Final Iterations

(Left) Longing Composition: I don’t think this composition really achieved what I wanted it to. It sort of achieves the message, but I think I was trying to make too strong of a visual representation of longing, which ended up being the downfall of this piece. There isn’t a lot of room for the circles to breathe in, and I believe the large line “gaps” overshadow the circles. It’s not the greatest composition, but it’s hard to make something ultra-spectacular with just lines and dots.

(Left) Rejection Composition: This comp. was one of my earliest ones that got reworked after my inprocess version (which I do not have a photo of, unfortunately). The two most significant changes were the large circle being slightly larger and off the frame and the black “gate” being separated and parallel with the other half of the “gate.” My overall concept was a little basic for this one; however, the final piece turned out better than it had been previously (except for the blatant spray mark).

(Right) Chaotic Composition: I chose to do chaos after one of my in-process designs of comfort didn’t receive a lot of good feedback (the 2nd image on pg.[XX]). I let myself go loose on this one since it was meant to show chaos. The bottom-right line seems less “chaotic” than the rest, and this was an intentional part of my design. The line juxtaposes the rest of the image by being flat, square, and neatly tucked in that corner. I’m really found of this design; it’s my favorite out of the three.

A broken heart made out of lines. I couldn’t create imagry for this project, but I thougt my concept was still neat