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The Traveling Piece of Chocolate and Its Friends
from Glimpses of Magic: 2021–22 Writing from 826michigan's After-school Writing Lab Students
by 826michigan
Omniah Alakwaa
Age 14
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The Traveling Piece of Chocolate and Its Friends
A boy, Jackson, went to a store to buy his father a chocolate. His father was always busy. He bought a chocolate and was walking down the stairs, and he wandered around and looked at the people who were having father-andson bonding time. Jackson ran quickly to his father, so he could catch him before he left for the first day of his new job. He was able to catch him one minute before the car pulled off with smoke trailing behind it. When he got to the car, his father said, “Goodbye son,” and waved. And then the father went to the movie set where he could make the movie. Then, he stopped for a burger and at the gas station. The chocolate was traveling with him the whole way. Then, he finally got to the movie set. He was having a busy day because this movie was either going to end his career or make him famous. He put the chocolate down on a desk, and then his friend came and said, “What’s up man, do you wanna go eat some food? We have been working for eight hours straight.” They went and forgot the poor chocolate on the desk. After that, they went back, but after they ate dinner and went back to the movie set, they found out the movie set was shut down because the family that was filming it was not comfortable and did not have enough money to make it. So, the movie set was torn down and rebuilt as a normal house. A new family moved into the house after it was rebuilt. Then, the chocolate was under the ground, very down under the ground. This kid in the new family was very, very naughty as he would eat anything on the ground. Anything, anywhere he would eat it. Even if it was gross, he would just eat it. Then, he went out to play with his dog, Frogis. The dog smelled the scent of the chocolate, and he kept digging deep down into the ground until he found the chocolate. The kid stole and ate the chocolate. It was six years old, and there were six pieces in the chocolate. He ate it piece by piece. The chocolate was falling down; starting in the mouth, it was slowly, slowly falling down. He was starting to choke since the chocolate was pushing on his throat, and then he went to his mother, and his mother gave him a pat on his back. Her hand moved back, very back, until it touched the wall. It was going so fast
that it seemed like it was going the same speed as a train. The chocolate was very worried about how it would break because the chocolate was feeling the speed of the hand.
The chocolate heard the “Boof Boof DANGGGG” on his back, and then the chocolate started falling. The chocolate pulled apart, and then it stopped for gas (JOKEJOKEHEHETRICKED U). Then, the chocolate fell into his stomach, and it started to hurt. Because the chocolate was underground for six years, it was rotten. Also, the chocolate met some friends in the stomach too. They all had the same problem: they were rotting. Spiders, ants, monsters, a mini city. A big, black shadow was walking slowly, slowly, slowly, and the chocolate and all the other people who were there were jumping up and down. They thought it was a big SCARYMONSTER, but it turned out it was a small friendly spider saying, “Hey! Hey! Guys!” They were like, “Bruh, this so sus.” Chocolate is like living with IT friends. The friend was named Bottles, he always says, “It is always good to avoid trouble.”
SO here we are: the story ended. (JUST JOKING). (IT) the clown was inside his stomach. A IT, lITTERY, a it; a big, scary clown that was attacking people. (Sike, my peeps). It was always attacking the chocolate because the chocolate smelled gross. All the other animals agreed that it smelled awful and should be banned from the mini-city, so it got removed from the city and destroyed.