“Straight Edge” – Alisia Belov and Yashna Lotun Draft 2 – 06/03/12 Sho t No. 1
Locatio n
2
3
Angle
Moveme nt
Lengt h
Dialogue
Music & Sound Effects none
Graphic
4 secs
Graphic
8 secs
Voiceover saying what's on the screen
none
Mid/Lon g Shot
High angle
Handheld
3 secs
None
Song Straight Edge
4
Close Up
straight
Handheld
2 secs
none
Song Straight Edge
5
Graphic
6
High road
Shot Type
High road
Mid/Lon g Shot
3 secs
Straight
Handheld
3 secs
Song Straight Edge None
Song Straight Edge
Description of Action Production logo fades in and then flashes out on a black background Dictionary style definition of the term straight edge in white typography on the centre of the screen and on a black background Person sitting on the road, drinking from a bottle of vodka. Ivan walks past the camera. Shot of Ivan looking uncomfortable, and he walks down street. (camera tracks him for 2 seconds) Black background, white Helvetica font, cantered 'IVAN AGRENICH' Side on shot of Ivan as he walk past an alleyway, where two men are in one corner
Actors
Equipment
Alicia Belo, Ivan Agrenich
Camera, tripod, vodka bottle, costume.
Alisia Belov, Camera, Ivan tripod, vodka Agrenich bottle, costume, headphones
Ivan Agrenich, Sophie Willison, Dimitry
Costume, bag of cocaine, roll of money, headphones
7
High road
8
Extreme Close Up Graphic
Straight
Handheld
3 secs
None
3 secs
None
Song Straight Edge Song Straight Edge
9
High road
O/S shot
Straight
Handheld
3 secs
None
Song Straight Edge
10
High road
Extreme Close Up Graphic
Straight
Static
2 secs
None
3 secs
None
Song Straight Edge Song Straight Edge
11
12
High road
Long shot
Straight
Handheld
3 secs
none
Song Straight Edge
13
High road
Close Up
straight
Handheld
2 secs
None
Song Straight Edge
14
Violet room
Mid shot
straight
Handheld
4 secs
none
15
High road
long shot
straight
Handheld
3 secs
None
Ambient/ natural sound Song Straight Edge
Close Up of the drug and money being exchanged Black background, white Helvetica font, cantered 'VIOLET BOGDANOVA' Ivan walking, man walks past him smoking a cigarette. Man throws away the butt at a crossing where man has already gone, Ivan reaches the crossing side view of the cigarette butt and we see Ivan stamp it out Black background, white Helvetica font, cantered 'HARRY PAYNE' Camera in front Ivan walking down the street with headphones in Bust shot of Ivan's tattoo (chin to chest)
Sophie Willison, Dimitry
Costume, bag of cocaine, roll of money
Ivan Agrenich
Cigarette, costume, camera, tripod, headphones
Ivan Agrenich
Cigarette, costume
Ivan Agrenich
costume, camera, headphones
Ivan Agrenich
Side shot of Violet half out her window smoking a cigarette. Side shot of Ivan walking down street
Violet Bogdanova
costume, camera, headphones, tattoo Cigarette, costume, camera. costume, camera, tattoo, headphones
Ivan Agrenich
16
High road
Close Up
Straight
Handheld
2 secs
None
Song Straight Edge
Close Up of X tattoo on hand, side on.
