Canedo anthology by Jill Schwartzman

Cover Javier Canedo Anthology

I would like to Dedicate Dedication this to Mrs. Schwartzman I would like to Dedicate

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this to Mrs. Schwartzman

Pg 6-7 Life is great

Pg 8-9 Just a dream Pg 10-11 School Days

Pg 8-9 Just a dream

Pg 12-13 Candle

Pg 10-11 School Days Pg 14-15 The Mocking Red Pg 12-13 Candle

Card Pg 16-17 Miami

Pg 14-15 The Mocking Red Card Pg 18-19

Pg 16-17 Miami

Pg 20-21 A New Game

Pg 18-19

Pg 22-23 Two Parties

Pg 20-21 A New Game Pg 24-25 Homework Pg 26-27 The Best Pg 22-23 Two PartiesProspect

Pg 24-25 Homework

Pg 28-29 Sonnet 89

Pg 26-27 The Best Prospect Pg 28-29 Sonnet 89

7 Life is Great

Life is Great (Alliteration)

Gareth Gale was a great player

He scored a goal every single time he shot He scored a goal every single time he shot It is rumored that he once kicked a piece It is rumored that he once kicked a pieceof ofgum gumto tothe thecamera camera He had a great house and a good amountHeofhad money a great house and a good amount His life was going great

of money

His life was going great Just as he thought it could not get better guess what Just as he thought it could not get He met a beautiful woman which he endedbetter up marrying guess what He was grateful for all he had He knew that life was great

He met a beautiful woman which he ended up marrying He was grateful for all he had By: Javier Canedo And He knew that life was great

9 Just a Dream (Assonance)

He could focus because of what he did. Justnot A Dream This was no joke. He knew he because stole. He could notwhat focus He felthebad of what did.for those who got hurt, heno was provoked. ThisBut was joke. The person had boasted about what he possessed, He knew what he stole. But bad thatfor wasthose no excuse. He felt who got hurt, sirens. ButHe heheard was provoked. couldhad notboasted go to jail. TheHe person He felt close, he could not breathe. about whathishethroat possessed, gotwas his no coat and drove home. ButHe that excuse. He woke up and felt a pillow beneath his head. He heard sirens. It wasnot justgoa dream. He could to jail. He felt his throat close, he could not breathe. By: Javier Canedo He got his coat and drove home. He woke up and felt a pillow beneath his head. It was just a dream.

11 School Days (Onomatopoeia) I hear students walking It’s early and everybody is on a hurry

School Days I hear students walking It’s early and everybody is on a hurry Ching, Ching, Ching! Time to go to class It’s morning and we arrive, will we survive?

Ching, Ching, Ching! Time to go to class It’s morning and we arrive, will we survive?

Five hours later Ching, Ching, Ching! Time for lunch, everyone has a smile We have Half an Hour to eat our food It feels like two minutes but Ching, Ching, Ching!

Almost over, two more classes Can't wait, students are impatient Ching, Ching, Ching! School is over! Time to go home and enjoy the rest of the day.

Five hours later Ching, Ching, Ching! Time for lunch, everyone has a smile We have Half an Hour to eat our food It feels like two minutes but Ching, Ching, Ching!

Almost over, two more classes Can't wait, students are impatient Ching, Ching, Ching! School is over! By: Javier Canedo Time to go home and enjoy the rest of the day.

Candle

I smell something as if I am strolling down the beach. (Imagery) The scent of fresh ocean air.

Candle

Warm sand between my toes. I smell something as if I am strolling down the beach. I feel a burning sensation. The scent of fresh ocean air. My mind says I should not taste it. Warm sand between my toes. But all my eyes see is a beautiful light. I feel a burning sensation. Fire burning bright. My mind says I should not taste it. It is a Candle. But all my eyes see is a beautiful light. Magically, I am transported to the sea. Fire burning bright. Where will the scent lead me to next? It is a Candle. Magically, I am transported to the sea. Where will the scent lead me to next? By: Javier Canedo

I slide tackle the opposition,

THE MOCKING RED CARD

And there it is

The Mocking Red Card

A red card mocking me. (Personification) After the game, I get a paper laughing at my I slide tackle the opposition, suspension.

I amAnd notthere happy, it and is neither is my coach. A red card mocking me. The next game I sit on the bench, After the game, I get a paper laughing at my suspension. AndI it at myand weight amwinces not happy, neither is my coach. I can't because The play, next game I sitofon the bench, that mocking red card. And it winces at my weight After two games, I am finally ableplay, to play. I can't because of that mocking red card. But just a short month After two games, I am finally able to play. later, I see the mocking redBut card again. just a short month later, I see the mocking red card again. This time making me miss This time making me miss four games. four games. of the year, TheThe restrest of the year, I amI am really cautious and hopeful that really cautious andthat mocking red card again. I will never see hopeful that By: Javier Canedo I will never see that mocking red card again.

