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Émilienne:ANovelofBelleEpoqueParis

Fromthebestsellingauthorof TheQueenofParis comesa glitteringnewnovelaboutyouth,beauty,andhavingthe couragetocarveyourownpathinaworldonthebrinkofwar.

PamelaBinningsEwen’snewestnovelrevealsthestoryof Émilienne,oncethemostbeautiful,sought-afterwomanin ParisduringtheBelleÉpoque,theeraofpeacefulyearsjust beforeWorldWarI.Asagirl,Émiliennefightsherway throughpovertyinMontmartre,drawntothelightsofParis below.Soon,shestarsattheFoliesBergère,mistressofkings andprinces,knownasthemostbeautifulwomaninEurope. But,happinessiselusive,andyouthandbeautyarefragile. Andwhereislove?AscloudsofwarbegindarkeningEurope, Émilienne’syoungfriend,CocoChanel,hasotherideasof howtosurviveinaman’sworld.Strongideas.Now,as Émiliennefightstosurvive,Coco’sstarrises.

“EwencreatesanaccurateandgorgeouspictureofBelle EpoqueParis…Readerswhoenjoylivelyrenderingsofthe past,combinedwithawell-pacedplotandtruehistorical characterswillthoroughlyenjoyEmilienne.” HistoricalNovel Society “Awell-researched,fascinating,albeittragicsaga,witha greatfeelfortimeandplace.” LibraryJournal.

FiveStarReaderReview-ABeautifulBookInsideandOut

“ReadthisjustdaysafterreturningfromatriptoParisandwas immediatelytransportedbacktothecityoflightsdazzlingwithin thepages,transportingthereadertoanhistoricaltimeperiod seldomwrittenaboutwithsuchgraceandpassion.Theauthor doesanamazingjobofengagingthereaderinEmilienne’sstory withbeautifulprose,dramaandromance.Andyes,asinevery greatstory,Emilienneisabrokengirlandnomatterhowyou judgehercharacter,youwon’tstopreadinguntilyouseehowit ends.IamafanofPamelaEwenandifyouhaven’treadher previousnovel“TheQueenofParis”whichintersectswith “Emilienne”,you’lldefinitelywantto.”

AfterpracticinglawformanyyearsinHouston,Texas,Pamela BinningsEwenexchangedherpartnershipinthelawfirmof BakerBotts,L.L.P.forwriting.ShelivesnearNewOrleans, Louisiana. TheQueenofParis,anovelonCocoChanel,received aStarredReviewfrom Publisher’sWeekly andwasrankedNo.1in HotNewSpringReleasesinhistoricalfictionbyAmazonKindle. Pamelaisalsotheauthorof TheMoonin

theMangoTree,awardedthe2012

EudoraWeltyMemorialAwardbythe NationalLeagueofAmericanPen Women,aswellasatrilogyofnovelson youngwomenlawyersinNewOrleansin the1970’s—including DancingonGlass, ChasingtheWind, and AnAccidental Life.Shealsoauthoredthe Secretofthe Shroud,andanon-fictionbook, Faithon Trial,bothnowinsecondeditions.

AllNight,AllDay:Life,Death&Angels

Thereissomethingmysticalaboutholdingthehand ofapersonwhois“crossingover.”Itcanbe heartbreaking,ofcourse,butalsoveryholyand beautiful.Someofthepiecesinthiscollectionshare theexperienceofpersonallosswhenalovedone dies.Oftenthepresenceofanangeloranother mysticalexperienceisshared.Butnotonlyin death—therearealsostorieshereofthewaythe mysticalworldinteractswithusindailylife.Andnot onlyangels,butalsomothers,fathers,sisters, grandfathers,friends,andevenahomelessmananda dog.

“Storiesthatevokeasenseofpeace,reassurance, andsafety,aswellasstrengthandencouragement throughreportedangelicactivities.Thesestoriestell ofunexpectedhumanityandloveinthelivesofthose whoneededaffirmationofspiritualityinthehuman world.Thepresenceofangelsisrecountedthrough brilliantanddescriptiveimageryandintriguingyet identifiablecharacterization.”

—FrancineRodriguez, award-winningauthorof AWoman’sStory

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FearlessFryeGaillard

MandyHaynes

Iambeyondexcitedtointroducethismonth’sfeatured author,historian,andactivist,FryeGaillard,toWELL READ’sreaders.Fryeisnotafraidtowriteabouthard topics,doesn’tshyfromthetruth,andshinesalighton peoplewhomakeadifference.Heisanaturalborn storyteller,giftedwithacuriousmindandanearfor stories.

Hisawardwinningtitlesinclude AHardRain:America inthe1960s,CradleofFreedom:Alabamaandthe MovementThatChangedAmerica,WatermelonWine:The SpiritofCountryMusic,TheDreamLongDeferred:The LandmarkStruggleforDesegregationinCharlotte,North Carolina, and GoSouthtoFreedom,anovelformiddle gradereaders.

Hismostrecentpublicationsinclude The SouthernizationofAmerica:AStoryofDemocracyinthe Balance, coauthoredwithPulitzerPrizewinnerCynthia

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Tucker;and LiveAsIf…ATeacher’sLoveStory,a remembranceofhislatewife,Dr.NancyGaillard.

Fryehaswrittenmorethanthirtybooksandhiswriting rangesacrossthegenresofhistory,memoir,journalism, andhistoricalstoriesforyoungreaders.He’swonThe LillianSmithBookAward,theF.ScottFitzgeraldMuseum LiteraryPrize,theNAACPLegalDefenseFund HumanitarianoftheYearAward,theAlabamaGovernor’s AwardfortheArts,theClarenceCasonAwardfor nonfiction,andtheEugeneCurrent-GarciaAwardfor literaryscholarship.Thefilmadaptationof InthePathof theStorms,forwhichheco-wrotethescript,wona regionalEmmy.

HehasservedaswriterinresidenceattheUniversityof SouthAlabama,QueensUniversityofCharlotte,andthe HonorsCollegeathistoricallyblackJohnsonC.Smith University.Hisbylinehasappearedin TheGuardian,The WashingtonPost,TheJournalofAmericanHistory,The BitterSoutherner,TheOxfordAmerican,Sojourners, Parade, andotherpublications.

Fryeistheformersoutherneditorat TheCharlotte Observer,andFryehasalsoco-writtentitlecutsonalbums recordedbyahalfdozenNashvilleartists,withtwoof thoserecordingsreachingthetoptenonfolkandcountry musiccharts.

Nowthatyou’vereadhisimpressivebio,let’sdigin!

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IreadthatwhenFryewasonahighschoolfieldtripin Birmingham,hewitnessedMartinLutherKingJr.’sarrest duringKing'sBirminghamcampaignagainstracial segregation.Iaskedifthateventwaswhatmadehimwant tobecomeawriter.

Fryeanswered,“SeeingDr.King'sarrestcertainly nudgedmedownthepathtowardwriting-and specifically,Ithink,nonfictionwriting.Becauseinthat moment,historysuddenlyhadaface,anditwastheface ofDr.King.Overtime,forme,historyandliterature becameconnectedbytheideaofSTORY,bya preoccupationwiththehumanconditionandwhatWilliam Faulknercalled,"thehumanheartinconflictwithitself."

Instoriesliketheunfoldingcivilrightsmovement,you couldseetheconflictwithinourcollectiveheart.Ittooka whilebeforeIhadwordsforallofthis.Butseeingthe arrestsetthedominoesinmotion.”

“Whatwasanearlyexperiencewhereyoulearnedthat languagehadpower?”Iasked.

“IalwayslovedtoreadandIhadsomefineteachersin highschoolwhohelpedmethinkaboutthepowerof words.Then,asastudentatVanderbilt,astreamofgreat speakerscamethroughcampus-peoplelikeDr.King, RobertKennedy,andotherswhoserhetoricandmoral visionstirredourheartsandminds.Iwasalsomovedby thepowerofsonglyrics-thewordsofBobDylan,or

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LeonardCohen,orJoniMitchell.Therewasalotof inspirationbackinthosedays,”Fryeanswered.

I’dreadofsomeofthegreatexperiencesFryehadwhile hewasenrolledatVanderbiltUniversityandaskedifhe wouldsharehisfavoritewithus.

Frye’sresponse,“MyfavoriteVanderbiltexperience wasprobablyintroducingRobertF.Kennedywhenhe cametospeakin1968.Igottorideinthecarwithhim fromtheairporttocampus-me,Kennedy,andthe astronaut,JohnGlenn,inthebackseat.Itfeltsorealand surrealallatonce.ButIwasforeverimpressedbythis presidentialcandidateandhisoffstagehumanity-his seriousnessaboutwhathebelieved.”

AfterFryegraduatedfromVanderbilt,hetookthejobas themanagingeditorforthe RaceRelationsReporter in Nashvilleintheearly70s.“Youweresoyoung!Isthere onestoryyou’dliketosharefromthattime?”Iasked.

“Iwasreallyluckytolandajobatthe RaceRelations Reporter,afoundation-funded,non-profitpublicationwith astaffoffinewriterslikeJohnEgerton,ormyfriend,Jack White,whowentontoworkfor TimeMagazine.I'mnot surewhytheyhiredme,except,Isuppose,thatIwaseager -andIcaredaboutthestorytheyweretryingtocover.

Afteracoupleofyears,therewassometurnoverduring atimeoffundinguncertainty,andIsortofbackedintoan editor'srole.Ididhavesomecareer-shapingexperiences.

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Atonetime,IwasassignedtocoverAmericanIndian issues,which,inthebeginningIknewnothingabout.I readabookcalled CusterDiedforYourSins:AnIndian Manifesto,writtenbyagreatNativeAmericanauthor namedVineDeloria,Jr.,whowasalso,Idiscovered,a reallyniceguy.Icalledhimup,toldhimaboutmynew assignmentandaskedifIwasbeingimpossibly presumptuoustoundertakeit."Notifyoulisten,"he replied.Itseemedlikeprettygoodadviceforawriter.”

Afterwritingsomanyarticles,essays,andwonderful storiesIwondered.“Ifyoucouldtellyouryoungerwriting selfanything,whatwoulditbe?”

Fryeresponded,“Iwouldsay,'Youngerself,don'ttryto writeinanybody'svoicebutyourown.Youwilljustsound silly.'IstillwincewhenIthinkaboutanearlystoryI wroteundertheinfluenceofTomWolfe.”

“Whatisthemostvaluablepieceofadviceyou’vebeen givenaboutwriting?”

“IrememberJoeCumming,theAtlantabureauchiefof Newsweek andawonderfulwordsmith,tellingmethere areonlytwowaystogetbetterasawriter:Youhaveto read,andyouhavetowrite.Bythat,hemeant,readthe workofreallygoodwritersandtrytothinkcriticallyabout whattheyaredoing,aboutwhyitworks.Andthen,just write;justpractice,untilfinallyyoudevelopavoiceof yourown.IalsoreadEudoraWelty's, OneWriter's

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Beginnings,inwhichshesaidgoodwritingwaslearning tosee,learningtohear,andfindingavoice.Orwordsto thateffect.Writingishard,oratleastitalwayshasbeen forme.Satisfying,buthard.Anditdoesn'tgeteasier becauseyourexpectationsareupwardlymobile.Orat leasttheyshouldbe.”

“Didyoueverhavetofighttogettotellastorytheway YOUwantedto?”

“Yes,IhavehadtofighttotellthestorythewayI wanted.Iamverystubbornaboutthis.I'malsoVERY carefulaboutwhoIasktoreadaworkinprogress.Yes, I'mlookingforhonestfeedback,butitneedstocomefrom somebodyItrust,somebodywhounderstandsthedelicacy andvulnerabilityoftheprocess.Iknowmanypeoplelove writinggroups.Iavoidthemliketheplague.Writing,for me,isanintenselysolitarything.OnceI'mfinished,once it'sthewayIthinkitneedstobe,thevulnerability subsides,andIcanletitgo.Peoplewhoreaditcan respondastheywish.Fairenough.Thoseresponsesare,in asense,acompletionofthecreativeprocess.”

Somanybookstochoosefrom,Ihadtoask,“What bookareyoumostproudof?”

“IthinktherearetwobooksI'mmostproudof.Thefirst is AHardRain:Americainthe1960s.It'sprobablygotten themostresponseandwidestdistributionofanythingI've done,anditwascertainlythemostambitious.Itweighsin

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atjustunder700pages,butIthink-hope-itsucceedsat tellingastoryandsustainingitfromstarttofinish.Tome, thatdecade-theoneinwhichIcameofage-unfolded likeastory,andIwantedtocaptureasenseofthat.The secondbookismuchmorepersonalandmuchmore obscure.It'scalled LiveAsIf...ATeacher'sLoveStory,and it'samemoiraboutmylatewife,NancyGaillard,who spentmuchofhercareerasateacherandprincipalinthe innercityschoolsofCharlotte,beforebecomingan AssistantProfessorattheUniversityofSouthAlabama. Sheearnedherdoctorateattheageof67fromthe UniversityofAlabama.Whileshewasthere,thefootball teamwontwonationalchampionships.Shewasalways happytotakecreditforthat,thoughsheadmitted,in fairness,thatshehadtosharesomeofitwithNickSaban. Shediedofleukemiathreeyearslater.Tellingherstory wasbothalaborofloveandanhonor.”

“Frye,whatareyouworkingonnow?”

“Well,Ihaveonenewbookthat'sbeenoutforacouple ofmonths,acollectionofinterviewswithauthors,coeditedwithawonderfulwriternamedPatToomay.Patand Ihadamentorandfriend,JohnSeigenthaler,whowasthe crusadingeditorofthe Tennessean newspaperin

Nashville.Formorethan40years,Johnhostedapublic televisionshowinwhichheinterviewedsuchwritersas

NikkiGiovanni,PatConroy,JonMeacham,DorisKearns

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Goodwin,AnnPatchett,andmanyothers.Morethan900 interviewsinall.PatandIpickedabouttwodozenof thoseconversationsforabookcalled, AWordonWords: TheBestofJohnSeigenthaler'sInterviews.It'sabookfull ofwisdomandwarmth.Seigenthalerwasasextraordinary ashissubjects.

Ihaveanotherbookwaitingforafinalverdictfroma publisher.Iprobablyshouldn'tjinxit.”

Fryehasmetandinterviewedsomanyinteresting peopleoverhiscareer,butifhehadthechanceto interviewsomeonetoday,whowoulditbe?

“Ohwow,ifIcouldinterviewanyone...Iusedtosayit wouldbeNelsonMandela,butheisnolongerwithus.I've interviewedDollyParton,LindaRonstadt,andEmmylou Harris,somaybenowitwouldbeBruceSpringsteenor JoniMitchell,orOdetta.Ilovegreatperformerswhoalso understandtheliteratureofmusic.”

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MandyHaynes istheauthoroftwoshortstorycollections, WalkingtheWrongWayHome,SharpasaSerpent'sToothEva andOtherStories,andanovella,Oliver.Sheisalsotheeditorof theanthology,WorkinProgressandco-editoroftheSouthern WritersReadingreunionanthology,TheBestoftheShortest,and contributingwriterforAmeliaIslanderMagazine,Amelia WeddingsandEditorinChiefofWELLREADMagazine.

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ForyearsthelegendaryJohnSeigenthalerhostedA WordonWordsonNashville'spublictelevisionstation, WNPT.Duringtheshow’sfour-decaderun(1972to 2013),heinterviewedsomeofthemostinterestingand mostimportantwritersofourtime.Thesein-depth exchangesrevealedmuchaboutthewriterswho appearedonhisshowandgaveaglimpseintotheir creativeprocesses.Seigenthalerwasadeeplyengaged readerandagenerousinterviewer,atruecraftsman. FryeGaillardandPatToomayhavecollectedand transcribedsomeoftheiconicinteractionsfromthe show.

Featuringinterviewswith:

ArnaBontemps•MarshallChapman•PatConroy• RodneyCrowell•JohnEgerton•JesseHillFord• CharlesFountain•WilliamPriceFox•KinkyFriedman

•FryeGaillard•NikkiGiovanni•DorisKearns

Goodwin•DavidHalberstam•WaylonJennings•John Lewis•DavidMaraniss•WilliamMarshall•Jon Meacham•AnnPatchett•AliceRandall•DoriSanders

•JohnSeigenthalerSr.•MartyStuart•PatToomay

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TheBestof JohnSeigenthaler'sInterviews

“AchildoftheSixtiesandoneoftheleading civil-rightsreportersofhisgeneration,Frye Gaillardhasgivenusarivetingtouralong whathecallsthefinelinebetweenhistoryand journalism.Asareporter,hehaswitnesseda greatdealandinterviewedmanyofthekey figuresofthedecadethatshapedAmerica’s futurewhilebreakingitsheart.Asascholar, hehasreadwidelyandthoughtdeeplyabout ournation’shaltingpursuitofjusticeand mercyforall.AHardRainisessentialreading foratimewhenanAmericanpresidenthas willfullyignoredthehard-earnedlessonsfrom ourpassagethroughthemosttumultuous decadeofsocialchangesincetheCivilWar.”-HowellRaines―formerexecutiveeditorof TheNewYorkTimes

AHardRain:Americainthe1960s, OurDecadeofHope,Possibility,and InnocenceLost

FryeGaillard

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WHATAREYOUREADING?

