COLLABORATIVE WRITING
Y8 CLASS D
Once upon a time, a couple who lived in a house far, far away, had a little boy named Joey. Not many years later, the marriage went wrong and the boy's parents got divorced. His mum got crazy and his father married another woman with whom he had five daughters. In his new family nobody liked Joey. He was the bastard of the family. One day, for motives that nobody knows, the house got on fire in the middle of the night. The parents saved all the girls and left Joey to die. Then the spirit of Joey wanted to have a revenge. After a while, the family bought a new house. Nobody gave attention to Joey's death. Joey was very upset, so he decided to haunt the new house. Joey started doing some frightening tricks. The family became very frightened. They didn't know what was going on. This was very weird! They started thinking that could only related to ghost's things. So Joey's father remembered his son and he and his family became more frightened. The
father became disappointed with his son. He had never imagined that his own son would do something like that with anyone, especially, with his own family. The father of the family could not live with himself by getting to know what his son had become. He was disappointed, angry and sad at the same time and because of that he started being more impatient with the rest of the family, he started treating them with violence and he wasn't polite with them. One fateful night, before dinner, the man exploded. He could not tolerate the rest of the family and himself anymore. He went crazy and, in
some few minutes, he killed the rest of the family and finally himself. It was a tragedy that shocked everyone. That was really shocking. They all became spirits and started haunting the house. As a family, they had always been in bad mood, competitive with each other and always trying to be the first one at everything. But one day another family came to live in the house and they fought with each other to decide who would be the first one to haunt the new family. They soon realized that it would not matter how much they fought. They would still be a family.
A family was moving to Texas from New York by car. There was a mother, called Mary, a father, named John, and two children called Johnny and Lexie. It was a long journey. After six hours on the road, a storm began and the car hit a tree. The front part of the car was completely destroyed. Unfortunately, both of the parents died and the children were left alone in the woods. As time passed by, the weather was getting colder and colder, the skies were getting darker, and there was no place for them to go. They were frightened, because there were wolves in the forest and the howls were getting louder, which meant they were getting closer to the kids. There was no escape for them, so they started running away. But there was a problem: they didn't have a place to go, so they ran for their lives. They decided to go to the road to find someone, but they couldn`t. It was dark at night and it wasn`t a
busy road. So they were completely lost in a very scary and dark forest. They tried to set some fire, but it was raining, so they couldn`t do it. They could hear the howls getting closer. They ran away again. Both of them were exhausted. They had run the wrong side and they had found the wolves. One of the wolves tried to bit Lexy, but instead, Lexy became angry with red eyes and bit the wolf. Then both wolves ran away to escape from Lexy. Johnny got impressed, but got a little afraid of all that too. The brothers kept on walking and they stopped under a tree to sleep. Suddenly, Lexie, with red eyes, bit his brother in the neck. Johnny tried to escape, but he stumbled and beat his head onto a rock and died. Lexie, when recovered, felt bad for her brother, but she had to eat him not to die of hunger. So she got out of the wood and saw a car. The woman, who was in the car, adopted her. Nowadays, she has got red eyes sometimes.
THE BELIEBER FIRE It was a cold winter night in Manchester, when suddenly Emily woke up because of the noise she heard coming from the basement. She went there to check what was going on. There wasn't anything in the basement. But as soon as she calmed herself down, she heard a scream coming from her mother's room. It was Emily's mom, Abigail, she was divorced and lived with her daughter. She was crying for help and the only person that could save her was her own daughter. So Emily rushed to the room to help her
mother. As she was making her way upstairs, she realized that something was burning. The smell was terrible. The fire was upstairs. There was no way out for Emily to help her mother without killing herself. She was completely scared of that situation. So she went to the kitchen and got a bucket of water to put out the fire, but it didn`t work out. She ran to the front door of the house in order to call the neighbors as she tried to reach them and scream for help, but it was too late. The fire had reached the gas tank. When she turned back to the house with hope a loud BANG came out. The house had exploded. Wood, glass, concrete and iron flew all over the
place. She was hit by the shock wave and fell down fainting on the floor. When Emily woke up, the fireman had already arrived. She was on the floor and by her side there was blood, a leg, a hand and her mother's necklace. She started crying. Then she heard her mother's voice. She thought she was crazy, but she followed the voice that came from inside the house. The firefighter tried to stop Emily, but he couldn`t make it and she entered the house that was still burning and saw her mother that was singing ''baby'' from Justin Bieber. She was a belieber. Her mother had a match in her right hand and an empty bottle of gasoline in the other. She
was the one who had started the fire, but why? Suddenly her mother started screaming very loudly. Her eyes looked bigger and her face was totally burned. Emily closed her eyes. It was too much. Her mom was crazy and set fire to their own house! But she thought: "I have to face this". She opened her eyes, but she couldn`t see her mother. Then she noticed that there was something in her hands. She felt something on her back and passed out. She woke up in a mad house room. On the wall, there was a picture of her dead mother in a newspaper and her necklace.
A BIG HEAD BABY I was on my farm and it was 5 AM. I was sleeping in my room and suddenly I woke up. I went to my bathroom to take a shower, because I thought it was later. After the shower, I was very tired because it was a cold winter Monday and I was on vacation. Later, I went to my closet to get my blanket when I saw a child crying inside the closet. I got surprised. I didn`t know her so I tried to talk to
her but suddenly she looked at me. She was not normal. She had sharp long teeth and bright evil eyes. I did not have time to look at her very well, because she could turn to me really fast. She jumped onto my head and suddenly I did not have my head anymore. Soon when I woke up, my head was sweating. I was afraid of my dream. I got out of my bed and walked slowly to the closet. I couldn't resist. I had to open it and I saw a letter. I read the letter and it said to go to cemetery. Then I went there.
