COLLABORATIVE WRITING
Y8 CLASS A
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A Strange Girl At a normal night, lady Helena was getting ready to sleep when, suddenly, she heard a very loud sound of steps coming from the stairs. Someone was knocking on the door, so she opened to see who was there. Everything was silent and calm. No one was there, so Helena came out to look better in the front yard, when suddenly something came out of the bush, something very big and scary, but she wasn't able to see the creature because she ran back to the house and locked herself into her bedroom. In the morning, the sounds in the garden continued for
a long time, but suddenly it stopped. She came out to check things out, but unexpectedly the thing came out of the bush again and ripped a piece of her face. She woke up very worried in a hospital room with a nurse taking care of her. "Where am I?", she asked the nurse. "Don't worry miss. I'l take care of you" "But I didn't understand what happened... it was a monster...'' "We are going to take care of it, don`t worry!" The next day, the girl left the hospital and went home with the nurse to show her the monster. When they got there, there was no monster. The nurse thought that Lady Helena was crazy and took her to an asylum. After a week in the asylum, the doctors decided to take her home. She stayed there for a couple of days and then she started listening to some loud noise again. She was terrified and, once again, she locked herself in her room. The next morning, she went back to the garden, because everyone was telling her that there was no monster. When she was there a scream was heard without any reasons. She ran away, when she saw where she was, she realized she was in an asylum. The doctor was saying she wasn't ready to go back home, but she couldn't accept that. Then the doctor made a
lobotomy on her. The girl was living like a vegetable, she could not remember anything, but all the days she saw a thing on her face by looking herself at the mirror. This girl was curious, no one knew what she had already seen, known and thought by that moment. Now she can't speak anymore. Maybe we will never know the strange case of Lady Helena, the girl that changed from a normal healthy condition to a crazy one overnight.
WEREWOLF PLAN A long time ago, there was a doctor called Dr. Burke. When I met him, I thought that he was an ordinary guy, but then I found out that he was making experiments in his own daughter. He was using his own daughter as a test subject. He wanted to invent the first werewolf in history. That guy was my neighbor and at night I could hear the screams of his child in the apartment. One day, I decided to come inside the house. Dr. Burke had left the place a couple minutes ago and he went to the pharmacy. As I walked around the house I saw the little girl in the living room. She looked very bad and I went to talk to her, but at this time, I heard the doctor by the door. I quickly hid myself inside the wardrobe. He had an angry face and that made me feel scared. I didn't know what to do. After a little while, he decided to start a new test on the girl with the medications he had bought. The medications were red and blue. One was hot and the other one was cold. He put the medications in the mouth of the child. Then her tongue fell off her mouth, petrified. She was too sad to talk and she could never talk again. I was scared and the Dr. Burke was sad, not because his daughter would never talk again, but because the experiment had failed. When they went to sleep, I could go home. I was feeling so sorry for the girl. I needed to help her, like now, she was only fifteen! After that day, the girl began wandering around the neighborhood. Then, I decided to start searching for her in the streets, because she was kind of confused. I spent all that night searching for her, just to discover I could meet her at home. I needed a plan to save her. So I disguised myself just like a friend of hers that wanted to help her and went to her house. When I entered, Dr. Burke greeted me and showed the room that she was in. She was completely drugged with a lot of syringes around her. I was in shock, How come someone could do this kind of thing with a teenager that is his own daughter? "Is she ok?, I asked her father. "Yes, she is always like this", said her father. It was a disgusting situation.I needed to help her. "Come on, get up! We need to take you out of here.", I said.
Suddenly the girl started crying. So we jumped out of the window, but her father listened to us and got really mad. We were running really fast, but her father took the medication and he transformed himself into a werewolf! She was in panic and started crying more and more loudly, but he transformed himself back into his human condition. He wasn't that fast, so a car ran over his body. The man was completely dead. A few months later, I adopted the girl. She has been very happy and pleased to have a home and a Family.
This boy is on fire One day, the Jobson family left the house and went to work, but their son stayed. He was 5 years old, so he stayed with the babysitter.The babysitter wasn`t really nice, she didn`t care about the little boy and she spent all the time on her phone. At about eleven o`clock, she went to the kitchen to cook strogonoff. She left the room but the chicken was still in the pan. After a while, she came back to the kitchen. In fact, she didn't care about the food at all. So she added a little bit of alcoholic beverage in the pan. In a couple of minutes the kitchen was on fire. The babysitter tried to pour some water into the pan, but it just made it worse. She got all burnt. At that time, the little boy could smell the smoke and went to the kitchen to check what was going on. When he got to the kitchen, he saw his babysitter dying. He laughed as he saw that scene, but the girl cried and screamed: "You're a bad child, I'll come back and take you away at midnight!". After she had said those scaring words to the boy, he stopped laughing immediately and started running. He claimed for his father, but he wasn't there. When he finally saw his room door, he became safe or, at least, he thought he was. When he got to the room, a firewoman was inside it! She was crying like a teenager, but the boy didn't believe in her false crying. She called him: "little boy" and she wanted him to go with her. Her hands were scarlet as blood, her eyes were black without any vivid life. She had become a fire devil. The boy took his teddy bear and went to the living room, because he thought that the babysitter was too sad to hurt him. But when he was sleeping he could feel some sparks. He got up and looked around, he saw a light in the hall. The babysitter was going to torture the boy. She had set up an electric wire gadget on his chest. The boy screamed, screamed, screamed, but nothing could be done, the scene of agony
made the woman feel happy. After the endless torture, she started laughing out loud and the boy could find a way out. He started running into the direction of the door, but she noticed it. Without much strength, she pushed him to another round, but this time, there were not sparks! It was time to heat up the place, FIRE! The babysitter started setting fire on the boy's flesh without any mercy. Suddenly he heard the neighbors knocking on the door.