Ivan Agrenich
17
Violet room
Mid shot
Slightly High
Static
2 secs
None
Ambient/ natural sound
Violet Bogdanova
18
Violet room
Close Up
Slightly High
Static
2 secs
None
Ambient/ natural sound
shot of her from behind sitting at her small table, next to bed, reaches for drugs under mattress closer shot of her from behind getting drugs from under her bed
19
Violet room
mid shot
High angle
Violet Bogdanova
20
Council flat
long shot
straight
static
3 secs
None
Song Straight Edge
Sitting at her small table with the drugs, she turns to look at door shot of Ivan's back as he goes towards council flat
21
Council flat
Extreme Close Up
straight
Static
2 secs
None
Song Straight Edge
Close Up of his ‘sXe’ neck tattoo
Ivan Agrenich
22
violet room
straight
Static
9 secs
None
Ambient/ natural sound
Violet Bogdanova
23
council flat
low angle
Static
2 secs
None
Song Straight Edge
Shot of her sitting and taking out the drugs from the packets and laying them out. After 4 seconds she looks back, Then at the end of the shot she looks back again. jogging up the stairs of the council flats
long/mid -shot
3 secs
Ambient/ natural sound
Violet Bogdanova
Ivan Agrenich
Ivan Agrenich
costume, camera, tattoo, headphones costume, (fake) drugs, tripod, camera costume, (fake) drugs, tripod, camera costume, (fake) drugs, tripod, camera costume, tattoo, headphones, camera, tripod costume, tattoo, headphones, camera, tripod costume, (fake) drugs, tripod, camera
costume, camera, tripod
24
graphic
5 secs
none
"Straight Edge" in plain white Helvetica font appears, aligned left on black
Foley sound of key turning in lock. Foley sound of door opening none
He puts the key into the lock and turns
Ivan Agrenich
costume, camera
She looks back towards door hearing open
Violet Bogdanova
Focuses on lines of cocaine on table, brushes away.
Violet Bogdanova
Grabs all other bags and puts into the sandwich bag frantically wrapping it up tightly. from behind her we see her trying to stuff the drugs back under the bed With her diagonally facing the camera, we have a focus pull of her still trying to stuff drugs under bed to Ivan in the doorway.
Violet Bogdanova
costume, (fake) drugs, tripod, camera costume, (fake) drugs, tripod, camera costume, (fake) drugs, sandwich bag, tripod, camera costume, (fake) drugs, tripod, camera costume, (fake) drugs, tripod, camera
25
council flat
O/S
high angle
Handheld
2 secs
None
26
Violet's Room
mid shot
straight
Static
2 secs
None
27
Violet's Room
Extreme Close Up
straight
Static
2 secs
None
28
Violet's Room
mid shot
Static
3 secs
None
Ambient/ natural sound
29
Violet's Room
Close Up
Eye Level/ Straight
Static
2 secs
None
Ambient/ natural sound
30
Violet's Room
mid shot
Eye Level/ Straight
handheld
3 secs
None
Ambient/ natural sound
Straight
Violet Bogdanova Violet Bogdanova, Ivan Agrenich
31
Violet's Room
O/S
Eye Level/ Straight
steadicam
9 secs
"What the fuck is this Mel?" quietly, but angrily
natural sound/ dialogue
32
Violet's Room
Long shot
low angle
Handheld
3 secs
"What the fuck?"
natural sound/ dialogue
33
Violet's Room
Close Up
Eye Level/ Straight
Static
4 secs
natural sound/ dialogue
34
Violet's Room
O/S
High angle
Handheld
2 secs
“I trusted you! I fucking trusted you bitch!" "I-I-I…."
35
Violet's Room
Close Up
Eye Level/ Straight
Static
3 secs
natural sound/ dialogue
36
Violet's Room
Close Up
High angle
Handheld
1 sec
"SHUT UP! HOW COULDARGH" None
37
Violet's Room
Long shot
low angle
Track
5 secs
None
total:
120 secs
natural sound/ dialogue
ambient/n atural sound ambient/n atural sound
From behind of Ivan, he walks in and sees her with the bag of drugs near the bed, camera follows him then moving to be a two shot of him and Violet. Long shot from behind both of them. He throws the drugs behind him towards wall Camera in line with wall and Violet is pushed against the wall by Ivan (hand on her neck) She starts to justify herself Camera in line with wall, he slams her back and scream in her face. Close Up from his POV looking at Violet, who looks terrified Turns around in rage, puts hands on head and goes to window
Violet Bogdanova, Ivan Agrenich
costume, (fake) drugs, tripod, camera
Violet Bogdanova, Ivan Agrenich
costume, (fake) drugs, tripod, camera
Violet Bogdanova, Ivan Agrenich
costume, tripod, camera
Violet Bogdanova, Ivan Agrenich Violet Bogdanova, Ivan Agrenich Violet Bogdanova
costume, camera
Violet Bogdanova, Ivan Agrenich
costume, camera
costume, camera, tripod costume, camera