ONCE UPON A TIME
FAIRY TALES
Original summary Little Red Cap Part
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Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Little Red Cap that was loved by everyone. One day, her mother sent her with a basket of food to help her sick grandmother. So off she went to the woods. Suddenly, an evil wolf appeared! The wolf secretly wanted to devour Red Cap, so he told her to go to her grandma’s house through a long path ahead. Then, the wolf hurried to grandma’s house
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and knocked the door.
What is a fairy tale?
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A fairy tale is a short story that has fiction, talking animals, heroes and magic, sometimes it teaches a moral. What is a fractured fairy tale? A fractured fairy tale is a modified fairy tale that contains another whole different storyline
Grandma opened the door and the wolf quickly devoured her! When red cap arrived, she started asking questions about the wolf’s grandma's clothes!) After the last question, the wolf devoured Little Red Cap!! Then he went to sleep.
BY: OSCAR DANIEL AND EMILIANO By: Daniel, Oscar
Opinion We think that since the wolf is now the one who tells the story, the point of view changes. Now we see Red Riding hood not as the nice girl but still she is not the bad person in the story. In our opinion, stories change a lot by replacing who is telling the story.
Sources: Google, www.eastoftheweb.com, Honestly, Red Riding Hood was Rotten!
Honestly Red Riding Hood was rotten Once upon a time there was a cool,
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peaceful, vegetarian wolf that lived in the woods. One day, he found a fat girl named Red Riding Hood near his home. She told the wolf how pretty she was and was bragging all the time. So, the wolf asked her where she was going and she told him that she was going to grandma’s house to give her food for she was sick. The hungry wolf, unfortunately (for some)had to eat Red Riding hood or else he would die of hunger. He raced her to Grandma’s house and he got first and ate grandma. When Red Riding hood arrived she bragged about her look until finally he ate her up!!!
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Meanwhile a hunter was passing by and when he heard the wolfs snore (he thought the snore was from grandma). He entered the house to check if she was okay and needed anything. Then he entered the house and when he saw the wolf he prepared his gun to fire he thought that maybe grandma might still be alive (he didn’t know that Red Cap was in there). So he opened the wolfs stomach and took out grandma and Red Cap. Then they placed a lot of rocks in the wolfs stomach and when he got up and tried to go home he died. Then they lived happily ever after.
The End Similarities There is a wolf, Red Riding hood brings food to Grandma, Red Riding hood has a red cap. Differences Original The wolf is a carnivore, Red Riding Hood was thin, the wolf is evil, there is a hunter, the wolf dies. Differences Fractured The wolf is a vegetarian, Red Riding hood is fat, the wolf is good, there isn’t a hunter, Red Riding Hood and Grandma die. Opinion We think that the Brothers Grimm version is more original because in that time we think no other story about Red Cap or anything similar to the story was invented or it was invented after the book was published.
THE FORGOTTEN SNOW WHITE by: ana paola a. and nicoe b.
You might all know Disney’s version of Snow White but do you know that’s not the original? Have you ever wanted to know the original one that can ruin your childhood and a fractured version of it? If you’re up for the challenge this is your last chance to know the truth about it and a funny story. Let’s start with the original one. Now first let me tell you that a fairytale is a make-believe story using elements of magic and fantasy.
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THE ORIGINAL story is almost like the one of Disney but crueler and less appropriate. The Queen had a little daughter named Little Snow-White. As she grew up the Queen died. The King married another woman, and she had a magic mirror. Every morning she asked “Mirror, mirror on the wall, who in this land is the fairest of all.?” The mirror answered “You my Queen.” Soon Snow White grew as beautiful as a flower and soon was more fair than the Queen, because of that the Queen wanted Snow White dead. She sent a haunter to kill her and to get her heart, lungs and liver. The haunter found Snow White but he did not hill her. Snow escape and found the dwarves and she live with them for a while. One day when the dwarves were working, an old woman came and offer her an apple, Snow White ate the apple but fell into a sleeping curse. The dwarves made her funeral, Snow was in a glass coffin, then a prince came, gave her a kiss and with that she woke up. The Queen’s punishment was to dance in hot iron shoes until she drops her head. That’s all folks.