"I will see what they want. You must stay right here, little fire boy.", she said and went floating onto the door. The fire was on the boy's t-shirt burning his skin. "My mother!!", I said. And I thought: "I was so scared that I shouted as loud as I could. Then my mother heard and came to help me while the babysitter ran away as fast as she could but the cops got her and suddenly I was safe and sound in a hospital bed with my mother beside me.�
A crazy dream The body was cold, without any vital signs. I thought that Miss Somelp was dead. I didn't know why, who, anything about it, but I knew she had been murdered. The death was violent, she had a hole on her head. I kept on wondering that if I helped her, what would happen to me? I didn't want go to jail again. Then, I just continued walking, but when I was on the corner, something attacked me. I didn't know where I was and there was no one there. Everything was dark and I didn't know what to do. Many questions came to my mind and I didn't have the
answers. I was confused too... there was a lot of stuff going on right at that moment. I started running. I didn't know where I was heading to, but I was trying to find an exit. Nothing was making sense, no entry, and no way out. Anyway, that was the right time to think things over. I decided to ask for help. A skeletal body with almost no flesh in the body rushed over me. I didn't know who it was, its facial expression was pure madness with a malicious touch. He quickly started talking about nonsense stuff, like animal sounds and vague phrases. He suddenly pulled out a knife and I started running away from him until I hit the wall and passed out. When I woke up, I was in a room with guns, knives, whips and other instruments someone would use to torture me. I started screaming, but nobody heard me. I was in panic. Suddenly, I saw a shadow. It seemed to be a woman, so I figured out it was Miss Somelp. I had asked for help and she just answered by ordering me to shut up and stop annoying her. After that, the shadow disappeared. I tried to stand up, but suddenly the woman was holding a knife and started cutting the skin of my head. The warm blood was running down my face. I was panicking and I didn't know what to do.
I didn't know how, but suddenly I heard the buzzers of an ambulance and then I fainted. Finally, I realized I was dreaming. When I woke up in my bedroom, it was just like a normal day. So I got up and looked at the mirror in my room and the scars were on my skull. But if it was only a dream, why were the scars on my head?
THE BROKEN BONE Today I will tell you the story of my life, or kind of, I really don't know well. The fact happened about 6 years ago when I had an accident that wasn't the most pleasant thing. The problem wasn't the accident itself, but the place I woke up after calling the 911. The bed was all messy and dirty, I wasn't certainly in a normal hospital. The ceiling was black, not a normal thing at all, the room was really, really dark and falling apart.
The "Doc"was really strange, using a mask with bloody eyes upon my body. I could feel trouble that was coming with him as he walked to the bed and said: "Welcome, my child!". His hands were touching my face carefully. I kept on asking where I was and the doc told me not to worry. Everybody would take care of me. Then, suddenly, I was hit by something that I don't remember and I fell asleep. After that, I woke up with a man taking me to a strange place, that nasty Hospital. When he opened the door, I saw a lot of people laughing and pointing at me by saying:"What is all this madness about?". The doc said they were only doing their job! After that, I started screaming. I hoped somebody could hear and help me. But nobody came. So I made up my mind: "I would wait until they got distracted so that I could run away." They started torturing me. That was a horrible image I would never forget. But I didn't lose my mind. That was good, because I needed to run away. After that, two strong men took me to a room with almost no light and started asking me some questions, like the following ones:
— How old are you? — Do you smoke? I was so afraid of having those questions answered. They slapped my face and asked me about my blood type. As I didn't know the answer for that question, I asked why he wanted to know about that. They simply told me to be quiet.
Those two men were holding knives and guns and they were pointing them at me. i was so creeped out that I fainted. But when I woke up, I was in another place with a guy that looked like a doctor but an evil doctor. They gave me anesthesia and I slept again. After all this story, I woke up in the same room as usual. After this accident, some of the nurses brought me here. here we have time to do everything. Every day we have some activity to do and at night we go to our rooms. Today, I found out that I am at a Mad House.
The last thought Jack Bill was a good Businessman. One day, he got himself in a car accident, so he went to the hospital. "Where am I?", he asked. "Don't worry, sir, you will be fine", said the nurse. After some exams and checking out, he took some time to rest. When he woke up,
the whole hospital was a mess. There were bloodstains on the walls, people screaming, dead people on the floor. Mr. Bill got in panic. He didn't know what to do. Suddenly, a nurse came in and told me: "Go back to sleep". "What happened to the hospital?", he asked. "Ă? told you to GO BACK TO SLEEP!!" The nurse pushed Jack onto the floor an injected a syringe into his arm. He passed out. When he woke up, the nurse was dead on the floor, headless, with a lot of blood next to him. Scared, Jack started walking to the corner when he saw an iron door with a lot of chains. At the door, something was written with blood: "DO NOT OPEN, DEAD PEOPLE". He ignored the warning and opened the door. The chains were loose. When he opened, he saw a small room with heads hanging from the roof. He shouted so loud that the whole city could hear him. Then, suddenly a person came out of nowhere, so he ran away from the man, hid himself behind some objects and waited until the person walked away. Jack slowly got up and started walking towards the room and at first he thought that it was a sculpture, but then he looked at it better and discovered that it was a skeleton with a face from another person. He ran again and just stopped in a place that was quiet. It was an alley and he was alone. Jack lied on the floor and stayed there for a
while, feeling hungry and thirsty. He went out the alley and walked down all the street. He reached the corner. The day had become night and he heard some people screaming. He was not afraid of the shouts. He went to a place where the sounds were coming. When he arrived there, he saw men and women vanishing away. Their bodies were getting gray with stains. He thought they were zombies! He was going out of the room when one of the zombies munched his leg, his eyes became red and his life went away. He started a life of agony.