(Eco)ustic Tile
Qingru Yang Masters of Landscape Architecture Bachelors of Landscape Architecture
Jong Joo Kim Masters of Building Science Bachelors of Architecture
Tessa Kennedy Masters of Architecture Bachelors of Environmental Economics
Title: Symbiont Species: Sea Slugs + Algae
Is the species of Algae not important here? It is not included. Also, since this is the first slide, I would include a brief label here about the project objectives - you c look at the syllabus or the assignment 1 brief if stuck: You can just say “Objective:...” and list someth very brief about what the research/study was intending.
Title this section: Symbiotic Relationship Below list the subtitle: Material Transfers
Spelling: Coastal
Rephrase to: Highway as the ideal site for algae growth
Make plural: Process Models Instead of Progress model call this section: Conceptual Models
What does Easy Equiped mean??
Abstracted Concept
Call this section: Precedent Studies: Systems, Materials, and Assemblies
Title is cut off... Also what is “Self-benefit System” - system-benefit?? Human benefit? / should read “Environmental-benefit” (not environment-benefit)
Title is cut off again… Also, Structure (not Structrue) And what is “Diverser”?? and separate “andDenser below
Micro-Climate
Title is a bit weird - just call it Performance Diagram or something more clear. Also change “Circle” to Cycle” - “The Life Cycle of Tile” / also “Runoff Collection” (not collect) / also make sure you add description that is now on repeat below Finally, what are these plant cutouts here - will you label these?
What is being cited here? It makes it seem like you took this graphic from somewhere
This graph needs a label - what is it measuring?
Tells us something about why this is used perhaps rename to: Hypersurface Sensor for Performance Monitoring.
Also, the Volume would go down as the system became more saturated not up - so these graphics need to be adjusted to reflect that.
And the graphic on the right needs to be changed to include a sensor on every tile.
(Eco)ustic Tile: Physical Prototype
(Eco)ustic Tile: Species Integration