Stephanie Scott ART 333 Dummy Book Review April 14, 2013
After meeting with a group of classmates to share each other’s dummy books, we each received pointers and remarks on our prototype photo books. We were asked to evaluate our overall impression of the first four spreads, if there were any additional ideas that could be incorporated into the existing thesis, and then if we could give any suggestions for the artist to consider in the final copy of the book. I was given some positive feedback and recommendations for my book. The overall impression received from the first four spreads was even between the other members of my group. James wrote that he liked the mix of full bleeds and smaller images, stating that the variety would keep the viewer’s attention. Lisa said that a simple, clean design would be an effective contrast against the subject matter in my images. After looking at the second set of spreads, both Lisa and James said that the first spread was better, but there was criticism that I could use to influence the choices I make for my final book. James suggested that a large amount of white space around the content would emphasize the idea of isolation/desolation within the photographs. Large images were a stated preference as well, as well as the separation of two similar images onto two separate pages rather than paired together on one single page. When it came to suggestions as to what I should consider as I completed the final photo book. Lisa suggested more thought on sequencing. James proposed using text to balance out the images, such as titles and/or subtitles, but said that if the images were strong enough, the additional text may not be needed. He also stated that the full bleeds on images were powerful due to the vibrancy of the images, and recommended inserting full bleeds into the sequence could add a powerful element to the book.
As I work to complete my final photo book, sequencing and layout are a large issue in the production. I do want to experiment with various spreads to determine if they should warrant borders around the images or if they require full bleeds to make the context even more powerful. I do believe that leaving only one image per page (when warranted), would indeed look better than if I were to place two images on one single page. I am still unsure if I will add any additional text to the book besides that of the title page and thesis, but it is something I will consider more strongly.