on theme alone is to neglect other aspects of the poem that influence the theme powerfully. Wright uses images of silence and the stillness of everything except the birds. There is effective colour contrast in the dark pool and the white birds and trees. She uses repetition of words and phrases for emphasis, and the poem’s two-stanza structure takes the reader from a single incident (Once as I travelled through a quiet evening) to the idea that this is a special Once in a lifetime experience which anyone would be lucky to have. When she says my heart was full / of clear dark water she is using language metaphorically to express the way that experiences can overwhelm the mind. The rhymes and half-rhymes skilfully enhance the theme. You will revise these in more detail in the next three units.

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ACTIVITY 1.5

Another well-known poet has written a poem about white egrets and has a collection of poems with this title, which was first published in 2010 when he was 80 years old. See if you can find out who he is!

In a Station of the Metro, that little fragmentary poem, showed the importance of style in interpretation. You are reminded similarly by Wright’s poem that the way a theme is expressed is vital to its meaning: all the work you do on analysis of style will help you to refine your ideas about theme and you will be able to return to your initial statement about the writer’s concerns and make it more subtle and comprehensive.

TIP The words make the poem: its meaning doesn’t exist as a separate entity underneath or inside the words like a nut whose shell has to be cracked to find the kernel inside. If you changed some of the words to others with similar meanings but different sounds, the poem would disappear and become something else. Students usually write about a poem’s theme and say little about the poet’s style and methods. Any close analysis of the language of a poem will enhance the quality of an essay.

FURTHER READING

The website ‘Poemhunter’ is a useful source for poems on particular topics (such as nature, animals, cities and so on).

Language for a New Century: Contemporary Poetry from the Middle East, Asia and Beyond, edited by Ravi Shankar and Nathalie Handal (Norton, 2008).

Self-assessment checklist Reflect on what you’ve learnt in this unit and indicate your confidence level between 1 and 5. If you score below 3, revisit that section. Come back to this list later in your course. Has your confidence grown? Confidence level I can appreciate and discuss the different elements that may make a poem I understand what the Imagists were aiming to do I can identify aspects other than theme in Wright’s poem about the birds I acknowledge the importance of style

Revisited?

Unit 2 The language of poetry Learning objectives In this unit you will: ■ ■ ■

remind yourself of metaphorical and other non-literal language, with examples to clarify revise and consider the effect of language with unusual word order and syntax review the importance of repetition and parallelism in poems and their effect.

KEY CONCEPTS

Language, form, structure, genres, context, style, interpretation.

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Look back at the poem by Judith Wright in Unit 1 and see if you can find any similes or metaphors. This will put you in the right frame of mind for reviewing figures of speech.

This unit will help you to appreciate and deal with some of the poetic uses of language: first, the figurative language that characterises many poems and expands their imaginative range; second, the uses of language that challenge your understanding. The meaning of lines of poetry can sometimes be difficult to unravel because the words are new to you, they are not in the usual order, or perhaps some are missing, making the utterance ambiguous. It’s important to remember that a poet’s style is not seeking difficulty for its own sake but striving for freshness of presentation and thought, so that when you study the poem you will be engaged by it and remember it with pleasure as a unique utterance.

Metaphorical language The language of poetry can be very concentrated. One of the reasons for this intensity of expression is the use of metaphor. Literal language – the language of fixed predictable meaning – is relatively straightforward, but as soon as language becomes figurative (filled with figures of speech) then it becomes highly suggestive and open to imaginative interpretation. Look at the difference between My love is eighteen years old and has black hair (literal) and My love is like a red, red rose (a figurative comparison). Metaphor is a broad term which encompasses all the comparative figures of speech (simile and personification, for example) rather as the term ‘mammal’ includes a wide range of animals. It is based on comparison. In the hands of a skilled poet, metaphor can extend and enrich meaning, often working at more than one level of comparison and extending through several lines or a whole poem.

