Uf Admission Essay

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ThesuccessandrecognitionthattheschoolofLiterature,Science,andtheArtshasreceivedover manydecadeshasdrawnmetothebeliefthatthisisthedesignatedschoolforme.Ihavealways dreamtofbecomingaMichiganWolverineandpursuingacollegeeducationinthefieldofbiology andpsychology.Giventhelevelofdifficultyofbeingacceptedintothisprogram,ithasonly empoweredmetoworkmorevigorouslythaneverbefore.Thereareseveraluniquequalitiesthat attractmetothisspecificundergraduatecollege:thevariousprogramsandmajorsitoffersandthe opportunitytobeadmittedtoahigher–levelinstitutewithintheuniversity.

TherenownedschoolofLSAoffersmorethanenoughcoursestoensurethatI'llbesuccessfulinmy futurecareers.I'mveryfondofthecomprehensivestudiesprogramforundergraduatestudents,in caseI...showmorecontent...

IfperhapsIdecidetoswitchmajors,I'llhaveawiderangeofvariousstudiestochoosefromIn viewof,therearemorethan3,000classesavailableeachsemester.

Lastly,preferredadmissionsupportsmyinterestsbecauseitgivesmetheoptionofpossibly transferringintoanupper–levelprogram.Thiscanbeawaytoenhancemyintellectualabilities becauseitrequiresmetomeetcertainprerequisitesduringmyfreshmanyearbeforegettingaccepted intoanupper–levelestablishment

TheschoolofLSAisthedesiredfreshmancollegeformebecausetheyseekoutstudentswhoare lookingtotackletoughproblemsandtoimpacttheworld.Iwouldclassifymyselfasbeingoneof thosegoal–drivenstudentswithenoughtenacitytonevergiveup.Istronglybelievethatthe UniversityofMichigancansuitmycurricularneedsbecauseitoffersofmultitudeofprogramsthat aregearedtowardensuringthatundergraduatestudentsreceivemoreone–on–oneattentionandthat theyexperienceasleektransitiontocollege

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Myinterestinthescience,healthcare,andpublichealthfieldsstemsfromaveryyoungage.Igrew upinahomewhereconversationsaboutarticlesinthelatestJournaloftheMedicalAssociation (JAMA)werethenorm,wheretakinginsulinatthedinnertablewasappropriate,andwhere debatingabouttheethicalimplicationsofdistributinggenericmedicationstoindividualsinother countrieswastypicalIdidnotknow,however,whatmyinterestinthevastareasofscience,health care,andpublichealthwouldactuallyleadmeto.

IwasbornandraisedprimarilyintheNortheasternUnitedStatesbuthadtheopportunitytolivefor anextendedperiodoftimeintheBayAreaofCaliforniaasaninfant,Indiaforlongvacations throughout...showmorecontent...

IambothexcitedandhonoredtoapplytotheprograminHealthPolicyandManagement.The courses"IntroductiontoHealthCareManagement"and"HumanResourceManagementinHealth Care"areofgreatinteresttomebecausetheyfocusonleadership,strategicplanning,andproblem solvingThecomprehensivecurriculumofferedatEmoryUniversityRollinsSchoolofPublic Healthwillnotonlyimprovemycriticalthinkingskills,butitwillalsoaffordmewiththe opportunitytoachieveabetterunderstandingofpublichealthonbothdomesticandglobalscales. Further,havingtheopportunitytointernwithmajorresearchcentersliketheCenterforPublic HealthPreparednessandResearchwillprovidemewithfirst–handtrainingonhowtodevelop publichealthsolutions

Mylongtermgoalsincludeadvancingmyknowledgeinthepublichealthfieldandtousemynewly acquiredskillstoimpactthecommunityinapositiveway.Iintendtoaccomplishthisbybecoming ahealthcareadministratororworkingataninstitutionfocusedoneducationanddiseaseprevention Ihopetousemyresearchandeducationalbackgroundtomonitorhealthhazardsandfindsolutions forthem.EnrollingintheMastersinPublicHealthprogramatEmoryUniversityRollinsSchoolof PublicHealthwillprovidemewiththetoolsnecessarytosucceedinachievingthis

