Morgan Bailey Photobook Caldwell 4/26/13 Book Revisions
The feedback I got from my group was very helpful. They helped me with
text, small, classic, non intrusive. They told me to just use the titled work and not words that remind me of my grandfather. They also showed me the quality issues with I have fixed. The layout they liked, but they added that I could double up photos on the same page that were not as strong. They also didn’t like my experimental stuff so I didn’t even revisit that. The cover was an issue. It was too small and wasn’t high quality. I totally changed the cover to a much more interesting and inviting image. I also added in a front page of text telling his story and how he got into photography. Small adjusted had to be made all around but I have kept my main idea pretty firm.