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KEY TERMS

Figures of speech: Don’t be put off by the fact that many words for figures of speech are unusual, often deriving from ancient Greek. This shows that using them has been an essential feature of language since ancient times. There are literally scores of them, but the following list gives you the most common ones. Imagery: the images of any of our senses (sight, hearing, touch, taste, smell) produced in the mind by descriptive language. These images are often being compared with something else, so frequently associated with specific figures of speech. Metaphor: the most important and widespread figure of speech. It is a comparison in which unlike objects are identified with each other so that some element of similarity can be found between them. Here a comparison is made by identifying one thing with another, but without using as or like. In its identification of one thing with another it goes further than a simile. For example: If music be the food of love, play on (Shakespeare Twelfth Night): music to a lover is like food to a hungry person, feeding and sustaining. The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune (Shakespeare Hamlet): life’s blows are like missiles thrown at us, but note that fortune is also personified here. Her skills have blossomed since she started lessons: her skills are growing like a plant – a bud has grown and has gradually become a beautiful flower. Extended metaphor: where the identification of similar qualities is elaborated over a number of lines, and may run throughout a poem or paragraph of prose. Simile: a figure of speech (really a kind of metaphor) in which two things are compared using as or like. A good simile will be clear and economical, but also suggestive; for example, My love is like a red, red rose (Robert Burns): beautiful, with soft skin like petals.

Personification: a form of metaphor in which the qualities of a person are transferred to nonhuman things or abstract qualities, to ‘humanise’ them and make them easier to understand; for example, the street lamp muttered (T.S. Eliot): the environment is just as alive as the person walking down the street. Hyperbole: exaggeration – an over-statement, used for effect. It isn’t used to disguise the truth, but to emphasise. It can be an ingredient of humour too; for example, An hundred years should go to praise thine eyes (Andrew Marvell, praising his lover). Litotes: an understatement used for effect, often using a double negative (such as not bad); for example, Wordsworth uses not seldom to mean ‘quite often’ in The Prelude. Antithesis or contrast: places contrasting ideas next to each other for effect; often they are in balanced phrases or clauses. This placing can also be termed juxtaposition (see Unit 14). You will find many examples of this throughout the book. Climax: (from a Greek word meaning ‘ladder’) is the point of highest significance which is gradually reached; for example, to strive, to seek, to find and not to yield (Alfred Lord Tennyson). Its opposite, anti-climax or bathos, suddenly undercuts the climax (and may be humorous); for example, from a poem describing the survivors of a shipwreck (the cutter is the ship carrying foodstuffs): they grieved for those that perished with the cutter / and also for the biscuit casks and butter (Lord Byron). Paradox: two apparently contradictory ideas placed together which make sense when examined closely; for example, the child is father of the man (William Wordsworth). If the contradiction is expressed in words in close proximity, it is called an oxymoron. In Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet, Romeo makes a whole speech using them (e.g. Feather of lead, bright smoke, cold fire, sick health). Repetition: extremely common for emphasis. The word parallelism is used for similar structures, phrases or clauses placed together. You will find many examples of this throughout the book; for example, Tennyson’s Mariana (see the section on repetition and parallelism later in this unit). Anaphora: repetition of introductory phrases. Irony: in its simplest form, irony involves a discrepancy between what is said by a writer and what is actually meant, or a contrast between what the reader expects and what is actually written. More complex forms of irony are dealt with in Part 2 of this book. The word sarcasm refers to speech rather than writing, although it would be appropriate for a character speaking in a play. Sarcasm: The use of a mocking or scornful tone of voice. If analysing a writer’s tone you should use the word ‘irony’, but a character’s direct speech can be called sarcastic.