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EssayForPublicHealthAdmission

PublicAdministration,asafield,hadalwayscaptivatedmerightfrommyundergraduatedays.I believemycuriosityforthisfieldcomesfrommyfamily.Bothmyfatherandmyunclewere politiciansDuringmyearlydays,Iusedtogotomyfather'sofficewhereIhadagreatchanceto observedifferentkindsofpeoplewithvariousjobsandinterests.ThiswasthefirsttimeIlearned howmutualinterestsbringpeopletogether.WhenIunderstoodhowpublicrelationsworknaturally, itforcedmestronglytostudyandcomprehendthecomplextheoryofpoliticsAfterfinishinghigh school,ImadeupmymindtopursueacareerinPoliticalScience.Forthisreason,Iwasenrolledto IstanbulBilgiUniversity'sPoliticalScienceprogram.After...showmorecontent...

Thesocietyismovingtowardsalarge–scaleeconomyandthereisanexceptionalincreaseoffree tradeandexchangeallaroundtheworld.Thisfacthasbroughtvastopportunitiestobuildupnewer policies,wide–rangepoliticalprogramsandmethodologiesinthefieldofpublicadministrationI wouldliketocontributetothischallengingenvironmentaftercompletingthenecessaryeducation.

Myintentionistosupplywell–roundedideaswhichwouldpossiblycontributetopublic administrationinmyhomecountryIamdeterminedtoprovidemeaningfulandfinestsolutionsto diverseproblemsofpublicadministration.Consequently,mygoalistosuccessfullycomplete masterofpublicadministrationandservesocietyasahighqualitypublicofficial Inordertoachievemycareergoals,Ihavetostudyandinternalizethecurrentdevelopmentsand newpolicystrategiesinpublicadministration,andpoliticalapplicationsindifferentgeographical areasoftheworldAMaster'sDegreewillgrantmethenecessarytheoreticalunderstanding,and willalsoprovidemewithanindepthideaofrealisticapproachesindecision–makingprocessand researchskillstoallowmedevelopexceptionalideas.Iwouldliketodiscoverfactsaboutvarious areassuchashealthadministration,leadinghealthproblemsindevelopedanddevelopingcountries, globalhealth

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Throughoutmychildhood,I'vealwayswantedtotellastoryfrommyperspective.Iwasbornwith introvertedtendencies,andIstillhaveahardtimearticulatingtopeoplemythoughts.Butcreating shortfilmshasalwaysbeenaneffectivemediumtoexpressmytrueselftotheaudiencearoundme. Mostimportantly,creatingshortstorieshelpsmetounderstandwhoIam.Iwouldliketobe consideredfortheIFDMprogrambecauseIbelieveIwasborntotellastory,andIwouldlikethe experienceofotherstohelpshapemyinfluence.

MyfirstexperiencewithdigitalmediastartedatVolcanoVistaHighSchoolRegisteringasan incomingfreshman,Iwantedtobecomeaphotographer.Idistinctlyrememberregisteringfor photographyclass,butIwasstuckwithdigitalmediaasanalternative.Iliketojokethatitwas eitherdestinythatputmeinthatclass,orahugemistake.Nonetheless,Iinstantlyfellinlovewith digitalmedia.Myteacher,JanSherer,providedmewithequipmentandsoftwaretobeabletolearn thebasicsofdigitalmediaAlthoughshewasunpopularbymoststudentsinherclass,Ialways consideredheramentor.Bysenioryear,Ibecameproficientinmostadobeproductssuchas PremierePro,AdobeAfterEffects,andAdobeAudition.Ialsolearneddifferentcameratechniques thankstoherteachings.Shealsoentrustedmewithacameramanjobfortheschoolsdaily morning...showmorecontent...

