COLLABORATIVE WRITING
Y8 CLASS E
The Gundesters were a happy and rich family and they lived in Los Angeles. The father's name was Lincoln. His wife's name was VerĂ´nica. They had two kids, the oldest one was Mike and the youngest's name was Jake. One day, Mike and Jake were coming back from school when they saw the street blocked with firemen. Their house was on fire. They ran to the house. When they got there, they received the terrible news that their parents were dead. Now the only family that they have is their grandmother, Lucia, who lives on the richest block of the city. They really don't like her. They thought she was scary and always was in a bad mood. However, they didn't have any other choice, but live there. Their parents' bodies had turned into ash. So the funeral had no body to bury. It started two hours after the fire. During the funeral, they heard two voices: a woman's and a man's. They also saw some figures, all of them behind a bush.Were they the ghosts of their parents observing them? Suddenly, they heard something like a shot noise. When they looked at their grandmother, she was on the ground with a bullet on her chest. Somebody called the ambulance but it was too late, she had already died. The two boys didn't cry. They were just frustrated because they had had 3 losses on that day. The worst day of their lives. They didn't know what to think. They were too sad. So when the people, who were leading them to the orphanage, the voices spoke with them.
At night, in the orphanage, the two kids woke up with a touch. When they woke up, it was the spirits of their parents. The two spirits invited the kids to go with them, so the two thought that they needed to die to meet their parents. In the orphanage, there was a room where they went to every time to eat. When they went there, the two ran in the direction of two guards and took theirs knives. They killed themselves. Some hours later, the family was complete.
The girl of white cover There was a park in a dark and abandoned place. No one knew why there was a park so far from city. When the park was found, all the city went there. But the enthusiasm was over fast after a teenager fell into a small lake and drowned. Some time later, eight visitors saw a teenager floating in the lake. At the same time, people could see a white version of the same girl with a knife behind all the visitors, It was a chaos. Everybody stopped visiting the park, but not the honored family Smith. They were still going there every Sunday and Thursday to get away from the city and rest. The park was almost belonged to that family because they went there to clean the place for them to use and to feed the birds that lived in there. One day, when the family went to the park, they saw the same girl that
had murdered the visitors. She killed them. By knowing that, the government closed the park and prohibited the people to go there. One year passed by and a group of teenagers went there to camp. They knew about the girl, but they didn't care. There were about five people in the group. They went to the park to have some fun there. Emily and Karenwere were walking along the track when they heard some steps, the spirit was running into their direction and appeared with a knife. The girls shouted to the rest of the group, but it was too late to help and the girls died.
After their death, the spirit disappeared and the rest of the group was very scared. So Gus, one of the boys, had an idea to kill the spirit. He found a religious cross and he called the girl. When she appeared, he started praying. Little by little, the spirit started dying. After some moment, the girl died and the rest of the teenagers ran away from the park and never came back anymore.
When I was younger, my mother used to tell me a story before I went to bed. I'm going to tell you the same story. “Once upon a time, a little girl, who was 10 years old, was walking to her school. She had blue eyes, blond hair and a pretty face. She lived in the woods so the way to school was a bit long. The little girl was called Ammy. She loved every kind of animals, but she was really into birds. She lived with her grandmother because her parents had been killed by some wolves in the woods. She really enjoyed her life. Every day she went to school very happily and came back in the afternoon. But one day everything changed. While she was going back home, she saw a bird, such a beautiful one. She started following him. The time passed by and she realized that she was lost. The night came and she was very scared. The birds disappeared and she was alone in the heart of the wood. She started walking to try to find the way back to her house. But at the same time that she was trying to find the way she was getting more and more lost. Suddenly, she started thinking about her grandma, because
she was probably worried. Later, she was very tired, so she found a tree where she slept the rest of the night. It was like five in the morning, when Ammy immediately woke up, because she heard a howl. But Ammy looked around and she didn't see anything, so she didn't care. A few minutes later, she was very hungry, so she went down the trees to find some food. As she walked, she heard more howls and she got scared. She started running. As she ran, the howls seemed to get closer and closer. Suddenly, she saw a big shadow. The shadow jumped in front of her and she realized that it was an enormous black wolf. The girl stopped, she couldn't move. She got eaten by the wolf just like her parents." I never believed in this story until one day when I was walking in the woods and heard howls. At that time, I didn't care. All of a sudden, I saw a huge shadow approaching. It was the last thing I saw. Oh, by the way I'm a ghost.
