Top Ten Mistakes of College Writing

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WRITING FOR COLLEGE WHY IS IT DIFFERENT?

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The Most Common Writing Errors For EWRT 211

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Academic writing is different from creative writing or journalistic writing!

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Academic writing is different from creative writing or journalistic writing! • Do not write the way you speak. • Do not use slang. • Do not expect your reader to know what you mean. • Do not write in fragments. • Use complete sentences.

• Always use Modern Language Association (MLA) Guidelines.

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Bad Habits to Avoid in Academic Writing

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Bad Habits to Avoid in Academic Writing • • • • • • •

Second person “you” Inconsistent person Inconsistent tense Abbreviations Do not use: ya, thru, wanna, gonna Do not use: etc., & Avoid ending verbs with “en” or “in” instead of “ing”: waitin, watchen

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Pronoun/Antecedent Agreement and Reference

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Pronoun/Antecedent Agreement and Reference • Pronouns take the place of nouns (he, she, it, they, I, you) • The antecedent is the word to which the pronoun refers. For example: Mary went to the store and she bought candy. (Mary is the antecedent for the pronoun she.)

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Mechanical Rules

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Mechanical Rules • Numbers – Never begin a sentence with a number.(Spell it out.) • All numbers below 100 should be spelled out. Those above 100 are optional but should be consistent.

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Commonly Misspelled Words

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Commonly Misspelled Words • • • • • • •

your to there its quite than whose

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you’re too their it’s quiet then who’s

two they’re


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Unnecessary Repetition

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Unnecessary Repetition • • • •

A round circle Refer back An eyewitness present at the scene The whole entire world

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Words and Phrases to Avoid

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Words and Phrases to Avoid • A-lot is two words – very, thing, you, I • Avoid beginning sentences with conjunctions (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) • Avoid contractions • There are no such words as: theirself, hisself, alright. Write themselves, himself, all right. • Do not capitalize subjects like biology, math, science, history. • Use the word “finish” instead of “done” • Use “who” when referring to people. • The party would (of, have) made me happy.

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Parts of Speech

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Parts of Speech • • • • • •

Nouns – person, place, thing, or idea. Pronouns – take the place of a noun Verbs – action words Adjectives – Describes a noun or pronoun Adverbs – Describes a verb, adjective, or another adverb Prepositions – Form a phrase modifying another word in a sentence. Usually show movement such as around, under, over, into, through, etc. • Conjunctions – Connect words, phrases, clauses: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so (FANBOYS) • Interjections – Express surprise or emotion. (Oh! Hey! Wow!).

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TOP TEN MOST FREQUENT WRITING MISTAKES

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#1 THE SENTENCE FRAGMENT

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#1 THE SENTENCE FRAGMENT • A sentence fragment is a partial or incomplete thought that is used as a complete sentence. In most student writing, sentence fragments are the result of a less formal, more conversational tone. ! Ex: When I tripped on the curb. ! Re: When I tripped on the curb, I split my pants right down the middle. ! TIP: Look at your writing. Do you have any sentences that cannot stand alone? Monday, October 4, 2010

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#2 THE RUN-ON SENTENCE

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#2 THE RUN-ON SENTENCE • The run-on occurs when two (or more complete thoughts or phrases are written as a single sentence without separation. Run-ons are generally a result of simple carelessness. ! Ex: Dave went to the store to buy some beer and an ounce of pot he forgot his wallet. ! Re: Dave went to the store to buy some beer and an ounce of pot, but he forgot his wallet. ! TIP: Run-ons are not confined to longer sentences; 13 check the structure of short sentences, too. Monday, October 4, 2010


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#3 COMMA SPLICE AND FUSED SENTENCES

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#3 COMMA SPLICE AND FUSED SENTENCES • This is a type of run-on sentence where two (or more) complete sentences are connected with only a comma. These types of fused sentences are usually the result the writer trying to tie a complex thought together. ! Ex: Collin studies many hours, he is the smartest guy in the class. ! Re: Because Collin studies many hours, he is the smartest guy in the class.

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#4 LACK OF SUBJECT/VERB AGREEMENT

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#4 LACK OF SUBJECT/VERB AGREEMENT • A lack of agreement occurs when the subject does not agree with the verb (both not singular or both not plural). ! Ex: The girl run fast down the street. ! Re: The girl runs fast down the street. ! TIP: Try to pay close attention to the verb and its subject(s) or a pronoun and its antecedent(s). Do they agree? 15 Monday, October 4, 2010


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#5 INCONSISTENT TENSE

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#5 INCONSISTENT TENSE • You can have inconsistent tense when the tense of two (or more) verbs in a sentence do not agree. ! Ex: She forgot that she needs to do some homework for her math class. ! Re: She forgot that she needed to do some homework for her math class. ! TIP: When you have multiple verbs in one sentence, pay close attention to the tense. 16 Monday, October 4, 2010


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#6 FAULTY PARALLELISM

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#6 FAULTY PARALLELISM • Faulty parallelism is a grammatical mistake whereby there is a awkward lack of balance in the creation of lists and series. ! Ex: I glanced out the window and saw an elm tree, a tree with bright red fruit, and a large bush. ! Re: I glanced out the window and saw an elm tree, an apple tree, and large bush.

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#7 DANGLING MODIFIERS

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#7 DANGLING MODIFIERS • Simply put, dangling modifiers describe or reference words that never actually appear in a sentence. ! Ex: Driving down the street, the weather seemed to be changing rather quickly. ! Re: Driving down the street, I noticed the weather seemed to be changing rather quickly. ! TIP: Try not to carelessly add descriptive phrases to a sentence. Pay attention to the phrases in a sentence and what they modify. 18 Monday, October 4, 2010


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#8 PASSIVE VOICE

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#8 PASSIVE VOICE • With a passive voice, the subject of a sentence becomes the receiver of the action. Basically, nothing or no one is performing the action. ! Ex: The haunted house at the top of the hill was greatly feared by us. ! Re: We feared the haunted house at the top of the hill. ! Ex: The poemʟs narrator is the mother. ! Re: The mother narrates the poem. ! Ex: The glass was broken by the cat. ! Re: The cat broke the glass. ! TIP: Unless you absolutely need an passive verb, change it to the active voice. Monday, October 4, 2010

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#9 REDUNDANCY

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#9 REDUNDANCY • As the term implies, redundancy is the overuse or needless use of words. ! Ex: She was totally the tallest girl in the classroom. ! Re: She was the tallest girl in the classroom. ! Ex: To fix the car, you will need both a wrench and a screwdriver. ! Re: To fix the car, you will need a wrench and a screwdriver. ! TIP: Go through your work and look for descriptive words you often use when speaking – these tend to be redundant in college-level writing. 20 Monday, October 4, 2010


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#10 INEXACTNESS OR IMPRECISION

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#10 INEXACTNESS OR IMPRECISION • When writing, make sure you use words and phrases which correctly convey your meaning. ! Ex: In an attempt to levitate the situation, the police officer backed off a few steps. ! Re: In an attempt to alleviate the situation, the police officer backed off a few steps. ! TIP: Donʼt try and stretch your vocabulary. If needed, grab a dictionary to find the best word. Also, try and avoid extremely pretentious wording. 21 Monday, October 4, 2010


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