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There was once an enourmous city and in that city was an enourmous park and in that park there was a little girl called Red who was about to meet a very special friend.
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Red loved playing in the beautiful white snow of the park.
Her mummy watched from the bench “Don’t go to far” she called.
Red was making a snow monster today. It looked rather good when she had finished it.
She wanted to show her mummy but when she looked for her she was gone. Where was she?
She went looking for her but there was no answer.
Soon, Red was completely lost.
And she began to think something very strange was following her.
Oh no! It was a Monster! And Red ran away as fast as she could.
But the monster didn’t want to hurt her. He just seemed lonely. Perhaps he just wanted a friend?
So she gave the monster a big hug and he was much happier. Then she had an idea; they could play together in the City.
So they ran and played over the rooftops together all night.
When they were hungry they ate whatever they wanted. Monster liked eating the big signs of Hamburgers and Donuts.
At bedtime, they found a story to listen to. But the story made the monster sad again. He was missing his mother.
Let’s find your mother said Red. So they called together for her. ROAR! They called ROAR! And from far away something answered back
But it wasn’t his mother. It was a mother bird and her three babies. They were stuck.
So the monster and Red set them free.
And the birds flew away together. They were very happy.
Red and the Monster tried again. ROAR! they called ROAR! And from far away something answered back
But it wasn’t his mother.
It was a huge mother whale who was crying because she missed her babies.
So Red and the Monster set her free and she swam to her children.
They were all so happy.
But they still hadn’t found his mother so they tried again. ROAR! they called ROAR! And from far away something answered back
But it wasn’t his mother, this time it was the circus animals. Their circus was on fire and they needed help
So Red and Monster set them free.
The animals were very happy. But when the people saw the Monster they were scared.
They sent helicopters to catch him.
And they put him in a cage on an island far away.
People came to point and laugh at the monster and the monster grew very sad.
When Red finally found him
the monster had given up all hope.
But Red didn’t give up. She called and called. And one by one, the circus animals and the whales and the birds all came to help.
ROAR they called together ROAR! And from far away, something answered back.
ROOOOOOAAAAR! It was monsters mother. She had been looking for him everywhere and was very pleased to find him.
She took them in her arms, through the enormous city, through the enormous park to a secret place no one knew..
It was called Monster Park.
It was where the monster lived and they were very happy to have their little monster safe back home.
They celebrated with a huge party and Red was their guest of honour.
Eventually it was time for Red to say goodbye. She would miss her monster.
But that wasn’t the end‌
Reds mother was calling her home.
At last Red ran to her mother and gave her the most enourmous hug in the world.
When she turned to thank her monster he had vanished.
And though she looked everyday she never found him ever again.
Until one snowy and wintery night from out of her bedroom window
She heard a ROAR!
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So the monster and Little Red set the whale free and it swam to it’s children.
They were very happy