They must go and shut Up By Rowen Smith
Sterk Kinekor Vision Mision Advert.
Draft 1 60 Second Version
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FADE IN: EXT. GREEN POINT STADIUM - NIGHT HIGH ANGLE: We’re at Green Point Stadium’s rugby field at an international rugby match. South Africa vs. England. We hear the ROARING crowd and rappid COMMENTATING going on. *DJ EUPHINIK’s SHUT UP fades in. CUT TO: A remote controlled pickup truck is parked on the sideline. Someone places a pair of V-Specs is placed on the back and the truck wizzes off. We TRACK with it. PRRRT - The Sound of a WHISTLE BLOWING. HARD CUT TO: EXT. HIGH SCHOOL RUGBY FIELD - AFTERNOON COACH VAN ROOYEN(45, thick mustache) blows his whistle and points at the posts. COACH VAN ROOYEN Luke. Kom dis jou beurt. A team of BOYS stand in a straight line facing Coach van Rooyen. They move out of frame to reveal LUKE(10, white-blonde and tiny.) who’s hiding in the back. COACH VAN ROOYEN Kom kom kom, Pale toe. Coach van Rooyen throws a rugby ball at him. It fumbles in Luke’s hands and we hear the boys LAUGHING. The rugby ball is place on a heap of seasand. Luke takes a few steps back, stares at the posts and squints his eyes. Coach van Rooyen and the boys wait with anticipation. HIGH ANGLE: Luke leaps forward and kicks, but misses and falls flat on his back in a mudpatch. PRRRT - Another WHISTLE BLOW from Coach van Rooyen. The boys jog off. Coach van Rooyen glares at Luke with disspointment and joins the boys, leaving Luke defeated. As Luke wipes the mudd of his trousers, we hear a LITTLE BOYS’ LAUGHTER from afar. (CONTINUED)
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Luke squints and notices TIKO(10, a BLACK BOY) peeping through the school fence and at his feet is a soccerball made out of "bunched up" Pick ’n Pay bags. CUT TO: Luke places the rugby ball back onto the heap of seasad and hears the sound of a TIKO’s FINGER WHISTLE. He turns and faces Tiko with the soccerball at his feet. They have a staredown. Tiko digs into his school jersey and finds a pair of V-SPECS in his shirt pocket and puts it on. CUT TO: MONTAGE [SLO-MO] DJ Euphonik - Shut Up *Bridge 1. Tiko shows Luke his bag of tricks. 2. Luke sits on the rugby ball, watching Tiko. 4. Coach van Rooyen stares at them. EXT. GREEN POINT STADIUM - NIGHT TRACK CLOSE behind a remote controlled pickup truck as it races on the grass. On the back is a pair of V-SPECS. INTERCUT WITH: EXT. GREEN POINT SOCCER PITCH - NIGHT TRACK WITH a traveling soccer ball in between the sneakers and high socks of the SOCCER PLAYERS. Tiko traps the ball with his torn football sneakers and looks at Green Point Stadium in the distance with a smile. CUT TO: EXT. GREEN POINT STADIUM - DUSK - 8 YEARS LATER LOW ANGLE: Stadium Lights go on. MEDIUM CLOSE UP on JEAN DE VILLIERS(32), wearing a SA RUGBY jersey and sweat dripping from his headtape as he stares at enormous stadium rugby posts ahead of him. He puts on his V-SPECS with a style and looks up.
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We hear the STADIUM CROWD ROARING, CHEERS, VUVUZELA’S, DRUMMING and DJ Euphonik’s SHUT UP progressing. CUT TO: TITLE CARD: Vision Mission Logo. BACK TO: EXT. GREEN POINT SOCCER PITCH - NIGHT HIGH ANGLE WIDE: Tiko dribbles through SOCCER PLAYERS towards the goal. FADE TO BLACK.