It was midnight and the old big house was burning on fire. The family inside was still sleeping when the father noticed the fire. He didn't have time to think, so he just called his family and ran out of the house. When the family was safe outside the house, the little girl went back to the house looking for her doll. But when she reached her room, the house fell down. After 500 years, a rich family built another house in the same place. In this family, there were four people: Jack, the father, Jessica, the mother, Jerson, the little son and Jennifer, the sister of his. The house was beautiful. Jerson and Jennifer needed to share one of the rooms and so did Jack and Jessica. Everybody was happy with the house until the moment something very strange appeared on the wall. It was something like a body painted with blood. Jerson was very scared. He ran and hugged Jessica, but she was scared as well. The family decided to sleep and wait for the next day to solve the problem. In the middle of the night, Jack woke up by hearing some strange noises. He was walking through the hall, trying to discover what was causing those noises, when he saw a girl's shadow. She was walking with a doll that looked really old. She started running into his direction, so Jack got scared and ran back to his room. When he arrived at the room, the girl wasn't there any longer. He locked the door and he couldn't sleep for the rest of the night. Next day, the kids went to school and Jessica went to work. Jack was too shocked about the night's incident. Then he decided to stay at home and get rid of that body shaped out of a bloodstain. He went to the basement and examined the stain. It looked like a little girl's body and it seemed to hold something. The father tried to wash it away but nothing worked out. It was like a shadow. Jack was getting more and more scared. He was leaving the basement to get stronger cleaning products, when the door suddenly closed and the lights turned off. Then the door banged and he knew that he was locked up in the basement. The lights started flashing and it was smelling gas. One of the neighbors noticed there was something strange going on at the house and called the police. When the police arrived, the kids were coming back home from school. At this moment, there was a man smoking in the middle of the street. When the man dropped the cigarette butt on the ground, the house exploded. Everyone died except for the little girl. The house was on fire, but Jennifer entered the house anyway to find her doll. When she was in the middle of the house, she found her father. She simply laid down beside him and died.
D R I N K C A R E F U L LY It was Friday night and my wife and I were having fun at a party. The party was very exciting and everybody was dancing and drinking a lot. In the middle of the party, I started getting drunk. Suddenly, my stomach started hurting and I felt very sick with dizziness. Immediately, I was bleeding. Everybody at the party was looking at me. So my wife called the ambulance and a few moments later I was at the hospital in coma. I went under a surgery. My wife told me that it was a very dangerous surgery. The doctors had taken a part of my stomach, because, according to the doctor, it seemed to be burnt by acid. She also told me that the doctor asked me to do some exams because
there could be something wrong in my body. At that moment, a nurse came in and took me to do the exams. About one hour later, I was back at my room and the doctor was observing the exams' results. After what seemed an eternity, he entered the room and said: "Mr. Acherst, I saw your exams and I noticed that there is acid in your stomach. If it gets to your blood vessels and, consequently, to your heart you might die. I'm sorry, but there's nothing we can do for you." "How many days do I have?", I asked crying.
"I'm so sorry but I really don't know, you can have two hours or two years. It depends on how the acid will reacts in your body." I went home really scared. I didn't know what to do. The only thing I could think of was to have fun and enjoy the rest of my life. So I went to my neighbor's party. I knew that I shouldn't drink anything or dance too much, but I couldn't avoid it. I got really drunk and my stomach started hurting again. My head started hurting, the world started spinning around. I couldn't think about anything. I went crazy and passed out. After the party, I went to the street and started feeling really dizzy. Suddenly, a woman started talking to me and foresaw something really interesting for me concerning
my life. She was like a ghost! I didn't understand why she started helping me out, but I felt like everything was right. That woman never told me anything about her life, just about mine. Then I could die in peace, because she told me that I had done something really wrong and that I had to die for that. I would never know what I had done in the past, but I had an ideia. I had never been a nice child. My mom had killed my dog and I killed her. Maybe that was the problem, but I did something worse.
