Evaluating Past Students Work
Section
Strengths Weaknesses Mark
Planning & Research
-used her own research and made examples that ould relate to her own work.
-Could have added screen grabs -Not much analysis into her examples given A lot of work was just brief, her effort dropped. Only used blogger to display her work
11/20
Construction
-Didn’t edit too much, keeps to the theme of British social realism -made simple shots to make it look realistic
-cuts are confusing(when showing the bowl) -Storyline not too clear.
26/60
Evaluation
-Talked about audience, and how it relates to them -made videos instead of writing -talked about her decisions well
Wasn’t that clear
11/20
Section
Strengths Weaknesses Mark
Planning & Research
Good drafted analysis feed back Researched conventions well. Researched different variety of opening sequences. Brainstormed random ideas Her ideas relate to BSR ideology
Hasn’t talked much about audience
15/20
Construction
Used footagedocumentary stylewhich made it realistic. Simple shots, not too much dialogue
Didn’t use enough titles Used the typical get out of bed scene
42/60
Evaluation
Used a lot of videos instead of writing, shows good use of NMT,has included impacts on the audience, and has talked about the influences of production.
15/20