2017
COLLABORATIVE WRITING Y8 CLASS B
GROUP 1
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The Zombie Plane
A STRANGE CAR ACCIDENT
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FIRE HANDS
Vanubia, an evil spirit!
THE ROOM 476
The Devil of Edinburgh
THE MURDER
AND NOBODY WAS LEFT ALIVE!
THE HAUNTED STREET
Y8 CLASS B - GROUP I
STORY 1
The Zombie Plane
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December, 1944. A village near Hiroshima, Japan.
It was, as always, a scary raining day. All the village inhabitants were at their houses. Nothing was different from other days! The kids were playing in the garden and the adults were going to work. When a plane was flying in the sky near the floor, everyone got scared and some minutes later, there was a huge sound near the village. Houses were destroyed, trees were on fire and people were dead or not! My brother, William, and I went to the place in order to see what had happened. The place was totally destroyed. We went into the plane wreck and we had a big surprise! We heard a grunt! We thought that was a request asking for help. So we went to check everything out! In fact, it was a strange and scary voice. We put the radio closer to our ears and the voice said: "You will die!" Then when we turned around, we saw a scary, horrible man. He looked like he had died years before and only his dead body was there, rotten and smelly. "It" attacked us and strangely tried to bit us. A lot of those creatures started to appear and run after us, screaming "Brains!" It was when we first realised that "It" couldn't have been a human being. What was happening was supernatural and couldn't be explained by science. What about all the families, children and women that lived in the Village? "We have to do something about it", said William looking at me, very determined". " I know we have got to. We will!" And we both knew our adventures were just getting started. Unfortunately, what we did not know was that our adventure was coming to an unhappy end. We were killed by those kind of zombies and, the worst of all, we became exactly like them! Be careful! We might catch you if you dare coming closer!
Y8 Â CLASSÂ B - GROUP I
STORY 2
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Vanubia, an evil spirit! In the 20th century, in London, there was a woman called Vanubia. She was 60 years old, strange and didn't have any friends. She used to speak alone and to live in a horrible house. Her family abandoned her when she was young in the streets of London. She lived there for long years. Then, later, she earned a little bit of money by begging on the streets and could buy a small house in a very poor neighborhood.
She was mad to have a revenge against her mom and dad. She was also willing to kill the people who had abandoned her. So at a night, Vanubia went to the first family that she wanted to exterminate. There he killed all the members of the family and burned the bodies as well as the house. It became the most famous case in London, known as "The Revenge of the Daughter".
One day, she was walking on the streets, when a man bumped into her. She got very furious and then started to run after him, trying to kill him, but she didn't know that he was a vampire.
When she tried to stab him, he turned and attacked her, sucking her blood. After that, she fainted and when she woke up, Vanubia couldn't remember anything, but she was a vampire.
Then she started to run away but she was too thirsty. It was at that moment that she spotted a short handsome man. She ran at him, grabbed him and with an inhuman force, she mobilized the poor man and bit him, sucking all his blood.
Vanubia fell in love with this gourgeous man, but she needed to run, because it was getting sunny and vampires can't live under the light of the sun.
At the night of the same day, she searched for that man, but she could not find him. She got so angry that she killed herself and kept goind round and round like a spirit for the rest of the eternity.
Y8 CLASS B - GROUP I
STORY 3
The Devil of Edinburgh It was a cold night in the O'Neil's
both sleepless and with one doubt on
mansion. Billy was walking in the
their minds: "Was Billy walking alone?
corridor sleepwalking as always.
Was Amanda talking to someone?
Amanda was talking to herself while
What was Edward hiding?"
Edward was sleeping peacefully on his giant bed. The couple, Robert and
The next day, two people were dead.
Mia, were talking about their
They were Billy's best friends.
business,
According to the police, it was a
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suicide, but Billy knew that it wasn't
about it and they went out. Billy didn't
the truth, because, in the middle of
say to the officers that he heard
the night he had heard shoutings;
some voice in the basement, because
"HELP!". He could recognize that
he wanted to discover what had
voice, but he couldn't remember
happened. At night, Billy went down
whose voice it was.
the stairs to check the basement out.
