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However, if you really look back at same the distress sometimes causes. light that I saw her. We fought, we disagreed on a lot of things, I ————————————————————————————#3 experiences you have had in your past relationships or even look at the one you're overcame obstacles and trials just totake keep her. In result, my grades fell, I in right now (if you actually are in one) a moment and ask yourself are or did Heartbreak is one big emotional painorbut alsoturning seems toinspark off hundreds http://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/220427.php picked up a like habit of procrastinating justit not my homework. the times when you were happy with each other outweigh the moments when you An Encyclopedia of Me Sad Ending of other emotions. We hate the feeling of heartbreak, and yet we find ourselves My bright future that I was so proud of began Don't to turn embarrassing found yourself depressed or upset at one another? getinto me an wrong here "We of course equate the pain of loss to the intensity of the love, but that is I'm not not compelled to go over and over memories, ideas or fantasies which make the dim light. I took my life down this path and I felt like there was no turning trying toworse. make youpain. think your relationships aren't working out thatlove love is Authors ————————————————————————————#4 what isthat behind the you you'll loveNote and feel loved,people the and greater the increase Know tomorrow is aThe newmore day and always have who you feeling back. overrated. No!of Ofpurpose course not Ito would love besomething in happyto successful http://morethanwomen.files.wordpress.com/2010/09/fall. of your sense because when youto do for they around. When the time comes move on, don't be aafraid tryjust it, anyone don'trelationship, beand scared being single is fun and all but you tend to get lonely, then depressed, then you doitgetting not appreciate it; your sense of purpose nothappy completely satisfied. It requires of hurt Trust the boy andonce see is how you could be iswith him. jpg Is Worth itwe oragain. Not? Introduction Heartbreak, all deal with it at least in our lifetime, and that why itasis the mostly want to eat. However, I try to be as realistic and honest with myself Junior year and I'm done, I'm done with all these problems that were -Written by Sy Kraft, B.A seeingthe who youboy arethat helping, and their you, appreciation to make it lost complete." With other broke up with realize that it's his because you lost theme about of this Zine. Why did I choose this you may bepast asking yourself? Well I possible the situation. I take a look back at all my relationships, all the detrimental to my mental health. I was happy again, not as naive as I -Written by David Samuel. someone who didn't love you, but he lost someone who really loved him. Look ————————————————————————————#5 wanted toand have a the theme that everyone could relate to myself on a right? much deeper level. I http://www.tutsgeek.com/wpgood times not socared good times. Finally, Icounted ask that one essential used to see be, butallhappy again, and that's what My grades back and how much you about him and then realize he was the wrong Explanation: know I’ve had my fair of heartbreaks intime the past andfriends I have no doubt in my question that most usshare have probably atlove one or another asked ourselves started to see anof increase inBy: a positive direction. My were what content/uploads/2013/01/15-girl-heartbreak-cryingDavid Foy one, so just imagine how much you can the right person. But then again were Explanation: mind that I will experience a few moremode before I right find the person who isout right for Moving On———————————————————————————— when making the transition from single back into relationship mode and that This is an extremely well written passage. It gets to the point with a lot of mattered, theydumb, were my emotional support. Mylife motivation started to come young and were love is a big deal, we think ends when small things danbo-photography-cute.jpg me. Selecting these eight pieces of writing was one of the hardest tasks I have had Iisback, chose this quote because I find the way this man thinks and looks at in things is "Is this really worth it?” excess and added things that are not needed. There is an absence repetition. Each happen but really something good comes out of something bad. I started to want to come to school again, I wanted to try school. By: David Foy all year. is I had to dig fordifferent them; I from think I looked in every ones Google doc’sseem folders #6 intriguing. There are several “trust me” statements that are used in creative and Explanation: sentence unique and the one before it. Everything stated to -Written by Madison Collier That dim light that I had my middle school year starting to change to that ataccurate leastways. twice.HeIt really wasn’t sohas much focusing onIread the of theWe paragraphs, but artistic made me think while wasstructure reading experience be and this obviously been and fact itthis. checked by various Iofchose this facts, paragraph because it why is artfully written. I think isitstraightforward and Explanation: a flashlight. I remembered I was going to school, wasn't to see looking deeper into the content of the writing. One of the greatest challenges I these things in our everyday lives, but never stop to think about it. He basically smart people. Emotion and Motivation http://growthplanstrategies.com/wpthe audience can relate to ititinwas oneto way or another. There isThere little to nominor repetition, Honestly, this is not the most brilliantly written paragraph. are the "girl of my dreams", become successful in life and to enjoy it have had tosomething face sincethat I started writing isand “writers block”. It was not Itill this year pointed out is so obvious right in front of me, but would have and the fullest. thesiserrors is clearly stated.changes Altogether is could one ofhave the better paragraphs Iher grammatical and small that this Madi made to improve to the content/uploads/2012/01/the_journey.jpg that writing became easier for me. I learned not to think too much about the details never even knew it was there if it wasn’t for this. ————————————————————————————#7 - #8 of have written. sentence structure. However, all the thiscontent being said this isthe one of the when writing, focus on getting out onto page firstbetter then pieces circle back writing Iand viewed. I the chose thisI paragraph because when read it, as I am able to relate make edits. believe I have found my I“Voice” a writer. http://painpatient.files.wordpress.com/2014/08/pain2.jpg -Written by Jared Martinez to it on a personal note. It’s as if she is taking her own experiences and sort of Love Hurts———————————————————————————— coaching us through the aftermath of a break-up, and helping us realize that life ?w=315&h=207 goes on. The paragraph is some what clouded by certain cosmetic mistakes, but I #9 Explanation: believe when reading this passage the content shines through. We all are probably aware that a relationship is a distraction, especially The Pain that accompanies LoosingThis passage clearly illustrates the when it is a young relationship. ————————————————————————————#10 dangers and risks you take when entering into a relationship. Organization was definitely an important thing that Jared focused on while writing this. The extremes came first and as I continued to read the Works Cited----------------------------------------------------------------------------------#11 moderation came toward the end. When I say extremes I mean the point of his whole paper is displayed in his first sentence. Expository Writing Period # This excerpt is 10 40 39 38 37 36 35 34 33 32 31 30 29 28 27 26 25 24 23 22 21 20 19 18 17 16 15 14 13 12 11 4 3 2 1 5 7 8 9 artfully written, and it is obvious great thought went into writing it.
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