Now here is the summary of a fractured version of Snow White. Once upon a time Snow White came to our cottage. Oh, wait I forgot to say my name well it is Seven one of the dwarves we had names but like Snow couldn’t remember our names. I love snow white totally but sometimes she seemed to be an actual problem because she was so forgetful. She did ten-feet long scarves because she forgot to stop, she did apple pie without apple because she forgot and other things wrong because she forgot. We had to put reminders everywhere so she didn’t forget to not open the door because we heard the queen wanted Snow White dead. Our efforts never worked, we always came home and found Snow on the floor with a too tightly tied corset or an enchanted comb that was poisoned and more but one day we came back from work and found Snow on the floor but we couldn’t help her because she was in a deep sleep. We decided to put her in a glass coffin and one day I heard some voices “when are we going to eat” a person said but then was replied with “we stopped to eat five minutes ago sir” then I saw there was a prince. He saw Snow and asked “what is her name? She is so pretty, hmm, what did you say was her name? Tell me can you see something in common with these two? The prince asked to take Snow with him so I went for the other dwarves to say good bye to her. The prince’s servants took her but slipped while trying to answer the price’s question about when they were going to eat but then the coffin opened and Snow White said “Who said lunch? I am so hungry! Eventually Snow and the prince got married and even the evil Queen came to the wedding but left immediately because we started throwing things at her. After all Snow White’s errors with the scarves helped us in winter and even sometimes we ate apple pie without apple, I guess after all she did earn our hearts.
Now you already know both stories but if you haven’t noticed by changing the point of view of the story everything changes like for example, in the original story, Snow White seemed kind, harmless and not forgetful; but after you hear it from the point of view of the dwarves she seems as kind of a problem as well that the characters change in personality like the prince which is forgetful as Snow White. Maybe you remember that in Disney’s version appears Grumpy one of the dwarves and now you may understand why he was like that after you heard the “actual” story and if you think about it, 10 feet l0ng scarves or the pie without apple maybe that would make you grumpy. Those are some reasons why changing the point of view changes the story so you can see the difference.
If you ever ask me which is the best story of them all I would say “Seriously, Snow White was so forgetful!” because it has a different and more fun than the original one that includes torture which I think is not ok. so that’s my conclusion after reading both stories.
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You might think we are already done but I have something else to show you and it is a compare and contrast diagram of both stories so you see the difference. [Cite your source here.]
Snow White is so smart The dwarves have names by who they are Snow was awaked by a kiss They punished the Queen as her death in iron shoes Snow came since she was old enough
The dwarves worked on mines Snow White felt asleep in a sleeping curse by the Queen They are 7 dwarves in the story Snow married the prince Snow was on a glass coffin
Snow White is so forgetful The dwarves have names by their number Snow was waked up by her hunger They threw dinner rolls to the Queen as punishment Snow came to the dwarf’s cabin since she was little
REFERENCES
www.pitt.edu/~dash/grimm053.html www.acient-origins.net/myths-legends/exploring-true-origins-snow-white-and-seven-dwaves-004150 www.fpx.de/fp/Disneys/Tales/Snow White.html www.huffingtonpost.com/2013/11/12/the -real-story-behind-eve_n_4239730.html
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CINDERELLA ORIGINAL Once upon a time, there was a young woman named Cindy that love telling stories. She had a dad that had married a woman. One day that woman went to the house where she was going to live, when she arrived his husband was going off on business. The house where they were staying was full of dust. Cindy gave them a tour and in all the house she told stories. In the dining room, in the study, she told stories, nonstop. Her stepmother told them that they needed to start cleaning. Her stepmother gave Cindy chores but she finished them so fast, so she told stories and stories. Her stepsisters and other ere a oyed. Ti e passed, but nothing changed´´. One day they re ei ed a letter. It as a i itatio to the ki g s all. ´´Whe she saw the invitation she wanted to go too, but in that moment, she lost her oi e. Her step other ould t do a ythi g, so she told Ci dy to stay at home for her health´´. Suddenly in the ball a strange girl appeared, the prince danced with her. A few days after that, the prince i for ed that a glass slipper had ee left in the castle´´. The prince would marry the one that her feet fit in it. The prince arrived to her house. The sisters were fighting to fit it first. They tried ut did t fit. It as Ci dy s tur a d it fitted, she pulled out the match of her pocket, and it was her. Days later the Cindy married the prince. Poor prince he had no idea of what Cindy liked to do. But they lived happily ever after.
O e upo a ti e Ci derella s other died so, his father de ided to arry another woman. This woman had 2 daughters they were beautiful in the outside but had an evil and dark heart. Ci derella s stepsisters a d stepmother threated her really bad. One day her dad went to a job trip and asked the girls what they wanted from the trip. The stepsisters said dresses and jewels but Cinderella said that she wanted the first twig that brushes against his hat. His dad brought what they wanted and everyone as happy. Ci derella took the t ig a d pla ted i her other s gra e, she cried and cried and it became a beautiful tree. One day the prince invited all the kingdom to a 3-day festi al at the Ki g s castle where the prince will choose a wife. Cinderella begged her step other to go, ut her step other did t let her. Ci derella does t have a fairy godmother. But she finds dresses to wear to each ball under the tree. Cinderella went to the ball and danced with the prince until evening. The prince wanted to see who Cinderella really was. However, Ci derella did ot a ted hi to see that she as a poor girl. 2 days passed and the evening came, Cinderella wanted to leave, and the prince tried to escort her, but she ran away so the prince followed her. The prince, however, had set a trap. When she ran down the stairs, her small and dainty, and of pure gold slipper got stuck.” The prince would only marry the owner of the gold slipper. The sisters were happy, but their feet were too big so one of the sister cut her toes. The other one cut her heel so the shoe can fit. The sisters tried but the prince noticed the blood. Then Cinderella came and the prince recognized her and married her.
