WRITING SAMPLE #1 INT. KE'S APARTMENT, MAIN PART - LATER ROSE is now in the apartment and is surprised. ROSE Remus got turned into a vampire?! Ke is in front of her. Meanwhile, Remus is crying out threats from inside the closet. ROSE (CONT'D) Are you serious? KE Yeah, for real! I just came home and there he was allKe is annoyed by Remus' cries and turns in his direction. KE (CONT'D) (To Remus) Remus! Remus stops. KE (CONT'D) (To Remus) Shut! Up! Ke turns to Rose. KE (CONT'D) Oh my god, he's been like that all friggin' day. ROSE So, you came home and...? KE Huh? Ke remembers her train of thought. KE (CONT'D) Oh, right. I came home and there he was all....fangy. (Beat) But we don't have to worry. He's handcuffed. Rose begins to add the facts in her head.
2. ROSE Wait, he was waiting for you? KE Yeah, in the friggin' hallway. I thought he was hurt. So I came over and he was all(Deep-voiced imitation of Remus) I'm thirsty! Blood! Ahhh! Rose shakes her head. ROSE No, what I'm saying is- Okay, he's a vampire, right? And vampires have to be invited into places, right? So if you came home and he was already waiting for you, that would meanRose raises an eyebrow. ROSE (CONT'D) Wait, so you just had handcuffs lying around. Ke shrugs. KE Oh.
Yeah.
Rose seems a bit uneasy. ROSE Uh, I'm curious Ke, uh...what for? Ke doesn't get what Rose is implying. KE For shit like this, of course! else would-?!
Why
Ke becomes disgusted, having realized what Rose is implying. KE (CONT'D) Oh Rose, really?