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CLIENT: Hawaii.com! PRODUCT: Vacation Website! TITLE: “CLEAR YOUR HEAD”! WRITER: Collin Preciado! LENGTH: 30!
VIDEO (shot times)! CU FLAT TIRE! 1. WE SEE A CAR WITH A FLAT TIRE IN THE POURING RAIN. (:02)!
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CUT TO:! 2. A NICELY DRESSED, BUT SOAKING WET, MAN STANDING IN THE RAIN STARING AT THE FLAT TIRE WITH A SOUR EXPRESSION ON HIS FACE. (:02)!
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CUT TO: ! 3. INSIDE OF MAN’S HEAD WHICH RESEMBLES A BUSY OFFICE. THERE ARE MULTIPLE VAMPIRE CLONES OF THE MAN INSIDE HIS HEAD STRESSING OUT OVER A VARIETY OF THINGS. ONE OF THE DISHEVELED CLONES IS LOOKING OUT THE MAN’S EYES LIKE THEY’RE WINDOWS. (:05)!
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WHIP PAN TO:! 4. ANOTHER VAMPIRE CLONE OF THE MAN GOING THROUGH STACKS OF BILLS. (:04)!
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WHIP PAN TO:! 5. ANOTHER VAMPIRE CLONE OF THE MAN IS WORKING LIKE A MAD MAN OVER A DESK OF PAPERS STACKED FOUR FEET HIGH. (:04)!
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LS:! 6. LIGHT FLOODING INTO THE MAN’S HEAD. ALL THE VAMPIRES DISINTEGRATE. (:05)! MCU:! 7. THE MAN, SMILING, TAKING A SIP OF HIS DRINK WITH A LITTLE UMBRELLA IN IT, AS THE CAMERA PANS AROUND TO REVEAL THE BEAUTIFUL BEACHES OF HAWAII. (:05.5)!
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CUT TO:! 8. TITLE CARD SAYING “CLEAR YOUR HEAD. PLAN YOUR TRIP AT HAWAII.COM” (:02)! 9. FADE OUT
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1. SFX: POURING RAIN, THUNDER, CARS RUSHING PAST (:02)!
2. MX: MIX IN MUSIC SIMILAR TO “IN THE HALL OF THE MOUNTAIN KING” (:04)!
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3. MX: MIX OUT RAIN, THUNDER, CARS. MIX IN SOUNDS OF HECTIC OFFICE SETTING.! 3. CLONE: Oh, man. That looks bad. I just replaced those tires!
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4. CLONE: What?! What is this bill for? I paid this! I don’t remember this! Did I pay this? How late is this? (:13)!
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5. CLONE: Look at all this work I have to do! I’m never going to finish this! This is way too much! I’m going to get demoted! (:17)!
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6. MX: SOUNDS OF SCREAMING AND SIZZLING. “IN THE HALL OF THE MOUNTAIN KING” STOPS. (:22)!
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7. MX: ALL SOUNDS ARE CUT ABRUPTLY. MIX IN SOUNDS OF RELAXING ROLLING BEACH TIDES AND ICE CUBES JINGLING. (:27.5)!
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8. MX: MIX OUT ICE CUBE JINGLING
9. AUDIO FADE
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