Interim

Section Development

These are drafts for the drawings that are due on Friday

I thought my sections are improving, but they are still pretty lacklustre and so maybe I need to add depth in my drawings for Friday.

Interim

Floorplans

The floorplans are quite d e v e l o p e d . However the major feedback from the crits were that it seemed quite dark and heavy for such a light form. Something to consider moving forward is breaking up some of these spaces and opening up the plans.

This site plan shows the building in context.

I think this site plan was quite successful in showing the overall form in context. In hindsight I need to look my line weight and how they view from a distance. The crits liked this drawing. This detail shows the roof and the batten façade system. I think I shows the greenery system well. However, I need to consider how to better integrate the greenery into the joinery.

This section is through the back half of the building.

I think this section needs a bit of work. I think the section line could be in a different location moving forward because it doesnt show of the things that I wanted. The furniture is also a bit basic.

This section cuts through the middle of the building.

I think this section was much more successful than the last. It is hard to see in the scan but in the original the water colouring / shading is really nice. I think the line hierarchy is quire successful. I think moving forward I would refine how I am showing my furniture / objects in the section.

ESD Diagram

This is a diagram of how my water filtration system works in my building.

I think the diagram is a bit basic. Perhaps I could add some more detail and realism for the final presentation.

Zoning

My zoning is good. Going forward I dont think I will change much. The crits quite liked how I laid out this diagram.

Exterior Perspective

This is an exterior perspective of my library.

I was really proud of how this drawing turned out. It is a huge progression on what I was doing even last week. I think the composition is quite elegant. I think I will continue this style going forward.

Interior Perspective

This is an interior perspective of the first level.

I really pulled back my use of colour and my perspective was much more successful than previous iterations.