Commercial Mag Issue 1
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Table of Contents Commercials Rose: Pages 3-4 Legacy: Pages 5-6 Cocoa Seduction: Pages 7-8 In Dreams: Pages 9-10 Pink Diamond: Pages 11-12 Silverliago ‘00: Pages 13-14 Credits Page 15
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ROSE Written by Rïén Kelso FADE IN: INT. DINER - NIGHT A couple is enjoying a wonderful italian dinner at a fine restaurant. There is a LADY and a GUY. They are laughing and smiling. The laughter dies down. LADY I'm gonna go wash up. GUY Go ahead. She gets up. and walks towards the bathroom. CUT TO: INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT Looking down the bathroom stalls. The lady walks in and goes to the sink. She looks at herself in the mirror. She turns on the faucet and puts her hands in the water. Rubs her neck and then her leg in a seductive manner. The lady pulls a perfume bottle out of her purse. She sprays the perfume near her neck. CUT TO: INT. DINER - NIGHT The lady walks back to her table. Food is on the table. LADY Just in time, huh? 3
The guy is chewing on his food but looks up at the woman. She looks up at him and smiles. CUT TO: PRODUCT A bottle of Mariani brand perfume. VOICE Rose by Mariani. FADE OUT: BLACK
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LEGACY Written by Rïén Kelso FADE IN: EXT. MOVIE THEATER - NIGHT A limousine pulls up to a red carpet entrance. A bunch of people with cameras have their cameras ready. A famous celebrity steps out of the car. People flash their cameras, trigger happy. CELEBRITY (OFFSCREEN) It's not about the fame. The celebrity is walking down the red carpet. CUT TO: INT. HOUSE - DAY The celebrity is lying down on a bed littered with cash. He picks up the cash and throws it in the air. Gold bars are everywhere. CELEBRITY (OFFSCREEN) Or the fortune. CUT TO: EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD - SUNSET A football team is on the field, in practice clothes. The team lines up to run a play. The celebrity is lined up in the wide-receiver position. QUARTERBACK Ready, set, hike! The ball is snapped. The runs a post-route. The ball is thrown into the air. 5
CELEBRITY (OFFSCREEN) It's about every step you take... CUT TO: EXT. FOOTBALL STADIUM - NIGHT The location transitions to a lavish stadium with bright lights all around. The ball comes down and lands in the celebrity's hands. CELEBRITY (OFFSCREEN) What seperates the good from the great. He runs down the field, evading tacklers as he dives into the endzone. COMMENTATOR (OFFSCREEN) Touchdown, Jeremy Mason! CUT TO: INT. HALLWAY - NIGHT The celebrity is walking down a hallway with a black suit. CELEBRITY (OFFSCREEN) What's your legacy? He opens a door. There is a bright light. He walks through and the door shuts. CUT TO: PRODUCT A Keith Leinart brand suit. SIGN Keith Leinart FADE OUT: BLACK
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COCOA SEDUCTION Written by Rïén Kelso FADE IN: INT. ICE CREAM - SHOP A GUY is eating gelato at a table by the window. He takes a look out the window and sees a LADY walking. She passes the window while guy watches her walk away. He eats a spoonful of gelato. The lady walks back and stares at him through the window. The guy looks up and sees the lady. She lips her speech. LADY (SILENT) Hi! The guy does the same. GUY (SILENT) Hi! LADY (SILENT) May I join you? The guy smiles. GUY (SILENT) Of course! The lady walks away from the window. The guy straightens out his tie and slicks back his hair. The lady walks into the shop and heads over to the guy's table. She sits down. 7
Focus is on the guy. GUY Nice day, isn't it? He looks over at the girl and the gelato is gone. She puts the last spoonful in her mouth. LADY It is, isn't it? The guy looks down at the empty gelato cup but then looks up at her and smiles. CUT TO: PRODUCT A cup of Gerardo brand gelato. VOICE Gerardo FADE OUT: BLACK
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IN DREAMS Written by RĂŻĂŠn Kelso FADE IN: INT. VENUE - NIGHT A beautiful LADY is on stage singing a song. She has long black hair and has light skin. She is really thin. She is wearing a long flowing blue dress that sparkles when the light hits her just right. She is singing right in front of the microphone. LADY (SINGING) Deeper than passion, my lips are lusting for. We see the LADY from the backstage, it looks like a crowd of at least 50 people are sitting in little dining chairs with small, dimly lit candles. People are dressed in formal evening attire. LADY (SINGING) A darker complexion, always hungry for more. Focus is on the LADY and her blue brightly colored lipstick. Her hands on the microphone. Her feet near the base. LADY (SINGING) Waiting 'till midnight, we will wait forever. Seeking pleasuring desires that only exist, She smiles and looks out at the audience. In the audience, a man is staring at the LADY, not even batting an eye. LADY (SINGING) 9
In my dreams. The music ends. The audience gives an applause. She struts off the stage with her back turned from the audience. CUT TO: PRODUCT A tube of Mariani brand lipstick. VOICE In Dreams by Mariani. FADE OUT: BLACK
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PINK DIAMOND Written by Rïén Kelso FADE IN: EXT. BALCONY - NIGHT A MAN and a WOMAN walk out of a busy restaurant and head to the balcony ledge. They look out to the city. WOMAN This is exactly how I wanted to spend New Years Eve. Just here with you. She looks up at the MAN. MAN You know how I wanted to spend New Years Eve? WOMAN How? MAN There has been something that has been on my mind since the day I met you. WOMAN What's that? The man gets down on one knee. He pulls out a ring box from his coat pocket and the opens it. A pink diamond ring is inside the box, shining brightly. MAN Marilyn Rose, would you marry me? It sparkles in the woman’s eyes. The woman gasps and is speechless. She holds in her tears. 11
WOMAN Yes! Yes! The MAN gets up and the two kiss. Fireworks are exploding in the background. WOMAN Happy New Years, Love. CUT TO: PRODUCT A Price’s Jewelry brand diamond ring. SIGN Price’s Jewelry FADE OUT: BLACK
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SILVERLIAGO ’00 Written by Rïén Kelso FADE IN: EXT. CITY - NIGHT A piano black Mariani Silverliago with a blue under glow zooms down a major city street. VOICE You want to go fast. CUT TO: EXT. CITY LIMITS - NIGHT The Silverliago drives out of the city. A bunch of buildings with bright lights are seen in the background. VOICE You want to go the distance. CUT TO: EXT. MOUNTAINSIDE - NIGHT The Silverliago zips by a ridge that is below a beautiful view of the mountain scape with a waterfall. VOICE You want to go places that few have ever been. CUT TO: PRODUCT Panning from the front to the back of the Silverliago. VOICE When it's all said and done, 13
there's nothing that will separate you from the machine inside. A frontal view of the Marcelino brand Silverliago. VOICE This is the Marcelino Silverliago. FADE OUT: BLACK
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Credits Directed by: Rïén Kelso Produced by: Rïén Kelso Written by: Rïén Kelso Illustrated by: Rïén Kelso
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