So, that day, the police went to
At first, Billy was afraid, but then he
question them, since the people who
had to discover what that noise was
died were their neighbors. Two big
all about and what had happened to
and strong cops knocked on the door
his friends.
and Billy opened it. The one with the big round glasses said: ''My name is
Before he got in, Billy heard some
John and this is Matty. We are here
voice, a strange, but familiar voice.
because of the murder. We think it
When he got to the basement, he saw
was a suicide, but we couldn't
the worst scene in all his life. Edward,
recognize signs in the body, like cuts.
his oldest brother, had a big axe in
Can we talk to you for a moment?"
his hands, cuting parts of the bodies of his friends. Billy screamed and
"Yes, of course, come in.", answered
Edward saw him. It was the last
Billy.
scream of Billy. The officers never found out who the murderer was.
"We will ask you some questions. Please, answer them sincerely. Were they acting strangely these days? Do they have some family problems? Were they ill?"
"Officers, for me they were quite normal and no one had family problems. Look, you have asked for me to be sincere. I have got to tell you that I heard some voice screaming "HELP", but I ignored it."
The police officers didn't say anythingÂ
Y8 CLASS B - GROUP I
STORY 4
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AND NOBODY WAS LEFT ALIVE! Not all stories have a happy end. On a beautiful summer day, in New York, Emily and James were very happy because they had discovered that they were pregnant of twins. So they decided to visit Emily's parents in Alaska, but they didn't know that there were happening attacks of murdering clowns. In Alaska, it was snowing and it was very cold. Then they made a fire and sat around it to tell Emily's parents about the news. Emily said: "I'm pregnant of twins! You are going to be grandparents!" Before they could say anything, a strange, very loud noise came from the window. Peter, Emily's father went to see what was going on. When he got there, a group of clowns were hiding in the snow and attacked him on the head with a hammer. The family got frightened and didn't know what to do. When the clowns entered the house, the family tried to hide in the attic, but before Emily's mum got in the attic, a clown held her knees and pushed her down. The family just heard her screaming. Quickly, James picked a heavy and big box and put it to block the entrance. Emily couldn't stop crying. The clowns were laughing, but suddenly, they stopped. James took the box and tried to see
something, but when he saw the clown, a big axe passed through his head. Emily was the last one. She didn't know what to do. She had a heart attack. The clowns started to laugh. They had killed everybody. And nobody was left alive from the family.
A STRANGE CAR ACCIDENT
Y8 CLASS B - GROUP I
STORY 5
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James couldn't get control of the car since Peter kept screaming at him. They had a car accident. One day, Peter saw James doing something strange and at the moment Mrs. Lewin entered the room. Then James blamed Peter for the discussion he had had and the friendship was over. Mrs. Lewin gave James a punishment and Peter went to jail, because he was the "responsible one" for the car accident. Peter stayed in jail for two years, Finally, someone paid for his bail. He thought that James had done that. The policeman gave a letter to him and he immediately opened and read it. It was written: "Dear Peter, you don't know who I am, Later you will know, but all the things have their own time. I´ve given you the chance for you to have your revenge against James." Peter started thinking who could have sent that letter to him. He had no idea, So he started planning a revenge. First, he had to find James. He could be anywhere over the world. But it was easier than he thought, There was a report about him and he was in the same city of Peter. Peter tried to find James at his house to kill him because it was not only his fault concerning the car accident. It was James' as well. When he finally found James, he dragged him into his car and drove to a place where he could spaw the body. He arrived at the place and killed his friend. When he was going back to his house, the car brake didn't work out, because of that, the car crashed onto the wall and he died. Many people have said that since that day their spirits started to haunt people that drive cars around that area, and because of that, today many car accidents have happened.
Y8 CLASS B - GROUP I
THE ROOM 476
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A long time ago, a young woman was forced to go to an asylum, because she was a psycho. She had killed a lot of people before and because of that, she was condemned to the electric chair. People used to say that she had been haunting the room where she lived in, that is, the room 476. Nobody had ever been to that room in order to know about the truth. But after 100 years, a young boy, who had schizophrenia, was sent to the asylum and chose to stay in the room 476. He didn't know that a woman had died there. So for him that room was calm. He had a horrible childhood. His father was an alcoholic and his mum left him when he was three years old. His father beat him, but he continued loving his father. After that, his father left him too. At first, the boy stayed with his grandfather, but when he died, the boy was sent to the asylum. In the room he stayed, he said that he could see a dead body near a chair. The police went there to check if that was real, but they didn't find the body. So they took the guy there so that he could explain. Then the police left, because they couldn't see anything.
