The 8 stories of our town
Our sustainable town Etwinning project 2013-2014 1
Contents
page The letter of the editors
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Story 1
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Story 2
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Story 3
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Story 4
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Story 5
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Story 6
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Story 7
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Story 8
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The results of the voting
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Reasoning the votes
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Contributors
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What are these 8 stories about? Having the wish to work on the plan of a sustainable town, we had to use a map. But creating a map from scratch would have been almost impossible, in the time given, so we decided to magically join our cities into one and create a new, imaginary sustainable town. Two cities joined together? How could that ever be possible? Only the etwinning wizard could do it and here it is! Eight groups of students, a wiki in our twinspace and “voilà”: eight collaboratively written chain stories! In the end, all the participating students voted for their favorite one.
Enjoy the imagination of the students from Lycée Jean-Pierre Timbaud, Brétigny sur Orge, France and
1st EPAL Ierapetras, Ierapetra, Greece
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Story No 1 GR-B86
Once upon a time there was a boy named John who fell in love with a girl from France via internet. One day he decided to meet her but there was a huge distance between them. They could only meet via internet. They often heard about earthquakes and natural disasters. On a cold winter day, although they were living so many miles away from each other, they both felt the earth shaking. They took shelter to protect themselves..... FR - CY
While protected in his shelter, John heard really big explosions, a lot of people were screaming about a “Natural Disaster «. John, terrified, didn't move from his shelter. After a few minutes, he went out of his shelter, and he didn't see the same house as usual… It was not the same place... FR- IR
During the earthquake the cities had moved and stuck to each other. John recognized the city of his beloved. He ran across the city to find his girlfriend. He found her home and found his love, they married and had a lot of children. The name of the city was invented with the two names of the cities; the new city is called « Ieraprigny »
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Story No 2 GR-B24
A long time ago, there was a little girl named Chanel. She was born in Bretigny, France. Her parents died when she was nine, during a war. Some soldiers took her to Greece and she was forced to live with some orphan children in an old house in a small town in Greece named Ierapetra. Her older sister Elizabeth left France but no one knew where she was. Some years later, when Chanel was older, on Christmas days, she was sitting next to the window of her bedroom; watching the snow falling down and thinking about her biggest dream. She never had the chance to visit her home town and she knew she never would. Her only hope was the Christmas spirit.... FR - CY
Her only hope was the Christmas spirit but she knew she would never come back to her home town. She began to cry next to the window. She thought about her childhood with her parents. She had never been happy since she came in Ierapetra. FR-IR
She had never been happy since she came in Ierapetra. On Christmas Eve, she made the wish to be in France with her sister but she did not want to leave Greece because it was all that she knew since she was 9 years old. The next day she woke up near her sister in her old house with a beautiful snow. Amazed she kissed her sister and ran out and realized the city was a fusion of Ierapetra and Bretigny. Since that day, her life was happy.
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Story No 3 GR-B31
It was Christmas. Everybody was happy, except Peter. He was sad. His only wish was that Ierapetra and Bretigny were one town, because he was living in Crete but his beloved brother was living in France..... FR - CY
When it's Christmas, a few fabulous things happen. Also, Santa Claus doesn't like sad children; he came to take along Peter and his brother to do a little trip in his amazing sledge... FR-IR
FROM HIS INCREDIBLE SLEDGE, SANTA CLAUS ASKED PETER WHAT HIS DREAM WAS. PETER THOUGHT FOR 1 MINUTE AND HE SAID: 'I WANT TO BRING TOGETHER IERAPETRA AND BRETIGNY'. SANTA CLAUS SAID: 'ARE YOU SURE? NO PROBLEM! HO HO HO!' AND HE MADE PETER 'S DREAM COME TRUE. AND IERATIGNY WAS BORN.
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Story No 4 GR-B57
Once upon a time there was a Greek king named Dionysius and a French king called Louis, who was born in Greece and knew the language. The French king wanted to conquer the Greek kingdom and join the two countries. The Greek king, who was living close to Ierapetra, didn’t want it. After many years of hatred and destruction, they thought of joining forces peacefully. Their children did not like their decision. However after years .... FR-CY
However after years, the two Kings died and their children began a war. After years of war, the two countries were bored and the French King decided to meet the other King in Paris. The King of Russia who learnt that the French King and the Greek King wanted to join their forces peacefully because their two armies were weakened, declared war to them... FR-IR
The war continues between these 3 countries for 1000 years. The president of Russia has invented a new kind of weapon: a bacteriological bomb. But this bomb didn't have the effect that the president wanted because the settings of the launcher were wrong and this big bomb changed every one between these 3 countries into mysterious creatures named zombies and if anyone was bitten by a zombie, he became one of these creatures. The United-States wanted to save this worldwide crisis and the army of the USA launched a big nuclear bomb to save the world of this invasion... This nuclear bomb killed all the zombies but the world was partially destroyed and France and Greece were one only country and the cities of Bretigny and Ierapetra are now one city limited by the railway.