ENTERPRISE OWNERS' SERIAL KILLERS My name is Alice Bryce. I am British and one year ago I went through the most terrifying moments of my life. Back then, I was the owner of the Bryce Inc. and I didn't believe in the supernatural until the night of October 11th. That night changed all my beliefs. I am going to tell you what happened. That night I was in my office on the last floor of the enterprise's main building. It was late and I was alone. I knew that I should be going home, because it was my daughter's birthday, but I had work paper to read and I couldn't go home. I
decided to take a break, check the newspaper and call my husband. I got the newspaper and saw that a friend had been killed by a serial killer a week before. His funeral had been one day before I read the news. I was very scared and sad. He was my best friend. He was in another city on business. I started looking for other pieces of news and I saw that a lot of enterprises's owners, who were my partners too, were being killed. I was terrified. I could be the next victim. When I was leaving my room, I heard a very low voice behind me. So I ran away as fast as I could. When I got home, I stopped thinking about it so I could sleep. My husband woke me up because I was having a nightmare and I was screaming really loudly. Everything was so confusing. It looked so real, but I couldn't sleep anymore. Then I got up, went to the kitchen and had my breakfast. However, I couldn't stop thinking about my nightmare. I started looking for the day-before-newspaper. I started reading it, but on the last page, it was written that a lot of enterprises's owners were being killed. Exactly like the nightmare. Quickly I took my cell phone and called my best friend's house. The housekeeper answered the phone and told me my best friend, Fred, was dead.
Nobody knew how, but he was dead. I started crying a lot. I couldn't understand why someone could have killed him. He was the best person ever. He was my best friend. I was so sad that I couldn't hear the voice that was behind me. Then I sat down on the sofa and I felt a cold hand on my shoulder. I heard my daughter screaming and crying. When I arrived there, she was dead. I will never forget that night.
LIKE A NIGHTmomMARE I was walking on the street at midnight. I was coming back home after a party, when suddenly I saw something moving on the other side of the street. At the first moment I thought it was a ghost, but it was impossible. Ghosts aren't that real. They're just on our minds or in stories. After that, I continued walking home and forgot about it. The next day I went to my friend's house and I told him what I had seen. He
laughed at me. So I convinced him to go back there at midnight with me. At 11:55 PM, we went there. The night was cold and the street was completely empty. Nothing moved. I was upset, but when we were leaving I saw it again. I told him, but he didn't believe me, because he didn't see it what I saw. He was coming into my direction. I started running and heard his voice. It was a normal voice, but it wasn't a normal person or an object. It was a ghost, I think. I can't prove it was a ghost, because I was the only person that could see him. I am sure that it was a ghost. it wasn't just on my mind. But I couldn't tell anyone about this. Maybe I was crazy and they were going to start laughing at me. The next day, there was a ghost every place I looked at. Normal people started being ghosts to me. That didn't make any sense. I was so scared. The only way was killing myself so finally I could stop that thing. I didn't know another way out. I was coming back home from school. I was trying to avoid the street where I had seen the ghost. I don't know why but I started hearing some voice calling me. I started running the faster I could. But the voice was getting louder and louder. So I stopped and decided to follow it. I had to know what that was. When I arrived there, the voice that was calling me, was my mother's. She had died when I was just a little kid. And she was calling me to join her in hell. I was afraid but I said: "Mom, I love you and I miss you but I can't do this!" She said that I didn't have to do anything to die and that she would do it for me. I got so scared. My heart was beating really fast. So I ran away and when I got home again, I told my dad about it and he hugged me. After that day she stopped scaring me. I don't know if she still wants me to go to hell with her but up to now she hasn't done anything to try to kill me. She might have quit. Or is she still planning to take me to hell with her? I hope she has quit.
A cold feeling It was a normal day and Michael did everything he used to do. At first, he had a lonely dinner. After that, he brushed his teeth. Later, he took a shower and went to bed, Finally, he slept. In the middle of the night, he had a nightmare. The worst nightmare that he had ever had. Suddenly he woke up and saw the light of the hall was on. But he remembered when he turned off the lights before sleeping. Although he got up and turned the lights off again, when he came back to his room, the lights were on again. He thought this was really strange and scary. Immediately, all the lights of his house were on and he started hearing a really loud voice. It was a voice of a young girl asking for help. Then Michael put his hand on the plug. He was going to turn the light off. He didn't, but ten seconds later he felt a cold hand touching him. He ran away very fast and screamed very loudly. He was so scared that he went to a hotel to spend the night there. The next morning, he went home to see how the things were going on. It was very calm, without any problem. He took a shower, changed his clothes and went to his job. He was leaving home, but there were a lot of people blocking his way to the street. Suddenly, he heard that strange loud young voice, chasing him once more. So he started running away, but strangely he didn't bump against the crowd, He passed through them. He thought for a second they were ghosts. Finally, he felt the cold hand touching him on his shoulder once more. He didn't look back. He just closed his eyes and started running. When he opened his eyes again, he was at a dark place, maybe a forest or maybe near a lake. Suddenly, he was pushed for someone and he fell on the ground hurting himself very bad. Michael didn't have time to think, because when he turned there was a ghost. He last feeling was cold...