WHATAREYOUREADING?

WinnerofMadvillePublishing's 2021BlueMoonNovelAward. Selectedasa2022GreatGroup ReadbytheWomen'sNationalBook Association,anda2022Indie FictionPickbytheCommunityof LiteraryMagazinesandPresses.

Stillgrievinghiswife’searlydeath, DJtakesrefugeinhisyounger sister’shalf-finishedbasement, imaginingacomfortableandsolitary retreatinthesmallHudsonValleytownwheretheygrewup. Instead,hefindshimselfcaughtupinhertroublingdivorce, draftedascaregiverforhis11-year-oldniece,andunableto affordthestorageunitcrammedwithhundredsofvinyl recordsandeveryotherscrapofhisformerlife.DJgiftshis nieceamarbledglassegg,aporkpiehat,andoneofhis prizedguitars.Butwhat’saskedofhimisnottogivethe perfectobject—it’stogiveofhimself.

“Ifyou’veeversufferedaloss,ifyou’veeverhadtostart over,youwillfindkinshipandhopeandevenjoyin Provenance.Icannotrecallreadingadebutnovelimbued withsuchdepthofunderstandingandcompassionforits characters,oronethatbettercapturesthemessybusinessof living.SueMellwriteslikeadream.”

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-WILLALLISON, authorofthenovels WhatYouHaveLeft and LongDrive Home

RelativeConsequences

RELATIVECONSEQUENCES

tellsthestoryofaretiredteacher whoisonamissiontofindthetruth aboutherpastnomatterwhatthe cost.

JessyTateburiesherhusbandona chillydayinOctober2005.That's whenthenightmaresbeginagain;butthistime,the sceneryisclear,andthefearisreal.However,thepuzzle piecesinherheaddon'tmakesense.Thesevivid flashbacksreflectwhathermindhasforgotten—adrama starringachildhoodfriendandagiantbanyantree.The dreamstakeherbacktowhenstreetsweresafeatnight, whennearbybeachesremainedpristine,andwhenmost folksatetheirbreakfastatthelocaldiner.Itwasatimein historywhenlittletownskeptbigsecrets.

"RelativeConsequenceswasagreatread,andIwould recommendittootherslookingforastorythathighlights theflawedhumansweareandtheforgivenesswecangive

andreceive."
-AshleyHooker,ReaderViews
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“It’ssouthernfictionatitsverybest.”
ReaderReview

TheKeeperofHappy Endings by

Anenchantingnovelaboutfate, secondchances,andhope,lostand found,bytheAmazonCharts bestsellingauthorof TheLastofthe MoonGirls.

SolineRousseliswellschooledinthe businessofhappyendings.For generationsherfamilyhaskeptan exclusivebridalsaloninParis,where magicisworkedwithneedleand thread.It’ssaidthatthebridewho wearsaRousselgownisguaranteeda lifetimeofjoy.ButdevastatinglossesduringWorldWarII leaveSoline’sworldandheartinruinsandherfaithinlove shaken.Sheboxesuphermemories,stowingthemaway,along withherbrokendreams,determinedtoforget.

Decadeslater,whilecopingwithherowntragicloss,aspiring galleryownerRoryGrantleasesSoline’soldpropertyand discoversaboxcontaininglettersandavintageweddingdress, neverworn.WhenRoryreturnsthemementos,anunlikely friendshipdevelops,andeerieparallelsinRory’sandSoline’s livesbegintosurface.It’sclearthattheyweredestinedto meet—andthatRorymayholdthekeytorightingaforty-year wrongandopeningthedoortosharedhealingand,perhaps,a littlemagic.

"Thisintriguingnovelismagicallywoventogetherwithsorrow, surprises,andhappiness,justliketheweddinggownsof‘The DressWitch’.”

—HistoricalNovelSociety

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TheEchoofOldBooks:A Novelby BarbaraDavis

Anovelaboutthemagicallureofbooks andsummoningthecouragetorewrite ourstories.

Rare-bookdealerAshlynGreer’s affinityforbooksextendsbeyondthe intoxicatingscentofoldpaper,ink,and leather.Shecanfeeltheechoesofthe books’previousowners—anemotional fingerprintonlyshecanread.When Ashlyndiscoversapairofbeautifully boundvolumesthatappeartohave neverbeenpublished,hergiftquicklybecomesanobsession. Notonlyiseachinscribedwithastartlingincrimination,butthe authors,HemiandBelle,tellconflictingsidesofatragic romance.

Withnotraceofhowthesemysteriousbookscameintothe world,Ashlyniscaughtupinadecades-oldliterarymystery, beckonedbytwoheartsinruins,whoevertheywere,wherever theyare.Determinedtolearnthetruthbehindthedoomedlovers’ tale,shereadson,followingatrailofbrokenpromisesand seeminglyunforgivablebetrayals.ThemoreAshlynlearnsabout HemiandBelle,thenearershecomestobringingclosuretotheir lovestory—andtotheunfinishedchaptersofherownlife.

“Theauthor’sabilitytopresenttwodifferent,butrelated, heartbreakingstoriesinsideherownnovelandkeepallthe voicesdistinctissoimpressive.Thefascinatingcharactersand thebeautyofthewritingpullthereaderin…Highly recommended.”—HistoricalNovelsReview

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IslomanesofCumberland Island by

“Withablendoftruehistoryand fiction,Bourkeweavesthestoriesof thepastandpresenttogetherina captivatingwaythatlendstruevisuals andemotionstothereader.” -

PublishersWeekly IslomanesofCumberlandIslandtakes youonajourneytothemost controversialNationalSeashoreinthe

UnitedStates.Sailuptheintracoastalwaterway,disembarkat Dungenessdock,andgreetthewildhorsesgrazingthere.Walk totheruinsoftheCarnegiemansion,thenacrossthedunesto theAtlantic.Thebeachwillbelargelydeserted.Breathe.You areonanisland.

Tenyearsofreturningtothisbarrierisland,yearafteryear,is notenough.Therearealwaysnewthingstosee,giftstotreasure andholdclose,untilyoucanreturn.

LiveoaksandsawpalmettoswillspringupwhereCarnegie carswereonceparked.Stallionswillstealmaresfrom establishedbandsandfoalswillbeborn.Houseswillsag,and fall,andthelumberwilldisintegrateintotheelementsfrom whichitwascreated.Theloggerheadturtleswillcomeoutof thesea,laytheireggs,andreturntothesea.Thelastofthe retained-rightscontractswillexpire,andtheislandwillslowly healfromallthathasbeendonetoher.

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LifeIsGood:Wit&Wisdom ofaVermontHomesteader by NancyCareyJohnson

NancyCareyJohnsonisan accidentalwriter.Awife,amother offourboys,aguitar-playing singer/songwriter,adelimanager andbaker,agardenerandhemp farmer,andadoglover,herwitty andwiseobservationsaboutlifein

ruralVermontwillbyturnscrack youup,makeyouthink,andbringateartoyoureye.A relocatedBrooklynite,inthesedelectableessaysNancy takesusonatourofherlifeinPoultney,Vermont.With gentle,sometimesself-deprecatinghumorshepointsout thewayseverydayisfilledwithtreasuredmomentsand joy.Shetellshowsheenjoyssimplepleasures,likerising beforethesuntodrinkteafromaBrightandEarlyDiner mugthatwasagiftfromAuntyLuceorsingingduetswith thescarletcardinalthatlivesoutsideherbedroomwindow. Shedescribesherloveoftruckstopdiners,pickles, kitchendancing,householdgadgets,andtoolsoflife.And howfindingcauliflowerunexpectedlygrowinginthe gardenrenewsherfaith.Readandsavorthesewry observationsabouthumannatureandrichmusingson motherhood,moonshine,thenatureofforgiveness, midlife,thepassageoftime,andfriendship.

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Parker'sChoice by Mike Nemeth

“Nemethmasterfullyweavestwo mysteriestogether.Whilethe protagonist[Parker]is memorable,supporting characterslikeSabrinaand Paulaalsoshine.Arazor-sharp mysterywithtwistsaplenty.”

KirkusIndieReviews

Hidingfromhistroubledpastin

Atlanta,Parker,aprincipledbutconflictedman,can't escapehisenemies.Hisformerbusinesspartner blackmailshimandhisbosscoerceshimtocommitfraud, butthesearen'thistoughesttests.Afterhisoldnemesisis killed,Parkerbecomesthechiefsuspect.Whenheandhis clevercolleague,Sabrina,uncoverevidencethathis elusivebirthfatherisinvolvedinthescheme,Parker's innatemoralcodefacesanimpossiblechallenge.Evading copsandcrooks,ParkerandSabrinasearchforanswers fromtheCarolinastoaFloridarehabandfinallyaNew Orleanscemetery.InthistwistingSouthernthriller,the choicesarebetweenbloodtiesandadeep-rootedsenseof rightandwrong.

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MurderUnderaWestern Moon byAbigailKeam

MonaMoonandhernewhusband, RobertFarley,DukeofBrynellethare abouttoboardanoceanlinertoMerry OldEnglandfortheirhoneymoon whenMonareceivesanurgent telegramfromRupertHunt,hereyes andearsintheMooncoppermines.

POTENTIALRIOTATMONTANA MINESTOPDEADMINERSTOP

POSSIBLEMURDERSTOPCOMEATONCESTOP RUPERTHUNT

SincethecopperminesarethefinancialbackboneofMoon Enterprises,Monahasnochoicebuttodropherplansand traveltoMontanaonthenexttrain.SheandRobertdescend intoaworldofseethingresentments,bitteraccusationsagainst MoonEnterprises,andbaddecisionsthatposeathreatto Mona’sworld.Shetravelsincognitotosearchoutthetruthof Rupert’sallegationsagainsttheminingmanagement.She mustdecideifRupertistryingtopreventaninnocentman frombeinghungformurderorifheispartofagrandioseplot againsther.Afterall,MonahadbeenkidnappedbyRupert whilesearchingfortheSwiftsilvermineayearago.Rupertis ascoundrel,butMonahiredhimtobeherscoundrel.Isthis anotherofRupert’sgames?Regardlessofthethreat,Mona mustgettothebottomofit.ThankgoodnessRobertisbyher side...orcouldRoberthavehisownagenda?

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PaulÉluardwrites,“Thereisanotherworld anditisinthisone.”Withintheseworlds, wetraveloutwardandinward,straddling ourlives’oppositions:parental/relationship struggleandloss,homeandaway,isolation andreconnection,thespiritual/mystical realmandphysicality—alwaysbalancing griefandreemergence,helloandgoodbye. ThehybridnatureofLindaParsons’sixth collection,Valediction,withpoems, diptychs,andmicroessays,bringsthose oppositionsintofocusandreconciliation andgroundsherintheearthunderherfeet, especiallyinhergardeningmeditations.In thisstriving,wearebalancedandgrounded withherassheliftstheveilonwhatit meanstoliveandcreatefully,eveninthe faceofimpermanence.

InApril2020,attheheightofthepandemic inNewYorkCity,Andrew,theassistant directorofafuneralhomeonemilefrom ElmhurstHospital,the“epicenterofthe epicenter,”meetsalegendaryConeyIsland witchdoctor(LelyaDorche),whomakes himanofferthatcouldbetterhischancesof keepinghisCOVID-positiveelderlyparents andhisseverelyasthmatic13-year-oldson, Miro,offtheever-expandinglistofvirus mortalities.Tokeepuphisendofthe bargain,Andrewwillhavetofindhisway toBulgaria(nosmalltaskconsideringthat there’sabanonpassengerflightstoEurope) tosecure10litersofarareMacedonian pinesap,akeyingredientofLelyaDorche’s provenremedy.

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Onacollectivelevel,thehuman diasporaisincalculable.Ourleavingand resettlingareasancientasweare, whetherimmigrant,refugee,exile,or pioneer.InSplinter,SusanO'Dell Underwood'spoemstracetheunique experiencesoftheAppalachiandiaspora. Splintersuggeststhedeepambivalence inthebreakingaway,asunderingwhich canneverbemended.Thesepoemstest theemotionalspectrum,weighingthe joyfulpossibilitiesandsorrowsof leavingagainsttheobligationofthose whostay"home,"gratefulyetbereftin analteredplace.

MADVILLEPUBLISHING seeksoutandencouragesliterarywriters withuniquevoices.Welookforwriterswhoexpresscomplexideasin simpleterms.Welookforcriticalthinkerswithatwang,alilt,oraclick intheirvoices.Andpatois!Weloveagoodpatois.Wewanttohearthose regionalismsinourwriters’voices.Wewanttopreservethesoundofour historiesthroughourvoicescompleteandhonest,dialectalfeaturesand all.Wewanttohighlightthosefeaturesthatmakeourculturesspecialin waysthatdonotfocusondivision,butrathershineanappreciativelight onourdiversity.

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SetList:ANovel by RaymondL.Atkins

SETLISTbeginsin1970,when BlanchardShanklesandJohnCovey cometogetherandstartmakingmusic inarockandrollbandnamedSkyye. Theyweretwoyoungmenfrom Sequoyah,Georgia,withlimited prospectsandbigdreams,whowere joinedintheirquestforfameand fortunebytheirfriendsFordMan Cooper,ChickenRaines,JimboTant, TuckerMcFry,andSimpsonTaggart.Thesefledglingmusicians setoutuponamusicalvoyagethatspannedfourdecades,fifty states,anduncountedmilesastheypursuedtheelusivesuccess thatwasalwaysjustonesongaheadofthem.Alongthewaythe bandplayedbarsandclubs,carnivalsanddances,divesand festivals,andtogetherthroughgoodtimesandbad,sickness andhealth,romance,marriage,divorce,birth,anddeath,they eachbuilttwolives:theoneoutunderthelightsthattheywere drawntolikemothstoaflame,andtheonetheycamebackto whenthemusicstoppedandthecrowdswenthome.Thestory alternatesbetweenpresent-dayNorthGeorgiaandthe1970s andisthestoryofabarbandastoldprimarilythroughtheeyes ofitsleadguitarplayer,BlanchardShankles,anditsbass player,JohnCovey.Eachchapterisbuiltaroundanoriginal songintheband'srepertoireplusaniconicsongfromthe archivesofrockandroll,andtogetherthesesongsandthese chaptersformthesetlistofthebandmembers'lives.

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SouthoftheEtowah:The ViewfromtheWrongSideof theRiver by RaymondL. Atkins

NovelistRaymondL.Atkinsoffers alightheartedchangeofpaceinthis collectionofhumorousessays.He exploresadiverserangeoftopicsas seenfromtheporchofhishomeon thesouthernbankofthemighty EtowahRiverinnorthernGeorgia.

Fromthisloftyheightheholdsforthonholidays, parenthood,cars,homeownership,aging,travel, medicine,technology,ballet,movies,marriage, Shakespeare,dogs,cats,music,swimmingpools,vintage television,nicknames,amusementparks,restaurants, schoolprojects,language,computers,hair,badjobs, WilliamFaulkner,weddings,advertising,Broadwayplays, yardwork,hospitals,cooking,ElvisPresley,moving, money,art,college,dinnertheater,andavarietyofother subjects.

Atkinslivesandwritesonariver,andtheviewfrom SouthoftheEtowahisunique.Itisfunny,irreverent,wise, andwellworththetrip.Socomealong!Thereisplentyof roomontheporch,thecoffeepotison,andacoolbreeze isblowingupfromtheriver.

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NeverBackDown by ChristopherSwann

She'sfoughtagainstthedarkness herwholelife--butnowshewill discoverwhathappenswhenthat verydarknessfightsbackinthis thrillingfollow-uptoChristopher Swann's NeverGoHome and NeverTurnBack,perfectforfans ofMichaelFarrisSmithandBrian Panowich.

Foraslongasshecouldremember,SusannahFaulkner knewthateventhoughshelivedadangerousandviolent life,shewouldtryherbesttodosomegoodintheworld. She'shunteddownevilmenbefore,buttheonemanthat putsfearintoherheart,theonemanwhocoulddestroy everythingsheloves,istheonemanshecannottrack down.Andworstofall...shedoesn'tknowwhatwill happenwhenshefindshim.Orifhefindsherfirst.

