Age 5-7-Story-Africa: The New Enemy Approaches by LEITH HAMID

Collins Big Cat Writing Competition 2021 Shinoy and Chaos Crew: The new enemy approaches Once there was a boy named Shinoy he lived with his family. One Monday Shinoy was watching TV he saw Snair at the screen and a friend besides him. Snair what’s your evil plan and who is that besides you [asked Shinoy] And then Shinoy calling toby to come over and see the message from Snair.

And Shinoy looks at the man besides him and he asks toby ‘look closely isn’t he familiar [said Shinoy] When toby was grabbing a snack, another massage was received Shinoy then was calling toby.

And then the message said ‘hi! We are James and Eris this massage is from the chaos crew.

We are reporting this because we know the new villain, he calls himself ‘Mamba’ and he trapped the rest of the crew and now it’s up to us and join us.

Shinoy asked James and Eris ‘where is your headquarters?’ James said, ‘it’s on the east side of your house’. Then toby said, ‘that old dump’ then Shinoy said, ‘we have to risk it”.

After they reached there James sent them another message right, they were it said that there are some boobytraps.

So, Shinoy and toby watched carefully from the booby-traps and made it. After making through the booby-traps, they saw Eris and James.

After that Eris showed Toby and Shinoy, Snair and Mambas’ secret lab,’ Eris asked Shinoy do you know the way to get in?’ then Shinoy said ‘through the vents ‘and then four of them went spying on Mamba and Snair.

And then they busted in there, Mamba shouting ‘how did you get in here! ‘then they saw the other friends, they busted their friends out, they fought against Snair and Mamba. Mamba and Snair got defeated.

Written by LEITH F. HAMID – Grade 2E AMBPS