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SPORTS

Oct. 14, 2011

The Critic, Page 7

From an Orphanage to the Olympics Samantha VanSchoick Managing Editor Sitting back in his chair with both hands gripping his knees, Kenedi Hall explained the kidnapping that changed his life. “You’ve seen it in the movies; they put a bag over your face and just drive away. It wasn’t like ‘Oh, hi Kenedi Hall, we’re taking you here. It was a whole different traumatic situation.” Hall was explaining the kidnapping his grandmother had to request from a nearby Ethiopian orphanage in hopes that Hall would be adopted so he could have a lifesaving heart surgery. Hall and his older sister were living with his ailing grandmother because his father was away at war and his mother died when he was two. “We weren’t homeless, but food wasn’t guaranteed. I had to fight for money, I had to literally fight for survival each day.” There was no way Hall’s

grandmother could pay for the expensive heart surgery to repair a hole in his heart. The kidnapping was traumatic, but neces-

couldn’t speak English, but my [adoptive] parents clearly knew that if she wasn’t going, I wasn’t going.”

not only recovered from his surgery but was up and running three weeks later. The normal recovery time for a patient re-

sary. Circumstances at the orphanage were not ideal. The orphanage housed around 700 children. Hall shared his bed with up to five other children ranging in ages. “I was there for three years not knowing if I would be there forever, or if I would be homeless.” Luckily, after an American couple visited the orphanage and learned of Hall’s heart condition, they chose to adopt 9year-old Kenedi and his 11-year-old sister Masay. “They knew at the orphanage they couldn’t split us up. I

Hall’s adoption happened just in time. Two years after leaving the orphanage, it was burned to the ground. Hall’s troubles did not end with the adoption. He still had to face a risky heart surgery that would, doctors suspected, leave him handicapped.

covering from heart surgery is three months. “The doctor didn’t think I was going to be athletic. Now I run 90 miles a week and play ice hockey.” Hall went on to break records nobody thought possible. At the age of 16, after months of training, he broke his high school’s record in the 2mile by eight seconds, running a 9:57. “I never let anything hold me back.”

“…I thought the family that adopted me was trying to get me killed.”

Photo by Sierra Willenburg Kenedi Hall will look to continue his success in cross country while also attempting to make the Olympics.

make

of the top three runners on Lyn-

Hall’s doctor continues to check up on him every three years and is amazed at his active lifestyle. “I’m on another level that he can’t believe.”

matters worse, Hall did not un-

don State’s Men’s Cross Country

Hall is a sophomore major-

derstand any English. “The heart

team.

He plans to play ice

ing in human services and hopes

surgery was awful because they

hockey this winter with the

to return to Ethiopia after get-

didn’t have any Ethiopians to

Hockey club. He is also training

ting his degree. Hall wants to

talk to me…I thought the family

to be on the Ethiopian Olympic

build better quality orphanages

that adopted me was trying to

Cross Country Skiing team, re-

and continue to live up to his

get me killed.” To his doctors surprise, Hall

turning to Ethiopia in Decem-

motto of never letting anything

ber for training.

hold him back.

To

18-year-old Hall is now one

Women’s Volleyball Serving Up Defeats Daniel Weiner Critic Correspondent

for the team’s momentum. “The

two

conference

The women’s volleyball team is back with a vengeance.

matches last Saturday was huge

After a rocky 1-9 start, the

playoffs we needed to win,

team has been on a hot streak,

which was the right step for-

taking three out of its last four

ward,” Fisher said. The Hornets (4-10) beat Green Mountain, Castleton and

matches.

Coach Sean Fisher

thinks that the wins were crucial

for us, and for us to make the

Johnson, all with scores of three sets to one. Even with this strong spurt, Fisher acknowledges the struggles in the initial stages of the season. “In the beginning it was hard, only having four veterans on the team,” Fisher said. Coach Fisher is also well

Photo by Sierra Willenburg

The Volleyball team looks to continue their recent hot streak.

aware of the improvements the women are making. “We played a lot better; we’re still making errors, but far less errors,” Fisher said. Freshman outside hitter Kayla Cormier knows exactly why the team had an abrupt turnaround. “We communicated more on the court; we learned our strengths and weaknesses in each other, not just ourselves,” Cormier said. The beginning of the season was more of a communication issue. “We didn’t know how to

work with each other as we were trying to make ourselves better instead of the team as a whole,” Cormier said. The Hornets next match is a triple-header away match Saturday against University of Maine- Presque Isle, University of Maine-Farmington, and University of Maine- Fort Kent. Their next home match is Monday against Johnson at 7:00 p.m. in the Stannard Gymnasium, before they close the season with two matches at home next Saturday against Husson and Maine Maritime.


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