Assessment Portfolio Hayes Green– 2 nd grade 9.27.11 • This is the final revision of what life would be like as a pencil piece of writing. • This is a rough draft with revision markings on it to a writing that was supposed to be about what life would be like if you were your pencil. • 23. Develop compositions of one or more paragraphs using writing processes such as the following: • revising for clarity, grammatical and mechanical correctness, and/or to include additional information