The Discovery of Royal Tombs Of Ur
By: Jack Kirkpatrick
A young boy named Roberto’s plane had landed in Saudi Arabia, for the big day, the Hajj! Roberto’s family and is best friend Carter also joined him on his journey! His sister name was Sarah, his mom’s name was Beverly, and his father’s name was Jack!
After he went home in Saudi Arabia he was making cuneiform! His grandmother loved looking at historical things! Roberto saw his friend Carter playing with a cool slot car set outside! He ran to go join him him while pulling his fastest car out of his pocket! 3, 2, 1, GO! They raced around the track!
Roberto realized the time and he sprinted as fast as light home to get the present! He took shortcut through the old village and desert. He was walking for about 20 minutes, until he felt he was standing on something weird and hollow.
He took another step and BOOM! The next thing he knows he’s in a tomb. Roberto looks around and see’s nothing but a path! No way of climbing out, and the only way to go is the path he see’s until he finds a way out.
Along his way he finds a hole in the wall with a lot of clay tablets with a weird writing them! “It might be cuneiform!” There was also jewelry, vases, and a lot of art and statues.
Ahead of this there was a room with more jewelry, vases, a lot of art and statues, and now cofins, traps and food! He feels that he has discovered something old and historical because he found cuneiform, cofins, and more things that look like they haven't been touched for thousands of years!
Maybe the Royal Tombs Of Ur! He was learning about that in class. He gets excited and starts to run and tell the world, he could be famous! He finally gets tired of running through a long path of wall and floor, comes to a halt, and sits on a big block!
He soon realizes it is a coffin, but this coffin has a real body in it! He starts to freak out! “OH MY GOSH, IS THIS A, DEAD MAN HOLDER THING” Roberto gets all scared and wishes he was at home, racing with Carter! Roberto also thinks to himself, “I’ll be even more late for grandmas!”
He walks out of the room that had the coffin and keeps walking down the narrow path! He walks into another room at a dead end! It has cuneiform and food all over it, everywhere!
Roberto whispered to myself, “I’m positive I just found something really historical and hasn’t been touched for thousands of years because I found cuneiform, unopened coffins, and a lot of unopened untouched things!”
Roberto keeps walking and soon finds out that he has nothing to eat or drink! He would soon get sick or die! He jogged out of that room and down the narrow hall again! Roberto was now getting worried that he wouldn’t get out!
Roberto was located here at the time he was worried!
There all the sudden popped up a way out! There was a staircase ladder thing ahead and he would be able to live and go to grandmas! He ran as fast as his fat legs could ran to way out!
Roberto was so excited to see the... driveway of his grandmothers 50 feet away? He hopped to his feet and rubbed the dust off of him! Then ran to his grandmother to tell her about everything!
Later that week after he flew home to Ocean Isle beach, North Carolina! When Roberto went to school he started learning about the Royal Tombs Of Ur, the place he discovered!
When the teacher Mr. Audi told the class, “Guys this tomb has never been discovered but we have evidence that it is around here, really close! “Um, excuse me, Roberto replied, but i fell into a tomb on my way to my to my grandmothers and I asked my parents to send archaeologists to see if it was the Royal Tombs Of Ur!” They came back and said it was and congratulations! Its on the news!
The Royal tombs of Ur have been discovered by a 11 year old kid! 60 Years later Roberto Hastings Sacramento famous with a lot of money, all because of what he found! The Royal Tombs Of Ur!
THE ROYAL TOMBS OF UR!