IamcurrentlyholdinganinternshipwithMojistudios,andacoupleofmycoworkershave graduatedunderIFDM.WhatI'venoticedwithIFDMgraduatesisthattheirlevelofskillsinthe fieldtheyspecializeinisastounding.Furthermore,graduatesofIFDMhaveahigherchanceof findingacareer,orsoIhearIwouldlovetotakethisprogramsothatIcanfindmyspecialtyin digitalmedia,andmaturethoseskillstoaprofessionallevel.IknowIFDMcanprovidemewiththe toolsthatI

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EnrollingInBethelUniversity:CaseStudy

EnrollinginBethelUniversityisthebestdecisionImade.Afterexploringdifferentuniversitiesto attend,mygoalwastoattendaChristianbaseduniversitythatdisplayedanMBAprogramfor workingadults,andhavingprofessionalstaffsupportthatwillhelpmesucceedthroughoutthe program.Beingasingleparentandworkingfull–time,Ineededtoenrollinauniversitythatoffered anoptiontoattendschoolonline BeingaBethelUniversitystudentispermittingmetocontinuemyeducationandpreparingmyself toadvanceinsatisfyingcareeropportunitiesandentrepreneurship.Inaddition,Bethelhasapositive trackrecordofprovensuccessintheirantiquity,mission,academics,andaccreditation,whichwill prepareandgiveprospective

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UniversityofCambridgeAdmissions

With800–yearhistoryofresearchandeducation,UniversityofCambridgehasbeenawonderland forthosewhoareseekingaperfectplaceandacademicatmospheretodevelopideasandadvance knowledgeBeingastudenthere,youcaninterchangeyourideaswithotherstudents,academicstaff whoarepioneersintheirfieldsandthosefrequentvisitinglecturers.Today,around20,000students arestudyingatCambridge,amongwhich7,500aregraduatestudentswith50%comingfrom overseas,andover40%beingwomenThoughcoursesaretouchatCambridge,thosewhobeara belieftoachievetheirgoalsinbelovedfieldscanreallylearnalotandgetintellectualsatisfaction.

Followinglististheportalfor

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Arrangementsvarydependingonwhatcountryyouarefrom(England,Scotland,Wales,Northern IrelandortheEU).Yon'tneedaconfirmedplaceatauniversitytoapply.

CambridgeFinancialSupport–AlsoavailabletoUK/EUstudentsfortheirfirstundergraduate degree.Bursaries,collegeandfacultyawardsandgrantssuchasbookandequipmentgrants, scholarshipsandprizesandtravelgrantsarealsoprovided.

Loan–TuitionFeeLoanupto£9,000peryear;MaintenanceLoanupto£8,200peryear,Upto £4,840peryearandupto£4,480infinalyearespeciallyforstudentsfromNorthernIreland.

PartTimeWork–DoingsomeparttimeworkintheCollegebar,Collegelibraryorasastudent helperduringopendayscanalsoearnyousomemoneytofundyoureducation.Youaresuggested toachievework–lifebalancewhileworkingwithintheUniversityandColleges.

TypesofUniversityofCambridgeScholarships

Cambridgescholarshipscanbedividedtothreeparts:undergraduatescholarships,graduate scholarshipsandinternationalstudentsscholarshipswhichcouldbedividedtosmallerpartsaslisted below.TheCambridgeCommonwealth,European&InternationalTrustwastheplacewhere studentsfromalldegreecouldfindsuitablescholarshipopportunitiesforthemTheTrustwas establishedfor1,100to1,400studentsfrom85countriesworldwideeachyearondegreecoursesto getaccesstoapproximately500scholarshipsannually.Nearly18,000

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UndergraduateAdmissionEssay

UndergraduateAdmissions

Departmentofinterest:Industrialdesign

I'mdrawntodesignbecauseitiseverywhereandhasthepotentialtoaffectsomuchofhowpeople feelaboutacertainspaceoraboutanexperienceFromayoungage,Iwasfortunatetobeexposed toart;myparentswouldconstantlytakemybrotherandmetomuseumsandgalleriesandathome, mygrandmotherwouldteachmeskillssuchascrocheting,needlepointandhowtoreplicatefoodout ofplaydoughInbothelementaryschoolandmiddleschoolIdrewandcreatedlittlethingssuchas bookmarksandstuffedanimals,butIwasneverknownasthe"artkid".IlovedartandIunderstood thattherewassomuchpotentialtocreatesomethingoriginalandtoexpressanidea,butIjustdidn't understandhow.EarlyeighthgradeIfoundoutaboutshowmorecontent

