Examples of Answers In Assessment How would you improve/add onto these answers? These are actual answers from Year 10.
Question 7
“Church of England Christians would believe that euthanasia is the lesser of two evils. Catholics would most certainly be against it because life is sacred and God given, and you should preserve it at all costs. Catholics also believe that God alone has the right to take away your life. Islam and the evangelical Church would say that as long as you are cremated then it is okay because your body can move on. Buddhists are relative because they believe the soul moves on and reincarnates when you die” Alicia Palmer received 4/4 – But there is an error. Can you spot it? What could she have added to guarantee more marks if the question was out of six?
(Question 8)
“I believe yes and no because it may leave the person with a happy mind knowing that they could be going to a better place. But on the other hand, someone who knows that they had been bad may be worried about dying because the thoughts of hell may be in their mind”. Jay Fewtrell received 2/3 for this answer. What could he have added to maximise his marks?
(Question 10) A tough one this. “I agree that senior citizens are the most important people in society, because without them we would not be living like we do today. Muslims would agree that senior citizens are important because it is a must that Muslims have respect for their parents. Most Muslims have their parents living with them. I think this is fair because our parents cared for us so we should return the favour” Ella Maxwell received 4/6 for this. A good mark because she refers to Islam. How could she have received maximum marks?