2017
COLLABORATIVE WRITING Y8 CLASS C
GROUP 1
8 CLASS c GROUP I 2017
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BE AWARE OFTHE PALE MAN
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ASYLUM
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Jesus vs Satan
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The Legendary Battle
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How did it get to this point?
Y8 CLASS C - GROUP I
STORY 1
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BE AWARE OFTHE PALE MAN
There was a really rebellious man called Arthur in a condominium. He hated his neighbors, especially the kids, they used to play a lot of tricks on him and he got nervous every time. He got angrier and angrier. Once, the kids could exceed all kinds of limits. They threw rocks at his house. He got so angry that he broke his mirror only because he was angry. When he saw the broken glass, he had an idea that he had never thought he could have. He was definitely willing to kill someone. He remembered about the kids that used to play tricks on him and, then, there was no doubt for him anymore! He would kill someone that night. The next morning, everybody of the condominium woke up with some bad news. Jeffrey was dead. And every morning, from then on, one of the kids were killed. Everybody was in panic. The parents of those dead kids called the police and they started to watch the condominium in shifts. The investigation was really difficult, because there were no clues. There were just the kids killed with a cut in their neck. One of the cops, named Peter, was investigating the case. Peter knocked on all the doors of the condominium to question people about that case. He looked for clues, but the only thing that he found was a pen covered in blood. So he went to the police lab in order to analyse the fingerprints. There was Arthur's DNA, the one that Peter thought was very mysterious. The next day, the condominium was calm, but that was about to change. Peter and 3 other cops knocked on Arthur's front door. It was useless! Nobody was there. Arthur had runned away because he noticed the pen was missing and the police was going to arrest him for sure. Spending his time in prison wasn't his summer ideal vacation. He escaped from the cops. But when they got split to look for him, he broke their necks one by one. The only one he couldn't get was Peter. He noticed what happened and called back up. Arthur got angrier and angrier and decided to kill the entire department of police if necessary. He bought a lot of guns, grenades and cutting weapons. He entered the places by kicking the door and exploding one of the officer's head with a shotgun. Then he threw a knife over the sherif's eyes. His single hand made a bloodshed around the department, but as always Peter was able to run away, Arthur didn't recognize himself in the mirror anymore. He was the demon reflex, a mere spectrum, a shadow, made of chaos and destruction. What made him that way? Nobody really knows! What I really know is that if you see a tall pale black haired man with a grumpy face, do not hesitate to run away. And Peter, well, he has been on the run since that day. My personal advice? Be aware of the pale man and don't ever interfere in their batlle that can be compared to the Armageddon itself. Maybe it is definitely that!Â
Y8 CLASS C - GROUP I
STORY 2
Jesus vs Satan Once, a man went back to his house
turned on by itself. It seemed that
in Las Vegas. He was watching TV
nothing really had happened, but he
and, suddenly, the channels started
got very scared.
changing by themselves. The TV turned off and he saw the reflex of a
The man was going to sleep, He
ghost behind him for one second.
needed to climb up the stairs.
When he turned around, there wasn't
Suddenly, the ghost appeared and
anyone there anymore, and the TV
pushed him. So he fell and died.
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When his soul was going away to hell,
Satan punched him in the face. He
the ghost grabbed him and said: "Now
was the ghost, but Satan was the
it is your turn!".
demon. He didn't get a chance before passing out. He heard Satan
The ghost went to hell in the place of
saying in his ears that the suffering
the man. That was the man's time to
had just started.
scare people. The ghost thought that he was lost After this episode, the house was for
and that he would spend the eternity
sale, but nobody came. The house was
in hell. Suddenly, Jesus appeared and
terrible. After two years, a really
sent Satan back to hell. Jesus
mysterious old man appeared. He
apologized and sent the ghost to
bought the house by not even visiting
heaven. Satan went back to hell.
it, but the new ghost knew the man
When he met the ghost that was in
knew something about the house.
the house before the one that is in
When he first came in, he could see a
heaven, he sent him back to the
long blood line on the floor and he
house to kill Jesus. But he ran
laughed. The man was really strange,
because Jesus was much more
He bought the house and, when the
powerful than him. He started to run
moving guys were out, the man started
and kill peaple in the street just for
his plan. He wanted to kill the old guy.
fun. Jesus quickly used his superpowers and sent the ghost to
His first move was appearing in front of the man. Nothing happened! Then he crushed all the glass objects simultaneously and nothing again. He slapped the man in the face. Also nothing occurred. The ghost was desperate! When he was going to stab the old man, he turned and held a knife, which is impossible for an ordinary mortal. At that moment, the ghost was creeped out. The old man revealed himself as Satan. The man wondered if the prince of hell didn't have anything else to do. But he was pulled out from his thoughts whenÂ
hell for good.Â
Y8 CLASS C - GROUP I
STORY 3
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The Legendary Battle In December,1960, a family with 5 children called Elisa, Amanda, Maggie, Thor and Trump, were in Malibu and bought a house around the place. It was very big, with 45 rooms. At the first night, Thor heard a noise that came from the kitchen. He found it weird, but was just Maggie because she was always hungry. After 2 minutes, he heard the noise again, but at that time it wasn't Maggie! It was closer and louder. His courage overcame the fear. When he went to the kitchen, where the noise came from, he saw an old book, a giant one. The fear was gone and he asked himself what an old book could do. This was his thought, but the book vanished seconds after that. The boy got scared and curious. At first, he thought it was just a dream, but after that, he just convinced himself that it was just a dream. He went back to bed. A couple of hours later, he heard the noise again and went to the kitchen to check it out. When he got there, the book was there again. This time the book was open and the pages were written in an old language, Latin, maybe! The boy was learning Latin at school, so he was able to read it. He discovered, among other things, that he could perform a ritual to make him a god of some kind. The only thing that he couldn't get to perform the ritual was the blood of 100 different people. To do that, he needed to make these persons suffer in many horrifying ways. He was about to start it with HIS FAMILY. When he read that, he fainted. When he woke up again, he felt himself different. He was hungry of death and his first victim was his sister: Maggie. He caught a knife and went to Maggie's room. He entered in there and killed her in the neck. Then, he killed all his family expect for his brother Donald Trump, who he found in the kitchen reading the book. They hated each other. When Trump saw his brother holding a knife covered in blood, he ran over him and killed him with a pan on his head. He hid the dead body of his brother in the closet and ran away. Then, ever since, the house has been haunted by Thor's ghost who has still been looking for his brother and murderer, the USA president, Trump.