IendedupteachingmyselfAdobeIllustratorandPhotoshopsoIcouldmakemyassignmentsliveup tothestandardIhadsetformyselfLaterthatsameyearIgotachancetoworkwithnewmaterials anddiscoveredaninterestinsculpture.Ienjoyedtheprocessoflearningthepotentialofdifferent materialsandtheproblemsolvingittakestomakewhatIhaddecidedIamgoingtomake.WhereI hadpreviouslylikedgraphicdesignbest,IrealizedthatIfoundadifferentkindofsatisfactionfrom physicallycreatinganobject.Thefinalstepthatinspiredmyrealization,wasacommunications classinwhich,oneoftheprojectswastoinventaproductandcreateaprintadforitWhiledoing thisproject,itallclickedforme.Iendedupcreatingwaymorematerialfortheproductthanwas requiredbecauseIgotsuckedintotheworldthatIcreatedforit,fantasizingaboutpackagingand displayandconsistentbrandingItcombinedeverythingIliked:graphicdesign,newmaterials,3D elementsandformeallthispointedtoindustrial

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Ihaveearned5hoursforthisactivitybylearningaboutmycareergoalsandmedicalschoolsin general.IrecentlyvisitedtheUniversityofFlorida'scampusandvisitedtheUFHealthCenter.They haveaverynicefacilityandtheydoalotofresearchItisnowthegoaltogetintoUF'smedical school.Wedidtalktoanadmissionscounselor,whosuggestedthatassoonasIgetintocollege,I shouldstarteddoinginternshipsandbeapartofaresearchteam.ThiswillbeanareaofgrowthI willneedtoworkonsinceItendtobeshywhenitcomestogoingcertainorganizationsIamnew to.

IthenstartedtodiscussingwithmymomaboutthepossibilityofjoiningtheAirForceandworking asaflightsurgeonsinceNASAwillonlyrequire

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ImportanceofDisclosingOne'sBackgroundonaLawSchoolApplicationHonestyinany occupationisimportant.Thisisespeciallytrueofthosewhoareenteringtheareaoflaw.Dishonesty andlackofcharactercanruinthereputationandcareerofalawyerTheimportanceofdisclosing truthfullyone'sbackgroundonalawschoolapplicationiscriticalnotonlytoyourlawschoolcareer, buttoyourfuturecareerasalawyer.Beinghonestwhendisclosingyourbackgroundonalaw schoolapplicationcansetyouupforsuccessinyourlegalcareerTheApplicationQuestionsItis essentialtoknowthepartsofthelawapplicationwhenyoufillouttheapplication.Therelevant partsofalawschoolapplicationarethoseconcernedwithyourmoralcharacter.Themoralcharacter partoftheapplicationistoassessifyoushowmorecontent

Arethereanydisciplinarychargesoractionsexpectedtobetakenagainstyou?Beingacceptedinto lawschoolrequiresthatyouhavenotdonesomethingwronginyouracademicorprofessional career.Forexample,aprospectivelawstudentwhowasreprimandedorfiredforactingbadly towardothersatasummerjobisanunlikelycandidatetobeingoodstandinginlawschool.3.Have youeverbeenarrested,takenintocustody,oraccusedofbreakinglaws?Arecriminalcharges pendingorexpectedtobebroughtagainstyou?Thesequestionscanincludedrivingwhen intoxicated,substanceabusesuchasmarijuanause,juvenileoffenses,trafficviolations,and expungedrecords.Expungedrecordsarecriminalrecordsthathavebeenerasedfromyourhistory. Youshouldstillincludetheseonyourapplicationfortransparency.4.Doyouhavecreditorother financialproblems?Yourcredithistorywillsometimesbepartofyourcharacterandfitness application.Thereasonbehindthisisthat,asalawyer,youmaybeentrustedwithyourclient's money.Whilepayingsomebillssuchastuitionbillscanbedifficult,includethisinformationon your

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KalebBroutyEnglish12,Period8 CollegeAdmissionsEssayClements

Prompt:Somestudentshaveabackground,identity,interest,ortalentthatissomeaningfulthey believetheirapplicationwouldbeincompletewithoutitIfthissoundslikeyou,thenpleaseshare yourstory.