“Swannhasatruegiftforwritinggenuinelyflawed charactersthataresosympathetictheystillwinmeallthe wayover,andthistalentisonfulldisplayinNeverBack Down.IloveSuzieFaulknerforherhugeheart,hersmart mouth,andherextremelypoorimpulsecontrol.NeverBack Downisawildrideworthy ofthisgoldstandardseries;I’ll followSuzieanywhere.”

--JoshilynJackson,NewYorkTimes andUSATodaybestsellingnovelist

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Thisbookinvolvesmembersofthe samefamilyasinSUMMEROF THEREDEEMERS,theMcVay family.Butit’ssetin1926inthe samecommunityofJexville.

ConflictsinasmallSoutherntown bubbletothesurfaceinthistaleof repressionandprophecy,thesecond bookinTheJexvilleChronicles

trilogy.Sixteen-year-oldMattiecomestoMississippiin thesummerof1926asamail-orderbrideandfindsa quiet,deeplyreligiouscommunitywrappedinrigidviews ofawoman'sproperrole.WhenDuncanMcVay,thenineyear-olddaughterofJexville'smostcontroversialwoman, isstruckbylightningwhiledancing,thetownspeopleare horrifiedwhenshedoesn'tdiebutsurvives-andisgiven thegiftofprophecy.Abusedandmistreatedbyher handsomehusband,MattiedefendsDuncan.Shefinds comfortinherfriendshipwithJoHannaandtheMcVay family,butdefyingthetownhasconsequences.Whena hurricanelashesthearea,thetownspeopleblameDuncan. Actionleadstotragedy.ForbothMattieandJohanna,the futureholdsheartache,butultimatelyalong-awaitedand stunninglyexecutedrevenge.

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“Thiscollectionisquitepositivelyonfirewithhumor andheartache,darknessandlight,andcountless blazingturnsofphrase.Anessentialadditionto everySouthernreader’scollection.Ihaveknownand admiredafairnumberofwritersinthesepagesfora longtimebutseeingtheirworkalltogetherlikethis fillsmeupwithlove,love,love.” —MichaelKnight, Eveningland,winnerofaTrumanCapoteAward,a NYTimeseditor’spick,andaSouthernBookofthe Year (SouthernLivingMagazine)

PUBLICATION:NOVEMBER18,2023

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2023WINNER FORFIRST NOVEL

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WalkingTheWrongWayHome by MandyHaynes

Spanningnearlytwentydecades, thestrugglesandvictoriesthese charactersfacearetimelessasthey allworktowardsthesamegoal. Aplacetofeelsafe,aplacetocall home.

SharpasaSerpent'sTooth:Evaand otherstories by Mandy Haynes

Eachstoryfeaturesafemale protagonist,rangingfromtento ninety-fiveyearsofage.Setinthe south,you’llfollowtheseyoung womenandgirlsastheylearnthat they’restrongerthantheyever thoughtpossible.

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“DearGod…andJesusandMary…”

Eventhougheleven-yearoldOlivia israisedSouthernBaptist,shelikes tocoverherbaseswhenaskingfora favor.UnlikeherbrotherOliver,she struggleswithkeepinghertemperin checkandstayingoutoftrouble.But Oliverisdifferent,andinthesummer of’72heprovestoOliviathere’s magicineverything-it’suptousto seeit.

WorkInProgress editedby Mandy Haynes

Haveyoueverfinishedabookand wondered,"Whatmadetheauthorthink ofthat?"Orwonderediftherewasa chapterintheoriginalmanuscriptthat didn'tmakeitthroughthefinaledits?

WorkInProgressincludesfifty-nine excerptsfromsometalentedauthors' worksinprogressindifferentstagesof thewritingprocess,followedupwith thestorybehindthestoryofthepiece, andthestorybehindtheauthorwho wroteit.

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54 WELLREADMAGAZINE CORMACMcCARTHY PhotobyMarionEttlinger

KeeptheFireBurning

“Hebecameapartofus.Somuchsothatwhenwetalk aboutCormacMcCarthy,we’retalkingaboutsomesmall partofourselves.Andaslongaswekeepthefireburning, heishere,carryingitwithus.”

Itfeelsselfishtowriteanythingaboutmyrelationshipto CormacMcCarthyor,moreaccurately,hiswork.Withhis passing,everyliteraryorliterary-adjacentpublicationin theworldwillbefilledwithtributestohisprose,his prominence,andhisnotedlackofpresenceinthepublic eye.Manyauthorswillpaytheirrespectsby acknowledgingMcCarthy’sinfluenceontheirownwriting or,ifnot,thensurelytheawetheyfeltwhentheyfirstread oneofhisnovels.Evenso,asoftenhappenswithwriters,I findmyselfstrugglingwiththeguiltthatsomehow,by writinganythingatallaboutthemanwhoimpactedmy lifemorethananyotheroverthelastdecade,I’mtryingto self-promoteormakehisdepartureaboutanythingother thanA)thegreatlosstheliteraryworldisfeeling,andB) thegreatlegacyhehasleftus.

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ThefirstthingI’lladmitisthatIfeltoddaboutthe fervorofmyadmirationevenwhenMr.McCarthywas alive.I’manavidsportsfan.Therehavebeenmany playersinmanysportsthatI’veliked.YetI’venevercared enoughtobuyajersey.Iverymuchenjoyfilms.Thereare actors/actressesanddirectorswhoIseemtogravitate toward.ButIdon’tlineuptopre-buyticketstoevery TerrenceMalickopening,andIreadilyadmitthatCary Granthadsomebusts(EnterMadame,KissandMakeUp).

EvenasachildtherewasnooneItrulyidolized.Soit wasastrangeandunwelcomefeelingwhenIreadmyfirst McCarthynovel(AllThePrettyHorses)andfoundmyself lookingaroundtoseeifeveryotherpersonintheworld wasreadingthissamebookbecauseIfeltlikesurelythey shouldbe.

ThatsamedayIbought TheCrossing andstayedupall nightreadingit.Then CitiesofthePlain,whichleftme gaspingforairnearitsconclusionwhenIrealizedIhad beenholdingmybreathfornearlyfourpages.

IwouldhavetoldyouthenthatMcCarthyhadnoequal pastorpresent.IrealizedIhadfoundsomethingthat wouldaltertheveryfoundationofmylife.Something, likeareligion,orperhapsevenanaddiction,thatIwould fallbackontimeandtimeagain.Likeanygoodaddictor

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zealot,Ineededmore.Wherebettertostartthanatthe beginning?

TheOrchardKeeper–Howcouldthisbeanyone’sfirst novel?Theconfidenceoftheprose.Theemphasison sceneratherthanstory.Itwasnogothicwestern,buteven inthehillsofeasternTennesseethatsamesenseof masteryemerged.Thenovel’smostmemorablescene,the greatcollapsingoftheGreenFlyInn,wasstruckby editorsmultipletimes,butmultipletimesMcCarthy foughtback.Hewasbrokeandunpublished,buthefought tokeepthescenebecauseheknewwhatpoweritheld.His propensityfornaturalismshines,asdoeshisgiftfor showingaworldthatalwaysappearsonthecuspofa terriblechangefromonewaytoanother.Inthiscase,the encroachmentofsocietyonthewildsofAppalachia.

OuterDark -Despitehisdebutbrilliance,wealready seegrowth.Thefirstofhis“goingsomewhere”novels (OuterDark,ChildofGod,BloodMeridian,AllthePretty Horses,TheCrossing,NoCountryForOldMen,The Road,even ThePassenger tosomedegree)where charactersareconstantlyonthemove,eitherpursuingor beingpursued.AnearlyscenewithCullastumblinglostin thedarkwoodsflexeshisprose.Andinthisnovelwesee thefirstexampleofMcCarthy’snightmarishvillains.The

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triuneslipsthroughthenovelsinitalics,doingterrible deedsandshowingreaderswhattheycanexpectfrom futurecharacterslikeTheJudge,AntonChigurh,Eduardo, andtheroamingcannibalsof TheRoad.

ChildofGod -Short,unsweet.McCarthychallengesus tolooknotjustatthesad,patheticBallard,buttolookat ourroleinhisbecoming.Toaskifwemightatallhold ourselvesaccountableforhiscondition.Orworse,toaskif somewherewithinusliesthesamedarkness.

Suttree -Hisgreatestnovel?Manydisagree.Some don’t.Humor.Prose.Arageagainstbeingalivebutalso againstdying.Hiscompleteabandonmentofplotandtotal embraceofcharacterchallengesustoseethenarrative one,two,threelayersdeep.Yes,thewritingisunrivaled. Yes,thephilosophyisthoughtfulandbeautifullyrendered. Butthenovel,theonlyonenamedforitscentralcharacter, iswhollySuttree.Withlittletonointeriority,McCarthy makesuslaughandgrieveandstandinawewith

CorneliusSuttree.Weknowhimjustbytraveling alongsidehimforthesefewyears.Wearen’ttoldhis feelings.Wearen’tgivenhismotives.Wejustexistthere withhim.AndtherewithintheJoycean-likelandscapeof McCarthy’sKnoxville.

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BloodMeridian -Nogloves.Noservice.Surreal, cosmicprosesetdownatopananti-naturalismthatpaints theworldentireinamalevolentred.Challengesthe historyofwestwardexpansion.Challengesthenatureof humanbeings.Andcertainlychallengesthemodern conventionsofthenovel.

AllThePrettyHorses -Finally,thecredithedeserves. Theawards.Themoney.Thecareerthatheneverhadand yetsimultaneouslyneverabandoned.Forthirtyyearshe survivedongrantsandbeansandtoothpastesamplesthat cameinthemail.Helostrelationships.Sacrificedfamily. Butnow,withJohnGradyColeandhislossofinnocence, McCarthybecomesimmortal.

TheCrossing -Anotherboy(BillyParham),another journeyintoMexico.Butthistimetherearestorieswithin thestory.Parables.Philosophies.Biblicalprosethatcalls tocreationanddestruction.Andtheending,well…abig boomthathintsatthelong-awaitednovel, ThePassenger.

CitiesofthePlain -Writtenasascreenplay,the charactersofBillyandJohnGradywerefirstconceived forthisstory.Andnowthatwe’vebeengiventheirhistory (theprevioustwonovels),it’stimeforanending.And whatanendingtheymake.JohnGrady,hispassionand

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fireandloyaltywouldalwaysbehisundoing.Billy,fails toprotecthisbrotheronceagain.Weseeacycleforthese characters(andthroughoutthenovelcycles,wheels, circles,etc.areemphasized)thatculminateswiththeonly possibleoutcome.

NoCountryForOldMen -UnflinchinglyMcCarthy, andyetwildlyapproachable.Spareprose.Fast-moving action.Andthesurpriseinteriorityofacharacterfor chaptersatatime.ThisistheclosestMcCarthycomesto themassmarket,andyeteverythingaboutitfeels completelyoriginal.Andyes,AntonChigurh.

TheRoad -Pulitzer.Oprah.AndproofthatMcCarthy canslidefromsoutherngothic,towestern,topostapocalypticwithoutspillingadropofhissignaturestyle. Hehatednaminghischaractersandmusedtoaneditorin the60sthat“maybeonedayI’llwriteonewherethere aren’tanynames.”Hedid.Theboyandthefather. Carryingthefire.Thewholethingisperfect.Dark,as usual,butalsowithsuchblindingmomentsofloveand hope.HerewehavetheworldMcCarthyhaswrittenabout fordecadesfinallycomingtopass,andwhatdoesheinsist thatwesee?Thelovebetweenafatherandhischild.

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ThePassenger -It’sfinallyhere.It’sgoingtochange

everything.It’s…didhesaythedwarfhasflippers?The mostambitiousnovelofanincrediblyambitiouswriter. Andmygoodnesswhatapartinggift.Pickyourpoison. Mathematics?Themoralityoftheatomicbomb?Sinsof thefather?Loveandincestandwheresocietyand conventionclashwithinstinctandemotion?Howabout theJFKassassination?Climatechange?Culinarydelights? Thisbookhasitall.McCarthythrowshisfullweightat therelationshipbetweenourmindandourperceived reality.Betweengeniusandinsanity.Betweennihilismand fatalism

StellaMaris -Acodafor ThePassenger?Prequel, sequel,companion.Whateveryouwanttocallit.Herewe haveanovelinconversations.Itreadsatapacingsimilar toMcCarthy’splay,* TheSunsetLimited,thoughAlicia dominatesthedialoguewithhertherapist,whereasBlack andWhitespokeequally.Ifthesearethelastwordswe have,wewillcherishthem:

Ithinkourtimeisup.

Iknow.Holdmyhand.

Holdyourhand?

Yes.Iwantyouto.

Allright.Why?

Becausethat’swhatpeopledowhenthey’rewaitingfor

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theendofsomething.

Somecriticsdislikehim.Almostalleditorsdespisehim. Andmanyreadersfindhisworktoodenseorchallenging orgrimorboringorpurpleor(insertopinionhere).But formyself,andthosewhobelongtothecultofMcCarthy, hewasthegreatestofourtime.Ofanytime.Notonlywas histalentexceedinglyrare,buthisdedicationtocraft ratherthanpublicityshouldbeapplaudedevenbythose whodon’tvaluehiswork.Whilepublishingchanged handsfromliterarypeopletobusinesspeople,McCarthy neverbudged.Nobooktours.Noreadingsorworkshops orseminars.Nofestivalcircuits.Hisappearancesand interviewsaresorare,theyfitonasingleGoogleSearch page.Hedidn’tcareaboutpraiseorrejection,aboutother writers,orwhowasgettingwhatnotoriety.Hejustwrote. Writingwasalltherewas.Writingiswhatmadehim happy.

Butthroughhiswriting,heachievedaneternityhe nevercaredabout.That’swhysomanyofthesepostswill feelsopersonalandpassionate.Hebecameapartofus. SomuchsothatwhenwetalkaboutCormacMcCarthy, we’retalkingaboutsomesmallpartofourselves.Andas longaswekeepthefireburning,heishere,carryingit withus.

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*McCarthyalsowroteplaysandscreenplays:TheStonemason,The Gardener’sSon,TheCounselor,andTheSunsetLimited

JamesWade livesandwritesintheTexasHillCountrywithhis wifeanddaughter.Heisatwo-timeSpurAwardwinnerandthe authorofthreenovels: BeastsoftheEarth;River,SingOut;and AllThingsLeftWild.Jamesisalsoawinneroftheprestigious MPIBAReadingtheWestAward.Heiscurrentlyworkingonhis fourthnovel, HollowOuttheDark,comingin2024from BlackstonePublishing.

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INSIDEVOICES

“Ithinkmanysiblingsassumetheirexperienceoftheir childhoodmatchesthatoftheirsibling,butthisisn’talwaysthe case.Memoryisafunnything…”

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RobertGwaltneyandJeffreyDaleLofton interview RichardMirabella authorof Brother &SisterEntertheForest

RichardMirabella isawriterandcivilservantlivingin UpstateNewYork.Hisstorieshaveappearedin Story Magazine,AmericanShortFiction,SplitLipMagazine, andelsewhere.He'stheauthorofthenovel Brother& SisterEntertheForest.

InsideVoices(Robert): Ireadthat BrotherandSister EntertheForest,yourdebutnovel,isinspiredbya Grimm’sfairytale.Sharealittlebitaboutthat.

Richard: Mynovelispartiallyinspired,orshaped,bythe Grimm’stale LittleBrotherandLittleSister.Istarted writinganovelaboutsiblingsbeforeIreadthefairytale, butwhenIreadit,itjumpstartedsomethinginmeand reallyhelpedshapethestoryIwasstrugglingwith.It’sa longishtaleandsortofinvolved,soI’lljusttellyouthe partthatstuckouttomeandthatIranwith.Thelittle brother,afterheandhissisterrunawayfromtheircruel stepmother(ofcourse),drinksfromastreamthatwas cursedbyhisstepmother,whotheydidn’trealizeisa witch!Thebrotheristransformedintoafawn,andthe sistervowstotakecareofhim,butsheisdistractedby marriagetoaking,andthenherownproblemswiththe witch.So,mynovelisnotaretelling,thefairytaleis present.Thesymbolsarethere.

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InsideVoices(Jeffrey): Theaudiobookisnarratedso beautifullybyEvePasseltiner.Itmakesmewonderwhose storythisis,Willa’sorJustin’s?

