“ Magical
Stories” by
Catalina Fiore Year:2013 Form:6° Teachers:M. Sol Velasquez and 1
Cintia Mux Index 1) “The Mountain”..................................................page 3 2) “The Monster”....................................................page 4 3)”Mark and His Friens”..........................................page 5
4)”Isabella”.............................................................p age 6 5) “Not all that Glitters is 2
Gold”..............................page 7 6)”The Chocolate Biscuits”....................................page 8 7)”The Happy Picnic”............................................page 9 8)”The Nugget of Gold”........................................page 10 9) “A Man”.................................. ..........................page 11 10)”Candelaria's Life”...........................................page 12
“The Mountain ” One day, there was a boy called Edgar. He lived in Buenos Aires, his hair was brown. 3
Without warming, their cousins appeared and he was very surprised. The next day, they wanted to go to a high mountain. Suddenly,
when
they
were
travelling to the mountain they saw a tiger. Then Edgar was very worried so he and his cousins started to fight with the tiger. Finally, the beast was bigger than what he had imagined. When they killed the tiger they discovered that the tiger was born by a withe tiger. Date: 15/08
“The Monster� 4
I had a very exciting day on my birthday because I had invited a lot of people. My mother gave me a picture that was painted by Picasso, but I preferred Van Gogh to Picasso. On Friday, I went to school. First, I forgot that I had to have a test and second I was afraid. Then I played with my friends and a monster appeared and wounded my arm. When I was crying the monster disappeared. When I was in my house I went to sleep and out of the blue, the monster appeared and I killed him. Suddenly I remembered that I had to study for the test. Date:20/08
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“Mark and his
Friend �
Mark wanted to visit a friend, so he got on a bus. When he arrived he imagined that he would eat an ice-cream if he found his friend. After that, he saw that the house of his friend was being built. Then Mark and his friends were playing when a monster appeared and killed Mark's friend. Mark was crying when he had an idea, he remembered that her mom had told him to return quickly to his house. Finally, he returned very sad and during all his life he continued crying.
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Date:11/11
Isabella In 2002, there was
a
girl called Isabella. She was taller than her brother John. But she was smaller than her other and father. The family of Isabella lived in Buenos Aires, but Isabella didn't like to live in Buenos Aires. She wanted to live in Hollywood. So, she said to her mum that she wanted to live alone, and her mum said that she was too young. Isabella insisted to her mum to live in Hollywood and her mum said-�I have an idea! You are going to live in the house of your grandmother¥ (who was death for 1month). The next day, Isabella had prepared all her 7
things, so they went to Hollywood. When she arrived she was very surprised to see the house. She entered and she Sid to her mum that is was very beautiful. So, she lived there for ever. Date: 23/05
“ Not All That Glitter Is Gold � It all began in a d in a dream: there was a family. They liked travelling, walking and they liked the blue colour. One day, the family decided to go to U.S.A for five months. When they arrived in U.S.A the children of the family went to school. One of the children was called Pedro and the other was called Luciana. When they were walking to school a person appeared and maid their friends. Luciana and Pedro invited their friend to their house. Once they were there, Luciana and Pedro went to their bedrooms and their friend stared to steal all the things that were on the house, for example: the mirrors, the tables, the chairs, etc. But especially the 8
money. After that, the children saw that their friend was stealing the things of the house so they started to fight and the children killed their friend. Then Luciana and Pedro called the police and the police saw a stone and they said “Oh, a diamond”. So the children
answered to them
“Not
al that glitter is gold” Date: 09/0
Chocolate Biscuits One day in Mar del Plata, there was a girl called Luciana. Luciana had a mother called Graciela. Graciela liked cooking chocolate biscuits. So one day Luciana’s mother was baking some chocolate biscuits in the kitchen while Luciana was watching TV with her friends on the computer. But when Luciana and her mother were sleeping they heard noises coming from the kitchen. First, they didn’t pay much attention but then they woke up and they saw all the chocolate biscuits dancing 9
around the kitchen. Luciana and Graciela were very surprised but then a thief appeared and he took Luciana’s mother and he escaped out of the house. Luciana was crying a lot but she said to herself “I have to go to the police”. So Luciana went to the police and she saw the thief and her mother. Luciana jumped on the thief. Luciana and her mother went to their house very happy. Date: 18/04 “The Happy picnic” Last Sunday, Frank and
his
sister called Julia went to a picnic in the forest. They started to listen to some noises when there were eating a sandwich. But they didn't care about it, so they started to eat again. Apart from that, they saw a lion, and they run, run and they hid behind his car. The lion jumped on the table and he ate all the food. Besides, the lion 10
went to his house and Frank and Julia were very surprised. So the lion came again and they started to fight with the lion. But the lion threw a dish to Frank and Frank died. Moreover,
Julia
was
crying a lot and the lion put his hand in Frank's heart. So, frank got a live again. Date: 14/0
The Nugget of Gold One day in Candela's garden, there was a lot of grass. Candela liked the green color, she liked the dogs and the gold. She lived in a city called “Friday�. Her mother was very sick, so Candela went to the doctor. Shortly afterwards, the doctor said to Candela that her mother needed a nugget of gold. So Candela 11
went to her house and she started digging in to her garden and she found a nugget of gold. First, she thought
that
she
would
come
rich.
But
she
remembered that her mother needed it. Candela went to the kitchen and she saw that the nugget started to shine. A little later, Candela's mother was sleeping and in her bedroom, appeared a thief. He wanted to steal the nugget of gold. Candela saw the thief and she stuck a knife in the tomatoes of the thief. Finally, the thief died and Candela gave to her mother the nugget and she got better. Date: 25/04
“A Man � One day in Las
Grutas
there
was a girl called Federica. She liked the orange color and she has one mother. At night, Federica and her mother were sleeping. The next day, Federica went to school and a man appeared and disappeared. At first, Federica was very scares, but then she got relaxed. 12
In the afternoon Federica went to her house and when she was sleeping she started to listen to some noises. First, she was frightened but then she saw the same man that appeared en her school. So she started fighting against the man and she killed him. Federica was very surprised because she killed a man finally the died man was in prison and Federica another mother lived very happy forever after. Date: 09/05
Candelaria's Life One day, In Mar del Plata, there was a girl called Candelaria. She liked walking in your street and ate spaghetti. At night, she was sleeping and suddenly she woke up to eat. Then she went to school where she 13
saw a man. The man was taller than Candelaria, but Candelaria was more intelligent than him. When Candelaria went to her house, without warming, a man appeared and killed Candelaria killed him. After that the man came to live and Candelaria started fighting. The msn was fighting too and he killed Candelaria. The man was very sad because he had killed a girl so he killed himself. Finally, the man died very sad. Finally, the man died very sad. Finally, the man died very sad. Date:23/05
Food for thought! When I wrote the stories I was very inspired because I was thinking a lot. I don’t have a favourite story, but if I 14
had to choose I would said “A Man�. Because when I wrote it I was thinking of very bad and mysterious things. When writing that story I used a lot of vocabulary, complex structures and connectors.
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