CONCLUSION In our conclusion, the most valid version is the original version. We think that because the original version was the version that most people have read. We also think this because the original version has more stuff that is realistic. Finally, this is our conclusion because the original version has more interesting facts than the fractured version.
CINDERELLA WHAT ARE FAIRY TALES? Fairy tales are a story usually for children about elves, dragons, fairies, or other magical creatures.
HOW CHANGING THE POINT OF VIEW CHANGES THE STORY? Changing the point of view changes the story because, if you see the story i the illai s poi t of view, you might see they were not that evil in the inside, and you might see that they had a great heart. Something that for the good character seem to be a bad act of the villain, for the villain is an excuse for something that happened.
HISTORY Cinderella has two original versions. One original version comes from China, written by Tuan Cheg. In this version, Cinderella has a golden fish as a friend, and she only has one stepsister. The Grimm brothers wrote down the other original version. In this ersio Ci derella s stepsisters ut their feet so the sleeper would fit, and Cinderella was friend of the birds. It is unknown yet which original version was written first. Some people believe that it is the Chinese version while others believe it is the Gri rother s version.
CINDERELLA THE DIFFERENCES ARE: 1. In the original but not in the fractured Ci derella s stepsisters ut her feet and toes so the slipper can fit. 2. In the fractured but not in the original Ci derella s a e as Ci dy. 3. In the fractured but not in the original Ci derella s step other as i e ith her. 4. In the original but not in the fractured Cinderella used gold slippers. 5. In the original but not in the fractured the ball lasted only one day. 6. In the fractured but not in the original Cindy liked to tell stories.
THE SIMILARITIES ARE: 1. In the original and in the fractured Cinderella had two stepsisters. 2. In the original and in the fra tured Ci derella ould t go to the dance. 3. In the original and in the fra tured Ci derella s stepsisters wanted to be the prince wife. 4. In the original and in the fractured the prince married Cinderella. 5. In the original and in the fractured Cinderella had the perfect dress. 6. In the original and in the fractured Cinderella had special slippers.
REFERENCES http://www.pitt.edu/~dash/grimm021.html
http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2013/11/12/the-real-story-behind-eve_n_4239730.html THE BOOK OF SERIOUSLY, CINERELLA IS SO ANNOYING
http://www.readyed.com.au/Sites/extra/cinhist.htm
SLEEPING BEAUTY VS MALEFICENT BY Jero, Diego, Gabriel
Differences of Maleficent and The Sleeping Beauty
HISTORY OF FAIRYTALES
In the movie Sleeping Beauty the story is way more happy than Maleficent because it says that Maleficent and Stefan who becomes king, parents are dead and the story in general is sadder.
In the early 17 something Jacob Grimm loved to write things that happened in his life and started putting things that didn’t really happen like dragons, witches etc. And he showed them to his family and loved them so he started making more and more and more until he came to a point that everybody liked them so he made more copies and started selling them so his brothers came and helped him and made a lot of fairytales together.
And another thing is that in that Aurora point of view the Prince Philip revives Aurora but in Maleficent viewpoint she is the one. The next thing is that in Maleficent viewpoint she also says in the spell that a true loves kiss can revive her, and in the Aurora’s point of view one of the magical fairy’s does that spell.
WHAT ARE FAIRYTALES
” A story, usually for children, about elves, hobgoblins, dragons, fairies, or other magical creatures”
One more thing is that in the Maleficent version she had wings and King Stephan cut them to become king, and in the aurora´s perspective the only ones who have wings are the three magical fairy’s. Also in the Maleficent perspective Aurora first thought that Maleficent is her fairy god mother and become friends but then she discovers that she made a curse on her and is sad with her and in the Auroras perspective she always knew that Maleficent is bad.
SIMILARITIES
They both use the same names in their characters. In both there is a bad and a good. In both there are happy endings. In both there is a prince and a witch and cursed princes. In both there is fairies and the same setting except for Maleficent castle. In both aurora has blonde hair and the prince brown hair. There is a dragon in both. In both everything is good at the beginning. In both there is a thorn wall.