Richard:Evedidsuchagreatjob.It’sfunny,thisisa conversationI’vehadwithmanypeople!Whosebookis this?Well,it’sbothWillaandJustin’sstory.SomedaysI thinkitfullybelongstoWilla,andsomedaysIthinkit belongstoJustin.Whilewriting,Ineverdecided,though therewereperiodswhenIwasfullylivinginsideJustin’s story.Hehasalotgoingon,butI’minterestedinWilla. Herquietlife,herreactionstoJustin,herconflicting desirestohelpandtoescape.

InsideVoices(Robert): Whatinterestsyoumostabout siblingrelationships?

Richard: I’mmostinterestedinhowtheserelationships changeovertime,fromchildhoodtoadulthood.In childhoodyou’rekindofstuckwiththisperson.Youhave nochoicebuttointeractwiththem.Later,it’sachoice. You’reboundbybloodandfamilialloyalties.Thesecan sometimesbehardtoescape.I’malsofascinatedbyhow siblingsremembertheirlives.Ithinkmanysiblings

assumetheirexperienceoftheirchildhoodmatchesthatof theirsibling,butthisisn’talwaysthecase.Memoryisa funnything.“Idon’trememberitthatway!”“Wewere neverashappyasyou’reclaiming!”Thatkindofthing.

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Youhaveawitnesstoyourlifetosomeextent.Theymay notseeyou,yourhistory,thewaythatyoudo.

InsideVoices(Robert): Therearedualtimelineswithin thebook:adolescenceandadulthood.Talkaboutthat choiceandtheimpactyouwantedtomake.

Richard: Thatchoicecameaboutlateintheprocess.I’d beenwritingforafewyears,revisingalinearversionof thenovelthatjustdidn’twork.Ithoughtitwasboring.So Isatwiththedocumentopenandmovedsectionsovertoa freshdocument,andrealizeditwouldworkbetteroutof sequence.Ithoughtaboutthisemotionally.Howmoments inthepastwouldfeelnexttothepresent,andifIcouldfit in-betweenmoments(likeJustin’stimeinAlbany)into thiscollage.ThisiswhenIfeltI’dgottenclosetowhatI wantedmybooktobe.Yearsintotheprocess!Youhaveto havesomuchfaithwhenyou’rewritinganovel.

InsideVoices(Jeffrey):Areviewcomparedyourwriting toShirleyJacksonandotherwriters.Whoareyourliterary titansandwhy?

Richard: ThoughIadoreShirleyJacksonandwanttosay mywritingislikehers,Idon’tthinkitis.Shehasmorein commonwithHenryJames.Thosebeautiful,ornate paragraphs.Myprose,atleastinthisnovel,issortof clippedanddirect.ButIthinkthere’saneerinessthat

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comesfromShirley.Iwantedthisnoveltobeaghost story,anditkindofis.Somanywritersinspireme,though youmaynotseeitinmywork.MytitansareJamesPurdy, JoyWilliams,JamesBaldwin,BarbaraComyns,andToni Morrison.Andtherearepeoplewritingrightnowthat makemewanttokeepwriting.PeoplelikeLeniZumas, DanChaon,andMiriamToews.

InsideVoices(Jeffrey): Nowthat BrotherandSister EntertheForest isoutintheworld,what’snext?

Richard: Ihopeanothernovel.I’mtrying.Itisreally tough.Iknewwritingasecondnovelwouldbedifficult afterpublishingone.Ididn’thavepressurebefore,and didn’texpecttobepublished.Nooneispressuringme, mindyou.I’mpressuringme.Ihaveastorycollectionthat needswork,butIhaven’tgivenuponit.Iloveshort fictionandIwanttohaveastorycollectionintheworld.

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RobertGwaltney, awardwinningauthorof southernfiction,isa graduateofFloridaStateUniversity.HeresidesinAtlantaGeorgia withhispartner,whereheisanactivememberoftheAtlanta literarycommunity.Robert’sworkhasappearedinsuch publicationsas TheSignalMountainReview and TheDeadMule SchoolofSouthernLiterature.Hisdebutnovel, TheCicadaTree, wontheSomersetAwardforliteraryfiction.

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TheFishingTrip

WilliamWalsh

WhenHannahGardnerwassixyearsold,herfather packeduphisfishinggearandtosseditinthebackofhis 1974InternationalTravelall,whichhehadpurchasedfor $500fromawomanwhosehusbandhadaheartattack whilecheeringforTigerWoodstowintheMasters Tournament.

“Heboughtitbrandnewthirty-threeyearsago,”she said,“anddroveitnearlyeverydayuntilhiseyesight startedfailinglastyear.”

DarnellGardnerdidn’tgiveadamnaboutgolf,andhe didn’tcareanounceabouttakingthekidsfishingexcept hehadwonaraffleforafishingderbyinOntario,New Yorkwhichwasnearlyathousandmilesaway.Thecontest wasaninsertedscratch-offin FishingToday,asports magazinethatcaughthiseyeontherackinK-Mart.The coversportedateenageboystrugglingtoliftafifty-two-

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poundMuskiehe’dsnaggedonChautauquaLake.It’s calledthefishof10,000casts,butthisboyhititonhis thirdtry,andwhenDarnellsawthatcover,hebegan dreaming.Insidethemagazine,hescratchedofffive squaresthatwonhimthetripdesignedtopromotefishing amongyoungfolks.Thefishingderbywasforkids,butit tookDarnellabouttensecondstohatchaplantocatcha Muskieandgiveittooneofhiskidstolieandwinthe tournamentandtheprizemoney.TheTopPrizewas $5,000.

Ittooktwodaysofdriving,butHannah’solderbrother andsister,WendellandGreta,andhertwin,Lucas,rode withtheiroldmaninthatbeatupTravelall,travelingnorth forthefirsttimeintheirlivestoLakeOntario.

“Itain’tmuch,butit’spaidfor,”Darnellremindedhis kids.“Thisherevehiclewillrunforeverifyougiveita littleTLC.Don’tnevergointodebtexcepttobuyland.”

Theyweregoneforsixdays.Twodaysup.Twodaysof fishing.Twodaysback.Betweenhischildren,theycaught overfiftybluegillandsunfish,afewchannelcats,and loadsofperch.Wendellcaughtapikethatwastoosmallto keep.Theynevercaughtanythingremotelyclosetoa winner,notrophyfish,noprizemoney,andnoinvitation backnextyear.

Ontheaccountshewasfeelingpuny,Hannahdidnotgo fishing,neverlefttheSouth,andshestayedhomewithher

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pregnantmother,whowassettobirthherfifthchild.

“I’mtakingthekidstoNewYorktothisherefishing tripIwon,”DarnellinformedLilith.“Iftheycatchabig enoughfish,they’llwin$5,000andaninvitebacknext year.”

“Howmuchisitgonnacostus?”Lilithasked.

“Nothing,exceptforgasandfoodup.Butifyoumake usenoughsandwichestolast,it’llcostnexttozero.”

“Whataboutahotel?”

“Mostofthat’spaidforbythefishingpeople,butIgot itallplannedout—onthewayup,we’recampinginatent insteadofpayingforahotel.”

“Howmuchisthat?”

“Onenightup.Onenightback.Sixbuckseachnight, whichain’tbad.It’llgiveWendellanopportunitytoshow whathe’slearnedinBoyScoutsandJROTC.”

WhenthenewsofDarnell’sfishingtripwhisperedin Lilith’sears,shedidn’tcomplainordiscouragehimfrom headingoutforNewYorkbecausewhenhewasagood twelvehoursreachaway,shehadplanstocallMyra Leonard,themidwifedowntheroadaboutamile.And thatisexactlywhatshedidthatfollowingSaturday morning.

“I’llcomeup‘roundnineo’clock,meandGrady.It’ll bedarkbythen.”

Hannahhadnotfeltgoodforseveraldaysleadingup

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anddidnotventureforthonthefishingtripofalifetime, asherdaddycalledit.Althoughshewantedtogo,her nervousstomachmadeherillwhenshegottothinking abouthermotherbeingpregnantandleftaloneallby herselfonthefarm.Hannahwasprotective,evenforasixyear-oldchild,andshelikedbeingbyhermother’sside. BySaturday,however,shefeltbetter,andthingswere backtonormalaroundthehouse,whichwasquietfor onceinherlife.Atleastherdaddywasn’thangingaround drinkingbeerandwaitingtoyellatsomeoneforthe slightestmisstep,suchasleavingthefaucetdrippingor notgoingtothedrivewayforhismorningpaper.

Duringtheday,hermotherplayedtheradiolowonan oldiesstation,andthatmadeHannahhappybecauseLilith sangalongwiththemusic,asifthisishowshelived beforeshewasmarried.Themorningwascool,andthe doorswereopen,andabreezecutthroughtheentirefarm house,asifLilithwasblowingoldghostsoutofthe woodwork,andthewindwasticklinginfromthefront doorandwindowsthentakingeverythinguglyintheir livesrightoutthebackdoorandintothewoodsand beyondthetreelineandgoneforever.

Thatevening,aroundeighto’clock,Lilithclearedthe kitchentableofeverything.Shemovedthefruitbowland schoolbookstothehutchsothatwhenMyraandGrady arrivedeverythingwasready.Shegrabbedapillowfrom

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herbedandplaceditonthekitchentable.Theyappeared preciselyatninep.m.whenthesunwasbelowthetreeline andtheskyhadlessthantwentyminutesoffadinglight. Theywalkedthehalf-milefromtheirhousetoHannah’s becausetheydidnotwantanyoneseeingtheirtruck parkedattheGardner’sfarm.Whentheywalkedintothe livingroom,Hannahstaredbecauseitwastheonlytime she’dseenablackpersonintheirhouse.

LilithguidedMyraintothekitchenwhereLilithlaid uponthelargewoodentable.Sheadjustedthepillow underherhead.Gradystoodinthekitchenwaitingtohelp Myra.

“Hannah,”Lilithsaidnervouslyandoutofbreath already,“yougositintheotherroomandturntheTVon. Youcanwatchanythingyoulike.TurnitupsoIcanhear, butyougottostayinthere.”

LilithwouldhavepreferredthatHannahnotbeatthe house,butshehadnootherchoice.WithDarnellgone,it wasnowornevertotakecareofthisbusiness.IfDarnell eversawablackpersoninhishouse,he’dkillLilith, whichwouldsolvemostofherproblemsanyway.

Inthekitchen,Myrasetherbagdownonthecounter andpulledoutseveralglassjarsofherbsandplacedthem nearthestove.Sheopenedeachjarandsniffedthemfor freshness.ShehadalargeMasonjarofmoonshine,which shepouredintoasaucepanthenmixedincohosh,cotton

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rootbark,andotherspicesbeforestirringtheconcoction aroundwithawoodenspoon.

“MissLilith,I’mgonnaheatupthishoochwithsome excitements.It’llbehotbutIain’tburningoffthefun.You gottadrinkitallstraightdown.It’llmakeyoucorkhigh andbottledeepbutweain’tgotdaystotakecareofthis bizness.”

Whentheblendwasheatedup,Myrafiltereditthrough herscarfintoalargecoffeemug.

“Situp,”MyratoldLilith.“Holdyournose.Thisis nastytasting.”

Shedid,andshedrankthehotliquidstraightdown. Thenshedrankroundtwo,whichwasallsheneededto gettanked.Whenshecouldbarelysitup,Gradyleaned herbackonthetableandplacedherheadonthepillow.

“Weaboutready?”heaskedMyra.

“Ithinkso.”

“Whenyouneedtograbsomething,grabtheedgeofthe table.It’llgiveyoubalanceandpressure,”Gradytold Lilith.

Frominthelivingroom,Hannahturneddownthe volume,andwhenshecouldn’thearclearlyenough,she walkedintothekitchenandstoodwatching.Myraand GradyweretoobusytobotherwithHannahandignored her,iftheyhadevennoticedherstandingthere.

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procedurewouldnotbemissedandcouldeasilybeburned ortossedout.WhenGradyhadherheadcomfortably situated,hepulledthenightgownoffLilith’sshouldersand downbelowherbreasts.Hebegantomassagehernipples thenpulleddownonthemtosimulateababysuckling.

He’ddonethisbefore,manyothertimestohelpMyra inducelabor.Onitsown,itwasn’tenough,butcoupled withthemoonshineandspices,andwithMyra’sother work,thiswastheirplan.

AsGradyfirmlypulledonLilith’snippleswithhis thumbandtwofingers,milkdrippedandoftensprayed acrossherstomachandrolledoffherroundnessand puddledintohishand.Whilehecontinued,Myraliftedthe gownuptoLilith’sstomachsothedaisy-floweredmaterial rosearoundherwaist.Myrathenbegantosweepher indexfingeraroundtheinsideofLilith’scervixthenraised twofingersupanddownandinacircularmotionoverand overtopullthemembranesawayfromtheinnercervix.

Hannahsatonthekitchenfloorwatchingfromfifteen feetawayatwhatshedidnotunderstandexceptithadto dowithhermomma’sbaby.Theriverstoneswerecoldon herfeet.Shegrabbedablanketoffherbedandwrappedup inswaddlingandcontinuedtowatchandlistentoher

mother’smoaning.Afteranhour,Hannahfellasleepon thecoldfloor.

Aroundthreeinthemorning,Hannahwaswokenbythe

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soundofababycrying.Shejumpeduponthekitchen flooranddroppedherblanketaroundheranklesthen dashedovertoseeherbabysister.Itwassupposedtobe anotherboy.

“What’chagonnanamehermomma?”

Hermothersqueakedoutareply.

“Child,stepback,”Myrasaid.“There’sbloodand nastinessyoudon’teverwanttogetinto.”

Myraheldthebabyinherleftarmandbrushedherdark hairoffherforeheadintoawhispthatstoodupwiththe gelatinofbirth.

“Grady,coverMissLilith’sears.”

Asthebabycriedforoxygeninthenewworld,Myra walkedintothekitchen,heldthechildbyheranklesup overherhead,uptotheheightofthecabinetsandcloseto theceiling,andwithouthesitation,releasedthebaby.The newbornfellstraightdown,hittingherheadonthestone floor.Therewasathunk,andthensilence.

“Girl,handmethatblanket,”shetoldHannah.

HannahgavetheblankettoMyra.Sheplacedthebaby ontheblanketandwrappedherup,foldingandfoldingthe blanketuntileverynotionofthebabywascoveredina protectivecocoon.Myrastoodupandhandedthebundle toGrady.

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“YougodoyourbiznessandI’llgetherinbedandthis placecleanedup.”

“Comewithme,”GradytoldHannah.“Iwantyouto carrythatshovel.”Hepointedtoasmall,butwellconstructedgardenshovel.

Withaflashlightinhand,Gradysetoutthroughthedark woodswithHannahfollowingbehind.Heshowedherhow tocarrytheshovelacrosshershoulder.

“Whenitgetssore,switchshoulders,”hesaid.

“KindalikeJesus?”

“Yeah,somethinglikethat.”

TheGardnerfamilyfarmwasnearlyfivehundredacres, andafterwalkingaroundforthirtyminutesovermounds anduphillsandacrossthecreekandthenoveraflat parcel,Hannahhadnoideawheretheywere.Forallshe knew,theymighthavebeeninthenextcounty.Butthen Gradystoppedandsetthebundleontheground.Hetraded theflashlightfortheshovel.

“Aimthatlightrighthere,”hedirectedHannah,andshe did.Thenhebegantodig.

“What’sthisplace?”Hannahaskedhim.

“Someplaceyoudon’twanttobe.Mymammyand pappylivehere.”

“Where?Thereain’tnohouse.”

“Theyliveintheground.”

Itwasn’talargehole,onlyone-footwidebytwofeet, andnomorethanthreefeetdeepwhenhesetthebundle intotheholeandfilleditbackin.Hestampedthedirtas

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flatashecouldwithhisworkbootsthenbrushedthe groundwithaleafystickandcoveredtheareawithleaves andafewrocks.Hannahnoticedthatthethreerockswere eachaboutthesizeofafootball.

Whenhewasassuredhisjobwasdone,Gradyturned towardHannahandbentdownonhisrightknee.Hetook theflashlightfromherandshineditathisopenhand.The lightbouncedofftowardHannah’sface.“Youevertell anyoneaboutthis,I’lltossyouintherewiththatbaby.You understand?”

Hannahshookherhead.

“Youbestforgetthiseverhappened.Youwannatell someone,tellittoGod.”

“Howcomeyou’reputtingthebabyintheground?”

“Sometimeschild,thisiswhatlovelookslike.”

WhenDarnellandthekidsreturnedhomeafewdays laterfromthefishingtrip,helookedatLilithandsaid, “Yousureslimmeddown.”

“Ihadthebaby.Hecameearly.”

“Where’smylittleBeauregardat?”

“Hewasstillborn.Ilost’im.”

“What’dyoudowithhim?”

