DPS Drafts
Good Points • The colours used in the first draft work very well with the colour of the image • The image used on the second draft is effective and would be a good positioning • The title for the 1st one would be effective • The border is a good idea because you could overlap the images Bad Points • The image used on the first one isn’t very effective because you can see where the images are cropped • The title in the second draft would not be very effective because there would be too many colours used • The information would be needed to be able to loop around the image and not touch it, the first one couldn’t do it.
Good Points • The White used in the second draft gives it a fresh look but does not match the cover • The first draft image uses white space very effectively • The Title for the second draft would be effective in that positioning • The border around the first image would be good to overlap with an image as shown Bad Points • The first drafts image is positioned badly and could be used more effectively on the right side • Although refreshing the second draft’s white background is too aesthetically blinding to be used • The use of the image on the first draft; isn’t very effective and a different photo could be used
Good Points • The first draft would probably be the layout I am most likely to use for my final piece I will develop this further • The seconds drafts image is slightly faded and could be effective because it would not distract from the images • The positioning of the text on the first draft would be more effective than the second draft Bad Points • The second drafts text would be better placed over the centre than the right side of the page • The seconds drafts image is not effective because you can obviously see where it has been cut off even if it does fold in the middle • The first drafts image would need to overlap the border to make it look effective that way it gives a sense of 3d