Comprehensive Edit

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Memorandum To:

Dr. Kenneth Price

From:

Brandy Kiger

Date:

September 11, 2007

Subject:

English 603: Comprehensive Edit

Introduction The Mountain Heritage Center is an organization dedicated to the preservation and display of regional artifacts and history. Their primary goal is to educate the public on developments that have shaped and changed the face of the region, examining economics, culture, and world events and their impact. In order to do this, they utilize their space by creating exhibits designed to engage the viewer and impart historical information. I have been invited to edit and redesign one of their traveling exhibits, entitled “After the War,” which will be leaving the museum in the near future to go on tour. Analysis Purpose This exhibit will travel across North Carolina to various venues such as other museums and high schools in order to educate others on the regional history of western North Carolina. I will edit the existing exhibit for clarity and conciseness in order to make it more “travel-friendly.” I will also develop “house rules” for the Mountain Heritage Center that can be used in future displays per the request of Dr. Philyaw. Audience “After the War” should attract a broad demographic, but it is expected that its primary focus will be those over the age of forty. But, since venues are to be scheduled at high schools as well, it is necessary that the exhibit be accessible to all ages. This exhibit is geared toward those wishing to learn more about their heritage and about the post-war western North Carolina area. Many visitors to the exhibit will have little or no previous knowledge of the impact the wars had on this region, therefore it is imperative that the exhibit be concise yet thorough. Evaluation Content Due to the compilation of this exhibit by numerous history students, it lacks cohesiveness in design and writing style. It is very verbose, and needs to be pared down and simplified to a greater extent to make it travel-ready.


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