Final Template Changes P 15-25
Page 15 Column 1, paragraph 4, line 9 there is an extra space between “50” and “%” Column 2, paragraph 3, line 9 the comma is misplaced in word “participants,” Move comma to after the “s” Page 16 All is fine Page 17 All is fine Page 18 All is fine Page 19 Column 1, paragraph 1, line 4 Capitalize the word “Internet” Page 20 Change Title of Article from “Wine 101” to “Secrets to Becoming a Wine Connoisseur” leave the subtitle in smaller type below it “Confessions of a wine imposter” Paragraph 1, Line 16. Reformat the punctuation on this line so it reads as follow….. Or an expensive wine from an average priced wine? Unfortunately, I think not.
Page 21 Paragraph 2, line 2, a period is missing after the number “1” and a space needs to be added after the period. Paragraph 2, line 4, there is an extra spacebetween the words “the” and “grapes” Paragraph 2, line 5, move the parenthesis up to line above after word “process” and move next line up Paragraph 3 line 7 there is an extra spacebetween the words “long,” and “all” Column 2 line 1 there is an extra spacebetween the words “alcohol.” and “Now” Page 22 Column 1, line 1 put a period after the word “hand” and capitalize the word “While” to start a new sentence. Column 1, Paragraph 4, line 5 there is an extra space after the word “fruity” and before the comma. Page 23 Ad page all is fine Page 24 All is fine (we will need to create a website page as noted in editor’s note. I have some fire resource information to place on the page….after we have this to printer we can discussthat.) Page 25 Ads All is fine