SUMMARY A HISTORY OF MY FAIRYTALE The Sleeping Beauty was the last movie by Walt Disney before he died. And their first movie after he died was the Little Mermaid. The production took almost the whole decade of the 1950 and it was published on 1959, the voices where recorded from 1951 to 1952 and the production took from 1953 to 1958 and the music was
Once upon a time, there was a kingdom where a little girl was born with the name of Aurora. All of the people of the kingdom was invited to the christening, Everyone except one, Maleficent. In revenge she gave Aurora a curse. When she turned 18 she would prick her finger on a spinning wheel and she would fall eternal die. Aurora had 3 fairy god mothers that gave her: 1.-The gift to sing as a bird. 2.-The gift to be as beautiful as a flower. 3. That instead of dying she would fall into a deep sleep until a true loves kiss saved her. The fairy god mothers decided that they would take Aurora to the woods to protect her from pricking her finger in the spinning wheel. In the woods she grew up happy and without knowing her identity. On the day of her 18th birthday, she met a prince and became in love with the prince. Her 3 fairy god mothers were preparing a party for Aurora. The 3-fairy god mothers couldn´t use magic because Maleficent could track their magic and find where they were hiding Aurora. They were almost done preparing the party but they started to fight using their own magic and Maleficent saw them. After that they took Aurora to the castle to a room where she would rest. When Aurora was resting, Maleficent came to the room through the chimney and took Aurora and she poked her finger on a spinning wheel and fell into an eternal sleep. The prince with the one that Aurora had fallen in love went to the castle to see what had happened. When he got there Maleficent took him and to put him in the dungeon. The 3-fairy god mothers followed him
and took him out of the dungeon and took him with Aurora so that he would give her the true loves kiss. He gave it to her and saved her from her eternal sleep.
HOW CHANGING THE POINT OF VIEW CHANGES THE STORY By changing the point of view it does change the story because it is what another person saw or lived and another person also lived it or saw it but the other person saw it different than the first one so their story is going to be different, and in this case Maleficent told her story of her point of view.
CONCLUTION We think that the fractured one is way better because we can define things better since it is real life and we actually feel bad for Maleficent for her life and the things that she had to live and for many other reasons.
REFERENCES
disney.wikia.com/wiki/Sleeping_Beauty disney.wiki.com/wiki/Maleficent htt://es.disney.wikia.com/wiki/Maleficent https://www.buzzfeed.com/samstryker/fascinating-things-you-didnt-know-about-maleficent?utm_term=.vce4melY#.tc56xLBp
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Tangled (Rapunzel) by: Juan Pablo Juarez, Maro Castro, Leo Lavalle
Tuesday, September 20, 2016 FAIRY TALE
Fractured Version Once upon a time there was a king and a queen. The queen got sick so they send soldiers to look for a magic flower who had healing powers. There was also a witch who wanted that flower to be young forever. When the soldiers found the flower they made soup for the queen and she could have the baby. The baby was born with shiny blonde hair with healing powers. That baby was called Rapunzel. One night the witch kidnapped the baby so she could be young and she locked Rapunzel in a tower with only a window. Rapunzel grew with a chameleon. They would live happily in the tower. When the witch wanted to go up the tower she would cry “Rapunzel, let down your hair.” One day a robber saw the tower and went up it, when he got up it Rapunzel hit him in the head and he got K.O.d and when he woke he was tied in a chair with hair. Then he took her to the grass and she was very excited. Then he took Rapunzel to a restaurant. When Rapunzel saw the people in the restaurant she was so scared. Then they started singing a song of dreams and eventually became friends. When some soldiers came to the restaurant looking for Flynn Ridder the people in the restaurant opened a secret passage to a water place where there were 2 persons that Flynn Ridder betrayed when he stole. Then a horse kicked a wood plank so that he could get to Flynn, and Rapunzel but it made water come out and eventually it broke a dam and it flooded the mountain. Flynn and Rapunzel got trapped in a small room waiting to be drowned until Rapunzel’s hair started shining as the sun and told the way to get out of the room. They started to dig and Flynn cut his hand but he still dug. When they finally got out of the small room Rapunzel cured Flynn’s hand and Flynn got paralyzed because he didn’t know that was possible. Then they went to the forest and made a campfire but when Flynn went for wood and Witch appeared and gave Rapunzel Flynn’s bag to prove that Flynn Rider was with Rapunzel just for the bag. Then Flynn and Rapunzel went to the town and they started dancing, but when it was night they went on a boat and saw the floating lamps because it was her birthday. Flynn saw the persons that he betrayed and they tied him into a boat to the dungeon, but Rapunzel was waiting for him she saw the guys, but Rapunzel thought it was Flynn. When the guys started attacking Rapunzel the witch appears and saves Rapunzel, she brings her back to the tower and there Rapunzel discovers she is the missing princes. Then Rapunzel gets into a fight with the witch and the witch traps her with chains. Flynn didn’t know that the witch trapped Rapunzel, so then Flynn climes the tower, it leads to a trap. The witch leaves Flynn barely alive, so Rapunzel makes a deal with the witch that if Rapunzel saves Flynn she will be with the witch, but Flynn doesn’t want the deal so he cuts of Rapunzel’s hair and the witch falls of the window and dies. Then Rapunzel and Flynn lives happily ever after.