Y8 CLASS C - GROUP I
STORY 4
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How did it get to this point? Once there was a beautiful family: Sarah, Greg and their son Dean. They were moving to the USA because Sarah's job asked her to go to another office. Her job was the most important thing in her life. They were really happy, but that was about to change. Sarah got crazy when she was fired. So she started to live in an asylum after she freaked out.
One day, she disappeared from that hell. Nobody knew where she was. They were afraid of her! She was really dangerous. The next day, her husband started looking for her. It was already night. Dean was all alone in the chase when his mother broke the window and entered in the house. She was obsessive about her own job and after reflecting a lot, he came to the conclusion that her family made her being fired. Then she decided by the logic conclusion, family equals fired so not family equals hired. In other words, she would hunt down her family to get her job back, the only detaill was that she was completely crazy.
They tried to talk to Sarah, but she wasn't a human being anymore. She looked like some animal, something without compassion, without fear or remorse, just a killing machine. Some wondered how come a happy family had turned out that sort of thing. It's clear that the mom had previous episodes of insanity like those ones, but she could keep them away from her family. Her job? The one she killed to get back? Just a tip, there never was a job she was, in fact, a serial killer that was about to kill Donald Trump. That's why they were moving into Washington D.C..
She didn't tell her family anything about that, but they were afraid of her and they didn't want to see her again. She went alone to Washington DC to search for Donald Trump. She was willing to kill him. She searched for him everywhere, but since the nuclear war against Russia and his impeachment, nobody wanted to talk about him. When she was about to give up, a man told her that Trump was working in a hot dog stand in South Caroline.
She went there, and she looked a lot for the stand. She saw Trump! Â Then she took her knife, the one she had stolen from a pub, and started to run. When she was like 5 seconds of running from him, she stumbled and fell down on the ground. She was holding her knife! When she fell, her knife was pointed at herself and it killed her. The last thing she saw was the cops coming and she remembered about her family and her job that she wanted. Sarah died feeling sad, because she hadn't got her job done. She promised to revenge when her family went to hell just like her.Â
Y8 CLASS C - GROUP I
STORY 5
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ASYLUM On an old road, Jean was going back
injuries in the accident.
home. He had left work late and needed to take a shortcut to get
Indeed, the crash made him
home before midnight. Jean heard
remember when his parents and his
some rumors about a creature that
brother died in a car accident. That
lived in that region. He was an
was because a man named Candle
skeptical man, but everyone had
Hand, who didn't sound that scary,
their own limits and Jean was
actually ate his victims after mading
beyond his,
them crash.
The night was already dark and cold.
You might have been asking
And just when he thought it couldn't
yourself: "What about Candle Hand?
get worse, his car broke down. The
Where is he?"
man was so deeply lost in his own thoughts that he didn't see the tree
I don't know, but Jean decided to
on his way. Jean said to himself to
tell the police everything he knew
be patient. Help was on its way. At
about that creature! He said that
least, his phone was still working.
Candle Hand was diagnosed as a
He hadn't suffered any great
crazy guy and was kept in an
Asylum for 10 years. And that In the
could close it.
asylum he died due to AIDS. He had fought against AIDS all his life. In
The ghost kept saying: "I have a
the end he died. He didn't accept his
game for you to play. First, you
death so his soul was condemned to
need to keep secret. If you don't do
haunt the asylum for 100 years.
that, I will kill your family. Second, you'll need to post a photo of me on
Jean's parents' story went like that!
your instagram. I want fame and
Once two boys called Louis and
everyone on Earth to respect me
Jean, their father Francis and
and see I'm still alive!"
mother Jean-De PrĂŠville were visiting VacĂşmee. As you probably
Louis, scared to death, answered:
noticed, they were a French family
"Okay, it is done! And now?"
living in the USA. When they arrived there, they immediately got a chase
The ghost said: "Now you need to
to live in. As Louis entered in a dark
draw my pic on your arm with a
room of the mansion to play, he,
knife. I want you to be my partner in
suddenly, heard two claps from a
crime!"
ghostly hand shining in the dark. He got so scared that he couldn't
So the boy did it and became a ghost
scream. The ghost was there, in
himself after being dead from
front of his very eyes! Then the boy
bleeding. What everyone else
asked: "Are you a ghost?"
knows is that the ghost really became famous due to Instagram
"Yes, I am. I guess you don't know,
and that the chase has been haunted
but you all have invaded my house.
by a family of ghosts nowadays!
This was an Asylum a long time ago. As a payment for living in my place,
Jean was the only one who had
I want something from you. If you
escaped from that horrible dead
don't give me what I am asking you,
day! We don't know till when he'll
I'll kill you and your family one by
be able to get rid of that terrible
one.", answered the ghost.
creature named CANDLE HAND!
That was enough. The boy turned around and started to run. But the ghost just by looking at the door,