Story Telling
Srishti Madan Sonali Singh
Pitch Bible
Introduction • India, a country where traditions breathe comfortably next to global technology . We find ourselves standing at the juncture where these two meet, sometimes restless, sometimes nonchalant . As a result there are times when we question age -old practices, while at others accept them unwittingly . • We are on the urge of development but yet people are unable to get over the hideous manifestation of ANDHVISHWAS .Attempts have been made time and again to prove that were at one point carefully thought scientific the rituals we label as superstitions procedures . With the passage of time and development of a hierarchical society, this knowledge became more and more esoteric and finally only the rituals were propagated not the reasoning behind them . • This story is a satire on the whole belief system of the nagriks of this country .
Log Line • Ramess has a dreadful day, from the moment the sun rises he faces a horrendous turn of events . Each and everything that happens the whole day is nothing but a repercussion of the superstitious beliefs that his mindset rotates around .
Lead Characters • Ramess • Pinky (W.O. Ramess • Rinkiya (D.O. Ramess
Character Description Ramess(protagonist): Ramess is a common businessman of a small town in India, always cautious due to unrealistic suspicions. He is an extremely religious guy, believer of uncanny superstitions and lives in a state of denial about the logical explanations for the same superstitions. Pinky(wife of Ramess): The personality doppelganger of sneezy, the sixth dwarf from snow white! Rinkiya(bitiya of Ramess): A callous brat, always creating problems(bacchi hath s nikal hi hai) Kidnapper: Good old fashioned kidnapper sticks to the basics, real professional,and intimidating.Firoti ki rakam le ke farar hona hai...kisi ka bura nahi chahte. Bas chahte hai toh paise! Kaali billi: Nothing to see here, just a black cat wandering around the streets #blacklivesmatter
Setting huchugaon, dholakpur ki sarhad par parne wala ek aam gaon hai. Par andhavishvas me dooba hua ye gaon vikaas se koson door reh gaya hai. Dholakpur is a common village dwelling on the outskirts of Ambikapur. But the whole belief system of this place stinks of superstitions. And this is the major reason why it is far from any development and growth.This is the story of a man’s life that goes down in an imaginative scenario where these superstitions ACTUALLY WORK!
Inspiration Story Inspiration: The beliefs of the mass percentage of the Small Towns of our country. Their reliance on these superstitions and their denial against the scientific explanations that stand beside them. Art Style Inspiration: The basic yet extremely popular Rage Comics i.e. troll memes of Derp & Derpina
3 Act Structure I-So story begins with a cancellation of some big deal of Ramess as his wife sneezes. And drams starts. II-There comes a point when Rinkiya is playing with scissors and Ramess believes that playing with scissors is sign of fight that is gonna happen soon. And hence Rinkiya gets kidnapped. III- Ramess is worried and is thinking how to arrange for the ransom money that kiddnapper asked him to give in return for Rinkiya. While on his way back home a cat crosses his way and guess what he gets into a bigger problem as he met yamraj who tooks him
Sonali Singh
Sonali.sonali@nift.ac.in
Srishti Madan
srishti.madan2014@gmail.com
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*Le phone rings
*Ramess Hello?
Arre waah, itna bada order! Aata hu dukaan par 10 min me
*Le wife sneezes
*Ramess damned Are 5 lakh ka order aaya tha Tumne cheenk diyaaaaaa
Oh!!! please sneeze again!
Apshakun ho gayaaaa Ab dukaan nahi ja sakta jabtak dusri cheenk na aaye!!!
*Le Ramess takes a nap What’s that sound?!!
*Le Rinkiya playing with scissors Khali kainchi mat chalao! Ghar me jhagda hogaa
*Le Ramess slaps Rinkiya
*Le Rinkiya cries and goes to pados wali aunty
*Le Rinkiya not wearing nazar ka kaala teeka Arre beta ro mat
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*Le Rinkiya kidnapped on the way back home SIT IN THE CLICHE OMNIII
Kitni pyaari bacchi hai
*Le Kidnapper asks for ďŹ roti ki rakam
5 khokha chahiye apun ko aaj eech!!
*Le Ramess goes to shop to sell order and get the money...
*At shop with client Ye deal nahi ho sakti kyuki dukaan ke bahar neembu mirch nahi hai!!!
Bada wala order le ke kidnapper ko de dunga
*Le Ramess going back home crying
Ab kya karu... Itni raat ho gayi hai...
Are nahiiii kaali billi raa kaat gayi, ab ghar bhi nahi jaa sakta Arre us ped ke neeche so jaata hu aaj raat... Kal subah ghar jaunga
*Le Ramess sleeping under peepal ka ped for the night
*Le Peepal ke ped wali chudail comes to kill Ramesssssss
*Le Yamraj comes to take dead Ramess
Chalo tumne Nark le kar chaluuu!!!
*Le Dharam Bhrasht Par Nark Kyuuuuuuu?
Tumne pichle hafte Tuesday ko Murg Kabab jo thoose the.. hahahahaha
*Le Ramess off to Nark
*Le Ramess fried in Boiling oil at Nark SA
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