Sean Monahan, A Long and Winding Road, UWA Press, 2003
CHAPTER 1 An Apprenticeship in Popular Romance
Herbert’s first short story was published in 1925. In the years leading up to the writing of Capricornia, he wrote fourteen more stories and three novellasxxi, most of them for the Australian Journal, a popular magazine offering its readers stereotypical tales of adventure and romance. None of Herbert’s early stories rose significantly above that level, and were it not for his later achievements, there would be no reason to give them a second glance. Intrinsically they are of minuscule interest. The interest comes from their relationship to the novels that followed. It is interesting to see how the lessons he internalised as a writer of popular romance influenced the way he plotted his novels later. And, since the leap from the hackneyed cliché of the stories to the assured ironies of Capricornia seems at first inexplicable, it is interesting to search for clues to the mystery of where Herbert learned skills that no-one reading his early stories would have dreamed he possessed. Herbert’s first attempts at writing were not promising. His own taste at the time was for popular adventure and romancexxii, and it was, he later said, because he was so powerfully affected by stories of ‘innocence cruelly besmirched by libertines’ that he decided to try writing one himself.xxiii The result was his first published story, ‘North of Capricorn’. Its quality can be seen from the following: She rushed into the man’s arms, and clung to him, fiercely. ‘Fred, oh Fred, you came!’ she sobbed, hysterically as she buried her head on his great chest. But in a moment she had regained herself, and slipping from his protection, cried, ‘Oh, Fred…Rossell!’
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