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COLLABORATIVE WRITING Y8 CLASS D
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My one true love
CURIOSITY ALSO KILLS!
THE MISSING FRIENDS
I MISSED HIM
A HUMAN BEING OR A GHOST?
THE HAUNTING CAVE
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THE MYSTERIOUS BOX
Y8 CLASS D - GROUP I
STORY 1
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My one true love It was a cold winter night in Minessota. My head was hurting as usual and for some strange reason I didn't take my pills again.
My amnesia was starting to get higher and higher. At that moment, I couldn't remember anything even stuff that was happening on that very same day. At least, I was in bed. There were days that I woke up in weird places, like in the barn of my friends' farm. For some reason I couldn't find my wife. First, I had to take my pills so I could remember what was happening and where my wife was. It was hard to get out of bed, because my head hurt so much by that time. I lifted my head to see if I could find my medicine for the amnesia.
I didn't know what I was doing and anything about last night. I got up and started to
walk. I went down the stairs and my wife wasn't there, I had breakfast! Everything was going on as usual as on the other days. But when I took the newspaper to read, something terrible had happened, as it follows: "Last night we found a woman who was alone in the woods. Nobody knows how she got there. Now she has been at an asylum". I didn't remember anything, but that woman was my wife! I needed to see her, I needed to know who did it. I called the police to get some information about the asylum where she was for me to go there.
When I arrived there, it was a scary place, It looked like an abandoned house. There were some trees with no leaves and there was also some weird fog. I asked about my wife. One man told me she was really nervous, because of that she was in a separated room. And I asked to see her, but I couldn´t make it. Then I went home and the next day, I tried again. I kept going there every day and nobody let me in. Then, somehow, I started to remember things from my past. The days went by and I started to remember more and more. The day I married her and how she got in the woods. She was running after me and she didnt want to live that way anymore. She tried to kill herself, but I didn´t let her do that.
SHE´S CRAZY! She was giving me pills, but not because I needed them! Just because she didn't want me to remember anything. I didn´t love her anymore. In fact, I never did! She was crazy! She medicated me herself not to remember that I hated her and never wanted to see her again in front of my very eyes! She once almost killed me, because I loved another woman: STACY, SHE DIED BECAUSE OF HER, I loved her. She killed my one true love, because she wanted to be my lover. Deep inside, she knew she would never be my true love. She would stay at the asylum for the rest of her life.
That is the horrible story about my true love! I'll be heading to Chicago and spend my last days living by myself until the moment I can meet my true love again in Heaven!
Y8 CLASS D - GROUP I
STORY 2
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THE MISSING FRIENDS Once 5 friends went to a nightclub in San
going on. Unfortunately, the fire started
Francisco. There were a lot of people there
being bigger and bigger. They ran away with
and everything was doing fine. But, suddenly,
everybody else. They waited outside the
Laila, one of the friends, started screaming
building..Actually, they thought Laila was
and searching for help! She kept on shouting:
coming out, but she didn't. The firefighters
"Fire! Fire! Help me, please! Take me out of
and the cops sent everyone to get out of the
here!"
place. The four friends panicked and told the police about their friend: Laila. Everybody
The screams seemed to come from the
searched for her all night long. She wasn't
bathroom. So the 4 friends: Peter, Mike,
there anymore.
Caroline and Liza went there to see what was
The next morning, Laila was still missing.
she kept seeing her and the boys. It happened in
Nobody found Laila's body. The four friends
her dreams, on the streets and everywhere she
came together to talk about what had
looked at. Caroline expected Liza to say she was
happened, Caroline and Liza were very scared and crying because the girls couldn't believe their friend was gone.
crazy, but she didn't say that. In fact, she told her that she had been seeing theirs friends as well. Both were thinking they had become crazy, because there were no ways for their friends to have survived after all the fire they were through.
They had a conversation and everybody decided to sleep over, because it was too late.
They were too scared, because they thought that
In the middle of the night, Peter heard a terrible
they were having illusions. Because of that, the
sound coming from the kitchen. He tried to go
girls discussed about telling their parents about
back to sleep, but the noise was getting louder
the dead friends' apperances. They were afraid of
and louder. Peter woke MIke up and they decided to go downstairs to check everything out. The girls woke up due to screams and a big fire which was burning down the house.
their parents' reaction. Maybe, their parents were going to send them to the hospital. Suddently, they saw Peter and tried to talk to him, but he didn't anwser. They tried again! The boy was walking around the girls and making strange noises.
They decided to get out of the house and call the firefighters.
The girl's mother appeared and saw them saying weird things like: " Peter, Talk to us! We know
When the firefighters came, they could finally put the fire out. But they couldn't find the boys' bodies. Caroline and Liza were shocked. They had already lost their 3 best friends in two days. They stayed in their room for weeks until the day they decided to meet, Both had the worst feelings they could ever feel. They started talking and they knew some day, they would have to talk about what had happened. They decided to talk to each other and try to understand how it felt like losing their best friends in such a short time. Caroline decided to tell Liza that she saw Laila in her window the other day. First, she thought she was crazy, but
you're here!" The mother started to scream and say that they were crazy! At the same moment, Peter could speak and called the girls! They were desperate and decided to follow him! Nobody got to know about them anymore!
