tableau by elena lie
neutral position first and second person from the left should switch to make it easier to change to the neXt position chin brought up high soft focus & eyes looking forward
shoulders apart feet apart the width from one person to another is not the same
first frame good attempt to create depth
looking at the camera = not convincing
could have been a more unique shows levels posture good demonstration of depth
hair covers face = no face eXpressions shown
focus point of the frame uneven width from one person to another
second frame
could have added a facial eXpression is not lower level convincing good use of levels
hidden facial eXpression contact point must turn 45 degrees to the camera great choice of position of pointing to prevent masking actions of lower body part too repetitive
last frame
this should move 45 degrees to the right to prevent masking i wish the hair would good facial eXpressions not cover the face interesting use of contact point
good contrast and levels It would make the tableau more interesting with weight taking focus point