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Story No 5 GR-C36
A few years ago, some girls were having fun in a club in Ierapetra and they met some young French tourists. They started talking about their towns and the French boys invited the girls to their town, Bretigny. The girls were curious to see the town with the strange name but... FR-CY
‌but they were so excited to see the French boys again. When they arrived at the airport, we were happy to see one another. We decided to go and drink a coffee. After that, we went back to Bretigny and we visited it. They were happy... FR-IR
The girls went home with wonderful memories. But one of the girls brought back with her more than beautiful memories. She was in love with one of the boys. The couple was heartbroken. But her love was so big. So big that, her crying awakened the angel of the love. With two hooks he took the cities of BrĂŠtigny and of Ierapetra. He pulled with all his might and succeeded to stick them to one another. These two lovers could be with each other again.
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Story No 6 GR-C21
Nine years ago, during EURO 2004, a man from Greece together with his friends decided to visit Portugal, to watch the match of the Greek team with France. They met some French football fans there and they were having fun together. No matter if their national teams were opponents, the men were sharing their passion for football. After the match, they split. A few years later, the Greek man who was living in Crete, recognized one of the French men in internet and they started communicating. They decided to meet again, in some other football match maybe... FR - CY
The Greeks wanted to meet the French in Crete for the holiday because there was the beach. During this time the French and The Greek wanted to go to a Football match in Crete. At the end of the match they talked and knew the two of them were teachers in a high school, they wanted to work together... FR-IR
By working together, they wanted to join their two cities. The two teachers went to see a football match in Berlin and they asked Zinedine Zidane to give a headbutt to break the earth and this event created the Panenka city. The Panenka city is a fusion of Bretigny and Ierapetra. Finally the two teachers thanked the god Zizou for this beautiful work.
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Story No 7 GR-C45
After a long war, the continent was divided into two parts. There were no nations, just two colors: the greens and the blacks. But there was a common college, for everybody. One day, a boy from the greens stumbled on the chair where a girl was sitting. They both smiled, they sat together and they started talking. The girl was from the black region but she was feeling green. The boy was unhappy. He needed more colors in his life... FR-CY
At the window, they saw IZ the singer. He was singing "Over the Rainbow" and a big rainbow appeared. The boy was happy when he saw that. But the big rainbow burst and colors spread in the world. But the greens and the blacks were still fighting... IR-FR
One day, they decided to create a city in common between green and black. Then the boy felt better so he had more color in her life. Thus, the two continents met again with this new city.
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Story No 8 Once upon a time there was a boy named John who fell in love with a girl from France via internet. One day he decided to meet her but there was a huge a distance between them. They could only meet via internet. They often heard about earthquakes and natural disasters. On a cold winter day, although they were living so many miles away from each other, they both felt the earth shaking. They took shelter to protect themselves..... GR-B86
under their bed with their mobile phones. They tried to call one another to know if all was all right but nobody succeeded to call because with the earthquake the network antenna had been broken. They feared something would happen to the other one... FR -CY
After the earthquakes, John and his French girl went out of their house. The two characters were surprised because all of their city was metamorphosed. For John, nothing was here before the earthquake; for his friend too. The two main characters wondered where they were. The two cities were brought together. So, John and his French girl lived side by side. They walked out and they met in front of a super market. They were surprised. The French girl directly recognized John and she jumped in his arm but John pushed back the French girl and said: Who are you? She told him about their story. After many minutes, John recognized the girl but he said: I don't know who you are. He said this because, for John, the French girl had only been a pastime because John was bored in his home. So, he passed the girl and walked in the new town because the new city interested him more than his French girl. He visited the new town and the French buildings, the new population... FR-IR
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When the time for voting came‌ ‌we used google spreadsheets and here are the results:
Which story is the best?
story 1
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23%
story 2
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3%
story 3
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6%
story 4
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10%
story 5
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10%
story 6
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39%
story 7
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6%
story 8
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3%
So, finally, football connects not only people but even cities!
