Collaborative Writing - Y8 Class B

COLLABORATIVE WRITING

Y8 CLASS B

In England there was a little town called Smallville. In Smallville there were few houses, a school and the hospital. The last place mentioned was haunted, but nobody knew about it, so it kept on working.

One day, Dr.Smule went to the hospital to do his job. While working, he saw a pale woman wearing a white dress. Shocked, the doc ran away. He went straight to his mother's house which was closer than his own place. Smule told her the scary figure he had seen at the hospital. His mother thought he was going crazy and he went back home. While walking, the doctor saw the woman again, staring at him.

He stopped and tried to yell at her, but she was getting closer and he was creeped out.

Dr.Smule was a great observer and really starred at her. He realized she was an old patient. The doc had operated her and it didn't work out. Consequently, she died a few days after the surgery some years ago. He believed that the woman was there to haunt him.

Unfortunately, it was true.

The man shouted as loud as he could and ran away. Smule was very confused and he didn't know what to do. The doctor started running away to the dead patient's mother's house. When he got there, Wendy, the mother, wasn't at home. When he looked back his patient's soul was there, in front of him. He shouted again, but this time he didn't have time to run. The woman took out an out-of-nowhere knife and stabbed him in the chest, leaving his dead body for the old lady to find.

The living spirit Emilly went to visit her dead father at the cemetery. He had died recently in a fire in his office. He was a journalist and a reporter. Emilly loved visiting him there, but sadly, she saw his death and she would never forget that scene.

Indeed she was very lucky she had escaped

the flames.

When she arrived there, on the 5th of June, Emilly had gone to the cemetery in order to give him flowers. When, suddendly, she listened to someone. She thought it was a stranger, but she turned back and it was her father, looking at her with a weird smile.

Emilly shouted and ran to her house, saying to herself that she was going crazy, it couldn't be real. She called the police to investigate the case of her dead father. They thought she was crazy.

Five minutes later, someone knocked on her front door. Emilly was very frightened to open the door, but decided to do it. She opened and there he was, her father in front of her very eyes. Emily cried out and banged the door on his face. She started crying and running to her bedroom. When she opened the door, her father was in her bed and started calling her with a strange voice. She was terrified but she could walk towards him to talk to him. She realized that she didn't need to be scared of him.

After she didn´t feel shocked anymore, she was able to talk to her

father's spirit. He said sweet words about her getting over his death and how she should stop crying. Emilly cried more, but she was happy after all. Her father didn't have any other unsolved business in the living world.

At that moment, he could leave and rest in peace.

It was a cold and rainy night when Mila's parents decided to have dinner in a restaurant without Mila, because she had to study for the math test. Hours had gone by when, suddenly, Mila saw a white figure passing by in the hall. Immediately, she took her cellphone and called her parents. She told them that there was a ghost in their house, but her parents didn't believe and they said that she was going crazy. Mila started crying and after a few minutes, the lights went off. Her cellphone wasn't working anymore, not even the fridge, just the TV that was making an awful sound like scratches. She felt

something cold coming right after her. So ran away to the bathroom.

In the bathroom, the mirror was dirty with a bloodstain and the toilet was totally broken. The only light Mila had was the one which came from a candle. But the wind coming from the open window blew it up. She was really scared and continued to cry.

Suddenly, a mysterious figure appeared. It was white and had red glowing eyes. It disappeared and some strange noises started sounding out loud. Mila didn't know what to do. She had already tried to turn on her cellphone, to use the telephone of the house and the computer, but nothing happened.

Once again the white figure passed by her, letting a wicked scream go out. Mila

jumped and hushed to the door, running desperately through the hall. The ghost flew over her, screaming again. She ran and tried to open the front door and went out. But surprise! There was the bathroom again, just the way she had left it. Only, Mila noticed, the wooden door was closed.

She tried to get out of that place again, but she couldn't.

Every time that she opened any different door, the bathroom's door appeared again and again. But when she tried for the last time to open the front door, the ghost came up with a knife and hit her in her heart making her fall down and die.

ALEXANDER? In a small town, called ChainVille, in the middle of nowhere, there was a chase with a bad reputation, because when people entered there, they never came back. One day, a group of college boys went there to film a scary documentary about the haunted house. After five hours in a van, they arrived there at 11:50 PM. Although the boys were very scared about it, they wanted to become famous.

The story told was that, every Friday, the ghost appeared at midnight and he captured the people inside the house, one by one.