Haveyoueverwonderwhatit'sliketoplayfootballforyourhomeschoolunderthelightsonfriday night?Theweekspracticewasstrongandcoachesthoughtweweremorepreparedthanever.When wefirstgettothelockerroomwetalktoeachotherandlaughbutassoonasit'stimetogooutonto thefieldit'sgametime.It'sawholeotheratmosphereonthegamefieldyoufeeleverythingfromthe voicesonreadinessoftheplayersonthefieldto...showmorecontent...

Oncecoachcoffmancomesintotalktousweallknowit'stimetobeseriousThere'ssomething aboutthebarkofcoachesvoicethatgetseveryonefocusedandreadytoplayaseriousgameof football.Weabsolutelyknowit'stimetoworkandbuckledownassoonaswehavetoplaythe game.It'sabsolutelyelectrifyingtobeonthatfieldduringyoursenioryearwhenyouknowthisis yourlastchancetomakethingshappen.Everyoneknowstheirjoboncethegamestarts.Ifeveryone thatisonthatfielddoestherejobandstickstotheirresponsibilitieswewouldbefineIftheteam playswiththeirheartevenwhenthingsgobadandnotpointfingersbutinsteadworkasateamand don'tgiveupyouwillsucceed.Secondquartercomesaroundeveryoneontheteamisworkinghard. Thenaplaygetsblownupandthere'saninterceptionhowdoestheteamreactInsteadofgivingup westopthereoffensiverollattheoneyardline.Thisiswhenthingsaremostseriousandthereisno roomforerror.ThisisallhappeningduringaveryimportantgameagainstIHCthestakescouldn't behigherIhcisn'tinourleague.Lastyearwebeatthesowhycouldn'twethisyear.Allplayersand coachesarefocused.Wescoreatouchdowninthelastmomentsofthe

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CollegeAdmissionsEssaySamples

Runninghead:AVIATIONFLIGHTSCHOOL

AVIATIONFLIGHTSCHOOL

MarkG.Losee

UtahValleyStateCollege

Abstract

Theresearchfocusedonthewaysinwhichflightschoolscanprovideaspecializedtrainingformat thatsatisfiesgoalsforbothprofessionalandrecreationalpilots.Theseareuniquewaysinwhich, flightschoolscanachieveflightinstructionforstudentsbyprovidingastrongtrainingformatthat meetstheindividualsneeds.Offeringpracticalandtheoreticalskillstothestudents,andensuring professionalinstructorsAlsotheuseofmodernfacilitiesandequipmentforteachingstudents;with astrongemphasisforFAAstandardsduringallphasesofinstruction.Thesearesomeideasflight schoolsshouldadoptin...showmorecontent...

Flightschoolstendtouselesscommercializedairportsfortrainingflightsthisgivesstudents trainingwithoutthecrowdedairspace.(FlightTraining,2004)

StrongTrainingFormat

Inorderforstudentstobefullypreparedtotakeoffonflightstheyaresubjectedtoaspecializedand strongtrainingformatthatisfollowedbytheschoolAviationflightschoolswhentrainingstudents shouldtrainthemusingmodernequipment,andfacilities.Thiswillgivestudentstheopportunityto learnwhatiscurrentlyusedinthefieldofaviation.Whenthetrainingisbasedonnewandmodern technologythestudentsareinabetterpositionsincetheycanfitinthefield.(FlightTraining,2004) MostoftheAviationschoolshavedevelopedastructuredcurriculum,whichisusedtodemonstrate variousairplanesystemswhichincludeacompletesetofworkingflightinstructionstoenhance learningopportunities.TheyusemultimediaservicesandtheInternettogainmoreinformationon thenewdevelopmentsinthefield.Aproventrainingsystemensuresthatstudentsarefullytrained beforetheyaregivencertificatestopracticeflightasacareerorforrecreationalpurposes(Flight Training,2004)

Therearemanycurriculumsforaflightschooltoadopt,infactsomeflightschoolsmayhavemore thanonetocatertotheneedsoftheirstudents;suchasstructuredacceleratedprograms,oraself pacedpayasyougoopenscheduleprogram.

