e-mails

Hi , Isa !

How are you ??

October is my first month at my new school.I' ve got a new friend , he is Thomas.He is 12 years old and he is in Year 1 with me.He's short , got curly , fair hair and brown eyes . He's short and fat too.He's from curly fair Canada ;a cold country with beautiful mountains and forests.He likes going ice hockey,sking,playing football and going on the Internet.He skiing surfing speaks two languages:English and French and now he's learning Spanish with me.

His birthay is ( the) next week and we are going to have a party . Ssshhhh !! birthday See you soon.

Love, Victor.

Hi Victor, Congratulations!! I like your e-mail a lot!!. I´m sure you won´t make these mistakes again

Spelling mistakes:

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Grammar mistakes: She loves Hi Carla, Your e-mail is good enough, but the way you present it is even better!!

Isabel

Hi Isa, I´m Carmen.

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Bye Isa, I love you =)!

Love Carmen

Hi Carmen, As I told you the other day, the e-mail was about your first days at your new school, but you wrote about your holidays; So you ´ll definitely lose marks. There are some spelling mistakes.

Isabel

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Bye Isabel.

Hi Francisco, Be careful with your grammar and spelling mistakes!!! Your e-mail doesn´t say much. Try to do it better next time.

Isabel

Hi Isabel, This is my first year at my new high school. I have a new friend. His name is Javi. He is in my class. He is twelve years old and her birthday is on the 30th of january. He lives in Vilanova. He His 30th of January is friendly, confident, talkative and very funny. He is small and thin. He has dark and short hair, small eyebrows and brown small eyes. He likes play football, talk with friends and make jokes. playing talking making Her favourites subjects are english and maths.

His English Good bye!

Iago.

Hi Iago, Your e-mail is good, but pay attention to possessives!!!!

Isabel

Hi,Laura How are you?

This is my second week at my new basket team and I've already got a friend. in Her name is Maria and she is from Canada . Maria is 13 yers old.,She is in my class.She is tall and thin .She is got straight dark hair and blue eyes . She is realy shy. She loves music and has really sport. She is also very funny. She is a very nice person.

See you soon. Kisses Noa.

Hi Noa, This is good, but remember that “she´s got” = she has got Isabel