In this sense, the teenagers entered the house and waited until midnight. It came and nothing happened. They waited more five minutes and then tried to leave the house, but the front door was locked. All of them jumped to the frightening conclusion that they were stuck in the haunted house. The oldest teenager tried to break the door down, but it was too tough to do it. To make

things worse as well as scarier, they started hearing some noises around the house. They started running in circles. Then a mysterious hand appeared and took one of the 6 people. The guy that was caught was called Alexander. Everybody was in pain and they started crying and praying.

The teenagers heard a noise coming from the wall. When they turned, it was written on the wall in blood: "Welcome to hell, Alexander"! You will be the next victim". They started being desperate. Some started crying and others were trying to open up the door, but it seemed like it was impossible.

The teenagers were trying to open the door, when the lights turned off. And the teenagers heard a shout and then they fainted. When they woke up, they didn't see Alexander, but the door was open and they decided to call the police.

The police arrived and asked them: "What happened?"

But they didn't get to say anything because they were very scared. They had been so shocked that they were speechless.

Mr. Washington' s soul On September 11th, 2001 the twin towers fell due to a terrorist attack.

Many people died, including Mr.Washington. He was a journalist and burned to death. The journalist was a terrible person. He didn't have anyone. His family had abandoned him when he was a teenager. He didn't have any friends and he also was terrible at his job. His wish was to share his

horror with everybody. So after his death, he became a ghost.

One year later, his spirit haunted the memorial that was built, scaring every pedestrian that came by. In the graveyard, at his stone, all the flowers, which were placed only by convenience, dried out and the animals didn't get too close. The teenagers, who seemed to adore spending the night at the cemetery, went to his graveyard and left a flower there. But when their hands where close to his graveyard, suddenly, Mr. Washington's hand appeared and held one of the teenager's hand. The teenagers

became very scared.

After a month, the teenagers went back to the cemetery, but they had already been scared. Once again they heard voices and a scream of pain.

So they smelt somethig like burned meat. After, they ran away and sheltered themselves under a stone. They saw a soul going into Heaven.

Some years later, they got to know the note that said: "The soul of Mr. Washington went to heaven, because he had spent his full life in this living world."

SORROW It was raining heavily in the surroundings of London. Loud sirens filled the air with a frightening atmosphere and the loud thunders were not helping at all. Three police cars drove very quickly on the wet cobblestones. Not far away, an old wooden orphanage had caught on fire with all the children inside. It was an odd climate to have some fire.

So two detectives were sent by the Scotland Yard to investigate the case.

In the local, a chase had burnt with high flames and only two children were out in the garden.

"What happened to the other kids and the mistress?", asked Charles Lighwood, one of the detectives.

"They are all trapped inside," anwsered the fireman. "And we're not able to save them."

The soul of the children were trapped inside the orphanage, but their bodies weren't.

When the firefighters came to save the victims, they got in the orphanage, hearing loud noises.They sounded like children crying. They felt very frightened, but they continued the service. When they heard them again, the firefighters stopped. A few of them ran away, but the ones who had stayed there, saw a black figure, rising up behind them. But when they turned, there was nothing. They came back, like 180 degrees, and the black figure appeared in front of them. It had a baby face.

After they saw the black figure all the lanterns turned off, all the people got very scared, because it wasn't normal for the lanterns to turn off suddenly. So after ten minutes, the police came and the children's parents were crying and the mysterious figure appeared again and took the only kid that remained there.

Years went by and the police couldn't find the kid. Their lives were never the same again.

A MYSTERIOUS MURDERER In a small town, there was a murderer. He assassinated a famous person, who lived in the city. That story had already frightened a lot of people in the place and drawn the attention of the detective of the city. He started searching for clues, but he couldn't find anything. So, one day, he received a call from his brother saying that their mother had been killed. Then, when he stopped crying, he

realized that could be the murderer that had killed the famous person, just in order to prevent his search against the criminal.

It was late at night and he was coming back home. When he was sleeping, he

began listening to steps in his room and he got very scared. The lights turned

off and turned on. He went to see what was happening there, but there was nobody. So he got the most important things for him and ran away. He never came back to that city again, but the murderer followed him up to the other city.

One day, the detective was watching TV in the living room when the phone

rang. He answered the phone and a strange voice told him to leave the case or he would kill him. He got really scared and called his brother and told him that maybe they were in danger and he needed to be careful, because the murderer would come back to kill them.The detective got in touch with the police and he asked for some protection, but the police couldn't do it, because there was no evidence that someone was threatening him. The detective went back home and got his gun ready just in case anyone got in his home at night. It was 11 PM when he listened to someone entering the house. He started shooting the gun and the man was dead on the floor. The man looked like his brother.

Then he noticed that the murderer was his brother and he had killed him.

After that, he realized that he couldn't live with this blame on him, so he pointed the gun against his head and shot it.