Unit 2: The language of poetry

Examples 1 In Wilfred Owen’s poem Exposure, the poet vividly depicts the experience of men in the trenches in winter, waiting for something to happen. The pattern of comparisons here is mostly one of personification, making the inanimate alive, and thereby emphasising the cruelty of the cold weather: the merciless iced east winds that knive us; the mad gusts tugging on the wire; Dawn massing in the east her melancholy army; the frost which will be shrivelling many hands and puckering foreheads crisp. At one point, Owen imagines home and its fire, with its crusted dark-red jewels: here he compares the shape of the glowing coals to red jewels, precious by virtue of their warmth and beauty. 2 When South African poet Dennis Brutus describes in his poem Nightsong: City the way that police cars rush about the city at night, he says they cockroach through the tunnel streets. A cockroach is a hard-shelled insect associated with heat and dirt, which scuttles around in the dark, viewed with distaste by everyone. Tunnel has connotations of darkness and danger. He continues the insect imagery when he describes violence in a simile: Violence like a bug-infested rag is tossed… This gives the impression of a grim city life in which lower life forms have taken over; nonetheless, he loves his city and his country. My land, my love, sleep well is how he ends the poem. 3 Caribbean poet Grace Nicholls also uses an insect image in her poem Up My Spine, where she sees the old woman twist-up and shaky like a cripple insect. In spite of seeming old and feeble, the old woman has great power in the poem. You can find it on the internet. 4 In Sonnet 73 by William Shakespeare, a series of related extended metaphors is used. It is a typical Shakespearean sonnet (see Unit 3) with three sections of four lines followed by a couplet at the end, making 14 lines in all. The speaker of the poem is feeling his age, and he relates his physical self to three extended metaphors: the season of the year, the time of day and the progress of a fire. You will notice that the unit of comparison gradually diminishes, down to the ‘ashes’, which are his last remains.

5 Here are some lines filled with very visual metaphors and similes from the poem After Midnight by Indian poet Amit Chaudhuri (born 1962): Last night, the medallion moon was caught oddly between sleek, glowing channels of telephone wire. No one stirred, but a Pacific of lights went on burning in the vacant porches … Twice, I sensed hands, behind windows, strike a match, and a swift badge of flame open and shut like a hot mouth. An extract from After Midnight (2008), by Amit Chaudhuri The medallion moon is silver, round, like a jewel printed with significant words, the lights are a vast sea like the Pacific Ocean, and the match is the same colour and shape as a red badge. Like a hot mouth is a personification, as if the flame speaks and is then quiet. ACTIVITY 2.1

Look closely at the metaphors in the poems you are studying; then analyse some of them by writing clearly what things are being compared and what effects these comparisons have. If you like drawing, try making a visual representation of them instead together with a friend.

Reflection: What effects do these comparisons have?

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KEY TERMS

Diction: the writer’s choice of vocabulary. (You may also come across the word lexis, which is a term from the field of Linguistics.) Not to be confused with diction meaning style of pronunciation in speaking. Neologism: a newly coined word or expression, usually by poets or writers to draw attention to the meaning they are conveying.

Neologisms: One difference between most prose and poetry is that poets sometimes create

new words (or neologisms) to draw attention to the meaning they are conveying. You need to work out what the effect of the new word is in its context. Here is an example: Thomas Hardy wrote many poems when his first wife died, remembering the love they had shared in earlier, happier days. In his poem The Voice, he imagines hearing her voice as he is out walking by himself and wishes he could see her as she once was, but she is ever dissolved to wan wistlessness. This last word is one coined by Hardy. Wist is an archaic word for ‘know’ and was old when Hardy was writing too. So wistless means ‘unknowing’ and wistlessness is the state of not knowing or unconsciousness. All together the word suggests someone who is gone, part of the past, no longer a thinking, feeling person; its sounds are soft, sad and wistful, a word very similar in sound which means ‘longing’. In both sound and meaning, therefore, the word chosen by Hardy focuses the sense of loss when the living reflect on the absence of the longed-for dead. You don’t need to worry about the meaning of unusual or archaic words when you are practising for the unseen paper, as these words will always be given to you.

ACTIVITY 2.2

Try to identify some poems in which new words have been created for a particular effect. Your teacher will help you here. You may need a dictionary to help you find the basic building-block words used by the poet. 12

KEY TERM

Syntax: the arrangement of words into sentences so that the relationship of each word to the others can be appreciated. (Each language has its own conventions of syntax.) The Ezra Pound poem in Unit 1 was not a complete sentence as it didn’t have a finite verb (a verb which has a subject doing the action), appropriate for an utterance that records a fleeting impression rather than an action.