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The original story of Rapunzel was made on 1812.
There was a family who saw some Rapunzel’s in a witches’ farm, and the wife wanted one of those and said that if she didn’t have one she would die. The husband went to the farm to get some rapunzels so that his wife doesn’t die. While the husband was grabbing rapunzels the witch saw him grab them, so the husband told her that if he didn’t grab some his wife would die. The witch let him grab them but with one condition, when they had a baby they would give it to her. When Rapunzel was born they gave it to the witch. Rapunzel grew into the most beautiful child, when she was 12 years old the witch shut her in a tower. The tower had no stairs or doors, but only a little window at the top. When the witch wanted to go up the witch cried Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair! Rapunzel had so long hair that she would let her hair down and the witch could climb up it. One day a prince saw the tower and he saw the witch say Rapunzel, let down your hair! So in the night the prince said that sentence and he climbed up the tower. At first Rapunzel was frightened but the prince began talking to her as a friend. He told Rapunzel that when he heard her singing made his heart have no rest. When the prince asked her to be her wife Rapunzel saw that he was kind and handsome so Rapunzel accepted. The witch didn’t know nothing about this until Rapunzel said in distraction Oh my, you are so much heavier when you climb than the young prince. Immediately the witch knew that she met someone and she said What do I hear thee say! I thought I had separated you from all the world but you have deceived me." In anger she cut Rapunzel’s hair and send her to a desert in which the prince later found her with her songs.
References: http://www.dltk-teach.com/rhymes/rapunzle/story.htm
What is a fairytale? A fairytale is a story that contains magic elements and magical creatures such as dragons, fairies, goblins, etc… Almost always it has a happy ending. It also has a problem and a solution.
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SIMILARITIES AT THE END OF THE STORY THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER. THE BABY WAS CALLED RAPUNZEL. SHE WAS LOCKED IN A TOWER BY THE EVIL WITCH. RAPUNZEL LOSES HER HAIR IN BOTH ORIGINAL AND FRACTURED. THERE IS AN EVIL WITCH IN EACH STORY. THERE WAS SOMEONE THAT RESCUED HER FROM THE TOWER. SHE HAS THE LONGEST HAIR IN THE WORLD. SHE HAS HEALING POWERS BECAUSE OF HER ENOURMOUSE HAIR.
DIFFERENCES THE FRACTURED, FLYNN CUTS RAPUNZELS HAIR OF AND IN THE ORIGINAL THE WITCH CUTS IT. SHE GETS LOCKED IN THE TOWER AT 12 YEARS AND IN FRACTURED SINCE SHE WAS A BABY. IN THE ORIGINAL THE PERSON WHO SAVES HER IS A PRINCE AND IN THE FRACTURED IT IS A ROBBER. IN THE ORIGINAL THE PRINCE FOUND HER BECAUSE OF HER SINGING AND IN THE FRACTURED HE FINDS HER BECAUSE HE IS RUNNING FROM THE KNIGHTS. IN THE ORIGINAL RAPUNZEL IS GIVEN TO THE WITCH AND IN THE FRACTURED SHE KIDNAPPED RAPUNZEL.
How changing the point of view changes the story: Changing the point of view changes, the story because it is they’re point of view of why they did that or how they did that. It can change a whole story like the maleficent fairytale it is a whole new story.
Conclusion Our conclusion is that we like most he fractured version of the fairytale because it is more interesting, more fun, and it is longer. We also like it because there is a movie about it, and the original it is booooring and there is almost no detail so it is very short. At the end in the original is bad because Rapunzel is in the desert and the prince had no eyes, and in the fractured it was a happy ending because the witch died and they lived in a castle.
Sleeping Beauty What are fairytales?
FAIRYTALES ARE A MAKE-BILEVE STORY, IT NORMALLY USES ELEMENTS OF MAGIC OR FANTASY.
History of the original Sleeping Beauty
THE ORIGINAL TITLE OF SLEEPING BEAUTY IS THE “UN, MOON AND TALIA. IT WAS FIRST WRITTEN BY GIAMBATTISTA BASILE IN HIS COLLECTION OF FAIRYTALES. IT WAS FIRST PUBLISHED IN THE YEAR OF 1634.
