PROJECT 3 PROCESS WORK
ZAINAB ALAVI TYPOGRAPHY 1 - YSDN 1005 JULIA GRZESKOWIAK DEC 17 2018
EXERCISE 1
Common Typographic Diseases Various forms of dysfunction appear among populations exposed to typography for long periods of time. Listed here are a number of frequently observed afflictions.
Typophilia
An excessive attachment to and fascination with the shape of letters, often to the exclusion of other interests and object choices. Typophiliacs usually die penniless and alone.
Typophobia
The irrational dislike of letterforms, often marked by a preference for icons, dingbats, and—in fatal cases—bullets and daggers. The fears of the typophobe can often be quieted (but not cured) by steady doses of Helvetica and Times Roman.
Typochondria
A persistent anxiety that one has selected the wrong typeface. This condition is often paired with okd (optical kerning disorder), the need to constantly adjust and readjust the spaces between letters.
Typothermia
The promiscuous refusal to make a lifelong commitment to a single typeface—or even to five or six, as some doctors recommend. The typothermiac is constantly tempted to test drive “hot” new fonts, often without a proper license.
Common Typographic Diseases An excessive attachment to and fascination with the shape of letters, often to the exclusion of other interests and object choices. Typophiliacs usually die penniless and alone.
The irrational dislike of letterforms, often marked by a preference for icons, dingbats, and—in fatal cases—bullets and daggers. The fears of the typophobe can often be quieted (but not cured) by steady doses of Helvetica and Times Roman.
Typophobia
A persistent anxiety that one has selected the wrong typeface. This condition is often paired with okd (optical kerning disorder), the need to constantly adjust and readjust the spaces between letters.
The promiscuous refusal to make a lifelong commitment to a single typeface—or even to five or six, as some doctors recommend. The typothermiac is constantly tempted to test drive “hot” new fonts, often without a proper license
Typothermia
Typochondria Typophilia
Various forms of dysfunction appear among populations exposed to typography for long periods of time. Listed here are a number of frequently observed afflictions.
Common Typographic Diseases Various forms of dysfunction appear among populations exposed to typography for long periods of time. Listed here are a number of frequently observed afflictions.
Typophilia
An excessive attachment to and fascination with the shape of letters, often to the exclusion of other interests and object choices. Typophiliacs usually die penniless and alone.
Typochondria
A persistent anxiety that one has selected the wrong typeface. This condition is often paired with okd (optical kerning disorder), the need to constantly adjust and readjust the spaces between letters.
Typophobia
The irrational dislike of letterforms, often marked by a preference for icons, dingbats, and—in fatal cases—bullets and daggers. The fears of the typophobe can often be quieted (but not cured) by steady doses of Helvetica and Times Roman.
Typothermia
The promiscuous refusal to make a lifelong commitment to a single typeface—or even to five or six, as some doctors recommend. The typothermiac is constantly tempted to test drive “hot” new fonts, often without a proper license.
ROUGH DRAFTS
FIRST DRAFTS
JOURNEY TO SHERIDAN 6:00 am
HOME
don’t snooze..don’t..hit snooze..get up stretch. Get ready. Why is it so cold. Eat breakfast. I’ts getting late, run
run
7:10 am
run
PAPE
Should I get a coffee..oh wait it’s getting late.. oh look familiar faces, oh gosh I look so tired, just keep walking down.
7:25 am
BLOOR - YONGE
It’s busy today. I should’ve got coffee. I’m falling asleep on the subway. Just a few more stops, Everyone looks so formal.
7:48 am
UNION
I should probably get some coffee. Wait make sure you have enough money in your presto card. Don’t fall asleep...don’t fall asleep..
8:30 am
OAKVILLE
Don’t forget to tap off. Oh my, its cold. Where are my gloves. Get on the GO bus to Sheridan College. It’s warm now. Looks like I’m finally here.
Ring
home
6:00
Ring
Ring
Ring
beeeeeeeeep 7:10
“Next stop ... Pape Subway Station”
cough
pape
cough
cough
cough
cough
cough
“Now arriving at Yonge..Yonge Station”
7:25
bloor-yonge ding
dang
dong “Arriving at Union Station..Doors will open on the right”
7:48
union
“Excuse me”
screeeeeeech
“Now arriving at Oakville Go”
8:30
oakville
beep
beep beep
“Next stop, Sheridan College”
beep
PAPE
d
HOME 6:00
7:10
I
get
coffee?