Unusual syntax and omission of words (sometimes called ‘deviation’) An important way in which the language of poetry can differ from the language of prose is in its occasionally unusual syntax; word order can be altered and some words omitted to create an interestingly different effect. In this way, the reader is forced to become more attentive to the words and is not able to skim the surface. The well-known poem by W.H. Auden (1907–1973) Musée des Beaux Arts begins by saying About suffering they were never wrong, / The Old Masters, rather than The old masters were never wrong about suffering. This is known as an inversion; here, the inversion stresses the suffering which is the poet’s main concern by placing it directly at the beginning. The poetry of Emily Dickinson (1830–1886) is filled with inversions. For example: A solemn thing – it was – I said – A woman – white – to be – … A hallowed thing – to drop a life.

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Landscape with the Fall of Icarus by Pieter Bruegel the Elder. This painting is described in W.H. Auden’s poem Musée des Beaux Arts, which is named after the museum in Belgium which holds the painting.

ACTIVITY 2.3

Discuss with a partner the word order and syntax in some poems you are studying. In almost every one you will find deviations from the ‘normal’ word order, and you will find words omitted. Try to consider the effect these have. A good way to point out the difference is to put the lines into sentences in the usual prose order, adding any words you need to make the meaning clear. The first thing you will notice is how much longer your version is, a reminder that poetry can often be very concentrated compared with prose. The Dickinson stanza would begin I said it was a solemn thing to be a woman.

This feature is not confined to poetry. In the play Death of a Salesman, Linda speaks of her husband to her sons, saying: Attention, attention must be finally paid to such a person. The word attention is emphasised by its position and by its repetition (rather than the more usual You should pay attention to a person like that). ACTIVITY 2.4

Here is another example: a poem by Gerard Manley Hopkins (1844–1889) that uses unusual syntax and omits words to create specific effects. Analyse how Hopkins does this. Whether on your own or with a partner, use a highlighter to pinpoint those areas of the poem where words are in an unusual order or words have apparently been left out. Glory be to God for dappled things – For skies of couple-colour as a brinded cow; For rose-moles all in stipple upon trout that swim;

Reflection: Think of a favourite poem and how different it would be if you made it into a normal prose order.

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Fresh-firecoal chestnut-falls; finches’ wings; Landscape plotted and pieced – fold, fallow, and plough; And all trades, their gear and tackle and trim. All things counter, original, spare, strange; Whatever is fickle, freckled (who knows how?) With swift, slow; sweet, sour; adazzle, dim; He fathers-forth whose beauty is past change: Praise him.

SAMPLE RESPONSE

Gerard Manley Hopkins Pied Beauty (1877)

Hopkins omits words and writes very concentratedly in this poem praising God’s creation. One characteristic method he uses is to create double-barrelled words such as couple-colour, rose-moles, fresh-firecoal and fathers-forth, each of which would require many more words to paraphrase their meaning in prose. The four words fresh-firecoal chestnut-falls delightfully sum up the beauties of autumn when chestnuts fall, and fires are made to warm us up and to roast the chestnuts. Fathers-forth suggests a loving and enabling parent who cares deeply but is not possessive. Hopkins also uses lists of words, whose meaning and sound work together to image the great variety of multicoloured and multicharactered things and people in the world: counter, original, spare, strange … swift, slow; sweet, sour; adazzle, dim. He does not need to spell out with unnecessary extra words what he is referring to. The images of the senses (sight, sound, touch, taste, smell and movement are all implied here), together with the sounds of the words, combine to create a picture of a great creation iridescent with change, and a great creator whose beauty, in contrast, depends upon his unchanging nature. Hopkins’s poetry is rich with similar examples.

Repetition and parallelism KEY TERM

Parallelism: a device in which parts of the wording of a sentence are the same, repeating or paralleling each other for emphasis.