Y8 CLASS D - GROUP I
STORY 3
A HUMAN BEING OR A GHOST?
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Last week, I woke up in the morning, checked my cell phone and noticed someone, who I did not know, had sent me pictures of me sleeping on WhatsApp. That really freaked me out, because I lived alone. Quickly I got out of my house and called my friend to meet me at Starbucks.
I got there and saw my friend sitting at a table. I joined him and told him what was happening. I said: "Today I was alone in my house sleeping and when I woke up, I checked my cell phone and someone had sent me photos of myself sleeping." My friend told me: "What? That's horrible. Let's call the police now." I replied: "Let's not waste our time. Nobody will believe this story." He agreed with me and said: "Well, then let's go to your house and I'll spend the night there with you."
Then we tried to stay awake, but we fell asleep. The next morning, someone sent pictures of us again. We were so scared that we decided to talk to the police, but when we tried to get out the house, we couldn't make it. We were trapped! So we started screaming, and tried to call someone. The phones were all broken. After some hours, we were calmer and we started hearing some noise. Someone was in the house. We followed the noise and we couldn't find anything. We saw an open door and we tried to run away. But when we were arriving there, the door closed at our own faces. We were scared, because we thought that there was someone inside the kitchen. We tried to find a person or a ghost. We searched the whole house and didn't see anyone. We picked some candles to call the creature and hold it in the middle of the table..We started to say: "Ghost or whatever you are, we're calling you for you to explain to us what you want, because we are done with your tricks!"
The ghost finally said: "Give me your soul, otherwise you will be trapped forever! BOO!"
We were scared to death at that time because we could notice his voice was one of a ghost! We decided to talk with him and asked him why he wanted our soul.
The ghost told us that human beings must be all DEAD! He added that we were the chosen ones!
That was definitely a horrible ghost creature! He came and scared my friend and me till we didn't have any more forces! We were taken to hell with him and became terrible ghosts as well!
Y8 CLASS D - GROUP I
THE MYSTE RIOUS BOX
STORY 4
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A long time ago a family, who lived in the woods, was murdered and nobody knew what happened. Since that day, everyone, that went there, died and never came back. Once a group of kids went there, but they didn't know what had happened before. They were playing and Phill stumbled over a body. They didn't know what it was. So Phill, Sarah, Spencer, Tiffany and John turned over and were terrified. They left everything and came running back home. The next day, they went there again to search for their things, but instead they found a yellow box which was locked. So they went home running to try to open the mysterious box.They tried and tried to open it, but they couldn't make it. The next day, the five children came back and tried to find something in the woods to unlock the mysterious box. They searched a lot and finally Sarah found a key. The key was buried where Phill's grandmother's tomb was. That was due to the fact Phill's grandma wanted to be buried in the woods. The friends went home to open the box. When they got home, they found Tiffany's mother and because of that they hid the box. They didn't want to let her know that since that day, they had been going to the woods very often. The five friends were walking and trying to find the key or another thing that could open the box. But Sarah got lost and she started to scream. They didn't find her, so she became sad and started to cry. Then something got her and dragged her to the abandoned cottage and she passed out,. When she woke up, she saw one of her friends holding the yellow box. He said: "You are never going to open my box,! It is mine!"
After that, he started to open the box slowly by repeating: "Mommy, mommy, mommy..". When he opened the box, she saw the head of a woman and he said: "This is my mom! I killed her because she was violent against me. Now you are going to die too! And so are your friends!"
Y8 CLASS D - GROUP I
STORY 5
CURIOSITY ALSO KILLS! Once I was walking down the street, when I suddenly saw a strange man with such a terrifying face! He was wearing black clothes. Then he started following me for a long, long time. So I started to run and he also started running after me, but finally I got home and I missed that man. The next day, I went to the street market and bought some fruits and decorations for my house. When I turned around, I saw the same man from the day before. He was wearing his black clothes again and I was curious. I started following him up to his house in complete silence. I didn't want him to see me. He was walking to his house and carrying some packages with a ghost print. Getting there, I entered his house through the window and I saw a lot of bloody baby clothes. I could also see a knife on the floor! There was a background noise of a baby crying. Immediately, I picked up the knife and started running in the direction of the man. He was back to me, so I stabbed the knife onto his back. But he wasn't there anymore. He had just disappeared. At that moment I became crazy and ran to the open door, but when I was passing, the door closed in front of me. I remembered I had come into the house through the window. So why was the door opened? I turned around and saw a doll walking through the living room. When it saw me, it stopped walking,
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dropped the knife and became a doll again. That was a very weird house! After that weird doll's appearance, I decided to go back to my normal house, but the window was closed then. I thought it could have been the doll. It must have closed it! Obviously I tried to open it, but it didn't work out. I tried the door again, but none of those passages were opening., So I realized that I was stuck in that terrifying house. I went downstairs to search for some tools to break the window. I heard those baby sounds again and went searching for them, They were coming from a door at the end of the basement. There were also footsteps coming from that door. They were heavy footsteps, fmaybe, rom a very big and strong man. "Why was he kidnapping babies, if he was that strong?", I thought. I wouldn't be able to win a fight with that man. I ran away, but he heard me running and went after me. Neither the window or the door were opening. He came behind me and said: "If you think that you can run away from this house, you are definitely wrong! None of those curious people that came and broke into my house will ever come out! I simply kill all those who try to break into my house and invade my private and secret life!" I came into desperationr. There was nothing that could be done, unless wait for my silent and slow death in that horrifying house which I came in just because of curiosity. As my mom used to say: "Some people may die due to curiosity!"