I
should
probably
get
coffee.
BLOOR YONGE Zainab’s Journey to Sheridan College fall
UNION
Don’t
asleep.
Don’t
8:30
fall
OAKVILLE
Finally
here
asleep.
CRITIQUE 1
JOURNEY TO SHERIDAN 6:00 am Make sure time stamps align w/ main title
7:10 am
Don’t forget date, name destination etc. As required for project
HOME
don’t snooze..don’t..hit snooze..get up stretch. Get ready. Why is it so cold. Eat breakfast. I’ts getting late, run
run
run
PAPE
Should I get a coffee..oh wait it’s getting late.. oh look familiar faces, oh gosh I look so tired, just keep walking down.
Try alternating FLRR and FRLL
7:25 am
BLOOR - YONGE
It’s busy today. I should’ve got coffee. I’m falling asleep on the subway. Just a few more stops, Everyone looks so formal.
7:48 am Extra Space
UNION
I should probably get some coffee. Wait make sure you have enough money in your presto card. Don’t fall asleep...don’t fall asleep..
8:30 am
OAKVILLE
Don’t forget to tap off. Oh my, its cold. Where are my gloves. Get on the GO bus to Sheridan College. It’s warm now. Looks like I’m finally here.
Widow text. Make longer or shorter
Good outline treatment. Send this layer to the back. W
Ring
Word is bleeding out. If using this treatment do it more than once. 6:00
home
Ring Timestamps are getting lost from other stronger texts.
Ring
Ring
beeeeeeeeep
7:10
“Next stop ... Pape Subway Station”
cough
pape
Try to make the sounds less strong, since they are sounds.
cough
cough
cough
cough
cough
“Now arriving at Yonge..Yonge Station” Centre these texts with the other titles e.g. pape and bloor yonge.
7:25
bloor-yonge ding
dang
dong “Arriving at Union Station..Doors will open on the right”
7:48
union
“Excuse me”
screeeeeeech
“Now arriving at Oakville Go”
8:30 beep beep
Bottom margin is much smaller than top. Make them equal.
oakville
beep
“Next stop, Sheridan College”
beep
PAPE
d
HOME 6:00
7:10
I
get
coffee?
I
should
probably
get
coffee.
Consider the colour in the layering. Nice treatment.
BLOOR YONGE
Structure is awkward and hard to read.
Zainab’s Journey to Sheridan College fall
UNION
Don’t
asleep.
Don’t
8:30
fall
OAKVILLE
Finally
here
asleep.
SECOND DRAFTS
WEDNESDAY OCTOBER 28 2018
Z AI N A B A L AVI ’ S
JOURNEY TO SHERIDAN FRO M H O M E
6:00 am
HOME
81
don’t snooze..don’t..hit snooze..get up stretch. Get ready. Why is it so cold. Eat breakfast. I’ts getting late, run
run
run
westbound PAPE
7:10 am
Should I get a coffee..oh wait it’s getting late.. oh look familiar faces, oh gosh I look so tired, just keep walking down.
7:25 am
southbound
BLOOR - YONGE It’s busy today. I should’ve got coffee. I’m falling asleep on the subway. Just a few more stops, Everyone looks so formal.
lakeshore UNION west I should probably get some coffee. Wait make sure you have enough money in your presto Don’t fall asleep...don’t fall asleep..
8:30 am
sheridan
OAKVILLE
Don’t forget to tap off. Oh my, its cold. Where are my gloves. Get on the GO bus to Sheridan College. It’s warm now. I’m finally here.
7:48 am
Z AI N A B A L AVI ’ S
JOURNEY TO SHERIDAN FRO M H O M E
6:00 am
HOME
81
don’t snooze..don’t..hit snooze..get up stretch. Get ready. Why is it so cold. Eat breakfast. I’ts getting late, run
run
run
westbound PAPE
7:10 am
Should I get a coffee..oh wait it’s getting late.. oh look familiar faces, oh gosh I look so tired, just keep walking down.