The Sun, Moon and Talia
Once upon a time there was a baby girl, daughter of the king, named Talia. There was a prophecy that if the girl touched flax splinter she would die. The king order to talk all the flax from the castle, however he did not tell Talia about the flax. Years passed, the princess grew and one day she saw a woman ith flax. Talia co i ced the o a to let her touch the flax a d she died . The king ordered to dress her in her finest dress and he took Talia to a cottage in the woods. Then the cottage was closed and abandoned. One day a king went to search for his eagle and found the abandoned cottage. He knocked but no one answered so he went inside. There he found Talia and tried to wake her up. Talia however did not wake up so the king raped her instead. Talia got pregnant and she could not wake up still. Once her babies were born, fairies helped her take care of the babies. Their names were Sun and Moon. One day, the fairies were caring for the babies, when a fairy picked up one of the childre , the flax got stuck o the child’s ha d. Talia oke up a d arried the king. The king was already married to a Queen. When the Queen knew about Talia she ordered that the babies were cooked and eaten by the King. Thee Cook hid the babies instead and pretended to have cooked them. Then the Queen ordered Talia to be killed and when the King knew about this he killed Queen and the Secretary for telling the Queen about Talia. The Cook was rewarded for saving the babies and everyone lived happily ever after.
Truly, we both loved Beauty dearly! There once were two fairy sisters. One is named Edna and the other Stella. Edna was friend with the King and the King called her BF (Best fairy). Years passed and Edna and the King never saw each other again. Edna was now a dangerous fairy because she was older and always mixed the spell words. Edna felt bad for this. When the King and Queen had a baby Edna wanted to give a gift to her. When she was about to enter the castle a guard stopped her because she was not on the invitation list. Her sister Stella was invited. Edna wanted to give the princess a gift so she flew in a window and into the castle. Edna mixed the spell words and she cursed Beauty that she would prick her finger on her 16th birthday. Stella changed the spell so that Beauty would instead sleep for 100 years. The day came and she pricked her finger but then Edna made everyone sleep also for 100 years and she said the princess would be awakened by true loves kiss. Years later, a prince came and woke Beauty with a kiss. The hole kingdom awoke and the prince and Beauty got married. No one knows that Edna saved the princess, only her sister Stella knows.
Both of them are princesses that live in a castle. They both fall asleep because of a prediction. In both stories there are fairies that help the princess with her problem. The princess is found by a prince/king to help her. The princess and the prince/king get married at the end and live happily ever after.
In the original fairytale, the princess name was Talia and in the fractured is Beauty. In the fractured story there is a bad fairy ho curses Beauty, in the original Talia is predicted to die. When Talia falls asleep she is send to a cottage and Beauty is never taken to the woods she just stays in her room. Talia has two babies and Beauty does not.
The point of view does change the story DIFFERENT POINTS OF VIEW Telling a story from the different points of view can change the events. In the original version of Sleeping Beauty, The Sun, Moon and Talia the fairytale is narrated. In the fractured the tail is told by the fairies making all the fairies good. In the original there are no fairies that curse the princess. Well, points of view do change the perspective of the characters.
Conclusion IN CONCLUSION WE THINK THE MOST VALID VERSION OF SLEEPING BEAUTY IS THE ORIGINAL STORY. WE THINK THIS BECAUSE THE STORY IS CLEARER. IT EXPLAINS BETTER THE EVENTS THAT OCCURRED IN THE STORY. REGARDLESS IT WAS A SAD AND WEIRD STORY IT HAD A NICE ENDING, WELL NOT FOR THE BAD CHARACTERS BECAUSE THEY DIED.
Isabella Rivera
Cinderella’s Magazine
Ana Gaby Papacostas
Original Fractured One day when the stepmother of Cinderella married her dad her two-step sisters moved to her house, her dad often went to trip jobs. Cinderella talked with animals and they helped her. When she gave her stepmother a trip around the house, Cinderella didn’t stop telling stories “Once upon a time when I was cleaning. Cindy began to clean the house because her stepmother had asked her, she finished so fast that almost her darlings were starting. All the jobs her stepmother give her, Cindy make them so fast. Cinderella didn´t stop telling stories from different things. One day a letter arrived to Cindy´s house, it said that they were invited to the king´s ball. Cindy wanted to go but her stepmother didn´t let her because she lost her voice so she needed to stay at home for her health. Suddenly a beautiful girl went to the palace, she had a beautiful dress and she was so pretty. The prince and the girl danced and danced. Obviously it was Cinderella! A few days later the price made an announcement that the girl who´s feet fit on the slipper she will marry him. The stepsisters thought this was their chance and then they will live in a castle happily ever after. When the prince got to Cindy´s house each girl tried but it didn´t fit. After they try to put the shoe, Cindy said in a quiet voice if she could try. The shoe fit on her, she said something about a pumpkin coach and a mouse that turned into horses. The stepmother thought that these were only inventions from her. A few days later the prince and Cindy got married. Finally, all lived happily ever after.