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Do you want to know the thoughts behind the votes? Group Gr-C-8 We like story No 7 because it has a colorful ending. Group 1 : We have chosen story number five because there is suspense in the story and people want to know the end, and it's a love story with people who had the same age as us. Ahmed , Etienne , Stefane I choose the story number 1 because, it's a story with a lot of imagination like, for an instance, the name of the city, "Ieraprigny". The subject of the story can be real. The end of the story is ordinary but the vocabulary is good and the story is well written. The end is happy, because John and his girlfriend will have a lot of children. We have chosen the story number 6 because the story is consistent, the characters are famous and we like the end of the story, the story is funny. Grp 3: Nathan, Carlos, Mamadou Group Gr-C-5 We like story No 6 because it's very unusual. Group Gr-C-3 We like story No 1 because it has a happy ending Group Gr-C-1 We like story No 1 because it has a happy ending group Gr-B-2 We vote for story No 1. We like this story because we think it has an interesting ending. We choose the first story because it's like a tale, and the end is very good, the two characters are together and they get married and they have children, that's a great end. The eight is also the same but the end is different, it's a bad finish, it's not happy.. the first is our best story. Group 3. Group Gr-C-4 We vote for story No 6 because it's the best. group Gr-b-8 We vote for story No 1 because it has a happy ending. group Gr-b-6 We like story No 8 because it has a nice ending.We don't like marriage! We like the story 6, because this story talks about football and the Euro 2004. it's amazing how they mixed football and city.. they are a very imaginative group. The headbutt of zinedine zidane to create the "panenka city ", and the name of the city was a football technique of zidane . Groupe 8 Group Gr-C-7 We vote for story No 6 because it's original. We vote for the story no5 because the story is not so long but it's interesting because a crew of young people meets together. The end of the story is funny because the girl is a joke with the angel of the love, and this is a happy end. Group 6 group Gr-B-1 We like the ending of story No 3
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group 5 We like story No 4 because it was amazing and original. group Gr-b-4 All around the world, there is a problem called "racism". All we need is love and peace. That's why I like this story. Because even in our imagination, it gives us the chance to believe that in the end everything will change. group Gr-B-7 We like story No 4 because we like fiction stories, we love Lord of the Rings! group Gr-b-3 We like story No 6 because we like football. We vote for the story number 6 because it's a funny story, the parts when Zinedine Zidane give a headbutt to break the earth is amazing. The story talk about football in EURO 2004 ( to Portugal ) and we like it. Group 4 We chose the second story. First of all, because the girl's name is a comic clichÊ. Then, the three paragraphs are well linked up. Andto finish with, the theme of magic at the end of the story is original. Marjolaine and Arnaud We have chosen the story 6. We like football and its story and its story is very good! We are boys, we played football every days at the time of the dinner and we love because we are a lot of boys in the ground. We are very happy to read this text. It's very good ! :) We choose the story 6 because we like very much Zizouchrist (Zinedine Zidane) and we thought that's a good creativity, that's very funny to have created the new city with the head butt of the dead!! Group 1 (Ulysse Guitoun Nathan Clero) Group Gr-C-6 We like story No 1 because it's happy. Group Gr-C-2 We vote for story No 6 because it's original! The story 6 is the best story for us, because we love football and Zinedine Zidane. This tale is very funny and we expect the ending. Group 7 We vote for story n°6 because at the beginning of this story is real. I liked this story because the meeting of the men is amazing because It's rare to become a good friends as this meeting. The other stories are illogical... GROUP 2 (Tosun - Cazier ) Group 1 : We have chosen story number five, because there is suspense in the story and people wants to know the end, and it's a love story with people who had the same age as us. We choose this story, by that in a case of despair holding the arm and by supporting some difficulties, we can give hope Ali ken, Alperen Gedik. We voted for this story because it is interesting, funny and is consistent
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Our etwinning writers country
group1
group2
group3
group4
group5
group6
group7
group8
France
Ahmed
Bastien
Mamadou
Florent
Marjolaine
Baptiste
Alperen
Akin
Mme Raimbaud's class
Stéfane
Thomas
Carlos
Thibault
Arnaud
Alban
Ali
Alexis Z
Etienne
Sami
Nathan
Quentin
Alexis R
Erwan
Camille
Yohann
Ulysse
Ugur
Antoine
Raphaël P
Baptiste
Luc
Alexandre R
Naïde
Nathan Cl.
Jean
Nathan Ch Raphaël R
Damien
Safak
Quentin R.
Philippe
Mme Yaich's class
Greece
C class
B class
Emmanuela Giorgos Sk
Tonia
Eva
Maria
Romeo
Eva
Chrysoula
Tilemachos
Giorgos Som
Efi
Chrysoula
Koula
Georgia
Emmanuela
Koula
Errikos
Popi
Ali
Maria
Rafaella
Giannis
Jenny
Vaggelio
Violeta B.
Violeta V.
Vaggelis
Joulieta
Panagiotis
Kostis
Maria-Ioanna
Anna
Mirena
Chryssi
Irini
Ermioni
Katerina
and their supporters Caroline Yaich Isabelle Raimbaud Sébastien Marin Maria Sourgiadaki Despina Papadopoulou
Our sustainable town Etwinning project 2013-2014
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