7:25 am
southbound
BLOOR - YONGE It’s busy today. I should’ve got coffee. I’m falling asleep on the subway. Just a few more stops, Everyone looks so formal.
lakeshore UNION west I should probably get some coffee. Wait make sure you have enough money in your presto card. Don’t fall asleep...don’t fall asleep..
8:30 am
sheridan
OAKVILLE
Don’t forget to tap off. Oh my, its cold. Where are my gloves. Get on the GO bus to Sheridan College. It’s warm now. I’m finally here.
7:48 am
Zainab Alavi’s
trip to sheridan college
home
RING RING
RING
6:00
“Next stop ... Pape Subway Station”
cough
cough
pape
cough
7:10
“Now arriving at Yonge...Yonge station”
bloor-yonge 7:25
“Arriving at Union Station..Doors will open on the right”
union
“Excuse me”
7:48
screeeeeeech
“Now arrving at Oakville GO”
oakville 8:30
on wedneday october eight twenty eighteen
CRITIQUE 2
WEDNESDAY OCTOBER 28 2018
Z AI N A B A L AVI ’ S
JOURNEY TO SHERIDAN FRO M H O M E
6:00 am
HOME
81
don’t snooze..don’t..hit snooze..get up stretch. Get ready. Why is it so cold. Eat breakfast. I’ts getting late, run
Be consistent with these spacing.. run A1, A2 etc.
Outlined text is hard to read.
run
westbound PAPE
7:10 am
Should I get a coffee..oh wait it’s getting late.. oh look familiar faces, oh gosh I look so tired, just keep walking down.
7:25 am
southbound
BLOOR - YONGE It’s busy today. I should’ve got coffee. I’m falling asleep on the subway. Just a few more stops, Everyone looks so formal.
Choose a darker colour to bring attention.
lakeshore UNION west
7:48 am
I should probably get some coffee. Wait make sure you have enough money in your presto Don’t fall asleep...don’t fall asleep..
8:30 am
Make sure spacings from top of page and bottom of page are consistent. Be sure to use consistant alignment.
sheridan
OAKVILLE
Don’t forget to tap off. Oh my, its cold. Where are my gloves. Get on the GO bus to Sheridan College. It’s warm now. I’m finally here.
Z AI N A B A L AVI ’ S
JOURNEY TO SHERIDAN FRO M H O M E
DATE?
6:00 am
HOME
81
don’t snooze..don’t..hit snooze..get up stretch. Get ready. Why is it so cold. Eat breakfast. I’ts getting late, run
run
Filled in text is easier to read.
run
westbound PAPE Should I get a coffee..oh wait it’s getting late.. oh look familiar faces, oh gosh I look so tired, just keep walking down.
Use a darker tone of pink. Pink is hardly visible.
7:25 am
7:10 am
southbound
BLOOR - YONGE It’s busy today. I should’ve got coffee. I’m falling asleep on the subway. Just a few more stops, Everyone looks so formal.
lakeshore UNION west
7:48 am
I should probably get some coffee. Wait make sure you have enough money in your presto card.
Widow Don’t fall asleep...don’t fall asleep..
8:30 am
sheridan
OAKVILLE
Don’t forget to tap off. Oh my, its cold. Where are my gloves. Get on the GO bus to Sheridan College. It’s warm now. I’m finally here.
text.
Zainab Alavi’s
trip to sheridan college Use upper casing for Titles
home
RING RING
RING
6:00
“Next stop ... Pape Subway Station”
cough
cough
pape
cough
Dark colour provides better contrasting
7:10
“Now arriving at Yonge...Yonge station”
bloor-yonge 7:25
Y and timestamps are colliding
“Arriving at Union Station..Doors will open on the right”
union
“Excuse me”
7:48
screeeeeeech
“Now arrving at Oakville GO”
oakville 8:30
Date is falling off the edge. Avoid this or if it intended make it fall off more for exaggeration.
on wedneday october eight twenty eighteen
THIRD DRAFT
Zainab Alavi’s trip to Sheridan College from home 6:00 am
home 81 Don’t snooze..don’t..hit snooze..get up stretch. Get ready. Why is it so cold. Eat breakfast. I’ts getting late,
run
westbound Pape run
7:10 am
Should I get a coffee..oh wait it’s getting late..oh look familiar faces, oh gosh I look so tired, just keep walking down.