17 Miami (Rhyme)

Miami

LyricsThere is something about Miami that I really like ThereMaybe is something it's justabout being Miami able tothat rideI really my bikelike MaybeThe it'sbeautiful just being able tomakes ride my bike much better weather it that The beautiful weather it have that to much better Especially becausemakes I don’t wear a sweater Especially I don’t have to wear a sweater I can because play basketball whenever I want I can Iplay I want my aunt canbasketball also see mywhenever family including I can Ialso myschool family including my aunt can see go to I can And go to school when I get home i can get in the pool And when I get home get in the pool Sometimes Afteri can School I have soccer Sometimes Then I After put mySchool clothesI have in mysoccer locker Then II put my clothes in my locker am ready to sleep I am ready to sleep But I can’t stop thinking of a creep But I can’t of a creep It doesstop notthinking matter because I can look out the window It does not matter because I can look out the window Andbeautiful see beautiful as my I puthead my on head my And see MiamiMiami as I put myonpillow pillow By: Javier Canedo

Simile Metaphor Self -Portrait

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A new Game I just got a new game for my x-box. New It is Game really fun, it rocks. (Tone) I am having so much fun I can’t even talk It is the best game ever invented It's been one week, the game got old.

I just gotIt awasnew game forof my x-box. truly a waste my money and my time. I don’t why I bought it. It is really fun,even it know rocks. I should have never my friend I am having so much funlistened I can’ttoeven talk It is the best game ever invented I have not used the game in 2 months am going play….. It's been Ione week,to the game got old. It is not good but it's not horrible It was truly a waste of my money and my time. I think I over exaggerated about how bad it was

I don’t even know why I bought it. I should have never listened to my friend

I have not used the game in 2 months I am going to play….. It is not good but it's not horrible I think I over exaggerated about how bad it was By: Javier Canedo

23 Two Parties (Mood)

tWO pARTIES

It is a great party It is a great party The host was really nice The host was really nice Everyone is drinking Everyone is drinking sprite sprite Talking about their lives Talking about their lives The music is classical The music is classical It is a really calm party It is a really calm party Not only that but the decorations are absolutely beautiful. Not only that but the Flowers all over the place. decorations are absolutely beautiful. Flowers all over the place. O My God!! He is going to jump of the roof He just smashed a beer bottle on his head He is drunk and does not know what he is doing I want to get out of hear It is a really violent party O My God!! He is going to Everyone wants him to jump off jump of the roof He just smashed a beer BY: Javier canedo bottle on his head He is drunk and does not know what he is doing I want to get out of hear It is a really violent party Everyone wants him to jump off

25 HOMEWORK

Homework

I have tons of (Hyperbole) homework. It is going to take me ages to finish it. I have Ittons of homework. is so hard that I feel It is going take me ages to finish it. like myto brain is the of a pea. It is sosizehard that I feel like my brain is the size of a pea. I am just not going to I am just not going to do it do it Never Never mindmind I need a agood grade I need good grade It is already midnight! It is already midnight! I am not done with even half of it I am not done with I feel as I'mofdying evenIfhalf it I feel asto If I'm dying I am going tell the teacher that I tried my best I am going to tell the She is teacher not checking it today! that I tried my best She is not checking it today!

By: jAVIER cANEDO

27 Best Prospect (Allusion)

Best Prospect He is as good as Lebron The best Prospect, from Compton He is being highly recruited He has 19 scholarship offers from only the best colleges

He is as good as Lebron If he ends up being good he is going to be as The best Prospect, from Compton rich as Bill Gates He is being highly recruited he do with all that money He has 19 scholarship offers from only theWhat best would colleges Buy a house or buy a professional sports If he ends up being good he is going to be asteam rich as Bill Gates Or be as humble as William Gates and give half What would he do with all that money of his fortune away to the ones in need Buy a house or buy a professional sports team Or be as humble as William Gates and give half of his fortune away to the ones in need He would also get Sponsorship deals like Kobe Making 200 million dollars just off of He would also get Sponsorship deals like Kobe sponsors Making 200 million dollars just off of sponsors Or create his own shoe brand like Michael Or create his own shoe brand like Michael Jordan Jordan And make his name known globally. And make his name known globally. By: javier canedo

Sonnet 89

Lips of snow, visage of dust, inhale fog.

Sonnet Charred 89 lungs, deep breaths, daylight ends,darkness awaits. Shady gents, no rent, trapped amid the bog.fog. Lips of snow, visage of dust, inhale Stuck in her dreams and searching for Charred lungs, deep breaths, daylight ends,darkness awaits. snowflakes. Shady gents, no rent, trapped amid the bog. In the pub, since eighteen drinking, sinking. Stuck in her dreams and searching for snowflakes. They proclaim “Tis free, but the price is In the pub, since eighteen drinking, sinking. steep. They proclaim “Tis free, but the price is steep. Mad she goes for few stones. Sends her flying. Mad she goes for few stones. Sends her flying. Until angel’s dying. She is buried deep. Until angel’s dying. She is buried deep. Attire tattered. Drowning, can’t stay Attire tattered. Drowning, can’t stay afloat. afloat. No gravity. Icy cold she hovers.

No gravity. Icy cold she hovers.

Heavenly bodies await with no coat. Heavenly bodies await with no coat. Celestial being takes no more lovers. Celestial being takes no more lovers. Many mistakes now just a wasted life. Many mistakes now just a wasted life. Thy fair maiden no longer filled with strife. Thy fair maiden no longer filled with strife.