“Icalledthecounty,andtheycameandgot’im.They took’imaway.”

ThebabygirlDarnellbelievedwasababyboywas neverdiscussedagain.

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Hannahcouldnotforget,andeverydayforherentire life,shethoughtaboutwhatMr.Gradytoldher.She rememberedthewaythegrasssmelledandthecoolnessof theairatthreeo’clockinthemorning,andhowforthe longesttimeshewasafraidtowalkthroughthewoodsand pastures,especiallyatnight,forfearthebabymightcome ather,crawlinglikeaspidermonkeyinahorrorfilmor somethingworse.EachSundayatchurch,shealwayssaid aprayerforherbabysister.

Inthepastfifteenyears,Hannahovercameherfearsand setoutonmanyadventureslookingforthethreerocksMr. Gradyplacedonthebaby’sgrave.Shewantedtolaysome flowersonitandtalktoher.Attimes,shetookLucaswith her,althoughheneverknewherrealintentions.She lookedforthegravesofMr.Grady’smotherandfather, whoweresharecroppersonthelandformostoftheirlife, andbeforethat,theirkinfolkwerealsosharecroppers,and sheheardstoriesthatlongago,theirpeoplewereslaves.

Hannahknewsomewereburiedonthefarm,butshenever foundthegraves.Asshegrewolder,shesetoutlatesome nightswhentheskywasclearwithjustaflashlightandher dog.Shelookedforthatsamenightsmellofgrassandair, andthereweretimeswhenshefoundit,butneverthe graves.Intheend,shesurmisedthatMr.Gradyhadtaken hersofarbackintothewilderness,theywereonsomeone else’sproperty.

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Maybethey’lldigeveryoneupsomedaywhenthey buildashoppingcenterouthere.

ItwasasecretHannahhaskeptherentirelife,andeven afterMyraandGradydiedyearsapartfromoneanother, sheneversaidaword.GradydiedfirstwhenHannahwas inthefifthgrade,andwhenshewasintheeleventhgrade, Myradied.Hannahthoughtshe’dlearnwherethebaby wasburiedifGradyandMyrawereburiedwiththeir familyonherfarm,buttheywerenot.Theywereburiedin Antioch,attheAMEChurchtheyattended.Notlongafter Myrawasburied,Hannahwonderediftheywerebothin helltogether,orperhaps,Godforgavethembecausewhat theydidhadgreatervalueforhermother.Shehad conjuredupallsortsofthoughtsandideasovertheyears, andmanytimesatnight,shewoketostareouther bedroomwindow,deepintotheblacktreeswondering whereherbabysisterwasburiedandmaybeshealmost foundthegraveorwalkedbyitwithoutrecognizingthe rocks.Thatwasallshehadtogoon.Shewouldstareout thewindowforafewminutes,buttheimageofthebaby crawlingoutfrombetweentwotreesscaredher.

Oneday,sheaskedherhistoryteacher,Mr.Winkleman, ifarcheologistsevergiveuplooking.“Imean,whenthey can’tfindwhatthey’vebeensearchingforforyears,don’t theyjustgiveup?”

“SometimestheyretireorstopsearchingfortheHoly

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Grail,”hetoldtheclass,“butoften,Hannah,it’sbecause theyrunoutofmoney—youknow,fundingfortheir project.Theirresourcesdryup.Othertimes,well,yes, theyjustcan’tkeepsearching.Noteverythinginthis worldwasmeanttobediscovered.”

WilliamWalshisthedirectoroftheReinhardtUniversity undergraduatecreativewritingprogramandM.F.A.program.An award-winningauthorofninebooks,hewritesfiction,poetry, essays,andinterviews.In2022,hisdebutnovel,Lakewood,was publishedbyTouchPointPress.Aswell,thepoetryanthology, WhyIWroteThisPoemwaspublishin2023byMcFarland& Co.HecurrentlyhasacontractforabookonFlannery

O’Connor’sfamilyfarm,Andalusia.Hisworkhasappearedin AWPChronicle,FivePoints,FlanneryO’ConnorReview,The GeorgiaReview,TheKenyonReview,LiteraryMatters,Michigan QuarterlyReview,NorthAmericanReview,PoetryDaily,Poets &Writers,Rattle,Shenandoah,Slant,andValparaisoPoetry Review.HeistheeditoroftheJamesDickeyReview.

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OnYouthfulDigression

PhilipKobylarz

Youthisanunplannedsojourninamotelofnoone's choosing.

TaketheSleepyBearInnofQuincy,Illinois.Ithada postcardrackinthefrontofficethatwasstocked,fromtop tobottom,withSleepyBearlollipops.Notsuckers–these werereal-er–bighunkingwhitediskswithabasreliefof theSleepyBearinorangeflavor.Whatitwassupposedto tastelikewassomethingindecipherable,maybeakindof mangosandwichoratangerineonastick.Thebestthing wasthereseemedtobeanendlesssupplyandyoucould takeallyouwanted.Therewereprobablyboxesofthem nexttothelaundryroom.

TheSleepyBearInnhadaswimmingpool surroundedbyachainlinkfence.Blueluminescence paintedbychlorineandatomicagecleaningagents thousandsoftimesthestrengthofLysol.Thefurnitureof thelarge,double-bedroom,whichmeantyou'dhaveto

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sleepagainwithyoursister,wasexclusivelymadeof formicaproductsstippledwithcigaretteburns.Therooms werelikebeautifulcavetempleswithlightpurpleshag carpetingandlingeriegreencurtains.

SisterandIwouldlieinbedwhileourracingminds begantonodoff.Highbeamsthatbouncedofftheceiling, thenthehallbathroommirrorafterthetelevisionwas turnedoff.Aflashlightsignaltomysister.Shewas fourteenthatyear,thinasacinnamonstick,herskinthe colorofsummerandcaramel.Shehadabrownishblonde maneandfulllipslipstickedforkissing.She'dmetaboy andhe'dcomearoundlookingforher.

Whenshedidn'trespondtohismaverickflickeringofD batteries,heleftacanofsodapopandanote.

Weneverfoundoutwhatthenotesaidbecauseshe wouldn'tletanyonereadit,notevenmother.Wewereleft toassumeitmentionedlove,orsomethingbetter,anda sadnessofconvictionthatonlyasignaturemightreveal.

Thatyearmybirthdaywasoneofthosebirthdaysthat nobodybutmecelebrated(beginningthreedayspriorto). Youknowthosebirthdays,whennotevenyourolder brothersorneighborhoodfriendsnotice.Maybebecause theywereinacoalitionofhatingandnotspeakingtoyou atthatmomentintime.

Thedaywasmadesadlyclassicalbyagigantic,multi-

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layeredcake.Asugarwaferclay-mationoffrostingthe colorsofnonaturallyoccurringfoodorphenomenon.A cakeboughtatagrocerystoremadebybakerswhoyou've nevermet.

Onthatbirthdayofunrememberedannotativequantity, Sisterdecidedtorunawayfromhomeduetosomedebate oftherelativetermssetbyanall-controllingmother's mentalleashonadaughter'steenagelibido.Shewentwho knowswhere-maybeafriend'shouseormaybeshelived dangerouslyandspentonenightinherplaidfabric-seated Duster.Sheleftthehouseteary-eyedandscreaminginafit ofcat-fightfemininepassion.Vindicationoftherightsof Sister.

Livinginasmalltownatmospherecanturnany innocentGodfearingsoulintoaharlotinsearchof dangerousornaughtyfun.Never,neverforgettothank parentsforthehiddengiftstheybestowonusthatwillone dayassureclosetsfullofskeletons.

Allwasquietforadayandahalf.Quietenoughtohear theseamonkeyscavortintheirlittleplastichabitat.

Thenshecamehome.Shecamebacktodropoffa packageforme,mypresent.Inalargemanilaenvelope she’dcarefullyinsertedthreecomicbooks,twoboxesof candy,andacardboughtfromthepharmacy.Iknew becauseitsmelledlikethepharmacy.

Herfacewasredfromcrying.Myfacewaswhitefrom

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understandingwhatthismeant.

Thatonedayshewouldn'tbearoundforme,mysister mediator.Thatonedayweallhavetogoaway.Thatone dayI'dhavetofendformyself.

Thatallbestbuddieseventuallygoitalone.

LaterthatnightIthoughtIheardwolvesbayingasIate icecreamandfrosting,stonedonsugarinfrontofthe T.V.'sbluelightcurtainoffakeneonpre-sleeplight.

PhilipKobylarzisanitinerantteacherofthelanguageartsand writeroffiction,poetry,bookreviews,andessays.Hehasworked asajournalist,afilmcritic,aveterinarian'sassistant,a delivereroffurniture,andanascetic.Hehasvolunteeredatthe UnionCityHistoricalMuseum.Hisworkappearsinsuch publicationsasParisReview,Poetry,TheBestAmericanPoetry series,MassachusettsReview,andLalitamba.Healsopublished acollectionpoetryentitledruesandacollectionofshortstories entitledNowLeavingNowheresville.Hespendshistimeinthe EastBay,HuntingtonBeach,andinthemonasteryinwhichhe liveswithhiscatKatdawgRocket99,hisdogChibi,andany womanwhoisabletotemporarilylovehim.

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TheBoardwalk

DawnMajor

SpringBreak,DaytonaBeach,1989

Usthreegirls,milkkittens,notweanedoffthemallyet. Wereturnedourback-to-schoolclothesourmomsbought earlierintheyearforskimpyskirtsandcroppedtanks hiddendeepinoursuitcasesinthebackoftheminivan.

Stephana’sdad,whosuckedhisteethandkeptthe windowdowntosmoke,drovestraightthroughproviding traveltips.

“Followtherabbit.Yougottofollowtherabbit,girls.”

Hiswordsofadvicetousgirls,whohadrecentlyearned learner’slicensesandonedaymightmakethistriponour own.Therabbitwasthecarhecoastedbehind,thecar speedingdownI-75Sthatheclaimedwouldgetpulled overbeforehim.Whenhesawoneofourrabbitsparked ontheshoulderoffI-10headingtowardsJacksonville, Floridawiththeredandbluelightsflashinglikefireworks,

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hepoundedthesteeringwheelandsaid,“Ahhhaa!See girls.That’sourrabbit.Toldyouso.”

Weindulgedhimwithschoolgirlgiggles,irrevocable laughter,knowingburiedbeneathflowerysummerdresses andone-piecedbathingsuitsourpush-upbraswaited.

Weslept‘tilnoonandthenspenttherestofthedayon thebeachcookingouryoungfleshandscheminghowwe wouldsneakouttotheboardwalkatnight.Itwould requirecunning.

TheboardwalkconjuredimagesofMTVspring breakersguzzlingbeerfrombeerbongs,DowntownJulie Brown—Wubba,Wubba,Wubba—PaulyShore,a/k/aThe Weasel,suggestinginhisstonervoicethatcollegeboys lickwhipcreamoffthefeetofdancinggirlsinDayGlo bikinis,andusparentlessgirlswatchingitallfrombehind ourRay-bans,cool,cool,cool.

MaybeitwasthedaydrinkingfollowedbyHappyHour RumRunnersandall-you-can-eatcrablegsthatloosened Stephana’sparentsup.Wedidn’task.Wetold.

“We’regoingtotheboardwalkafterdinner,butwe won’tbelate.”

“Nope.”Stephana’smomruled.

Andherdad,flushedfrombeerandrum,coveredhis wife’shandwithhisownandsaid,“Backby10:30. Latest.”

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“Areyoucold?”Stephana’smomeyedusskeptically, eyesthatsaid,“Iwasonceyoung,leavingthehouseinone outfit…”

“It’swindyonthebeach.”

“Imeanit.10:30.”

Weabandonedouroversizedsweatshirtsinthesand nearthehotel,sheddingskinlikebridesliftingveilsfor thefirstkissandusgirlsallfresh.Freshlycleanedandripe fruitstillwetinthecolander.

Wouldtheyletusintoclubs?

Wedidn’tmakeithomeby10:30,11:00,midnight,or 2:00.Wegotinat3:00AMafterwaitingintheER, listeningtoReneehowlbehindawhiteprivacycurtain, drawnaroundherasifonastage—themainactover.

“Noonehelpedme!Noonehelpedme!”Sheeulogized thenurses,thedoctors,theair—amantrathatwould followherintoadultlife.Ahymnsangfromthenonwhile shefedherbodydrugs,movingherhipsmechanicallyon thefloorsofTattletales,acceptingeverybadmanthat linedupwithhereyesclosed,becausenoonehelpedher.

ShewasjustacornfedgirlfromChampagne,Illinoisonce uponatime.Abunnyrabbitinthebigwoods.

Withinaminuteofhittingtheboardwalk,thelocals foundus,targetingRenee,whowasthefriendlierofus girls,lessguarded,onlyrecentlymovedtotheSouthand becameourfriend.We’dbeentoAtlanta,werecitycagy.

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ShetoldthemshewasfromIllinois. Wrong,wrong,we thought.Shetoldthemtoomuchinherskimpyskirt.She askedwherethepartywas.Theyinvitedher.Wecould all go,buttheireyeshadnarrowedtorazors,apackfocused onusprey,andtheirvoicessuggestedsomethinglessfun. TheymockedRenee.“I’mfromIllinois.I’mfrom Illinois,”theyspitoutbetweenclenchedteeth.

Ifwehadlookedcloserwhenourflipflopshitthedried splinteredboardwalkwewouldhaveseenthetruth.We wereatthewrongbeach,thewrongtownforthatmatter. NoclubsforMTVSpringBreakers,noWubba,Wubba, Wubba,onlyclosedshacksanddivebarsandboredgangs ofteenagedrunawayswillingtokickagirlinthehead, beatherdowntotheboardwalk,boysandgirlspumping fistsintohereyesocketstocurethedulldronedaysthat fueledthenight.Notwolvessinkingteethintorabbitsfor sustenance,butkidsnotmucholderthanusgorgingon violenceforsport. Followtherabbit.

Reneescreaming,“Someonehelpme!Someonehelp me!”

Andthoserunawayswhooncecametothesamebeach, tothesameboardwalk,andlikeusfantasizedabout dancingonMTV.Orlazilypassedjointstooneanother, underthepier,watchingthewaveshitthealgae-covered posts.Believingtheywerethenewgeneration,livinglife bytheirrules,untiltheygothungryandcold,andthey

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rememberedtheywerejustrefugeesfrombrokenfamilies, asunwantedasthetrashthatwashedupfromtheocean. Theirjointsturnedintoglasspipes.Thesweetsmellof reeferreplacedwithburntplastic,driedlips,andzits. And theserabbits,theseGoddamrabbitsinvadingtheir territory,innewclotheswithniceteeth,whoreminded themoftheirmortality.TheseGoddamrabbitsneededto pay.

Thenthetwoofusescapingtotheothersideofthe streetcontemplatingourownhidesuntiltherewasabreak inthebeatdown,andIranandpluckedReneeoffthe boardwalk,andweran,ran,ran,ran,ranandeverything wasnotcoolatall.

Weleftthefollowingday.Notalkofrabbits,noteeth sucking,justReneestaringatuswithoneeyeclear,the other,red.Heroncebrowneyefilledwithpooledblood glaredliketheangrysunatusgirlswhodaredtoflytoo closetoit.

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DawnMajorisanassociateeditoratSouthernLiteraryReview andgraduateoftheEtowahValleyCreativeWritingMFA Program.In2019,shewasawardedtheDr.RobertDriscoll ExcellenceinWritingAward,aswellasReinhardtUniversity’s FacultyChoiceAward.ShewasarecipientoftheJamesDickey ReviewLiteraryEditorFellowshipin2018.

Herwritingmaybefoundat:WellReadMagazine,Heavy FeatherReview,SouthernLiteraryReview,GeorgiaGothic Anthology,SpringerMountainPress,ElderMountain:AJournal ofOzarkStudies,FivePoints,JamesDickeyReview,Sanctuary, SedimentsLiterary-ArtsJournal,andFamilyLife Publications.Sheisanactivememberinthesouthernwriting andispartofmultiplewritingorganizations.

MajorisamemberoftheWilliamGayArchiveandhashelped editandpublishthelateauthor’sworks.Shealsoadvocatesfor southernauthorsonherblogSouthernRead.ShelivesinAtlanta, GAwithherfamily.TheBystandersisMajor’sdebutnovel.Visit www.dawnmajor.comformoreaboutMajor.

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ABloodofBottles

Deborah-ZenhaAdams

Thevulturesontheriverbankpaymenomind.I’m mobilefleshandmyheightbarelyequalstheirwingspan. Neithertreatnorthreat,Idon’tdeservetheirattention.

Vulturesarecarrioneaters,feastinguponcarcassesthat littertheland.Theyliketheirmealsdead,slightly tenderized,andideallyherbivorous.