When I arrived there, I heard someone laughing. I got closer to the sound. It was a baby with a giant head. He was torturing a cat with his giant head while he was laughing. Then the cat shouted: ''Help me, my name is Boris and this giant head baby is torturing me!''. I saw the scene and got really scared and I decided that I should scream for help. I screamed, but I had no voice. It didn`t come out. The baby looked at me and said with a scary kind of voice: "Come on and play with me". I looked at his eyes and I saw death. I was so scared! My body was shaking. I ran away and the baby started screaming. I looked back and I saw the baby's head grow bigger, bigger and bigger.
I was arriving on my farm when I saw an explosion coming from the cemetery. I came back to see what happened and the baby`s head had exploded. The years went by and I had a child. He wasn't popular at school and he did not have any friends either. One day I noticed that his head was growing bigger...
An Organ Cake! I can't remember that much. My head still hurts... I remember that I was driving to Quebec to visit my family when suddenly I was here in the forest. My car was stuck between a tree and a rock. I saw blood on my seat. I tried to move the car out and I could do it. I had a big cut in the arm. The pain came a second later. It was terrible. Inside the car it was freezing. I had to get out of
the vehicle or I was going to die. Slowly I got my coat and moved out of the car. And then I saw it. A great big shadow in the form of a man. He took me on his shoulder and then I lost my awareness again. When I woke up, I was handcuffed in a bathtub full of blood and I saw that there was a cut in my belly. I didn't have time to realize that someone had stolen my organ. I saw the shadow of the same man holding a knife. My heart was beating fast. And I tried to escape, but I couldn`t because I felt so much pain. Then I finally got up. I walked to the door and I saw the man. He was cutting an organ cake and his mouth was full of blood. Oh wait! It wasn't an organ cake. It was an apple cake. It just looked like organs. The strange man looked at me and smiled. It was a really weird smile and we kept facing each other for about 30 seconds. After that, the man asked if I wanted some cake. I decided to join him on his meal. During the meal, he told me that he had taken out my organ because it was damaged in the accident and it was bleeding a lot. So I told him that I felt scared at the begining but then I started having good feelings for him, who was called Jake Kong Soon.
The meal finished and he offered a room for me, so I could get better. As the days went by and I didn't want to find my family, I started living with him and we got married. We had two kids but one day I remembered everything that I had lived before the accident. I started crying and I did not know what to do. But I knew that it was useless for me to go after my family, because it would be very hard to find them and I have a new family now.
Peanut butter bread
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away, a woman named Dane was in her house passing peanut butter in some slices of bread for her children by using a long knife. It was a beautiful Sunday morning and Dane's husband was in the supermarket buying orange juice and bacon for the breakfast. But Dane wasn`t good at the art of passing peanut butter in some bread. Suddenly, the knife slipped of her hands and hit Dane's face by hurting herserf. She shouted and her youngest son came to see what had happened. He tried to take the knife off his mother's face, but accidentlly the knife penetrated HIS FACE. The knife was stronger and ended up killing the youngest son and later Dane herself. John (the oldest brother) heard all the screaming and ran for the kitchen. Then he saw something really weird, his mother and his brother dead on the floor and a knife with blood and peanut butter. He was so sad that he decided to kill himself . About 20 minutes later, Dane's husband arrived and he saw the worst thing ever: all his family dead on the floor and a butter knife floating on the blood around. Suddenly Dane's husband picked up the knife and slipped on the blood and accidentally stabbed his own head. When all the family died, they were so mad because of the butter knife that they became ghosts and started haunting the family who ate peanut butter. The families didn't understand anything what was going on. Everyone in the city was very upset and feeling alone, because all their families and friends had died, Just a few people were left. The city had no life anymore. The few people lasting decided to kill themselves, because their life had no sense anymore. They didn't have any friends or family. The city was completely empty, but the graveyard was full. It became the only place that continued to have the people that lived there. At a fateful night, when the skies were showing us a full moon, the citizens came to life again, but not in their usual form. They came back as zombies to terrify those who dared to pass in the city again. That lasted for about 15 years. It was horrible. The area was completely dominated. Until the moment one group decided to end it once and for all. They were courageous enough to go up against the zombies. And at that night they fought with everything they had. It took them blood and sweat, but finally after 6 long hours of battle, they managed to end the city's curse and they killed all of the zombies and brought the city back to its glorious days once again. Even though nowadays there is no curse and there are no ghosts or zombies, the city is looked on as a dangerous place that no man should cross.
George, who was Brazilian, on his vacation week, went to Rome by train with some friends. While he was sleeping, the train crashed into a tree which
had fallen in the last night storm. The accident caused fire that killed many people, but George was saved by his friend Louis. They were the only ones that survived and the fire was so big that they had to run far away from the train. When they realized they were lost in tge middle of the woods. After walking for a while, they found a hut. Then George and Louis decided to spend the night there. When they opened the door, it made a very uncomfortable noise. They were afraid, but it was their only chance to survive. After that, they got inside the hut and suddenly the door closed
behind them. They saw smoke coming out of a room. When they entered it, Louis was attacked by a creature. George got scared and ran away, but the thing followed him. When he looked back, he saw a possessed child. When he noticed, the child went after him in order to attack. So George realized that his only choice was to run away. George was faster than him and that helped him get to out of the forest
safely. But when he looked back, he saw another possessed child. Then he did not get to escape. So the children got him and then he became a new member of the gang.