7:25 am
Bloor-Yonge southbound It’s busy today. I should’ve got coffee. I’m falling asleep on the subway. Just a few more stops. Everyone looks so formal.
Union lakeshore west Oakville sheridan
7:48 am
I should probably get some coffee. Make sure you have enough money in your presto Don’t fall asleep...don’t fall asleep..
8:30 am
Don’t forget to tap off. Oh my, its cold. Where are my gloves. Get on the GO bus to Sheridan College. It’s warm now. I’m finally here.
Wednesday October 8th, 2018
Zainab Alavi’s
trip to Sheridan College
from home
Wednesday October 8th, 2018
home
6:00 am
81 north
Don’t snooze..don’t..hit snooze..get up stretch. Get ready. Why is it so cold. Eat breakfast. It’s getting late, run
Pape
7:10 am
westbound
Should I get a coffee..oh wait it’s getting late..oh look familiar faces, I look so tired, just keep walking down.
Bloor-Yongesouthbound 7:25 am
It’s busy today. I should’ve got coffee. I’m falling asleep on the subway. Just a few more stops. Everyone looks so formal.
Union
7:48 am
lakeshore-west
I should probably get some coffee. Make sure you have enough money in your presto. Don’t fall asleep...
Oakville Don’t forget to tap off. Oh my, its cold. Where are my gloves. It’s warm now. I’m finally here.
8:30 am
sheridan
CRITIQUE 3
Zainab Alavi’s trip to Sheridan College from home
Make sure text is not so close to the edge of the paper.
6:00 am
home 81 Don’t snooze..don’t..hit snooze..get
Make sure motifs + non-text sits behind actual text.
up stretch. Get ready. Why is it so cold. Eat breakfast. I’ts getting late,
run
westbound Pape run
7:10 am
Be consistent with casing
Should I get a coffee..oh wait it’s getting
late..oh look familiar faces, oh gosh I look so tired, just keep walking down.
7:25 am
Bloor-Yonge southbound It’s busy today. I should’ve got coffee. I’m falling asleep on the subway. Just a few more stops. Everyone looks so formal.
Union lakeshore west Oakville sheridan
7:48 am
I should probably get some coffee. Make sure you have enough money in your presto Don’t fall asleep...don’t fall asleep..
Light pink text is still hard to read.
8:30 am
Don’t forget to tap off. Oh my, its cold. Where are my gloves. Get on the GO bus to Sheridan College. It’s warm now. I’m finally here.
Wednesday October 8th, 2018
Zainab Alavi’s
trip to Sheridan College Make this text darker
Wednesday October 8th, 2018
home
Awkward motif
from home 6:00 am
81 north
Don’t snooze..don’t..hit snooze..get up stretch. Get ready. Why is it so cold. Eat breakfast. It’s getting late, run
Pape
7:10 am
westbound
Consider taking out this mostif. Distracting ?
Should I get a coffee..oh wait it’s getting late..oh look
familiar faces, I look so tired, just keep walking down.
Bloor-Yongesouthbound 7:25 am
It’s busy today. I should’ve got coffee. I’m falling asleep on the subway. Just a few more stops. Everyone looks so formal.
7:48 am
Maybe centre time stamp with pink box ?
Union
lakeshore-west
I should probably get some coffee. Make sure you have enough money in your presto. Don’t fall asleep...
Oakville Don’t forget to tap off. Oh my, its cold. Where are my gloves. It’s warm now. I’m finally here.
8:30 am
sheridan
FINAL
Zainab Alavi’s
trip to Sheridan College
from home
Wednesday October 8th, 2018
Home
6:00 am
81 north
Don’t snooze..don’t..hit snooze..get up stretch. Get ready. Why is it so cold. Eat breakfast. It’s getting late, run...run.
Pape
7:10 am
westbound
Should I get a coffee..oh wait it’s getting late..oh look familiar faces, I look so tired, just keep walking down.
Bloor-Yongesouthbound 7:25 am
It’s busy today. I should’ve got coffee. I’m falling asleep on the subway. Just a few more stops.
Union
7:48 am
lakeshore-west
I should probably get some coffee. Make sure you have enough money in your presto. Don’t fall asleep...
Oakville Don’t forget to tap off. Oh my, its cold. Where are my gloves. It’s warm now. I’m finally here.
8:30 am
sheridan