Thesevulturesaregatheredontheground,whichmakes themcollectivelyavoltoravenueoracommittee.They looklikeundertakersindarksuitsnotquitereadytostart theday.Theseareblackvultures;theydon’thaveastrong senseofsmellsotheyhaven’tyetcaughtthesweet-sick stenchofdeadanimalinthewoodsbehindme.Their olfactorily-giftedturkeyvulturecousinswillbealongsoon topointtheway,though.

It’sjustaftersevenonalate-summerTennessee morning,andquietasthegrave.Theriver’sglasssurface,

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emptyoftraffic,doesn’tsparearipple.Birdsaresilent, leavesdon’trustle,humidairhangsheavy.Thevultures arequiet,aswell,butthat’stheirway.Theyhavenosyrinx toallowforcallsorsong.Alltheycanmusterisagruntor hisswhenfeedingordefending.

Despitemybestefforttoeaseontothescene,I’ma clumsyinvader.Alltheresidentsofthisriparian communityhitonmypresenceatonce.Turtlesslideoff theirlogandslipintothewater,barelybreakingthe surface.Theheronsquawksawarningtothejaysand squirrels,andsuddenlytheworldisopenforbusiness.

Eventhecommitteehasroused.Likeme,they’venoted theslidingarrivaloftwomeninaboat(adriftof fishermen)trollingtowardthecovewhereashoalof catfishlurknearthemuddybottom.Fartheraway,atiny speckonthehorizon,atowboaturgesafloatofbarges aheadofit.

Thisisthetimeofyearwhenthewaterlevelisatits lowest,aresultofsummerdroughtanddamadjustment. Becauseofthat,Icanwalkthenakedshorelinethatis usuallycoveredbythewatersofKentuckyLake.

Everydrawdownrevealsaslumofrubbish.Mymission istoharvestthegarbage.Ispottwoplasticwaterbottles, aninflatedbeachball,apairofmen’sboxershorts,three railroadspikes,andtheamputatedsectionofaboatdock, allonthefirsttwentyfeetofshorelinethatItravel.

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OnceIthoughtIcouldpickupeverythingthescagof humansabandoned.Iwaswrong.IbecametheSisyphus oftheshore,presentedwithafreshstrewofrubbishevery day.Igaveuponsavingthedignityoftheneighborhood, thepurityoftheriverbank,andsettledinsteadfortidying myconscience.

NowIfocusononeparticulartypeoftrash:glass.By thetimebottlesandjarsridethewavesandcometorest onsolidground,they’vecrackedandshattered.They usuallylodgeinthemudsharp-edge-up.Glassinwateris practicallyinvisible;agoodrainturnsthisshoreintoa punjitrapwaitingforbarefootchildrenandneighborhood dogstosplashthrough.

Ispotthefirstpieceimmediately–theinvertedneckof aBudLight—justasashadowpassesoverhead.The turkeyvultureshavearrivedtoleadtheirkintothe breakfastbuffet.Thecommitteebecomesakettlewhenit fliesupandscansthegroundinever-tighteningcircles,a formationofskydiversperformingadreamballet,light andgauzyandchoreographedtoachievemaximumenergy efficiency.Keepyourhummersandtanagers—it’s this speciesIadmiremost.

Thekettlemovesbehindthetreeline,andIgobackto work.I’mcarefulwiththebrokenglass,approachingit cautiously,movingslowlyandstealthily.Eventually, undoubtedly,therewillcomeatimewhenmyattention

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wanders,whenI’mdistractedforhalfathoughtbya migratingmonarchorthesplashofacarp.Myhandwill slip,andbloodwillflowbeforeIrealizeI’mslicedopen.

Whenitfinallyhappens,itwillprobablybeaminorcut, asmallinconvenience.Thenagain,itcouldbealaid-bareto-the-bonegashthatopensafloodgateoflifefluid—a gushofbloodthatdrainsmystrengthandconsciousness beforeIcancallforhelp.

Thenmysingle-useshellwillenduponthisriver’s edge,justanotherpieceofhumandetrituslitteringthe landscape.I’mavegetarian,sothat’saplusforthewake ofvulturesthatwillcleanupafterme.

Deborah-ZenhaAdamsisanaward-winningauthorofnovels, shortfiction,CNF,andpoetry.Herworkhasappearedin AdelaideLiteraryMagazine,TheOrchardsPoetryJournal,One, Sheila-na-gig,andotherjournals.You’reinvitedtovisither websitetoreadmoreofherwork.www.Deborah-Adams.com

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Zoningoutwithoutconsent

Asyourmindgrabsyoufromreality

Pullingyouintoitsconfines

Asecretgardenwithmonarchbutterflies

Theshieldbehindyourbrowneyes

Becausethetruthisterrible

Inthisplace,youarefreeofpain,

Whereyoucaneatwhateverfruityoulike

Povertyisn'tathinghere

Thiswildernesshasviolets,columbineflowers,and manyotherwondersinit

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Eachstepisanotherbreaththatyou'vebeenholding

Asturquoisegrassticklesyourskin

Youadmireanendlesscrystalazurelake

Filledwithlifeandnottrash

FlashesofyourTVappears

Thejadedblueglow,ahauntingcontrast

Againstthiswarmandvibrantgarden

Asyourmindwillsitaway,

Becauseitisasymbolthatreflectsthetruth

Unlikethisfantasythatdistractsyou

Withoutitspresence,youcontinuetoexplore

Fallingdeeperintoyourfracturedpsyche

Thebirdschirpingisthethemesongofyourinsanity

Asyoulayonthelivingroomfloorsurroundedbyneedles

Yourbody,justashellofabrokensoul

Tryingtosurviveondreamsandnothingmore.

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K.G.Munroisanauthorandpoet.Shehasbeenpublishedin variousmagazinesandonlinepublicationssuchasOddball Magazine,PoetryPotion,ScarletDragonflyJournal,Muddy RiverReview,GreenInkMagazine,LiteraryYard,FiveItchy Fleas,Spillwords,Feversofthemind,OpenDoorMagazine, WinglessDreamer,TheWell,ArtsOfMalina,AgapeReview, EarthlyComforts.

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Cat. Feralblackcat.

BlackCat YanaKane

NonamethatIknowof, nonamethatIwouldpresumetobestow. FortenyearsIhaveaddressedhim byhistitle: “Cat”.

Sometimeshecomesbyforaleisurelyvisit.

Hemeows,Ising-song:“kitty-cat”.

Hisfourpawsstepdelicatelyinasingleline, thetailflicksmyknees.

AsIstrokehisslickarchedback,

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heweavesinfinitysigns aroundandaroundmyankles— ahypnoticritualofjoy.

Sometimesheshowsup skittish,bristling, notwishingtobetouched. Heeatstheofferedfoodquickly, silentlymeltsintothenight, blackintoblack.

Sometimeshemeetsme

asIamtakingawalkintheevening:

emergesfromthecoverofabush, followsmetomyhouse, flickeringoutintheshadows.

Sometimesheappearsonmyporch nightafternight,foraweek.

Sometimesheisgoneforamonthormore.

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Ifret,walkaroundtheneighborhood, pausingbyeverypromisingbush, callinghim,knowingitisinvain.

Hiscomingsandgoingsarenotpredictable, arenotgovernedbymyconcerns.

Itwouldbeahumanconceit

toimaginethatthecatintends

toteachmenon-attachment.

ButIlearn,nonetheless.

Inthesupermarket,

Ipacksevencansof“seafooddinner”intomybag.

Thepurchaseisanactofhope.

Ihavenotseenhiminweeks.

Thecashieraskswithgenuineinterest:

—Whatkindofcatdoyouhave?

—Idonothaveacat.

Respondingtoherunspokenquestion, Iadd,wistfully:

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—Thisisforafriend.

Shestares,perturbed.

Iwadedeeperintothetruth: —Myfriendisacat.

YanaKanewasbornintheSovietUnionandcametotheUSasa refugeeattheageof16.Sheholdsabachelor'sdegreein ElectricalEngineeringandComputerSciencefromPrinceton University,andaPhDinStatisticsfromCornellUniversity.

Recently,shewrappedupasuccessfultechnicalcareer,retiring fromComcastasaseniorprincipalengineer.Currently,Kaneis pursuingaCreativeWritingMFAdegreeatFairleighDickinson University,whereshehasbeenawardedtheMitchandLynn BaumeisterScholarship.ShehasadoublemajorinLiterary TranslationandPoetry.

Kane'srecentpoemsandproseinEnglishhaveappearedin“The RedWheelbarrow”,“PlatformReview”,and“VerseVirtual”. HerrecentbilingualRussian-Englishpoemsandpoetry translationsfromRussianintoEnglishhaveappearedin128LIT ,EastWestLiteraryForum,and"Точка.Зрения"/"View.Point" (litpoint.press).Kane'sworkwasrecognizedby"Точка.Зрения"/ "View.Point"asamong"Bestof2022"inthecategoryof "LiteraryTranslation."

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ANNIEASKS…

MANDYHAYNES,AUTHOROF LITERARYFICTIONWITHA

SOUTHERNDRAWL

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ANNIEMCDONNELLASKS

MANDYHAYNES

MandyHayneshaswrittentwoshortstorycollectionswith bothsmartandentertainingstorytelling.Themomentyou openthesebooksyouhavetoreaduntiltheend.Each storyleadsyouintoanotherexcitingonetoread.It’sher voice!Mandyisoriginal,shedoesn’tletgoofthat Southerncharmthathadmeathello.It’shersandhers alone.Thefirstbook“WalkingtheWrongWayHome” andthesecond,“SharpasaSerpent'sTooth-Evaand OtherStories”.She’salsowrittenanovella,“Oliver”. She’stheeditoroftheanthology“WorkinProgress”,and co-editoroftheSouthernWritersReadingreunion anthology,“TheBestoftheShortest”thatcomesoutlater thisyear.

TheillustriousMandyHaynesdoesn’tstopthere.She’s alsothecreatorofthisliteraryjournal,WELLREAD Magazine.Ihavetotellyouthismagazineissofabulous youdon’tevenknowwhattodowithyourselfwhenyou finishreadingitbecauseyourTBRlistjustkeepsgrowing andgrowing.InJanuary,Mandyputoutanongoingcall forsubmissionsforFiction,prose,flashfiction,poetry,and visualartandhaspublishedsomefantasticworkbysome establishedaswellasfirsttimeauthorsandartists.

ItwassuchanhonortohostthisinterviewwithMandy

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Haynesbecausesheissomuchmorethanherrésumé.She reallycaresaboutwhatshe’sdoing.Shethrivesonit,as sheissomeonethatreallywantstohelppromoteother authorsbesidesherself.Ioftenhavetoremindherto discussherself.Someofusareborntobragaboutother authorsandsheisdefinitelyoneofthem.

Last,butnotleastonherrésuméishersmallbusiness, threedogswritepress-lifesupportforauthors.Shedoes interiorformatting,developmentalediting,createsbook covers,swag,graphics-younameit.Mandyisso talented!Oh,she’salsoafreelancewriterforthe Amelia Islander and AmeliaWeddings, andhashadseveralstories makethecover.

TypicallytheauthorIchooseeverymonthisonethatI believewasborntoshine.MandyHaynesisinalaneall herown.Ihavebeentryingtointerviewhersincemy columnfirstbeganinWELLREADMagazine.Because there’ssomethingaboutMandythat’sdifferentfromso manyotherauthors,bloggers,writers,readers,reporters, podcastersandauthorinterviewers.Youseeshehasallof themwrappedintoone,andshedoesthemallbeautifully, sotosaythatsheshinesisnotenough.Oneofmyfavorite quotesis“borntoshimmerborntoshine”andIhaveto saythattaglineisMandytoatee.

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IusetheProustinterviewmodeltolearnmoreabout authors.Thismodelhasbeenaroundsince1890andIfirst sawitusedintheVanityFairMagazine.Everysingle monththeyasksomeonefamousthirty-fivequestions.SoI decideditwouldbefunifIhadmyguestsanswertenof thequestions.Interestingfactaboutthisisthatauthorscan usethisProustmodeltolearnmoreaboutthecharacters they’rewritingaboutbyaskingthemthesequestions.

Q:Whatorwhoisthegreatestloveofyourlife?

A:Myson.I’veneverlovedanotherhumanbeingas muchasIlovehim.

Q:Whichtalentwouldyoumostliketohave?

A:IwishIcouldsing,butIcan’tcarryatuneinabucket.

Q:Ifyouweretocomebackasapersonorthing,what woulditbe?

A:CarolynHaines’sdog,orcat,orhorseoranythingof Carolyn’sbecauseshehassuchunconditionalloveforall animals.

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Q:Whatisyourmosttreasuredpossession?

A:Astatueofamonkey-hisnameisChief-thatsitson mydesk(nomatterwherethatmaybe).(Herprized possessionwasgiventoherbyoneofherformerpatients. Ironically,shehadnameditChief,whichwasthepatient's father’snickname.)

Annie:Thankyouforworkingatachildren’shospital, Mandy.ThatisveryimportantworkandI’msurequite emotional.(Mandywasapediatriccardiacsonographer forsixteenyearsatMonroeCarroll,Jr.Children’sHospital inNashville.)

Q:Whatdoyouvaluemostinyourfriends?

A:Honesty.

Q:Whoisyourbiggestherooffiction?

A:FlanneryO’Connor.Shewasfearless,especiallyforher time.

Q:Whatareyourfavoritenames?

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A:OliverandOlivia.

Q:Whatwouldbeyourfavoriteoccupation?

A:Toownacoffeeshop.Ofcourse,thisisafantasysoI wouldhirepeopleandIcouldcomeinwhenIwantedand justtalktothecustomers!I’dhavethisbasketofyarnfor aneverendingscarfsowhilepeoplearewaitingfortheir coffee,orwhiletheyaredrinkingorwhatever,theycould crochettheirfavoritestitches.Thenwhenthescarfwas longenough,I’dtieitoffandhangitupoutsidetheshop foranyonethatneededit.

Q:I’mawarethatyouhavejustmoved,soIdohaveto askthisquestion~Wherewouldyoumostliketolive?

A:Alabama.It’sbeenanadventureandalotoffun.Ilove beingCarolynHaines’sneighborandgettingtohelpher withGoodFortuneFarmRefuge.I’mlearningsomuch andmeetingsomanyinterestingpeople,plusCarolynisa hoottobearound.AfterImovedtoAmeliaIsland,Iwas sobusywritingandworkingthatIslippedintoserious hermitmode.Ididn’trealizehowmuchImissedhaving company.Itwasn’thealthyforme-mentallyorphysically tobesoisolated.ImetCarolyninpersonlastAugustwhen IwenttoFairhopeforabookeventfor Serpent’s.She

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invitedmetocomevisitheronthefarmandwehititoff. Cometofindout,CarolynwasinthesameboatIwasas farasthewholehermitthing.Longstoryshortsheturned oneofherhorsebarnsintoabarndominumandme,the pups,andAlbert(myturtle)putthehouseontheislandup forsaleandmovedonover.TheyloveithereasmuchasI do.

Makesureyoucheckoutthe BetweenThePagesPodcast fortherestofthestory!

ThankyouMandyforopeningyourselfuptothis interview.IknowIpushedyou-butIthinkgettingto knowyouisjustasimportantasallthepeopleyouwantus togettoknow.Andthankyouformakingspaceforme heretodowhatIlove!

Moe,Pearl,andCurly Mandy’sassistantsat threedogswritepress

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Authorof Annie’sSong:Dandelions,Dreams&Dogs,Book

Reviewer,AuthorInterviewer,Teacher,Speaker,Writer,Author Consultant,Co-Admin.AtWorldoftheWriteReviewBookClub, Blogger,Authoronlineeventplanner.

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“ThisiswhyIlovereaders…becausetheydiscoverelementsthatare therebutperhapstheauthordidnotrealize.Isupposeallthese variationsoflovearefrommysubconscious.Ithinkthatiswhereyour charactersareborn.”

MARYELLENTHOMPSONINTERVIEWS

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IconnectedwithDawnMajorbyemailwhenwehad occasiontoconverseaboutourmutualfriendandauthor, RobertGwaltney.RoberthadrecentlystayedinBeaufort forThePatConroyWriter’sResidency,whichIhost,and Dawnhadaskedhimtowriteanessayabouthis experiencefor SouthernLiteraryReview,wheresheisthe AssociateEditor.Onethingledtoanotherandwehave beenchattingeversince.

Wellaccomplishedinmanyliteraryaspects,anintriguing additiontohereducationalandwritingexperienceisthat Dawnisanadventuress.Neveronetobackawayfroma challenge,it’sentirelypossibleshemaysoonrevisither interestinbeingarollerderbyqueen,butthat’sastoryfor anotherday.

