PILAR ESLAVA SAUCEDO
ILLUSTRATION AND GRAPHICS 104AAD ANDREW SPACKMAN
1 RECORD SLEEVE
OF YOU
2 PERSUASIVE POSTER
JOHN HOLCROFT
Weekly Tutorial Feedback Sheet. You must make arrangements to meet your project supervisor each week to discuss progress on your project work. Use the following form to note the feedback you have received and to detail what you plan to do next in order to address this feedback. You will need to supply copies of these as part of your assessment submission.
Project title: Persuasive poster Tutorial Date: 15 November 2017 Your Name: Pilar Eslava Saucedo Supervisors Name: Andy
Feedback received. (make notes here) Andy said that the poster looked like a mobile phone advertisement, exactly the opposite of what I wanted to get. I got a tutorial with him after the lecture and other lecturers suggested ideas too like adding fears from people into it.
Actions in response to feedback. (minimum of 3) 1. I removed two of the screens focusing in the other two. 2. I changed the main screen message to make it more powerful and easier to read. 3. I redraw the screens, adding black sticky water and a hand drawning.
Signed: Pilar Eslava Saucedo 2017
Date: ‌25-11-
3 TISSUE BOX
Weekly Tutorial Feedback Sheet. You must make arrangements to meet your project supervisor each week to discuss progress on your project work. Use the following form to note the feedback you have received and to detail what you plan to do next in order to address this feedback. You will need to supply copies of these as part of your assessment submission.
Project title: Tissue box Tutorial Date: 6 November 2017 Your Name: Pilar Eslava Saucedo Supervisors Name: Andy
Feedback received. (make notes here) I was told by Andy that the tissue box NEEDED to be a tissue box, and not a tin. He also suggested to approach the project in a more illustrative way since I had just considered the packagingtypography.
Actions in response to feedback. (minimum of 3) 1. I changed the mock-up, from a tin to a tissue box. 2. I added other elements that (in my opinion) looked masculine, keeping the marble texture. 3. Since I was originally happy with the typography, I just changed the name of the brand to SIR.
Signed: Pilar Eslava Saucedo 2017
Date: ‌25-11-
4 TYPE MURAL
WES ANDERSON MOOD BOARD
Weekly Tutorial Feedback Sheet. You must make arrangements to meet your project supervisor each week to discuss progress on your project work. Use the following form to note the feedback you have received and to detail what you plan to do next in order to address this feedback. You will need to supply copies of these as part of your assessment submission.
Project title: Advertising Tutorial Date: 31 November 2017 Your Name: Pilar Eslava Saucedo Supervisors Name: Andy
Feedback received. (make notes here) Andy told me in a tutorial that the typography was too similar and that the composition could be better, he also suggested using a real image to make it look better.
Actions in response to feedback. (minimum of 3) 1. Completely redesigned the composition. 2. Transition to digital. 3. New layout with real image.
Signed: Pilar Eslava Saucedo 2017
Date: ‌11-12-
5 BOOK COVER
DARIA GOLAB