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Ihavealwaysbeenpassionateaboutmathandphysics,andinhighschool,Iexcelledinboth.AsI approacheduniversity,Iwasfacedwithadilemma:shouldIpursueengineeringorscience?Itwasa single,seeminglytrivialincidentthatledtoamomentofclarityandsolidifiedmydecision:itstarted withfiddlingwithapeninclass.Itookitapart,examiningthemechanismsandplayingaroundwith allthelittlepartsAsIsattherewithadeconstructedpenstrewedacrossmydesk,something occurredtome:ifapersonusesapentowrite,he'smadeforthearts;ifapersonthrowsitintheair andwatchesgravitypullitback,she'smadeforscience;andifsomeonetakesapenaparttoseehow itworks–piecingtogethertherelationshipofthespringtothepushmechanism,inspectingthe efficiencyoftheinkwell–he'smadeforengineering.IrealizedthatIhadalwaysloved disassemblingobjectsand,moreoftenthannot,puttingthembacktogether–fascinatedwithhow thingsworkandwhatIcoulddotomakethemworkbetter.Thisledmetoadegreeinengineering, whichhasbecomemypassion....showmorecontent...

Iwasfascinatedbythesystem'sabilitytoexpertlycontrolequipmentremotelyusingrobotic manipulatorsandcontrolsystems–itbeautifullymeldsmedicineandrobotics.Ibecamecaptivated bythenewtechnologiescomingoutofthebiomedicalengineeringcommunity.Roboticprosthetics, 3Dsurgicalsimulationsandmedicalimagingunitedmyinterestinhumanbiomechanicswithmy passionforroboticsand

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SampleOfAdmissionEssaySample

CompletingthePh.D.degreeinPublicHealthattheprestigiousUniversityofFloridawouldhelp myfutureendeavorsinthehealthcarefieldimmensely.WhileattendingUF,mygoalistoconduct researchininfectiousdiseases,focusingonhowtoreducethefrequencyoftheiracquisitionand transmission.Myresearchwouldrevolvearoundthepatient'ssafety;howtoreducetheriskof patient'sbecominginfectedwithdiseaseswhileinthecareofhealthcareprofessionalsbylookingat changesinthepracticesoftheprofessionalsandthefacilitiestoreducetheriskofinfections.After graduatingfromUFwithaPh.D.inPublicHealth,Ihavehopesofworkinginahealthcarefacility, whetheritisaprivateorganization,ahospital,oragovernmentfacilityUltimately,mydream careergoalistobeaPublicHealthProgramSupervisororaProgramCoordinator.Holdingthistitle willallowmetoworkwithotherhealthcareleadersondiscoveringwaysshowmorecontent ComingfromanHBCUIcanpersonallyattesttothepositiveaspectsofadiversecampus.Working withandlearningfromothers,studentsandfacultyincluded,whothinkdifferentlythanyourselfcan helppreparethestudentsforbothadiverseworkplaceandworldInteractingwithotherswith varyingperspectivescanhelpincreasecreativethinkingandcultivateaself–awarenessoncethe studentsentertheworkforceaftergraduation.Attendingagraduateschoolwithawidevarietyof studentsandfacultyfromdifferentuniversities,backgrounds,andculturescanfosterasenseof belongingandsafetyforallthatattend.Itiseasytofeeloverwhelmedwhenencounteringanew environment,however,whenoneknowsthereisawarmandacceptingplacetogotocanputmany peopleatease.Oncestudentsfeelcomfortablewithwhotheyareworkingwiththelearningprocess cangoalongeasierandeveryonewillultimatelybemore