WhenIreadDawn’sdebutnovel, TheBystanders,I wantedtoknowmoreaboutthestorybehindthestoryand askedhertodishalittlebitaboutwhathadbeenonher mind.

MaryEllen: TheBystanders hasbeendescribedina myriadofways.Certainlyallthecharacters,withthe exceptionofDaleSamples,whoisvastlyunlikeable, portrayacertainunderstandingoftherelationshipthey havewiththemselves.Unlikemanynovelsthathaveafew maincharacters,andperhapsahandfulofsupporting characters,yourbookhasacommunityofcharacterswho wecometoknowduringthestory,andunderstandwhat parttheyplay.You’vegivenusaglimpseattheir underpinningsandexposedtheirunderbellies.

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Forinstance,WendySamplesisagoodmominaterrible situation.Hernaivetyininvitingthegirlstothetrailerfor aslumberpartyisheartrending,yetherseeminglysimple efforttosavethedaybyreadingTarotcardsisbrilliant. Sheliterallyreadthemindsofthosepettygirlsandgave themasmileandahugemetaphoricalkickinthesolar plexus.

Yousharedwithmethatyoufeltyourmomwaslike“The HighPriestess”andyouhadyourowndayofreckoning asaresultofherpractices.Tellusaboutthat.

Dawn: MymotherwasborninCaliforniainthelate1940s whichputherrightinthemiddleofcounterculture movements.Whenmymommarriedmydad,theymoved fromSacramentotoLosAngelesinthelate1960s.This wasSouthernCalifornia.Everyonehadapsychicandwas intotheNewAgemovement,includingmymom.That wasjustherthingandmysistersandIdidnotthinkmuch ofit.ShereadTarotcards,sheastralprojected,shecast spells…thepoppetinthatchapterwassomething commonlyfoundinourfreezer.Yes,wewereraised Catholic,butwewerealsoraisedlikeaminicoven. Catholicismisritualisticsoitalljustseemedlikean extensionofreligionorspiritualitytome.

“TheHighPriestess”wasmyhomagetomymother. WhilewedidnotliveinarundowntrailerlikeShannon, Wendy,andDale,wedidliveinanunfinishedbasement, andwewerepoor.Thathousehadaflatroof,anditwould leakwhenthesnowmeltedoritrained,soweputgiant

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Tupperwarebowlsanddrywallbucketseverywhereto collectthewater.Later,wegirlswouldgoupontheroof withhotbucketsoftartobrushovertheseams,butit wouldinevitablyleakagain.Thewaterdamagecaused mold.Ouronlysourceofheatwasawoodburningstove andwehadtochopwoodduringthesummer.Inthe winter,ifyouwerenotinthelivingroomnearthestoveit wasverycold.SomeonedonatedawindowACunittous. ThankGod!Missouriisalsoextremelyhot.Comingfrom California,thelandofplenty,thiswasadowngrade.Idid notrealizethisimmediately,becauseIwassoyoungand thoughtIwashavingagrandadventure.Butlater,whenI becameateenagerandsawhowmyfriendslived,Iwas embarrassed.Still,Iwouldnotchangeit.IfIdidnothave thoseexperiences, TheBystanders wouldnothave existed.

AttheonesleepoverIdidhavebeforewemoved,Iwasso worriedaboutwhatthesegirlswouldthinkaboutour home.Itwasnotreallyareckoningperse...likeIwrote about,butmymommadeitfunbyreadingtheirTarot cardswhichdistractedfromthe“setting”inwhichthey foundthemselves.Shesavedthenight.Whatdidoccur, however,wasacoupleofthegirlstoldtheprincipalthat mymotherclimbedwalls(amisinterpretationofastral projection).Iwassoaccustomedtomymother’spractices, Icalmlyexplainedtoherwhatastralprojectionwas.Iwas madefunofforthat,sothiswasmywayofgettingsome resolutionforthosegirlsdivulgingoursecrets.

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MaryEllen:Althoughthebookhasitsfairshareofsocial

commentary,Ialsoreadalovestoryonsomanylevels: Eddy’sfirstloveforShannon,Wendy’smaternallovefor Shannon,Wendy’staintedloveforDale,Tina’sforbidden loveforDale,LenaandHolda’sdedicatedloveforeach otherandtheirchurch,Doll’sgossipyloveforacceptance, Anna’snarcissisticloveforherself,SisterB’ssororallove forherQueenbees.Didyouintentionallythreadthese lovestoriesthroughoutthebook?

Dawn: Yesandno.Icertainlywroteaboutunrequitedlove betweenEddyandShannon,Tina’sforbiddenlovefor Dale,andLenaandHolda’ssisterlove,whichisbasedon myloveformytwosisters.SisterB’sloveforherbees wasaboutherlovefororder.InsomepartDaleandSister Barealike.DalelovesWendyinhisownsickway,butit ishisfearoflosingherlovethatdriveshisjealousy.He triestoisolatehersonooneelsecanhaveher.Thatis commonforabusers-isolationandcontrol.SisterBand Daledonotunderstandreallove.Whentheythinkthey haveit,theyclingtoitandtrytocontrolitbecausethey areafraidtheywillloseit,orsomeoneelsewilltrytotake itawayfromthem.

Wendy’sloveforDaleismoreaboutherfearofbeing alone…thoughshedidabsolutelylovehimatonetime. AndIfeltWendyoftenputDalebeforeShannonuntilthe veryendwhenshefinallyseesDaleforwhoheis.Then, shestepsupandunderstandstheneedtogetoutand protectherdaughter.Shebecomesmorematernal,forme, atthatpoint.Notthatshewasnotmaternalbefore,buther

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fearofDaledrivesher.

IhadnotthoughtaboutAnnaandDollinthatway,but howintriguing.ThisiswhyIlovereaders…becausethey discoverelementsthataretherebutperhapstheauthordid notrealize.Isupposeallthesevariationsoflovearefrom mysubconscious.Ithinkthatiswhereyourcharactersare born.

MaryEllen: Eddywasourherointhefirstchapter,and bytheendofthebookheisstandingbythesideofthe roadwavinggood-bye.Yousaidtome,“PoorEddynever getsthegirl.Istillfeelbadaboutthat.”Ifyouwereto writethenextchapterinEddy’slife,wherewouldittake him?

Dawn: EddymustremaininLawrenceton.Heismore open-mindedthanmostofthetownspeople,butthetown isintegraltohissoul.Hecanneverleave.Eddyrepresents howIfeltaboutthisplace.Oh,Iwasanoutsideratfirst, butIhadaninstantloveaffairwithourland.Webought fortyacresandbeyondthattherewasnothingbutacres andacresoffarmlandandhorsefarms.Iwasintimately connectedtotheland.Magical.ThatishowEddyis,too.

Youaskedaboutloveinyourpreviousquestion.Eddy’s lovefornatureandhisancestrallandisanothersortof lovestory.

Now,atonepointIdidletEddygetShannon.Iwrotea scenewheretheywentalltheway!But,andperhapsthis iswhereIfeelalittleguilty,Islashedandburnedthose

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scenes.HereIgaveShannontohim,andhewashappy andthenItookheraway,andevenworse,shehookedup withhisbadboycousin.ThisspeakstohowcloseIfeltto him.Itfeltcrueltotoywithhim,butitjustdidnotfitwith himgettingthegirl.Andthat’slife.Wedonotalwaysget thegirlortheboy.Shannondidnotfaresowellinthelove department,either.Younglovefeelssoreal,butasweall know,firstsarefirstsforareason.

MaryEllen: Thatwasquitethedreamsequencethenight beforeConfirmationatSt.Agnes!Whatinspiredyouto writethat?

Dawn: Thedreamscenewassofuntowrite!Istarted writingspeculativefiction,andIjustcouldnotholdback anymore.Ineededtotrymyhandatit.Ofcourse,thisisa realistictextsoIwasnotabletoaddaghostorawitch becauseIwouldbedeviatingfromrealism.What

Icoulddowaswrite“TheHighPriestess,”aboutWendy,a self-proclaimedwitch,andIcouldalsoaddafantastical sceneliketheonein“SaintDamianofMolokai.”Iwas experimenting,butitstemmedfrommydesiretowrite speculativefictionwhichIamdoingwithmynextnovel setinahauntedWalmartstoreinNorthGeorgia.

MaryEllen: Youhavethechapterstoldfromdifferent character'spointsofviewbutin"TheHighPriestess"you switchfromthethirdpersonpointofviewtofirstperson pointofviewinShannon’svoice.Whatwasyourreason fordoingthat?

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Dawn: Thatisanexcellentquestion,andIdebatedthe point-of-viewinthatchapterquiteabit.Iwasconcerned itwouldbetoojarringforthereaderwhenthatswitch camearound.Infact,whenIreceivedfinaleditsfrommy publisher,hesuggestedIchangethetensebecause originallythatchapterwastoldinpresenttense.Iagreed withthatchange;theentirebookwastoldinpasttense.I worriedaboutnotchangingittothirdperson,butmy publisherdidnothaveanissuewithkeepingitinfirst person.

However,thefirstdraftof“TheHighPriestess”was writteninthirdperson.Amentorofminefromgraduate schoolsuggestedItrythenarrationinfirstperson.

Sometimes,whenIamstrugglingwithacharacter’s voice,IplayaroundwithtenseorPOV.Asitturnedout, “TheHighPriestess”toldviafirst-personnarrationwasa muchfunnierread,Iwouldhavelostthehumorand closenessofthenarratortothereaderbyswitchingbackto thirdperson.Whenyougettothelastchapter,“Calendar Days,”therearesectionsthataretoldinfirst-person point-of-viewviaShannon’sjournalentries.Didthat balancethePOVoutsome?Iguessthereaderswilltell me.

WhenIstartedwriting TheBystanders,Iintendedfor Shannontobethemaincharacter,butitjustdidnotwork outthatway.Ohcertainly,sheappearsineverychapter andisamaincharacter,butEddyappearsineverychapter, too,andactslikeasecondaryprotagonistattimes.So, whynotwritetheentirenovelfromherperspective?

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Shannon’scharacterwasanoutsider;Ithoughtitwasonly fairshehadachancetovoiceheropinionsinceeveryone inthetownhadachancetoexpresstheirviewsabouther andherdysfunctionalfamily.Butbecausethisisastory wherethetownisalsoacharacter,howimpartialdoyou thinkshewouldbeabouthernewtown?Mostofthe charactersareincrediblyhappywheretheylive.Atown doesnotcenteraroundoneperson.

Finally,IlovehowElizabethStroutgaveavoicetothe charactersinhertownin OliveKitteridge and Olive, Again. TheBystanders isanoveltoldthroughstories,like Strout’s,andthereaderdoesnothavetoreadthebookin order.Ifyouweretoread“TheHighPriestess”asastandalonestory,thenfirst-personPOVmaynotseemtostick outasmuch.

MaryEllen: AsAssociateEditorof SouthernLiterary Review,youhaveinterviewedauthorsandwrittenmany reviews.Howdoesitfeeltobeontheothersideofthe coin?

Dawn: Itmakesmeappreciatepeoplelikeyourself,Mary Ellen,whotookthetimetodoadeepdiveintomybook andformulatetheseincrediblequestions.Icannottellyou howmuchIappreciateyouinterviewingme.You discoveredelementsof TheBystanders thatwerethereall along,butIhadnotrecognizedmyself.Youtoldmeinan emailyouthought TheBystanders hadalltheselove storiesweavedthroughout.So,yes,Iwroteaboutfailed

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love,firstloves,unrequitedlove,andunhealthyideasof love,butIdidnotrecognizetheotherlovestoriesyou pointedouttomelikeSisterB’sloveforherbeesandby extensionherloveforSt.AgnesSchool.

Letmeexplainmyself.Iapproachedthechapter“Road Trip,”orthefailedlovebetweenDaleandTina,asasad countrymusicsong.ImadesureIputinalltheelements ofacountrysong:adivebar,aroadtrip,sex,drugs,and rockandroll,andlovegonewrongandthensprinkledin someTonyaTuckerandDollyParton.Writingthatchapter waskindoflikewatchingacountrymusicvideowhere thewomanhasa“CometoJesus”momentandstarts slashingherman’stires.Itwasalwaysveryvisualtome andlessconceptionalintermsofitbeingaboutthe subjectoffailedlove.So,itisintriguingtobeontheother sideofthecoin(asyouputit)andfindoutwhatreaders, andgoodreaderslikeyourself,havetosay.Thisiswhat makesyouabetterwriter.Listeningtoyourreaders.

MaryEllen: Andfinally,Dawn,thatageoldquestion: Whatadvicedoyouhaveforotherwriters?

Dawn: Everypublishedwritersaysthis,butitistrue,and Iwillreiterateitandaddmyspin.Writewhatyouknow andthen(andhereismytake)….greatlyexaggerate.Here isthething.AftermovingtoGeorgiafromruralSoutheast Missouri,Ireturnedonceshortlyafterourmove,but neveragain.Welivedthereforsevenyears.IfeltlikeI knewthisplace,ormysettingatthatspecifictimeperiod.

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IcontemplatedreturningwhileIwaswriting The Bystanders,butitwouldhavecorrupteditforme.I wantedmysettingandmycharacterstoremaininthe 1980ssuspendedintimeasifthisplaceandthesepeople werefossilized.Thestoryislikeamosquitotrappedin amber.Imaginationandcreativitywilldotherest.So,this isinspiredbymychildhoodandrealplaces,buttherestis exaggeration,andallfiction.

Also,gowithyourgut.Ifyougetabadvibeabouta publisherorpublication,thereisareason.Ithinkmany writerswhogettheirfirstacceptancelettersigntheirlife awaywithoutpayingattentiontowhattheyaresigning. Theyarenotattorneys.Thelegaljargoncanbe intimidating,andwritersarejustsodamnexcitedabout publishingtheirfirstbook.DOreadyourcontract thoroughlyandaskmoreseasonedauthorswhohave traveleddownthepublicationroadwhattheiropinionis. Whatisfair?Whatisegregious?Also,findouttheterms thepublisherofferstobookstoresbecausethataffects whetheryourbookisgoingtolandinindependent bookstores.Somepublishersonlycareaboutonlinesales. Bepreparedtoaskthosetypesofquestions.

Irecentlydida“WriteNow”virtualeventwiththe BroadleafWritersAssociation.Thepresident,Zachary Steele,interviewedmeandHelenPittsBradley—authorof BreachofTrustwhoalsopublishedwithMoonshine Cove—andthatsamequestioncameup.IloveHelen’s advice:“BEBOLD.BEBRAVE.”Iwouldaddthatwhen youarenewtothewritingsceneyoushouldsay“yes”to

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opportunitiesthatmakeyouuncomfortablebecausethose possibilitiesofferexposure.Youneedawriting community.Youneedawritingcritiquegroup.The Bystanderswouldneverhavebeenbornwithoutmy teachers,mentors,authorfriends,workshopgroup,writing associations,mypublishingbuddy,Helen,myfamily,and thesupportofreviewersandinterviewers,and Publicationslike WellReadMagazine.So,asafinaltidbit ofadvice:BGRATEFUL!

MaryEllenThompson’sinterviewwiththelegendaryPatConroywas publishedin ALowcountryHeart.Aleadfeatureswriterfor Beaufort LifestyleMagazine foreightyearsunderJulieHalesreign,and columnistfor LowcountryWeekly fortenyears,shehasalsowrittenfor PoolerMagazine,EffinghamMagazine,CarolinaArtsMagazine,St. Mary’sMagazine and Eat,Sleep,PlayBeaufort.

MaryEllenhasveryhappyfeetandlovestotravel.RaisedontheMain LineofPhiladelphiaandtheEasternShoreofMD,shehasaB.S.From SkidmoreCollegeinBusiness.CurrentlylivingonSaintHelenaIsland, SC,shehostsaWriter’sResidencyforthePatConroyLiteraryCenter, andiswritingaretrospectivenarrative.

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MARYELLENTHOMPSONREVIEWS THEBYSTANDERS

IntheopeningchapterofDawnMajor’sdebutnovel, TheBystanders,andthreadedthroughoutthebook,there areinstanceswheresomeofthecharactersarebeing caughtinthepositionofbeingbystanders.Asweknow,a bystanderissomeonewhosees/watchesanincidenttaking placebutfeelsunableorunwillingtodoanythingto affecttheoutcome.

Allbookreadersarethereforebystanders-theycan followtheplotand"watch"variousactionsoccurringbut cannot,inanyway,acttoinfluenceorchangeany outcomes,nomatterhowmuchtheymaywantto.The authoristheonlypersonwhoisnotabystander.