One day the wife of a rich man got sick. Her wife called her only daughter to said goodbye on her last days of life and to remember her that God was always with her. After saying that she closed her eyes and died. One day the dad got married with a woman with 2 daughters. They were beautiful but neither the girls and the wife were friendly with her, they had dark hearts and they were evil. They dressed her in an old gray smock and gave her wooden shoes. Her morning routines were getting up before daybreak, carry water, make the fires, cook, and wash. The sisters made everything that they can to hurt her. She had to sleep by the hearth in the ashes instead of a bed. She always looked dusty and dirty so they called her Cinderella. Her mother’s grave which Cinderella went since her mother had died it grew a beautiful tree, she went to this tree three times a day. In this tree there was a white bird that if Cinderella asked him something the bird immediately will give her what she had asked. One day there was a festival on the king’s castle that all the pretty and young girls were invited. The prince will choose the prettiest girl on the festival in three days. The stepmother told Cinderella that she couldn’t go because she was an ugly girl. When she was the only one at home she asked the white bird to turn her a silver and gold dress. She hurried to the ball and when the prince saw her he felt in love with her. The prince didn’t know from where Cinderella came. He waited until the next day. Cinderella asked again for the beautiful dress, she put it and hurry to the festival. The prince was in love with her. In the third day when Cinderella went to the ball, at evening when she had to come back the prince set a tramp to know from where she was. The girl who fit the shoe would be the girl who will marry him. When the prince went to Cinderella’s house, the first one was the older sister, the shoe was too small for her so she cut her fingers. The second one was the younger sister, the shoe was too big for her, she cut her fingers feet like the older one. Finally, Cinderella was the last one, when Cinderella put her feet on the shoe it fit
perfectly. The prince recognized that she was the beautiful girl, they got married and they lived happily ever after. Source: http://www.pitt.edu/~dash/grimm021.html
WHAT IS A FAIRYTALE? A FAIRYTALE IS A MADE UP STORY USING ELEMENTS OF FANTASY AND MAGIC.
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O the origi al little kids a ’t read it because it is inappropriate. Cinderella always did the job that her stepmother assigned. Ci derella ould ’t go to the ball because her stepmother said that she was ugly and dirty. Ci derella’s shoe was of crystal instead of being white.
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Children from all ages can read the fractured version of Cinderella. On the fractured version Cinderella is always singing and telling stories. Cinderella lost her voice so she ould ’t go to the ball Ci derella’s shoe was white instead of being of crystal.
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Both of the stories the main character is named Cinderella. O oth stories has helped fro hara ters that a ’t help i real life. Both stories Cinderella goes to the ball and meets the prince. On both stories Cinderella has a stepmother and stepsisters. On both stories Cinderella gets found by the prince with the glass shoe so she marries him.
The original story of Cinderella was created by the Grimm Brothers in 1812. This was the 7th edition and it was translated by D.L. Ashliman from 2001 to 2006.
Conclusion Our favorite version of Cinderella was the original. We did ’t like the part were the stepsisters ut her fingers and their feet. But we think that the story was so nice. Little hildre a ’t read it e ause it has so e inappropriate parts. We too liked a lot the fractured version.
The point of view of the stepmother was that she was doing good intentions with Cinderella but at the same time she wanted to hurt her. On the real version Cinderella’s viewpoint was that her stepmother was bad to her.