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IamfillingouttheFederalFinancialAidSuspensionAppealinregardstopersonalreasonsI enduredduringtheFallof2006andtheSpringof2010semesters.In2006,IregrettosaythatIwas notfullypreparedtotakeontheresponsibilityofgoingtoschoolfulltime.Ididnothavetheproper resourcestobesuccessful.Duringthefallof2006,Ilackedareliablevehicleandwasunabletoget transportationtoandfromschoolThisgreatlyaffectedmyambitiontofurthermyeducationand drovemetoconcentrateonworkingfulltimeandtakingcareofmyfinancialobligations.Isoon foundmyselfwithagreatjobatCessnaandbegantheprocedureinpurchasingahome.Idecided duringthistimethatitwouldbeidealtogobacktoschoolandachievemyAssociatesdegreein Accounting.IreturnedtoButlerCommunityCollegeinthesummerof2009andtooksuccessful stepsinachievingmygoals.FromtheSummerof2009untiltheSpringofshowmorecontent Ialsohaveajobthatisflexibleandsupportiveofmydecisiontoreturntoschoolandfinishmy Accountingdegree.Ifyouweretolookatmyacademichistoryyouwouldseethateventhrough challengingcircumstancesthathavehaltedmyeducation,IalwaystriedmyhardestandIstillhave anoverallGPAof3.0.Inthosetwosemesters,Ifailedtoliveuptomypotential.Insteadofgiving up,IwouldliketheopportunitytofinishwhatIstartedin2006.ThistimearoundIhavemorereal lifeexperiencethatpreparesmeforthosechallengingsituationsthatcancomearoundthecorner.I havelearnedhowtopushforwardinsteadofbackout.Ihavelearnedtostrivetowardsthefuture insteadofstressaboutthepresentIwouldbeveryappreciativeandgratefulifyouwouldliftthe suspensionfrommyfinancialaidandallowmethehelpIneedtocontinuemyeducationatyour

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PLUAdmissionsEssay

AsIbegintopreparemyselfforenteringcollegelife,thereareafewconceptsIplantokeepafocus oninmylifesothatImaybeabletobeapositiveinfluenceandbrightfeatureoncampus. Sustainabilityisanideathatwehavebeentaughtindifferentconnotationsthathasinfluencedthe wayIchoosetolivebyTome,sustainabilityispreservingourselvesandourenvironmenttolive comfortablybutalsotopreservetheworldaroundusforfuturegenerationstolivecomfortably.I plantotakethesethoughtsintocollegewithmebypursuingadegreeinnursingwhereIknowIcan learnthoseskillsthroughtheLutes'programofferedBeinganurseandgraduatingfromaprogram thatteachestheimportantvalues...showmorecontent...

ThishasadeepmeaningtomebecauseofmyexperienceoffouryearsinFFA;"LivingtoServe"is apartoftheFFAmottoIchoosetoliveby.Tome"LivingtoServe"meansputtingothers'needs aboveyours,usingyourlifeasaservicetoothersanddedicatingapartofyourlifetobetterothers, evenifit'sjustonepersonIhavealsoembracedthismottobyservingasthechapteranddistrict PresidentwhereIhavededicatedasignificantamountofmytimetobettermychapteranddistrictto improvethemember'sexperience.Thisincludesleadingworkshopsforchapterpresidentsinthe district,holdingchapterfunnightstobuildbetterrelationships,andworkingwithateamoffive otherofficerstocompleteasuccessfulyear.Ihavealsodemonstratedthisbeliefinmylifeby volunteeringmytimeforcommunityservice,suchasalocalanimalrescuecenterandalsoinsmall waysliketakingthetimetohelpfellowstudentswithschoolwork.Iplantocontinuethiswayof lifeintocollegebypursuingthecareerIknowwillputmyservicetobestuse.PLUhasasimilar missionstatementwhichassuresmehowwellIcanserveotherswhile

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PLUAdmissionEssaySample

WhenapplyingtothefourSUSFcollegesoflawlistedinFigure6.4,themandatedLSACprovides straightforwardmanagementofapplications.Andsincemostoralloftheseinstitutionsutilizea variantofrollingadmissions,ourprospectcanrespondaccordingly.Onceallmaterialsvalidatefor completenessthroughtheCAS,synchronizingagainsttheUFadmissiontimetableensuresevery applicationwouldbesubmittedasearlyaspossibleandtherebymeetorexceedallrequirements Forthisreason,betweenmid–Octoberandmid–November,ourprospectexpectstosubmit completedapplicationsregardlessofaneedtorepeattheLSAT.Thoseapplicationsinclude submissionsofbothmandatoryandoptionalinformationvaryingbyeachinstitution

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CaseStudy:GeorgiaTechAdmissions