Y8 CLASS D - GROUP I
STORY 6
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I MISSED HIM On November 21st, a man was coming back home to his son's 11th birthday, when he heard a loud noise and felt a large bang on the back of his car. He didn't even have time to think about that! He soon fainted! When he woke up, he heard a loud noise. When he looked up, he saw a man pulling out his car door and catching him. But he was hurt and could not do anything about it .The only thing that he said was: "Please, do not do this! It is my son's birthday". But the man ignored him. The father begged once more:"Let me go away. It is my son´s birthday, please!" The mysterious man didn't say a word. Everything he did was driving the car silently and slowly. The boy´s father was in full pain. He didn't know what was going to happen to him, but a few minutes later, the car crashed into something and went down a hill. The car was unstoppable. At the end of the hill, the boy's father realized that the car had finally stopped and that the mysterious man had died. The father left the car and saw that his kidnapper was someone familiar to him, He was having some kind of Déjà-vu. That mysterious man looked like his brother! When they were kids, his little brother was also kidnapped and they had never found him again. Could the kidnapper be his own brother or was he just having some illusions? OMG! Anyway, the father took the kidnapper's corpse to the hospital. They took him inside and he had to go to the police station in order to explain about what had happened. He explained everything. "Who is he?", they asked him. He was going to say about how he looked like his brother, but suddenly, a woman came in cheerfully saying that there was an important call for him. The father ran to answer the phone! It was his brother on the phone! He was really excited because he had found out that his brother was alive and that his kidnapper was finally dead. They could realize that their kidnapper was the same person! Everything was okay at the end. That terrible nightmare was over!
Y8 CLASS D - GROUP I
STORY 7
THE HAUNTING CAVE Our story starts in Ecuador many years
one knew why that had happened.
ago when the government was
They thought that it could have been
building a railway through the whole
a ghost, an Inca spirit that had been
country. The construction was going
haunting that place. It was a mystery.
well until they reached one of the many mountains there. Up to that
They kept on building the railway
point of the railway, everything was
even without knowing what had killed
fine. But suddenly 5 men died and no
those men. A few days later, another
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man died on that mountain. No one
door, he turned to his dad and said:
else had the courage to continue
"Never open this door!"
building the railway, because all of them were too scared to do so. The
No more words and the kid disappeared
president ordered to call an exorcist
in the darkness. So the father followed
to send the ghost away from those
the son and opened the door. In that
people and from that mountain. The
moment, the devil appeared and the man
workers got some strength as well as
was killed.
trust and continued building it. But what they couldn't imagine was that it
The two men, who stayed out of the cave,
wasn't a ghost or an Inca spirit. It was
started to search for the cameraman.
the Devil himself that was killing  those
Another child appeared in front of the
man.
cave. The two men grabbed their cameras and went inside the cave to
The devil didn't want that people
follow the child. The kid told the two men
mixed up with him and so he killed
not to go beyond the door. The people
more 10 workers. They stopped
just waited in front of the door and
building the railway for the next 10
decided to leave their camera. But they
years and no one had the courage to
couldn´t find the exit anymore. When the
go there until one day when a group
two men turned around, they saw the
of reporters went into the place to
devil in front of the mysterious door. They
film the supposed haunted railway.
started running, but the devil appeared
They were famous for going into the
every where they went. In the end, they
haunted railway and filming the ghost.
were never seen again.
That time was different. It was a common cloudy day when they were
20 years later:
setting up the cameras. Suddenly, the things started going wrong. When the
An expedition went to the cave to search
cameraman was looking at the cave,
for gold, but the only thing they found
which stayed at one of the sides of
was the camera of the two men who had
the railway, he saw a shadow coming
died. The expedition went to the lab.
from the darkness of the cave. He
There they could download the video of
could not believe in his eyes. It was his
the camera and notice that the devil
dead son, Edward. So he started
really exists!
following him to go inside the cave, where the son was walking around. Then Edward stopped in front of aÂ