Discusión y revisiones colectivos sobre formas del comentario

The tunnel written by Anthony Browne is a story about a girl an a boy who fight all the time. One day their mother grows impatient and sends them outside. If you want to know what happens buy this book!

Will this summary make the reader want to read this book?

Does this summary create mystery?

Anthony Browne puts Fairy tales because when he was small he loved Fairy tales.

• Is this comment clear? Will the reader understand what you are trying to say?

• Where does he “put” the Fairy tales?

Anthony Browne uses dark colours when the girl is afraid and bright colours when the girl is not afraid. • Will the reader understand what you are trying to say? • Can you give an example to explain your idea?

I think this is a lovely book.

• Can we use “I” in our book review?

• Does this opinion tell the reader why it is a lovely book? What do we need to add?

Anthony Browne draws clothes on the gorillas. • Is this a comment?

I love this book because it has bright colours and nice details.

• Can we use “I” in the personal opinion?

• Is the writer giving a reason why he loves this book? Is the reader going to understand why he loves this book?

This story is called Look what I’ve got. This book is written by Anthony Browne. This story is about‌ How can we make these three sentences become one sentence?

In all the parts of the book one side is happy and the other side is sad. • Can the reader understand what the writer is trying to say? How could we make it better?

Anthony Browne tells the story with the face of the character. • What does this mean? Can the reader understand what the writer is trying to say if he has never read a book by AB?