Once upon a time a little girl named red ridding hood was staring her trip to her grandmother’s house , Red ridding hood will deliver her Grandmother a basquet with a parnsnip soup and biscuits ., “be carefull with strangers and never stray from the path”, her mother said her .The sky was sunny , the birds were singing . “ its time star the trip’’ red ridding hood said , it was the moment when they farewell . “bye’’ the mom said “bye mommy’’ red ridding hood said , ... Red ridding hood was walking trough the path meanwhile one wolf appear “hi little girl” the wolf exclaimed . Red ridding hood ingored him the wolf insisted and ask her where and why she is going there , Red ridding hood couldn’t resist ,she think that maybe it won’t affect to answer him one time so Red ridding hood answer ‘I will go to the house of my granny’ , “Why” , the wolf question “I will deliver some pieces of bisquets and parnsnip soup” Red ridding hood said , “oooo! little girl I now where is the house I can show you one short cut” the wolf obviously was lying to take red ridding hood to the long path meanwhile the wolf ran to the house of the grandmother , red ridding hood go trough the longest path and the bad wolf went running through the shortests path, lock the grandma in the closet and get dressed like her . Finally Red ridding get to the grannys house and ask the wolf dressed like her granny , “why do you have so big ears ?” , “to hear you better” the wolf said , “why so big eyes” red ridding hood insist , “to see you better” , “ why to big nose” , “ to smell you better” , red ridding hood start to be afraid , “why so big mouth” , “to eat you better!!!!!!!!!!” Red ridding hood shouted and the hunter came , the hunter take out granny and the wolf never again came back , the end
Red ridding hood had in her basquet honey The wolf told red ridding hood To go to the short way but he was lying to make red ridding hood get longer time while the wolf get to the grandmothers house
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Red ridding hood had in her basquet a piece of cake and wine
The wolf told red ridding hood to look at the beautiful flowers , so she get distracted and meanwhile the wolf ran to the grandmas house
The wolf eat the grandma and get dressed like her
The hunter finds the wolf and discover that the wolf eat red ridding hood and her grandmother and open his stomach to get out red ridding hood and her granny
The wolf dies
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The wolf lock’s the grandmother in the closet and get dressed like her
Little red riddiong hood shout whe the wolf want to eat her and the hunter come and help the granny get out of the closet The wolf ran away so they could not find him never again again
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ORIGINAL RAPUNZEL VERSION
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Original Rapunzel version
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FAIRY TALES
Issue Date by Isabella Urrutia and Ana Paola Martinez
story: by the Grimm brothers
It was about a man and a woman who wanted a child. The women was desperate because she wanted rampions of the neighbor because if not she would die so the man went to the garden to steel rampions, but the owner saw him steeling them. The owner who was a woman make them an offered him to have all the rampions, but with one condition to give here her there daughter. The man accepts, so the woman stayed with the baby girl. When the girl got bigger and bigger her hair got bigger too. When Rapunzel got 12 years old the enchantress shut her into a tower with no doors, no windows, and it had no stairs. Until one day when a prince saw her. He waited until the enchantress went to see Rapunzel when he found the way to get up the tower he waited that that the house was along to see Rapunzel. When the enchantress found out that the prince went to see Rapunzel she cut the long hair that Rapunzel hade. When the prince when again instead of founding Rapunzel he found the enchantress and the prince felt and pinch his eyes with thorns. Before 2 years the prince found Rapunzel and when a Rapunzel tear touch the prince eyes he could see again and they live happily ever after. http://germanstories.vcu.edu/grimm/rapunzel_e.html
A fairy tale is a fiction story with non-real events it may include magic creatures or evil characters hat is a fairy tale?
FRACTUREDVERSION BY:ISABELLA URRUTIA AND ANA PAOLA
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Fractured version by:Isabella Urrutia and Ana Paola
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Summary of the fractured Rapunzel ONCE UPON A TIME there was a girl who loved radish and when she ate them her hair grew a lot. Her neighbors wanted to cut her hair so her stepmother built a very high tower where they would never find her again. She discovered that Rapunzel met the prince and she decided to cut Rapunzel hair. The prince went to the tower to visit Rapunzel and he found her step mother with the hair and she dropped the hair and the prince fell into a thorn tree and he pinched his eyes. He got better and they married and lived happily ever after. Reference :
Issue Date Really, Rapunzel needed a hair cut! http://germanstories. vcu.edu/grimm/rapun zel_e.html
viewpoint We knew that if you see it in the view point of another person the fairy tale is different like. This one if you see it from Rapunzel’s viewpoint the enchantress is a very bad person. Also if you see the point of view from the enchantress she only wants to protect Rapunzel.
Really, Rapunzel Needed a hair cut!
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She is blond She likes rampions The which is bad She locked her in a tower because she wanted to be with her When Rapunzel was 12 she was locked in conclusion a tower
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She has red hair She like radish The which is good They locked her in a tower for her safety She was in danger of her neighbors
They marry They give their children She lives in a tower The which wanted company It has a prince
Our conclusion is that we liked more the original version because is more realistic and it has more mystery but at the same time it has more violence and sadness. The fractured one is good too but it is not so realistic and not so much mystery. The enchantress is kind of bad in both stories but in the fractured she was good until she noticed that the prince met the princess. The enchantress only wanted company and she decided to put her in a tower. Both are very similar but we liked more the original.
Rapunzel was created in 1819 until the final edition in 1857 by the Grimm brothers. We all know that the girl name is Rapunzel but we don’t why. Well now we are telling you that her name origin from a purple rampion. That’s weird but its true know you know why is she named Rapunzel.