DearmembersoftheGeorgiaTechAdmissionsBoardfortheComputerScienceMastersProgram,I amexcitedandgenuinelypleasedrecommendingKyleFoersterforadmissiontotheMasters PrograminComputerScienceatGeorgiaTech.IhavehadthepleasureofknowingKylesincehe wasinkindergartenandofworkingwithhimdirectlyforthepasttwoyearsasapharmacy technicianundermysupervisionAlthoughKylecametouswithnotraining,hequicklybecameone ofourmostvaluedemployees.Beingapharmacytechnicianrequiresaconstantvigilancetodetails, theabilitytocalculatequickly,apossessionoforganizationalandtaskorientedskills,honestyand discretion,andconfidenceincommunicatingWhileKylewasproficientinhandling

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Mygreatestchallengewasovercomingmysocialissues.TwoyearsagoIwalkedthroughthedoors ofMontgomeryMiddleSchoolaftermovingfromanothersmalltown...again.Beforethat,wehad movedeveryyear,soInevermadelastingfriendshipsThethoughtofstartingsixthgradeterrified me.Ididn'thaveanyfriendsorsomeonetotalkto.Isataloneeverydayatlunch.Sometimespeople wouldtrytotalktomeandsitbyme,butIalwaysfeltuneasyandoutofplace,soIjustsmiledand satthroughit,waitingforthebelltoringIwasn'tinterestedinwhattheyweretalkingabout:most oftheirconversationswerecomprisedofgossipandwhichteacherstheyhated.OccasionallyI wouldskiplunchaltogetherandgositinthelibrary.MygradeswereallA's,althoughIneverraised myhandinclass–eventhoughIusuallyknewtheanswers–becauseIdidn'twanttospeakoutloudin frontofthirtyotherkids.Iknewitwasunhealthybehavior,butIdidn'tknowwhattodo....show morecontent

Ifnobodyelseknewtheanswer,Iwouldtentativelyraisemyhand.Ibecamefriendswithafew people,buttheydidn'thavethesamelunchasme,soIstillsatalone.Thesummerfollowing SeventhGrade,IknewIhadtochangeIwastiredofonlytalkingtopeoplethatwererelatedtome Iwantedtogettoknowandhelpmorepeople.Ididn'twanttobelonelyanymore.Ipromisedmyself thatIwouldchangeonthefirstdayofeighth

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IamwritingtoexpressmyinterestintheMaster'sofEducationinCurriculumandInstructionwitha concentrationinSTEM(stem,technology,engineeringandmathematics)programthatbeginsin August.

IcurrentlyholdaBachelor'sofScienceinComputerEngineeringTechnologyfromPrairieView A&MUniversity.MyGPAfromPrairieViewA&MUniversitywasn'tmybestwork.Atthattime,I wasyoungandonmyownforthefirsttimeandIlivedlifeasayoungperson.Priortoattending PrairieViewA&MUniversity,Iwasdedicatedonreceivingexcellentgradesinschool,becauseof myhardworkIgraduatedfromhighschoolnumberthreeinmyclass.Incollege,Imademistakes andlearnedfromthosemistakes.Iwassoelatedtobethefirstpersoninmyfamilytograduatefrom college.Myinterestinteachingledmetocompleteateacher'sdeficiencyplanfromTexasSouthern University.AtTexasSouthernUniversity,myGPAis3.88whichisatruereflectionofmyabilityto successfullycompleteachallengingeducationalprogramTheGPAisasignofmyseriousness towardcompletingmygoal....showmorecontent...

Ihavetaughtfor18years.Ihave12yearsofteachingelementary,aswellas6yearsofteaching secondarymath.Inelementaryandsecondary,IhaveservedinthecapacityofMathDepartment ChairpersonandThirdGradeLeadTeacher.Ihaveplannedanddevelopedacademicschedulesand interventionplanstoensurethesuccessofstudents,inadditiontomyteacher'sresponsibilitiesI havecollaboratedwithprincipalsandcolleaguestoensurethatthegoalsandobjectivesweremet.I havepresentedvariousworkshopsandtrainingsintheareasofmathandscience.Ibelievethat educationisthemostimportanttoolthatapersonhasforsuccessSo,thereforeitisimportantthat everychildshouldbegiventhebesteducation

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MasterOfAdmissionEssaySample

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