Poetic method often includes exact repetition of words and phrases, or whole lines, in order to intensify effects. Parallelism is repetition which may have some subtle differences. The first example for you to consider is from Tennyson’s poem Mariana. Here are the first two stanzas: With blackest moss the flower-pots Were thickly crusted, one and all: The rusted nails fell from the knots That held the pear to the gable-wall. The broken sheds look’d sad and strange: Unlifted was the clinking latch;

Unit 2: The language of poetry

Weeded and worn the ancient thatch Upon the lonely moated grange. She only said, ‘My life is dreary, He cometh not,’ she said; She said, ‘I am aweary, aweary, I would that I were dead!’ Her tears fell with the dews at even; Her tears fell ere the dews were dried; She could not look on the sweet heaven, Either at morn or eventide. After the flitting of the bats, When thickest dark did trance the sky, She drew her casement-curtain by, And glanced athwart the glooming flats. She only said, ‘The night is dreary, He cometh not,’ she said; 15

She said, ‘I am aweary, aweary, I would that I were dead!’ An extract from Alfred Lord Tennyson Mariana (1830)

ACTIVITY 2.5

COMMENT

See if you can find examples of exact repetition in the two stanzas from Mariana. Then look to see if you can find parallelism, where the repeated phrase or construction has a slight variation. Don’t include the rhyme at this stage, although it is, of course, a kind of parallelism.

The most obvious repetition is in the final four lines of each stanza where most of the words are the same (and this continues through the poem to the final stanza). Lines 2, 3 and 4 of the final quatrain (four lines) are exactly the same, but in quatrain 1 she says My life is dreary and in quatrain 2 she says The night is dreary. This pattern is found with The day is dreary used in other stanzas in alternation. The use of a line or lines repeated in this way is typical of certain kinds of poem, such as the ballad, and it is known as a refrain. Her tears fell is repeated in lines 1 and 2 of the second stanza and there is a mention of the dews, although this is worded slightly differently.

Mariana in the Moated Grange by John Everett Millais.

Cambridge International AS & A Level Literature in English

There are other examples of parallelism, such as nearly every object being given a descriptive word (an adjective) to qualify it: blackest moss, rusted nails, broken sheds, clinking latch, ancient thatch, lonely moated grange, sweet heaven, thickest dark, glooming flats. There is a relentless pattern here, which is very appropriate for the repetitive, doomed existence of Mariana, waiting for the man who never comes. Her environment is dark and gloomy, and only the heaven (which she cannot face) is sweet. By the final stanza of the whole poem, the refrain’s changes reveal a climax of desperation:

Then, said she, ‘I am very dreary, He will not come,’ she said; She wept, ‘I am aweary, aweary, O God, that I were dead!’

We shall now look at an example of a shorter poem by W.B. Yeats that depends equally upon these features. The whole poem follows Activity 2.6.

TIP By paying close attention to the words in poems – their implications, their sounds and their arrangement – you will gradually become a skilled and responsive literary critic.

ACTIVITY 2.6

See if you can identify the repetition and parallelism in this poem by Irish poet W.B. Yeats: An Irish Airman Foresees His Death, written about Yeats’s friend Major Robert Gregory who died in the First World War. I know that I shall meet my fate Somewhere among the clouds above; Those that I fight I do not hate, Those that I guard I do not love; My country is Kiltartan Cross, My countrymen Kiltartan’s poor, No likely end could bring them loss Or leave them happier than before. Nor law, nor duty bade me fight, Nor public men, nor cheering crowds, A lonely impulse of delight Drove to this tumult in the clouds; I balanced all, brought all to mind, The years to come seemed waste of breath, A waste of breath the years behind In balance with this life, this death. W.B. Yeats An Irish Airman Foresees His Death (1919)

COMMENT

Unit 2: The language of poetry

You should have had no difficulty in finding parallel and antithetical (contrasting) phrases and constructions here. Note also its regular metre and rhyme. (You will find discussion of regular rhythms and rhymes in Unit 4.) What effect does it have that the poem is written using such parallels and contrasts? Remember the ‘I’ of the poem is not Yeats: he is imagining the thoughts of his friend. What sort of person is the ‘I’ of the poem? What are his feelings about the war in which he is engaged? Think about the word ‘balance’, which is used twice towards the end.