Thereisnodoubtthat TheBystanders isheavyonsocial commentary.Acomplexsetofcharactersliveinthesmall townofLawrenceton,Missouriinthe1980s.When

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newcomersfromCalifornia,andnotverysavoryonesat that,invadetheirboundariesbymovingin,thelocalsall grabforgossipaboutthem-likekidscatchingtadpolesin apond.

But TheBystanders isalsoalovestory.Althoughfar frombeingyourtypicallovestory,itisalovestory nonetheless.Puppylove,younglove,flawedlove, obsessivelove,unrequitedlove,parentallove,allviefor attentionasthecharactersseektofind,anddefine, themselves.Goodguys,badguys,meangirls,plucky heroines,twospinstersisters (LenaandHoldaweretwins; howevermostparishionersdidn’tseethemastwo eccentrichens,butasonebigladywhocrackedinhalf), andaratherbattynuninabunnycoat,dancetoa resonatingbeatthatchangesintempothroughoutthe story,butneverinintensity.

Obviouslyaromanticatheart,Majordoesn’thesitate, withheredginess,toexposetherawandseamiersideof lifeassheexplainsinherpreface,butatthesametimeshe managestoshakethingsupandshineonconceptslikethe iconicstatusof“trailertrash”withabrighterlight.

Youwillwhipthroughthisbookinnotimebecause DawnMajorhasdugherfingernailsjustfarenoughinto yourfleshthatyou’renotsureifherlettinggowillresult inpainorpleasure,andyouhaveanachingneedtoknow whichitwillbe.

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Thetwoheroines,WendySamplesandherdaughter Shannon,liveinatrailerandfacemanyoftheunfortunate experiencesthehumanconditioncanthrowattwopeople. However,despitealltheevidencetothecontraryinher ownlife,Wendystilllooksforthegoodinpeopleand unfailinglykeepsametaphoricaljarofhopetuckedinside herpocket.

Shannon,despitebeinglabeledasanoutsiderfromthe getgo,facesthedilemmaofmarkingherselfasthe outsiderbyherdressandattitude,yetstilllongsforthe acceptanceofherpeers.

Shereflects, Notonlywereweoutsiderswithour outsideways,butwewerewhitetrashinthemiddleofa townthatwassettledin17-somethingandsomething. We’retalkingaboutdeep-deep-deeprootedtraditions.And thatmadeusstandoutlikeabonfireinAntarctica.

Withsomegoodbehavior,andsomelessthansterling behavior,Shannon’sconflictisthreadedthroughoutthe storylinewitheveryonehavinghisorherownresponse andreaction.AndthenthereispoorEddyBauman,whois attractedtoShannonlikeapuppytoabiscuit.Hebecomes heronlyunlikelyfriendandhisnaivetyisrefreshingasis hisnewfoundsenseofadventure.

Wendy’sabusivehusbandandShannon’sstep-father, Dale,ismeanerthanasnakeandhasallthecharmofa cowpie. Wendydidn’texpectthefreighttrainthatcame

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tearingdownthehallway,rippingthroughthelocked dooroftheirbedroom,andfistsandfleshandboneand teethandbloodhappeningsoquicklyandallatonceshe didn’thaveamomenttobescaredoreventorealizeshe wasontheotherendofhisrage,orthatitwasherflesh, bone,teeth,andblood.Andthenhisapologiesand promises,themanwiththenastyplanbehindhiseyes wasn’tgoingtotake“no”forananswer,soshestayed outoffear…

Nowtheirdirtylaundryhadgonetoolongonthe clothesline,throughshowers,sun,snow,andseasons becomingdirtieranddirtier,worthless,andlonelylike someforgottensockthatremainedonthelineyearafter yearforthewholetowntoview.

Major’sunderstandingofthepsycheisclearly evidencedwiththemyriadofemotionsthatflow throughoutthestory.Shecarefullyandaccuratelyportrays thealmostdemonicobsessioninabusiverelationshipsas WendyandDaleillustrate,andit’saprettygoodbetthat sheremembersthenuancesandfripperyofteenagegirls andtheirgossamerawarenessofself,andothers. Their bodieswereyoung,ripe,andglistenedlikebrightnew bicyclesorBingcherriesrecentlywashed,waitingin colanderstobedroppedintobutterypiecrusts.

Therearealsosomehilarioustragicomedicscenes whichkeepyouonyourtoesbecauseyou’rejustnotsure

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whichwaythewindwillblow.You’llneedtoholdonto yourhatespeciallywhenthesisters’nativityset,whichis supposedtocomeallthewaydirectlyfromtheVatican, doesn’tarriveasexpectedandthesistersturnthechurch’s MidnightMasstopsy-turveywiththeirinnovativeidea.

OrwhenTheSistersoftheMostPreciousBloodhosta pre-confirmationsleepinintheirbasementcafeteria.

Bepreparedtolaugh,crossyourlegs,clenchyourfists, unlockyourjaw,andwipetearsawaywiththebackof onehandwhileyouholdthebookclutchedintheother. TheBystanders isatopnotchbookandweanticipatea meteoricclimbonbestsellerlists.

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Let’sgooffthepage andintothelifeof RaymondAtkins

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Whetheryouareareaderorawriter,thereisapretty goodchanceyouhavebeentoabooksigning.Theseare mostoftenheldatbookstores,althoughyoumayhave attendedoneataliteraryfestival,yourlocallibrary,or perhapsatabookcluboracivicorganization.Readings andsigningsareanexcellentwaytogettoknowyour favoritewriters,andinmyexperience,theyaregenerally enjoyedbyreaders,althoughonoccasiontheycanbea mixedblessingforwriters.Oh,don’tmisunderstandme.If evenoneofyoushowsupforaneventofmine,Iam grateful.Youcouldhaveboughtanyoneofamillionother books,andyouchosetobuyoneofmytitles,andIalways trytomakemypresentationworththetrip.Butsometimes withbooksignings,thingsdonotgoasexpected.

Allwritershavebooksigningstories.Hereareafewof mine.

IsupposethemostdiscouragingsigningIever participatedinwasattheSouthernFestivalofBooksin Nashville.TheSouthernFestivalisanexcellenteventthat hasbeenheldeachyearforthepastthirty-fiveyears,andI havebeenfortunateenoughtohavebeeninvitedtoattend forthreeofmybooks.Theeventisstructuredsothata varietyofwritersconductreadingsandmakepresentations eachhouratoneofseveralvenues,andthenthatgroup gatherstosignbooksforthereadingpublicduringthe

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followinghour.TheepisodeIwanttosharewithyou happenedin2012ormaybe2013whenIwas“onthe road”promotingmylatesteffort, CampRedemption.

Myreadingwaswellreceived,andaftertheQandA,I wasledbyavolunteertoalargeplazaandseatedatthe tablewhereIwouldsignmybooksformyadoringfans. Therewerethirtyorfortypeoplealreadyqueuedup,and asIsattherewaitingforthesigningtobegin,anotherfifty peoplejoinedtheline.Boy,wasIexcited.Theseweremy people,andmytimehadcome.Justassoonastheclock struck2:00,thevelvetropeholdingbackmyreaders wouldberemoved,and theywouldbeallowedto baskinmyliterary awesomeness.Ichecked myshirtpockettobesure Ihadtwopensand discreetlyslippedaTicTacundermytongue. Then,myvolunteer camebacktome.She lookedabitsheepish,and shewasaccompaniedby CongressmanJohnLewis, CivilRightsiconand recentauthorof Across

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ThatBridge. Helookedabitsheepishaswell.My volunteerapologeticallyexplainedthatshehadmistakenly seatedmeatthewrongtable,andthatIwouldhaveto move.IandmytwopensandtheremainsofmyTic-Tac gotuptofollowhertomyspotwhileJohnLewissatathis andbegantotakecareofsomebusiness.Bytheway, AcrossThatBridge isanexcellentbook,andifyou haven’treadit,youshould.

WhenIgottomytabletherewereabouttenreaders waitinginline,whichwasn’tonehundredormorelike JohnLewishaddrawnbutwhichcouldhavebeenworse, andIsettledinwithmybestsmiletotendtothem.

RaytoFirstReaderinLine:Goodafternoon!

FirstReaderinLinetoRay:Canyoutellmewhere JohnLewisissigning?

IsupposetheworstsigningIeverexperiencedwasone Iparticipatedinjointlywiththelate,greatTerryKayof To DancewiththeWhiteDog fame.Idon’tevenremember whichbookIwaspromoting—itmayhavebeen Sorrow Wood—andifthatwasit,thenTerrywouldhavebeen pushing TheBookofMarie,mysecond-favoriteTerryKay novelandwellworthyourtime.Theeventwasheldata charminglittlebookstoreinMacononaSaturday afternoon,andIwasthrilledwiththeopportunityto

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appearwithsuchawell-knownwriter.Tosumupthe longesttwohoursofmylife,whilewewerethere,notone singlepersoncameintothestore.Atonepointthe proprietorevenlefttogogetahotdogafterfirstaskingus tokeepaneyeonthings.Iguesswelookedhonest.

Sometimesthishappens,andwhenitdoesyoujusthave toshrugitoffandnottakeitpersonally.Therewereabout thirtyotherthingsgoingonthatdayinMaconincludinga tractorpullandaninternationalfoodfestival,andthe bookstorewasdowntownandhardtofind,anditwashot, andHillaryandthoseemailssurelyhadsomethingtodo withit,andwedidn’treallywanttosellsomebooks anyway.Ifyouhappenedtobe inMaconthatdayanddidn’t cometotheevent,well,Ilike internationalfoodandtractor pullsasmuchasthenextguy, soIcan’treallyblameyou,but geezy’all,itwasTerryKay!

Mostpublishershave publicists,andoneofthemain reasonsforhavingoneistoget thebooksintoreaders’hands.

Oneofthewaystheydothisis bysettingupbooksignings, anduponthereleaseofmyfirst

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book, TheFrontPorchProphet,Iwasjusttickledtodeath tobegettingthisexposure.Unfortunately,mypublicistat Medallionwasn’tfromaroundtheseparts,astheysay,and beingfromChicago,Iguessshethoughtthattheentire SoutheasternUnitedStateswasaboutasbigasCleveland. ThusitcametopassthatIfoundmyselfdrivingto Memphisfourweekendsinarow,whichisaneight-hour odysseyfrommyhouse.That’seighthourseachwayif youarefromChicagoanddon’tknow.

LuckyformeIgotnailedattheinfamousI-40speed trapallfourtrips,whichsortofbrokeupthedriveeach week.Seriously,thespeedlimitdropsfrom70to50in aboutthelengthoftimeitjusttookmetowritethis sentence,andIamafastwriter.ThenafriendlyTennessee StateTrooperexplainsthatfacttoyouasyoureceiveyour ticket.Ifyoujustcan’tbelieveitandgobacktocheckthe sign,youwillseethefollowing:TheSpeedLimitDropped to50MPHBackThereaWays.ThankYouForYour Service.Youwillalsonoticethatitisonwheelssoitcan bemovedfromplacetoplacethedaybeforepayday.

ThemostunexpectedlysuccessfulsigningIeverhad wasataBarnesandNobleinPensacola,atwhichIsolda metrictonofbooks,andIstilldon’tknowwhy.Saleswere sobriskthatthebookstoreranoutofcopies,andIhadto supplementtheirstockwithacoupleofcasesfrommy trunk(Yes,allwritershavesomeinthetrunk.Ibelieveit

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isafederallaw.).Maybeitwastheweather.Itwasbeach season,butthatdayitwasrainingsohardthatpeoplewere shelteringinplaceinthebookstore.Ilookedoutofthe windowonetimeandtherewerefourflaminghorsemen onpalehorseshangingaroundtheparkinglot.Anyway, thestorewaspackedwithwetpeople,andIguesstheyall figuredthattheymightaswellbuyabookwhiletheywere inthere.Perhapstheyweretyingthemontheirheads beforeattemptingtomakeabreakforthesafetyoftheir vehicles.

Ioncedrovetoabook festivalbeingheldat BainbridgeStateCollegein SouthGeorgia.Sincemyday jobisasacollegeprofessor,I likecollegeevents,andeven thoughitwasafive-hourdrive togettoBainbridge,Ireally didn’tmind.Ijustsetthe cruisecontrolon64toavoid theinfamousUS27speedtrap, tunedintosomeclassic70s rock,whichisreallytheonlymusicyoueverwanttodrive to,andlettheauthormobileroll.WhenIpulledintothe parkinglot,however,Iwastheonlyonethere.Well,me andasweepertruck,andtobefrankwithyou,theguy

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drivingitjustdidn’tstrikemeasareader.Yes,Ihad driventoBainbridgeonthewrongweekend,whichmeant thatIhadtorepeatthetripthefollowingweekend,and thatsecondtimearoundwasn’tnearlyasrelaxingasthe first.

Well,Ihavehitthismonth’swordlimit,andasMandy constantlyremindsme,“Pixelsain’tfree,bigboy.”Iwill leaveyouwiththisthought.Ifawriteryoufavoris makinganappearancenearyou,andifthetractorpullis notintownandyouhaveafinickystomachwhenitcomes tointernationalfood,considergoingtothatevent.Itwill bemuchappreciated.

RaymondL.Atkinslivesandworksinthemountainsof NorthwestGeorgia.Youcanreachhimat raymondlatkins@aol.comoronFacebookathttps:// www.facebook.com/raymondlatkins.

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You'llmeetEva,theyoungdaughteroftravelingPentecostal preachers,whocatchessnakeswhileherparentshidebehindthe bibleandalargewoodencrate.Eva'slifechangeswhenshe makesherfirstfriendandrealizesthereismoretolifethanfear.

In PlansforSweetLorraine,you'llmeetLorraine'smama, Cordelia-afieryred-headwithatempertomatch,andamindas sharpasthestingfromaleatherstrap.She'lldoanythingtokeep herdaughtersafe.Evenifshehastobeatthedevilhimself.

Laurel,theyounggirlin TheDayIThrewtheRock hasnoidea thatshesavedsomeone'slife,orthatshemayhavekilled someonetodoit.Shejustknowsthatsheshouldbeallowedto wearoverallsandplayballliketheboys.Well,ain'tittruethat shecanthrowabaseballharderandfasterthanLukeorJohn Randall?JustaskSarahRose'sUncle...

JunebugFischer isreadytosettherecordstraightandletyou knowwhatreallyhappenedthesummersheturnedfifteen.It's true,shekilledsomeone,butsheneverkillednobodyonpurpose. Thatwaspurelyaccidental.

WhenCharlotte'sworldisturnedupsidedown,herauntisthere toputitbackonitsaxis.Charlottelearnsthateverythingshe's beentoldaboutherlonglostaunthasbeenalie,andheraunt teacheshermanyimportantlessons.Themostimportantlessonis forgiveness. CussingSnakesandCandyCigarettes isproofthat there'smagicallaroundus,allwehavetodoisopenourhearts andminds.

Acollectionofstoriesthatgivevoicestostrongsouthernwomen fromagestentoninety-five.

"MandyHaynesgivesusadirectlineintotheheartoftheDeep South.Tounderstandwhatisgenteelandgenuine,onemustalso understandwhatisnot.Strongfemalecharacterswhogetthebetter ofvillainswhoseektodestroythemaboundinthisbrilliantlycrafted collectionofshortstories.SheisFlanneryO'Connor'sequalinthe newmillennium." MarciHenna,authorof WhenWeLastSpoke and WhatLiesAhead

MandyHaynesspenthoursonbarstoolsandridinginvanslistening tooutrageoustalesfromsomeofthebestsongwritersand storytellersinNashville,Tennessee.Shetradedastressfullifeasa pediatriccardiacsonographerforahappyoneandnowspendsher timewritingandenjoyinglifeasmuchasshecan.Shelivesin Semmes,Alabamawithherthreedogs,oneturtle,andhelpstake careofseveralmoreanimalsatGoodFortuneFarmRefuge.Sheisa contributingwriterfor AmeliaIslanderMagazine,AmeliaWeddings, EditorinChiefof WELLREADMagazine,andauthoroftwoshort storycollections, WalkingtheWrongWayHome, Sharpasa

Serpent'sToothEvaandOtherStories,andanovella, Oliver.Sheis alsotheeditoroftheanthology, WorkinProgress andco-editorof theSouthernWritersReadingreunion anthology, TheBestoftheShortest.Sheis currentlyworkingonahistoricalcomingof agepsychologicalthrillerandherneverendingliteraryfictionnovelintheworks.

Likethecharactersinsomeofherstories, shenevermissesachancetojumpina creektocatchcrawdads,standupforthe underdog,ortheopportunitytomake someonelaugh.

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