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The boy walked around the room and heard a female voice saying: "five days". He became desperate and tried to say that to the police. But they didn´t believe in him. After four days, the boy started to become sick. And he started to shout at that female voice. In the middle of the night of the same day, his eyes were completely dark. The police tried to cope with that, but the body had a supernatural force and he killed all the policemen squeezing their throats to death. The female spirit had her revenge!
Y8 CLASS B - GROUP I
STORY 7
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THE MURDER I was in my bedroom, trying to sleep. My parents were out somewhere that I don't know. My house was big. There was a huge pool in the backyard, but there wasn't any wall blocking my house from the neighbors'. They were very nice. I played with their son, when I was little, but he unfortunately got sick and died. His mum got crazy due to that and
she had to live in a hospital. After some time, she died. His dad was called Jeff and he ended up losing everything, his own wife and his son. He got very bad, so he decided to risk his life as a murderer and I knew that. He tried to kill me, because I knew that. I was very scared. Suddenly, I heard
some noise in my bathroom. I went to verify and when I opened the door, I saw the message "I will kill you" written on the mirror with blood. At the same time, I ran to lock all the doors in the house. I was going to call the police when all the police when all the lights in my house turned off. The phone kept on ringing in my bedroom. i went there and I answered the phone. He said: "Look back"! I saw a dead cat. I heard noises of steps in the living room. I went there and a song of the eighteenth century started being played. I saw a child sitting. I ran away to my bedroom and locked myself, but I heard some noise in the direction of the window. It was Jeff with a knife. He broke the window and came to me. I unlocked the door and ran away. My other neighbor went to my house with a gun and got me. Jeff came and said: "I wiil kill you two". My other neighbor killed him. After my parents went there and thanked my neighbor for saving my life.Â
Y8 CLASS B - GROUP I
STORY 8
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THE HAUNTED STREET It was a dark night, when John
John, on the next day, went to
was walking home and he was
that street alone, because he
hit by a flip flop. He looked
wanted to prove to himself
around and he didn't find
that the street was haunted. He
anyone, so he freaked out and
was passing when the lights
ran away to his home. He went
turned off, and in front of him
there because his friend, Paul,
a knife cut the air. He also
challenged him to pass on that
heard something breaking. He
street. People thought that
looked around and noticed
street was haunted. Many
there was a pitcher with a
people had already
message. He ran away to his
disappeared there. When he
home.
got home, he told everybody what had happened. They
Later at school, he told his
didn't believe him. The next
friends again about what had
day, he was walking on the
happened and again they made
same street with his friends to
fun of him. He swore, but they
prove that the street was
didn`t believe. That very same
haunted. Nothing happened
night, he took his friends to go
when they were there, so his
with him to the haunted street.
friends made fun of him.
They finally could see a
woman laid on the street holding the same pitcher and she spoke: "You are not allowed to be here! Go away or the next time you are here I will kill you!" But the boy didn't listen to her and the next day John was found dead on the street with a flip flop mark on his neck. The case was never solved.
Y8 CLASS B - GROUP I
STORY 9
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FIRE HANDS One day a strange guy, David, moved to New York, a big city, and caused a giant accident involving chemical reagents which eventually infected a large laboratory. Many people were affected by the accident. These people were wasted in the city by the police, because they were dangerous for the society for having inhuman powers and they were strange. The man didn`t know the accident had had such bad consequences. So he started search for a cure. He spent weeks of work, but he did it. The problem was that he needed to try his experiment in one of the radioactive monsters. So he went to the streets and attracted one of them to his warehouse and applied the injection with the cure. The result wasn't what exactly he expected. The super-human fainted. He thought his experiment had worked out. But the next day, while he was waching TV, the news were
telling everyone that there was a man in the city who was burning people to kill them. David started to freak out. The cure had just made the things go worse. He had to do something and fast! He thought: "If he is burning people with his power, I should try to freeze him". As David was friends with the owner of a big factory, and there was a freezer there, he thought about the possibility of attracting the creature there and held him there. In order to have that done, he took a photo of one of his victims by making him think he was still alive. The photo was in real size and made him get in there. He got to arrest him there and turned on the freezer. The next day, the Fire-Man was a rock. David was feeling bad for killing someone, but he was able to save many of other lives.